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Finding Y
In the fall of 2035, Ava Roberts moved to the small farming community of Colfax Washington. It's now 2037. Her new-kid status finally fading, Ava is settling into her new normal. She has grown somewhat comfortable in her role as an average girl that avoids attention but is not yet aware of the town's history or close-knit connections. However, someone has caught her attention, senior, Timothy Gray. Not for the usual reasons a freshman girl notices a boy.
In an attempt to intercede and help Timothy with an eating disorder she's certain he's plagued with, Ava finds out that good intentions often have unintended consequences. Perhaps Timothy would have been better off if he'd never met her.
In an attempt to intercede and help Timothy with an eating disorder she's certain he's plagued with, Ava finds out that good intentions often have unintended consequences. Perhaps Timothy would have been better off if he'd never met her.
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Published May 13, 2022
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June 25, 2022
A satisfying original teenage romance.
The novel starts with a beautiful chapter, that sets the tone and standard of the book, whipping up the reader’s curiosity. The author has exquisite creative writing skills. In the first two-thirds of the story, she shows rather than tells, and it works very well, even though it’s not easy to do. As a result, the pacing is somewhat slow, but this is skillfully exploited by the author. She uses the omniscient POV but ironically focuses mostly on the thoughts and actions of Ava, who is an open book. The reader gets into the head of Ava and sees everything through her eyes. There is a bit of Ava in every one of us. What with her anxieties, fears, doubts, and migraines. The author has an eye for detail, and her showing technique even uses a basketball and golf match to express the protagonist's emotions. That way the mood of the reader follows the mood swings of Ava.
By contrast, Tim is a closed book. Ava is infatuated by him (who wouldn’t be), by his unassuming, composed but vulnerable persona. The first part of the novel is essentially a mystery story, as the reader, through Ava, tries to make sense of introspective Tim and prise him open.
“He rarely complained. A light-hearted easiness about him suggested confidence and contentment. He was genuinely friendly, but she knew something in him was broken. If it was grief, he kept it well hidden.”
The author drops hints and clues here and there, but it’s only close to the midpoint of the novel, that we begin to understand him. From, that point, the story catches pace as the author switches to telling, and the surprises keep coming, building up to the very satisfying one-page ending.
This is an unusually narrated romance, as the author explores the psychological-emotional development of the protagonists’ characters. The initial emphasis is on characterization. She also explores the psychological roots of a common and distressing disorder that afflicts teenagers. There are several other strands too – dealing with grief, depression, and sickness. The author does this in a delicate and empathic way. Apart from the two protagonists, there are the secondary characters, particularly the anxious parents of the protagonists. Their poignant reaction to the plight of their children adds an extra emotional dimension to the narrative. Then, there is the absent brother, who has a haunting presence throughout the book.
The development editing (not the story, which is very different) reminds me of one of the greatest modern world literature classics, “The Diary of a Country Priest” by Georges Bernanos which had such a major influence on Graham Greene.
All in all, a simple, relatable story, masterly told in a dignified manner, a welcome break from the vulgar, commercial teenage romance stories. Because of the honed skills of the author, this could also be considered a work of literary fiction.
The novel starts with a beautiful chapter, that sets the tone and standard of the book, whipping up the reader’s curiosity. The author has exquisite creative writing skills. In the first two-thirds of the story, she shows rather than tells, and it works very well, even though it’s not easy to do. As a result, the pacing is somewhat slow, but this is skillfully exploited by the author. She uses the omniscient POV but ironically focuses mostly on the thoughts and actions of Ava, who is an open book. The reader gets into the head of Ava and sees everything through her eyes. There is a bit of Ava in every one of us. What with her anxieties, fears, doubts, and migraines. The author has an eye for detail, and her showing technique even uses a basketball and golf match to express the protagonist's emotions. That way the mood of the reader follows the mood swings of Ava.
By contrast, Tim is a closed book. Ava is infatuated by him (who wouldn’t be), by his unassuming, composed but vulnerable persona. The first part of the novel is essentially a mystery story, as the reader, through Ava, tries to make sense of introspective Tim and prise him open.
“He rarely complained. A light-hearted easiness about him suggested confidence and contentment. He was genuinely friendly, but she knew something in him was broken. If it was grief, he kept it well hidden.”
The author drops hints and clues here and there, but it’s only close to the midpoint of the novel, that we begin to understand him. From, that point, the story catches pace as the author switches to telling, and the surprises keep coming, building up to the very satisfying one-page ending.
This is an unusually narrated romance, as the author explores the psychological-emotional development of the protagonists’ characters. The initial emphasis is on characterization. She also explores the psychological roots of a common and distressing disorder that afflicts teenagers. There are several other strands too – dealing with grief, depression, and sickness. The author does this in a delicate and empathic way. Apart from the two protagonists, there are the secondary characters, particularly the anxious parents of the protagonists. Their poignant reaction to the plight of their children adds an extra emotional dimension to the narrative. Then, there is the absent brother, who has a haunting presence throughout the book.
