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I have always felt displaced. Lost. Angry. Half of a person. It didn’t matter that I had love, support, and a family most people would kill for. Something was always missing. Then, my father announced we were moving for business in the middle of my senior year and it was something else to add to the list of things that made me feel..off.
We moved to this small midwestern town sticking out like weeds in a rose garden, surrounded by judgemental, bible-thumping freaks who see my three brothers and me as criminals and devil worshippers because we are tatted up, motorcycle riding villains. That’s right. Lock up your fucking daughters. I was prepared to spend the last eight weeks in a high school where I knew no one and didn’t care to, alone and aloof, until I saw her.
I walked into third period religion and my entire life changed in the blink of an eye. I was given a seat by the most beautiful, tiniest, blonde haired angel I have ever seen. She turned her baby blues on me and all of the oxygen left me. I heard nothing else. My heart became an organ that actually worked and all of the anger inside of me moved to make room for the ‘Pequena’ that is now going to become my everything.
I was suddenly consumed with a feeling of possession. An obsessive addiction unlike anything I have ever felt and with every passing day, it growws stronger and without bounds. She is my rib. The reason I was born. My purpose.
I began my campaign to get her and keep her. The problem, her father is the town pastor and he has his daughters on lock and key until he picks a husband for them. Over my dead fucking body.
Suddenly I know what my mission has to be. Breed her to keep her. I will blackmail, stalk, lie and cheat to get what belongs to me. I will burn this fucking town to the ground and expose all of their secrets to get what I need at the end. HER. My Pequena. My heart. The one who gave me a new purpose. I just can’t let her know what my plan is until it is too late.
I have always felt displaced. Lost. Angry. Half of a person. It didn’t matter that I had love, support, and a family most people would kill for. Something was always missing. Then, my father announced we were moving for business in the middle of my senior year and it was something else to add to the list of things that made me feel..off.
We moved to this small midwestern town sticking out like weeds in a rose garden, surrounded by judgemental, bible-thumping freaks who see my three brothers and me as criminals and devil worshippers because we are tatted up, motorcycle riding villains. That’s right. Lock up your fucking daughters. I was prepared to spend the last eight weeks in a high school where I knew no one and didn’t care to, alone and aloof, until I saw her.
I walked into third period religion and my entire life changed in the blink of an eye. I was given a seat by the most beautiful, tiniest, blonde haired angel I have ever seen. She turned her baby blues on me and all of the oxygen left me. I heard nothing else. My heart became an organ that actually worked and all of the anger inside of me moved to make room for the ‘Pequena’ that is now going to become my everything.
I was suddenly consumed with a feeling of possession. An obsessive addiction unlike anything I have ever felt and with every passing day, it growws stronger and without bounds. She is my rib. The reason I was born. My purpose.
I began my campaign to get her and keep her. The problem, her father is the town pastor and he has his daughters on lock and key until he picks a husband for them. Over my dead fucking body.
Suddenly I know what my mission has to be. Breed her to keep her. I will blackmail, stalk, lie and cheat to get what belongs to me. I will burn this fucking town to the ground and expose all of their secrets to get what I need at the end. HER. My Pequena. My heart. The one who gave me a new purpose. I just can’t let her know what my plan is until it is too late.
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Published July 6, 2022
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August 21, 2022
4 OTT jp obsessed breeding stars
Oh what a delicious breeding book. Sure, it’s set at the end of high school, but I was completely convinced with how OTT Alex is.
Alex just moved with his three brothers and very-in-love parents. He’s used to being judged because he and his brothers have tattoos and his dad used to be in an MC. Now he owns a bike shop and would like his sons to take over the business when time comes.
Imogen’s from a highly religious family. Her father’s a pastor and expects his 4 daughters to follow rules and remain chaste. He has no idea the outcome of having his new neighbors move in, especially when all four of his daughters start realizing there’s more to life than what they’ve been taught before. Little does he know, Imogen’s previous views on remaining chaste change when Alex comes into the picture 💁🏻♀️.
