[CW: Child abuse]
Technology may change, but crime remains the same. With everybody hooked up with a Your Forma, basically an implanted iPhone, it just means hacking is a bit more serious. Enter Hieda, the frosty expert at diving into peoples’ minds and her string of useless partners. Except that Harold, her new partner, is shockingly adept and also not human. And she couldn’t hate him more if she tried.
If there’s a genre that I think is particularly difficult to write, sci-fi mystery thriller has got to be up there. You have to introduce your setting and gimmick, but then need to be very careful about your rules or you don’t engage the audience at all because your solution is basically just add more rules.
Which is why this is kind of a miracle. Despite a slow start, this just blossoms to life as it goes, helped by two very ‘mismatched and therefore well-matched’ partners and a story that’s smart and compelling straight through to the ending. It’s been a hot minute since I was genuinely disappointed at a book wrapping up.
First, this technology seems unlikely, except it also seems like a lot of people would be dumb enough to just cram their phone in their head for some of the perks it offers. Immediately this story shows it knows what’s up - the Your Forma system is free, but the caveat is that the company begins to plaster the objects in your vision with advertisements. That is exactly what would happen and don’t tell me otherwise.
Hieda is the typical frost queen, but she is dedicated and focused on getting the job done no matter the cost. This is, yes, a big cover for her vulnerable side, with good reason it turns out, but she always comes off as more emotionless than the androids floating around the story, known here as amicus.
Until Harold arrives and proves to be the android from hell, by virtue of being nice and thoughtful and endlessly charming (and an utter womanizer, as turns out). He’s more human than she acts, and their back and forth is mostly excellent.
I won’t be shocked if this does the romance thing, although Harold wouldn’t be too choosy over anybody (amicus or not) it seems. And Hieda loses all of her precious walls bit by bit and, interestingly, she is not happy about it.
The reason their partnership is so good is because it taps into Harold’s abilities as a detective, as he’s basically got the observational skills of Sherlock Holmes and can put together the information that only Hieda can pick up. It contrasts nicely with how inhumane some of his treatment is (that business with the plane, joke that it is, is brutally cruel on all fronts).
The case they’re on is a clever bit of psychosomatic hacking that has people in dire peril because… they think they are. The suspect they’re chasing for the majority of the volume proves to have their own tragic backstory (cleverly used to show how Hieda’s laser focus works against her) and the way they find them is also smart.
In case it’s not obvious, this is a smart story and even without a lot of traditional action it keeps pushing through at a really strong pace, such that I went through it very quickly for something so talky. It’s an excellent adaptation, balancing the art and writing quite nicely.
It’s not perfect, sadly, though it comes precariously close. The infodump at the beginning IS real and it does overwhelm a bit at times. Once free of this, the story really starts to soar, but the take-off’s definitely a bit wobbly.
There’s an art to elegantly conveying your setting and this does some of it well, with the advertising business, for example, but when you’re focusing on a thing within a thing (we have to learn what Your Forma is and then how the crime/investigation stuff works in rapid succession) it clogs the narrative.
Also the naming is weird. I get Your Forma as a brand name, but it also sucks, because the grammar snob in me can’t handle your Your Forma as a viable sentence (Yoyofo?). And Harold Lucraft is either foreshadowing the elder gods or a very distracting name that didn’t need to exist.
Which is ultimately very small potatoes, frankly, in the overall picture. When I think back on this story, it’s the really strong parts that spring to mind and how badly I wanted the next volume when this one wrapped up (okay, the revelation at the end is a bit much, but I will allow it for now).
4.5 stars - I think I have to give this one the full five, just because it was so good at doing something I think isn’t easy to do well, yet it makes look incredibly simple. That’s a rare talent.