The development editing (not the story, which is very different) reminds me of one of the greatest modern world literature classics, “The Diary of a Country Priest” by Georges Bernanos which had such a major influence on Graham Greene.
All in all, a simple, relatable story, masterly told in a dignified manner, a welcome break from the vulgar, commercial teenage romance stories. Because of the honed skills of the author, this could also be considered a work of literary fiction.
June 27, 2023
High school freshman Ava Roberts is new to Colfax, and a problem is keeping her up at night - does senior Timothy Gray have an eating disorder? Timothy is a member of the junior varsity basketball team and Ava becomes a fan of sorts. She learns that Timothy had an older brother, Billy, who has died. By chance, a precalculus tutoring gig is set up for "new kid" Ava after school, and her tutor is none other than Timothy. Timothy quickly learns that Ava really needs no math help, and a relationship ensues. The subject of Timothy's purging is finally broached, and he is eventually in a position to receive help. Timothy's counselor recommends no relationships until he can work out his problems, so he and Ava remain "just friends", although that relationship elelves into one where they are "True friends. The kind your life depends on." The plot thickens when Ava develops a brain tumor - how will their relationship survive these problems, and if it does survive, how will it be retained when Timothy departs for college while Ava finishes three more years of high school?
Finding Y is a cute story with characters that are not only totally believable, they are the wholesome type that you would like to know. They even have positive, supporting parents. The book is solidly entertaining.
Finding Y is a cute story with characters that are not only totally believable, they are the wholesome type that you would like to know. They even have positive, supporting parents. The book is solidly entertaining.
July 18, 2024
Set a few years into the future, this is a beautiful YA novel. A slow burn, friendship to lovers story that also explores heavier topics such as Loss/Grief, Faith, Health Issues and ED.
Several parts had me tearing up, and were really heartwarming, I really enjoyed it. It’s a really sweet read.
With less than 10 pages left, the one thing that really bothered me, was a certain phrase made by Ava’s father to her mother. “Lola, don’t eat the sandwiches. You’ll wake up as big as a horse.”
Could be just me but especially considering it’s set around year 2038, I really hope that in reality, by that time there won’t be any fat jokes, men telling a woman what she can eat, or this big fear of gaining weight as if it’s some form of terminal diagnosis.
There genuinely was no reason to include that sentence, as it doesn’t add a single thing to the scene and really ruined the lovely moment that was happening. If not for that part, it would be perfect.
Several parts had me tearing up, and were really heartwarming, I really enjoyed it. It’s a really sweet read.
With less than 10 pages left, the one thing that really bothered me, was a certain phrase made by Ava’s father to her mother. “Lola, don’t eat the sandwiches. You’ll wake up as big as a horse.”
Could be just me but especially considering it’s set around year 2038, I really hope that in reality, by that time there won’t be any fat jokes, men telling a woman what she can eat, or this big fear of gaining weight as if it’s some form of terminal diagnosis.
There genuinely was no reason to include that sentence, as it doesn’t add a single thing to the scene and really ruined the lovely moment that was happening. If not for that part, it would be perfect.
October 1, 2022
Such a satisfying read! I loved Ava and Tim and loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee their cute teenage romance :) It was really interesting to see all of Ava’s complex thought processes.
I love her! I feel like I really got to know her and enjoyed the progress she made as a person.
I think this book is really well suited for teens like myself. If gives lots of perspective and it’s really insightful :)
It discusses a really sensitive topic that might not be comfortable for everyone, but everything else was great. :)
I love her! I feel like I really got to know her and enjoyed the progress she made as a person.
I think this book is really well suited for teens like myself. If gives lots of perspective and it’s really insightful :)
It discusses a really sensitive topic that might not be comfortable for everyone, but everything else was great. :)
August 7, 2024
The faith aspect of this book and real life not talked about enough issues were written so well. I enjoyed this read and was able to connect and enjoy this slow burn romance. The ending had me shedding a tear and I found myself happy I was able to read it. This is a great read.
March 1, 2023
I read this book a few months ago, and I enjoyed the two leads for the most part. While some aspects of the story felt a bit questionable, like the female lead's strong interest in the male lead (Timothy) before she really gets to know him at all (it's almost like she's psychic when she assumes the correct answer regarding the male lead's condition). However, while I was annoyed with the female lead at times despite her good intentions, she was a character I could feel for and so was Timothy, who was a bit older than her and more responsible while still fighting his battles as a teen who lacks power in the world. I do think this book could appeal to a slightly younger teen audience (it's very much a coming-of-age), and the conclusion is a good one!
Review also posted on Amazon.
Review also posted on Amazon.
