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September 11, 2022
Needs major editing
The book was hard to follow due to the lack of editing. Wrong words were used (for example, there instead of their), names were changed, wrong tense, horrible grammer, missing punctuation... I could go on but I'm sure you can get the hint.
The storyline needs revising as well. There was a chapter about the "Blood Thurst" brothers killing werewolves then the next thing you know, the main character is kidnapped by vampires. What happened to the werewolf killers? The book needs a major overhaul. I'm just glad I read it through Kindle Unlimited and didn't have to pay for it. I definitely would have asked for a refund if I had.
The book was hard to follow due to the lack of editing. Wrong words were used (for example, there instead of their), names were changed, wrong tense, horrible grammer, missing punctuation... I could go on but I'm sure you can get the hint.
The storyline needs revising as well. There was a chapter about the "Blood Thurst" brothers killing werewolves then the next thing you know, the main character is kidnapped by vampires. What happened to the werewolf killers? The book needs a major overhaul. I'm just glad I read it through Kindle Unlimited and didn't have to pay for it. I definitely would have asked for a refund if I had.
July 7, 2022
Not Great
I don’t ever review books because I’ve always felt that it should be up to the reader o decide whether they like it or not. However, this book has forced me to make a comment. Not only did the story not feel well thought out, it also rushed everything leading up to the ending. The story didn’t flow well. Also, whoever proof reads these things either needs to be fired or really double check their work.
I don’t ever review books because I’ve always felt that it should be up to the reader o decide whether they like it or not. However, this book has forced me to make a comment. Not only did the story not feel well thought out, it also rushed everything leading up to the ending. The story didn’t flow well. Also, whoever proof reads these things either needs to be fired or really double check their work.
July 8, 2022
5stars but!
The storyline and characters are excellent, however, the spelling and grammar mistakes are numerous which takes away from the enjoyment of reading the story as you constantly have to stop and try to work out what the author is trying to say.
But as I said a good read!
The storyline and characters are excellent, however, the spelling and grammar mistakes are numerous which takes away from the enjoyment of reading the story as you constantly have to stop and try to work out what the author is trying to say.
But as I said a good read!
July 17, 2022
OKish
OK story, but some strange ideas, eg. the Dr to blood samples to check her blood pressure. It's all a bit short and she forgave him straight away. What about the beatings and stabbings from pack members. Ended very quickly.
OK story, but some strange ideas, eg. the Dr to blood samples to check her blood pressure. It's all a bit short and she forgave him straight away. What about the beatings and stabbings from pack members. Ended very quickly.
September 9, 2022
Good story line bad grammar
I enjoyed the story line, however the spelling and grammar errors did make it hard to read and put me off a few times. I would recommend this book to friends if the errors were fixed.
I enjoyed the story line, however the spelling and grammar errors did make it hard to read and put me off a few times. I would recommend this book to friends if the errors were fixed.
October 9, 2022
An ok story
Lots of grammar, punctuation and spelling mistakes. I read this story on another app and it seems there are missing parts. Like the vampires and Shelley causing problems. Not sure how this book made it on Amazon.
Lots of grammar, punctuation and spelling mistakes. I read this story on another app and it seems there are missing parts. Like the vampires and Shelley causing problems. Not sure how this book made it on Amazon.
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March 29, 2026Read this book fairly fast. Interesting storyline. Unbelievable that the author was in grade 7 when she wrote it. She is definitely talented . Hope she continues writing. Ending was not to my taste as I couldn’t understand how she forgave so quickly. But overall fun read.
October 3, 2022
story had a lot of potential
But to many inconsistencies and was told too fast skipped story lines and left me waiting for her brothers conclusion
But to many inconsistencies and was told too fast skipped story lines and left me waiting for her brothers conclusion
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