March 26, 2025
My Take on Finding Y: A Sweet, Real Story of Friendship and Healing
Okay, so I just finished Finding Y, and I’ve got to say—it’s one of those books that sneaks up on you with how much it makes you feel. It’s all about Ava Roberts, this super observant high school girl who gets totally wrapped up in worrying about Timothy, a guy from her class. She starts wondering if boys can even have eating disorders, and next thing you know, she’s basically a detective, scrolling through his socials to figure out his basketball schedule and where he lives. It’s kind of intense, but you can tell she’s just that kind of person—someone who cares hard.
The people in this story? They feel so real. Ava’s got this cozy vibe with her mom, Lola, who’s always there with solid advice—like, “Hey, don’t forget to take care of you too.” Then there’s Rochelle, her best friend, who’s hilarious and keeps things light with all her teasing about Ava’s crush. Timothy’s the one who really got me, though—he’s dealing with losing his brother Billy, and you can feel how heavy that is. His dad’s kind of distant, but his mom, Grace, has these quiet moments with Ava that say a lot without saying much. Oh, and Timothy’s got a trainer, Azar, and a counselor, Mr. Gonzales, who push him in the best way to figure his stuff out.
The story’s pretty chill but keeps you hooked. Ava’s worrying turns into tutoring sessions with Timothy, and there’s this cute pizza night where they really click. But when she figures out he’s struggling because of Billy and tries to help, it blows up in her face—he’s mad, she’s hurt. He ends up at this treatment place in Spokane, and they start these weekly phone calls that keep them close. Then Ava gets her own curveball—a tumor scare (it’s not cancer, thank goodness)—and Timothy sends her flowers, which totally melted me. By the end, they reunite at his treatment center’s open house, and he’s like, “That ‘just friends’ thing? I didn’t want to freak you out.” It’s messy, sweet, and so them.
What I loved most? How it nails friendship—Rochelle’s always got Ava’s back, and Ava won’t give up on Timothy, even when he’s pushing her away. It’s got family stuff too—her parents are protective, his are complicated. And the way it digs into grief and figuring yourself out? So real. Both Ava and Timothy go through it, but they come out stronger. Plus, their whole “are we or aren’t we” vibe feels like every high school crush I’ve ever had.
It’s written from Ava’s point of view, super close-up, and it’s got this warm, easy feel. Rochelle’s jokes crack me up, but then it’ll hit you with something deep about loss or growing up, and you’re just nodding along. The way they talk feels like how my friends and I sound—totally natural.
Was it perfect? Eh, maybe the tumor thing and their big fight wrapped up a little too fast for me, but honestly, I didn’t care. Finding Y is just so human—it’s got all the awkward, funny, tough parts of being a teen, mixed with some big heart. If you’re into stories that feel like they’re about real people you could know, you’ve got to read this one.
Okay, so I just finished Finding Y, and I’ve got to say—it’s one of those books that sneaks up on you with how much it makes you feel. It’s all about Ava Roberts, this super observant high school girl who gets totally wrapped up in worrying about Timothy, a guy from her class. She starts wondering if boys can even have eating disorders, and next thing you know, she’s basically a detective, scrolling through his socials to figure out his basketball schedule and where he lives. It’s kind of intense, but you can tell she’s just that kind of person—someone who cares hard.
The people in this story? They feel so real. Ava’s got this cozy vibe with her mom, Lola, who’s always there with solid advice—like, “Hey, don’t forget to take care of you too.” Then there’s Rochelle, her best friend, who’s hilarious and keeps things light with all her teasing about Ava’s crush. Timothy’s the one who really got me, though—he’s dealing with losing his brother Billy, and you can feel how heavy that is. His dad’s kind of distant, but his mom, Grace, has these quiet moments with Ava that say a lot without saying much. Oh, and Timothy’s got a trainer, Azar, and a counselor, Mr. Gonzales, who push him in the best way to figure his stuff out.
The story’s pretty chill but keeps you hooked. Ava’s worrying turns into tutoring sessions with Timothy, and there’s this cute pizza night where they really click. But when she figures out he’s struggling because of Billy and tries to help, it blows up in her face—he’s mad, she’s hurt. He ends up at this treatment place in Spokane, and they start these weekly phone calls that keep them close. Then Ava gets her own curveball—a tumor scare (it’s not cancer, thank goodness)—and Timothy sends her flowers, which totally melted me. By the end, they reunite at his treatment center’s open house, and he’s like, “That ‘just friends’ thing? I didn’t want to freak you out.” It’s messy, sweet, and so them.
What I loved most? How it nails friendship—Rochelle’s always got Ava’s back, and Ava won’t give up on Timothy, even when he’s pushing her away. It’s got family stuff too—her parents are protective, his are complicated. And the way it digs into grief and figuring yourself out? So real. Both Ava and Timothy go through it, but they come out stronger. Plus, their whole “are we or aren’t we” vibe feels like every high school crush I’ve ever had.
It’s written from Ava’s point of view, super close-up, and it’s got this warm, easy feel. Rochelle’s jokes crack me up, but then it’ll hit you with something deep about loss or growing up, and you’re just nodding along. The way they talk feels like how my friends and I sound—totally natural.
Was it perfect? Eh, maybe the tumor thing and their big fight wrapped up a little too fast for me, but honestly, I didn’t care. Finding Y is just so human—it’s got all the awkward, funny, tough parts of being a teen, mixed with some big heart. If you’re into stories that feel like they’re about real people you could know, you’ve got to read this one.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
October 27, 2022
*CONTAINS SPOILERS*
A unique and interesting take on a genre that is so oversaturated, Finding Y was bursting with twists and turns that left me constantly wanting more. The author touched on several very difficult topics but each as well researched and written with such care and respect that I feel that readers of any age would have enjoyed the story. Rimbey’s unique writing style was very engaging and made it easy to get lost in page after page and more than once I found myself whispering “just one more chapter!”
The characters were well-written and emotive, fully fledged and well rounded, to the point that they felt like real people. The dialogue was fun and witty, and the romance introduced felt very natural and real and most certainly made my heart skip a beat more than once reading it!
This book is set over a decade in the future, and this is only really alluded to vaguely in some of the new technologies mentioned, including euthanasia clinics. I would have liked to hear these ideas being introduced and explored further as they would have added something new to the narrative. As these snippets were only mentioned once near the beginning and once near the end, we didn’t get a real view of the future setting that was part of the overall world of the novel.
The only criticism I would have for this story is that the ending felt just a little bit ‘preachy’, for lack of a better term. It seemed like suddenly every single character within the story had become very religious and many of the viewpoints then revolved around God and the Church, despite not really having been mentioned in the earlier portions of the book. As such, the dialogue in these areas felt a bit clunky and unnatural. This may have been the author’s own views on religion bleeding through into her writing, and sadly, I felt it was a little boring and took away from the ending that these wonderful characters were working towards (as if God was the reason for all of their love, pain and success/healing and not their own growth and efforts.) I felt that it was a bit heavy-handed in how it was written and may be unappealing for some readers who wouldn’t consider themselves religious (especially readers in their teens).
Overall, I would praise this novel for stepping out and trying something new in this genre. It felt fresh, inventive, and well-written and I recommend it for anyone who wants a bit more substance to their romance books as well as to young adults who are looking for a story that will leave them totally enthralled. I honestly cannot wait to read more of this brilliant author’s work!
A unique and interesting take on a genre that is so oversaturated, Finding Y was bursting with twists and turns that left me constantly wanting more. The author touched on several very difficult topics but each as well researched and written with such care and respect that I feel that readers of any age would have enjoyed the story. Rimbey’s unique writing style was very engaging and made it easy to get lost in page after page and more than once I found myself whispering “just one more chapter!”
The characters were well-written and emotive, fully fledged and well rounded, to the point that they felt like real people. The dialogue was fun and witty, and the romance introduced felt very natural and real and most certainly made my heart skip a beat more than once reading it!
This book is set over a decade in the future, and this is only really alluded to vaguely in some of the new technologies mentioned, including euthanasia clinics. I would have liked to hear these ideas being introduced and explored further as they would have added something new to the narrative. As these snippets were only mentioned once near the beginning and once near the end, we didn’t get a real view of the future setting that was part of the overall world of the novel.
The only criticism I would have for this story is that the ending felt just a little bit ‘preachy’, for lack of a better term. It seemed like suddenly every single character within the story had become very religious and many of the viewpoints then revolved around God and the Church, despite not really having been mentioned in the earlier portions of the book. As such, the dialogue in these areas felt a bit clunky and unnatural. This may have been the author’s own views on religion bleeding through into her writing, and sadly, I felt it was a little boring and took away from the ending that these wonderful characters were working towards (as if God was the reason for all of their love, pain and success/healing and not their own growth and efforts.) I felt that it was a bit heavy-handed in how it was written and may be unappealing for some readers who wouldn’t consider themselves religious (especially readers in their teens).
Overall, I would praise this novel for stepping out and trying something new in this genre. It felt fresh, inventive, and well-written and I recommend it for anyone who wants a bit more substance to their romance books as well as to young adults who are looking for a story that will leave them totally enthralled. I honestly cannot wait to read more of this brilliant author’s work!
February 17, 2024
Esta es la historia de Ava, chica que ha dejado de ser la nueva para ser como cualquier chica del lugar que no puede dejar de ver a Timothy un chico mayor que pertenece al equipo de básquetbol escolar pero que padece un trastorno alimenticio ademas de que ha tenido una terrible perdida recientemente por lo que esta luchando contra todos estos sentimientos y Ava intentará ayudarle tanto como le sea posible.
En esta historia la autora nos trae un romance juvenil un poco diferente pues no solo se centra en la relación de estos chicos si no en las luchas que tienen cada uno en su vida y las dificultades que padecen, si bien esta parte es interesante el inicio del libro es un tanto confuso pero es poco tiempo ademas la lectura es bastante ligera.
En cuanto a los personajes creo que están bastante acertados en cuanto a la relación de su edad con sus comportamientos, sin embargo siento que no hay tanto desarrollo como se hubiese esperado, me hubiese gustado saber mas sobre como van evolucionando pero es entendible que la historia se enfoca en llegar a la solución.
En general es un libro sencillo y fácil de leer con un romance juvenil que abarca temas difíciles.
Agradezco mucho a Booktasters y al autor por el envío del libro digital para esta colaboración, lo disfrute bastante.
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This is the story of Ava, a girl who has stopped being the new girl and has become like any local girl who can't stop seeing Timothy, an older boy who belongs to the school basketball team but who suffers from an eating disorder and has He had a terrible loss recently so he is fighting all these feelings and Ava will try to help him as much as possible.
In this story the author brings us a slightly different youth romance because it not only focuses on the relationship of these boys but also on the struggles that each one has in their lives and the difficulties they suffer, although this part is interesting at the beginning. The book is a bit confusing but it is a short time and the reading is quite light.
As for the characters, I think they are quite accurate in terms of the relationship between their age and their behaviors, however I feel that there is not as much development as would have been expected, I would have liked to know more about how they evolve but it is understandable that the story focuses on reaching the solution.
Overall it is a simple and easy to read book with a young romance that covers difficult topics.
I am very grateful to Booktasters and the author for sending the digital book for this collaboration, I really enjoyed it.
En esta historia la autora nos trae un romance juvenil un poco diferente pues no solo se centra en la relación de estos chicos si no en las luchas que tienen cada uno en su vida y las dificultades que padecen, si bien esta parte es interesante el inicio del libro es un tanto confuso pero es poco tiempo ademas la lectura es bastante ligera.
En cuanto a los personajes creo que están bastante acertados en cuanto a la relación de su edad con sus comportamientos, sin embargo siento que no hay tanto desarrollo como se hubiese esperado, me hubiese gustado saber mas sobre como van evolucionando pero es entendible que la historia se enfoca en llegar a la solución.
En general es un libro sencillo y fácil de leer con un romance juvenil que abarca temas difíciles.
Agradezco mucho a Booktasters y al autor por el envío del libro digital para esta colaboración, lo disfrute bastante.
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This is the story of Ava, a girl who has stopped being the new girl and has become like any local girl who can't stop seeing Timothy, an older boy who belongs to the school basketball team but who suffers from an eating disorder and has He had a terrible loss recently so he is fighting all these feelings and Ava will try to help him as much as possible.
In this story the author brings us a slightly different youth romance because it not only focuses on the relationship of these boys but also on the struggles that each one has in their lives and the difficulties they suffer, although this part is interesting at the beginning. The book is a bit confusing but it is a short time and the reading is quite light.
As for the characters, I think they are quite accurate in terms of the relationship between their age and their behaviors, however I feel that there is not as much development as would have been expected, I would have liked to know more about how they evolve but it is understandable that the story focuses on reaching the solution.
Overall it is a simple and easy to read book with a young romance that covers difficult topics.
I am very grateful to Booktasters and the author for sending the digital book for this collaboration, I really enjoyed it.
November 13, 2023
My first review was a little too intense … so here’s another one written when I am in a better headspace.
Let’s start with what I liked about the book:
- The pace: it wasn’t rushed. Even though the book is introduced as a romance, it didn’t feel too forced. Th organic development of the relationship was well-written in the first 20%. The introduction was admittedly a little disorienting, but it flowed smoothly. Exposition 10/10.
- The religious aspect: when Ava felt hopeless and lost, she prayed. When Timothy was struggling to heal, he prayed. (Kind of iffy that they prayed when in difficulty only, though. Praying isn’t a “last resort”, you know?)
For what I didn’t like … well …
- The age gap: four years isn’t a lot, I know, and I agree! 2-5 years is the sweet spot for age differences. That being said, 14 is such a young age, too young to ever commit to a long-term relationship or to be emotionally fully developed at all. Ava demonstrates that very well – she is a kid! She doesn't know who her friends are, what her interests are, what she envisions the rest of her life as. Timothy is 18, preparing for college, growing up into an adult, and moreover learning to love himself after an unresolved traumatic experience. A relationship between a recovering person and a kid isn’t one that is logically feasible or enjoyable to read.
- Timothy: he is borderline rude at times, and it is let go as a part of his unresolved trauma. It didn’t sit right with me because while yes, he has faced a difficult past, it is not an excuse to treat those around you, who love and support you, in a less-than-respectable manner (especially the coach. What did that poor man do to deserve that!) Maybe he grows up, maybe he becomes better, but the book really doesn't show what happens after the catalyst for character development is introduced.
- The storytelling: the writing got a little disorienting at times, and the plot flow got irregular at the 45% mark. It flew between romance and problem-resolution frequently. There was also more telling than showing when Timothy’s backstory was revealed; it felt like I was reading about it from a third POV than experiencing it in the story itself. The ending was abrupt and didn't show the "after"; the entire book was the during, and we didn't get to see Ava and Timothy grow and develop as characters.
I was wildly disappointed at the end because I had such high hopes for the story, and I kept holding out hope it would get better. Overall, with a little more time and more showing, it would have been better. The premise is good, but the way it was resolved really broke the story.
(I was given this book for free by Booktasters in exchange for an honest review.)
Let’s start with what I liked about the book:
- The pace: it wasn’t rushed. Even though the book is introduced as a romance, it didn’t feel too forced. Th organic development of the relationship was well-written in the first 20%. The introduction was admittedly a little disorienting, but it flowed smoothly. Exposition 10/10.
- The religious aspect: when Ava felt hopeless and lost, she prayed. When Timothy was struggling to heal, he prayed. (Kind of iffy that they prayed when in difficulty only, though. Praying isn’t a “last resort”, you know?)
For what I didn’t like … well …
- The age gap: four years isn’t a lot, I know, and I agree! 2-5 years is the sweet spot for age differences. That being said, 14 is such a young age, too young to ever commit to a long-term relationship or to be emotionally fully developed at all. Ava demonstrates that very well – she is a kid! She doesn't know who her friends are, what her interests are, what she envisions the rest of her life as. Timothy is 18, preparing for college, growing up into an adult, and moreover learning to love himself after an unresolved traumatic experience. A relationship between a recovering person and a kid isn’t one that is logically feasible or enjoyable to read.
- Timothy: he is borderline rude at times, and it is let go as a part of his unresolved trauma. It didn’t sit right with me because while yes, he has faced a difficult past, it is not an excuse to treat those around you, who love and support you, in a less-than-respectable manner (especially the coach. What did that poor man do to deserve that!) Maybe he grows up, maybe he becomes better, but the book really doesn't show what happens after the catalyst for character development is introduced.
- The storytelling: the writing got a little disorienting at times, and the plot flow got irregular at the 45% mark. It flew between romance and problem-resolution frequently. There was also more telling than showing when Timothy’s backstory was revealed; it felt like I was reading about it from a third POV than experiencing it in the story itself. The ending was abrupt and didn't show the "after"; the entire book was the during, and we didn't get to see Ava and Timothy grow and develop as characters.
I was wildly disappointed at the end because I had such high hopes for the story, and I kept holding out hope it would get better. Overall, with a little more time and more showing, it would have been better. The premise is good, but the way it was resolved really broke the story.
(I was given this book for free by Booktasters in exchange for an honest review.)
May 12, 2024
Finding Y by Kari Rimbey introduces readers to Ava Roberts, a newcomer to the small town of Colfax, where she finds herself drawn to Timothy Gray, a senior basketball player with a hidden struggle. Initially concerned about Timothy's well-being, Ava's journey intertwines with Timothy's through tutoring sessions that evolve into a complex relationship.
Rimbey's narrative focuses on the development of Ava and Timothy's relationship, offering a sweet and inspirational romance that delves beneath the surface to explore deeper psychological and emotional elements. The give-and-take dynamic between the characters is both quirky and engaging, drawing readers into their journey of self-discovery and healing.
While the storyline initially raised doubts about whether or not this story was for me, it quickly captivated me with its depth and complexity. However, there are moments where Ava's insights may feel slightly contrived, briefly detracting from the realism of the narrative. Despite this minor flaw, I recommend Finding Y for readers seeking character-driven stories with depth and complexity, particularly those interested in themes of mental health struggles and the complexities of relationships.
Overall, Finding Y offers a compelling narrative that transcends clichés, providing a thought-provoking exploration of human emotions and experiences. With its nuanced portrayal of personal challenges and heartfelt romance, this book earns a solid 4 out of 5 stars and is worth a read for anyone seeking a romance that resonates on a deeper level.
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As BookHookup, I am a longtime book reviewer. I received a free review copy of this book from BookTasters and have not received compensation for reviewing or recommending it.
Rimbey's narrative focuses on the development of Ava and Timothy's relationship, offering a sweet and inspirational romance that delves beneath the surface to explore deeper psychological and emotional elements. The give-and-take dynamic between the characters is both quirky and engaging, drawing readers into their journey of self-discovery and healing.
While the storyline initially raised doubts about whether or not this story was for me, it quickly captivated me with its depth and complexity. However, there are moments where Ava's insights may feel slightly contrived, briefly detracting from the realism of the narrative. Despite this minor flaw, I recommend Finding Y for readers seeking character-driven stories with depth and complexity, particularly those interested in themes of mental health struggles and the complexities of relationships.
Overall, Finding Y offers a compelling narrative that transcends clichés, providing a thought-provoking exploration of human emotions and experiences. With its nuanced portrayal of personal challenges and heartfelt romance, this book earns a solid 4 out of 5 stars and is worth a read for anyone seeking a romance that resonates on a deeper level.
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As BookHookup, I am a longtime book reviewer. I received a free review copy of this book from BookTasters and have not received compensation for reviewing or recommending it.
May 12, 2024
Sweet young romance
A romance with a difference, some pressing agonies to pull through for Ava and Timothy who doesn't like to be called Timmy. There you go, emotional but charming characters, vulnerable but strong too. Meet them and their parents. There's tender feelings beautifully sketched by the author. Some sadness drags Timothy to eating disorder, clouding his personality and friendship with Ava. He is outwardly a witty, delightful guy, but Ava finds it's a facade. The way they get through their days is quite an endearing tale. Enjoyable read for the young and grown up young, walking through their journey so well written is really a joy.
Ava is truly a wholesome likeable youngster who has moved with her parents and sister to Colfax, Washington. Timothy is a senior at her school, she instinctively feels he needs some help, so she tries to reach out. This unfolds the story filled with surprises. Sensitively written by the author, it delves into the pain of recovery gently. Meanwhile, there is a scary emergency to deal with for Ava too, giving us the goosebumps on the way. True love rides a bumpy road, don't we know....
The characters are loveable, funny and memorable. That's what we all like.
Recommend for all ages, heart-waming and satisfying read. Do enjoy!
A romance with a difference, some pressing agonies to pull through for Ava and Timothy who doesn't like to be called Timmy. There you go, emotional but charming characters, vulnerable but strong too. Meet them and their parents. There's tender feelings beautifully sketched by the author. Some sadness drags Timothy to eating disorder, clouding his personality and friendship with Ava. He is outwardly a witty, delightful guy, but Ava finds it's a facade. The way they get through their days is quite an endearing tale. Enjoyable read for the young and grown up young, walking through their journey so well written is really a joy.
Ava is truly a wholesome likeable youngster who has moved with her parents and sister to Colfax, Washington. Timothy is a senior at her school, she instinctively feels he needs some help, so she tries to reach out. This unfolds the story filled with surprises. Sensitively written by the author, it delves into the pain of recovery gently. Meanwhile, there is a scary emergency to deal with for Ava too, giving us the goosebumps on the way. True love rides a bumpy road, don't we know....
The characters are loveable, funny and memorable. That's what we all like.
Recommend for all ages, heart-waming and satisfying read. Do enjoy!
October 7, 2024
I don't think I am the intended audience for this book. It had some good elements, and some that just didn't work for me.
What I liked:
* That the author didn't try to glorify Timothy's actions. It was clear that he needed help and showed that it can be an extreme process, but a necessary one.
* The pace that Ava and Timothy's relationship developed. There was a little bit too much back and forth for me, but ultimately, I liked that their relationship wasn't rushed.
What missed the mark:
* The religious elements. I'm not a religious person, and I don't usually consume media related to it, and I didn't know there was going to be such heavy religious content in the book. It was personally a really big turn-off.
* There was a lack of consistency with the storytelling at times. Why was Ava so randomly obsessed with Timothy? Also, the ending made little sense to me.
* There was a lot of tell don't show moments in the writing. In the middle of a conversation, the writing style would change, and it would break up the flow.
Overall, I was most likely not the intended audience for this book. I also recommend taking care before reading as there are a lot of possible trigger warnings Including (but not limited to): death of a loved one, eating disorders, emotional trauma, struggling with mental health, and suicidal thoughts.
What I liked:
* That the author didn't try to glorify Timothy's actions. It was clear that he needed help and showed that it can be an extreme process, but a necessary one.
* The pace that Ava and Timothy's relationship developed. There was a little bit too much back and forth for me, but ultimately, I liked that their relationship wasn't rushed.
What missed the mark:
* The religious elements. I'm not a religious person, and I don't usually consume media related to it, and I didn't know there was going to be such heavy religious content in the book. It was personally a really big turn-off.
* There was a lack of consistency with the storytelling at times. Why was Ava so randomly obsessed with Timothy? Also, the ending made little sense to me.
* There was a lot of tell don't show moments in the writing. In the middle of a conversation, the writing style would change, and it would break up the flow.
Overall, I was most likely not the intended audience for this book. I also recommend taking care before reading as there are a lot of possible trigger warnings Including (but not limited to): death of a loved one, eating disorders, emotional trauma, struggling with mental health, and suicidal thoughts.
July 17, 2024
A heart-warming novel following Ava, a young girl who becomes infatuated on Timothy, a senior basketball player, and his well-being.
Their paths cross as Ava accidently signs-up for tutoring and TImothy be elder brother. In parallel, Timothy swiftly learns that Ava has no need for tutoring lessons.
Their journey unfolds with a friendship, blossoming into a romance, which is tested with their hardships.
Finding Y is a testament of very relatable characters which undergo the acceptance of death, sickness and eating disorders, but through love, friendship and faith in God, can see the beauty in life.
Mental health topics are challenging to write about, especially when targeting a younger audience, but Mrs Rimbey does it beautifully and with empathy.
"When given the choice, we always choose life, but we're not always given that choice." - Words now engraved in my heart.
I wish there would have been a book like this when growing up. Highly recommend this book for young adults, also serving as a wonderful gift.
Their paths cross as Ava accidently signs-up for tutoring and TImothy be elder brother. In parallel, Timothy swiftly learns that Ava has no need for tutoring lessons.
Their journey unfolds with a friendship, blossoming into a romance, which is tested with their hardships.
Finding Y is a testament of very relatable characters which undergo the acceptance of death, sickness and eating disorders, but through love, friendship and faith in God, can see the beauty in life.
Mental health topics are challenging to write about, especially when targeting a younger audience, but Mrs Rimbey does it beautifully and with empathy.
"When given the choice, we always choose life, but we're not always given that choice." - Words now engraved in my heart.
I wish there would have been a book like this when growing up. Highly recommend this book for young adults, also serving as a wonderful gift.
April 8, 2024
When I first started reading this, I found the title ambiguous. I thought, "Finding Y? What does that mean?" On first impressions, I was interested in the characters, but I wasn't sure if this would be a mystery, or a romance, or something else.
It wasn't long before I felt myself investing in Ava and Timothy's connection. It warmed my heart, and at times, the intensity surprised me a little.
In places, I felt the story became slightly darker than I had first anticipated, and dealt with slightly darker themes, but I think that many young people could relate to a connection like Ava and Timothy's, and I think young adults will enjoy this book.
It wasn't long before I felt myself investing in Ava and Timothy's connection. It warmed my heart, and at times, the intensity surprised me a little.
In places, I felt the story became slightly darker than I had first anticipated, and dealt with slightly darker themes, but I think that many young people could relate to a connection like Ava and Timothy's, and I think young adults will enjoy this book.
October 19, 2024
This book seems like it doesn’t know what it wants to be. Does it want to be a love story about two teenagers dealing with medical and psychological issues? Does it want to be a dystopian futuristic novel? Does it want to be a religious Christian novel? I’m all for multi-genre or genre crossover books but this one was all over the place.
This could have been a good book or three but it’s too much in one story. Too many starts and stops of different storylines. There isn’t a single thread that connects it all together strongly enough.
I could go into more details but don’t want any spoilers.
Booktasters offered me a digital copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
This could have been a good book or three but it’s too much in one story. Too many starts and stops of different storylines. There isn’t a single thread that connects it all together strongly enough.
I could go into more details but don’t want any spoilers.
Booktasters offered me a digital copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
April 19, 2023
Finding Y
A Novel - Kari Rimbey
I have seen wind go berserk on trees, the one that seems to seize attention is a large number of reading community heaped on a novel of class of native students displaying great act and emotion
of interest in a book well endowed for read rhetorics.
This novel is a giggling and sumptuous book in the hand of avid, voracious and all sort of readers.
A try on the bookshelf would make believe. 🔥
Poet Okundaye Israel 🌹
A Novel - Kari Rimbey
I have seen wind go berserk on trees, the one that seems to seize attention is a large number of reading community heaped on a novel of class of native students displaying great act and emotion
of interest in a book well endowed for read rhetorics.
This novel is a giggling and sumptuous book in the hand of avid, voracious and all sort of readers.
A try on the bookshelf would make believe. 🔥
Poet Okundaye Israel 🌹
October 6, 2023
The start of the story is very abrupt and kinda leaves you a little confused and curious about certain information. The background story follows eating disorder in males and dealing with loss. The story telling is very basic and narration needs work. A lot of popular boy and invisible girl cliches. There is an abrupt introduction and overly heavy importance of god and religion.
Overall a very basic an average teen fiction book.
Overall a very basic an average teen fiction book.
January 26, 2023
It interested me when I saw it would be a story about eating disorders, but it was beyond that. In Finding Y, Ava and Timothy deal with the problems of youth as she tries to help him with the grief of his brother and what at first she thinks is an eating disorder, but they will find peace in each other and discover how beautiful life can be despite sadness and loss.
February 3, 2023
I usually don't read (teenage) romance books but this one was a wonderful
story! I also liked the personages very much.
If you enjoy reading (teenage) romance stories, don't hesitate to put this
book on your to read list.
Without no doubt I'd like to give a 5 star rating for this wonderful
romance!
story! I also liked the personages very much.
If you enjoy reading (teenage) romance stories, don't hesitate to put this
book on your to read list.
Without no doubt I'd like to give a 5 star rating for this wonderful
romance!
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