What I liked/loved:
—the Br££ding aspect👀. Alex is OBSESSED with getting Imogen pregnant. As soon as he sees her, he pictures her swollen with his child 😬and he’s gonna make sure it happens 😈
—it’s insta lust/love aka JK style but it’s longer. I’ve always wondered what it’d be like if JK wrote a longer book. Although they have a different writing style, it was a nice taste to what it COULD be like
—the dirty talk🔥. Good LAWD 🥵 Alex has such a dirty mouth 💦 this 18-year old has no business being so duuuurty 😅
—the smexxy times. Yup. There’s a lot of them 😉🔥
—how obsessed and OTT Alex is. Dear GAWD. He only sees her. No ow will ever do. Sigh. I love that so much 🥰. He’s so protective and so into her, in every aspect. He found the love of his life and he’s not letting her go 😉
—the epilogues. We get a few time jumps and we get a nice 10 year one where we see how much they still love each other ❤️. Plus. It’s 🔥🔥🔥
—siblings paired with siblings? 👀 I’ll have to see how I feel about this when I read their books
—he calls her pequeña 🥰
What I didn’t like/wanted more of:
—the lack of contractions 🫣. Sigh. I just don’t talk this way, even when I’m thinking, I think in contractions. It made their dialogue/internal monologues staccato to me 😬. This is obviously a me problem, but I kept cringing and just replacing contractions in certain spots so that the book became more fluid, TO ME (other people won’t even notice lol). It ruined the fluidity to me 🫣.
—more on the sisters and their relationships. We get some basic information but I didn’t feel the closeness like I should’ve felt. I wish we saw them interact more.
—how quick some scenes happened/changed. I wouldn’t have minded in some things had more details/were drawn out.
—what happened to some of the “bad” people? We get some info for potential blackmail, but we don’t find out what happens. Maybe we find out in upcoming books? I wanted a little more closure.
Overall, I really enjoyed this.
⚠️safety squad ⚠️
-no cheating/sharing/owd
-virgin h/not a manwhore H
-verbally abusive father
-OM- there’s an OM that wants the h, but the H takes ownership very quickly 💅
-praise k!nk/degradation k!nk/sp@nking/an@l play
-HEA/epilogue/months later/10 years later
Oh what a delicious breeding book. Sure, it’s set at the end of high school, but I was completely convinced with how OTT Alex is.
Alex just moved with his three brothers and very-in-love parents. He’s used to being judged because he and his brothers have tattoos and his dad used to be in an MC. Now he owns a bike shop and would like his sons to take over the business when time comes.
Imogen’s from a highly religious family. Her father’s a pastor and expects his 4 daughters to follow rules and remain chaste. He has no idea the outcome of having his new neighbors move in, especially when all four of his daughters start realizing there’s more to life than what they’ve been taught before. Little does he know, Imogen’s previous views on remaining chaste change when Alex comes into the picture 💁🏻♀️.
What I liked/loved:
—the Br££ding aspect👀. Alex is OBSESSED with getting Imogen pregnant. As soon as he sees her, he pictures her swollen with his child 😬and he’s gonna make sure it happens 😈
…once she was really out, I rolled her on her back and placed a pillow under her waist. I literally sat between her legs, watching, making sure none of it spilled out.
—it’s insta lust/love aka JK style but it’s longer. I’ve always wondered what it’d be like if JK wrote a longer book. Although they have a different writing style, it was a nice taste to what it COULD be like
—the dirty talk🔥. Good LAWD 🥵 Alex has such a dirty mouth 💦 this 18-year old has no business being so duuuurty 😅
”Good girl. You are going to stay with me for the weekend and I am going to stay inside this c*nt all weekend, making sure she knows who she belongs to. Now come, Pequeña.”
—the smexxy times. Yup. There’s a lot of them 😉🔥
—how obsessed and OTT Alex is. Dear GAWD. He only sees her. No ow will ever do. Sigh. I love that so much 🥰. He’s so protective and so into her, in every aspect. He found the love of his life and he’s not letting her go 😉
”Such a good girl. Do you see now why I have to claim you and make sure you and everyone else knows you are mine? Do you see how fucking vital it is every inch of you is claimed by me, Imogen? Can you hear it in my voice, the panic and the manic rage when I think of you being someone else’s? Tell me you understand?”
—the epilogues. We get a few time jumps and we get a nice 10 year one where we see how much they still love each other ❤️. Plus. It’s 🔥🔥🔥
—siblings paired with siblings? 👀 I’ll have to see how I feel about this when I read their books
—he calls her pequeña 🥰
What I didn’t like/wanted more of:
—the lack of contractions 🫣. Sigh. I just don’t talk this way, even when I’m thinking, I think in contractions. It made their dialogue/internal monologues staccato to me 😬. This is obviously a me problem, but I kept cringing and just replacing contractions in certain spots so that the book became more fluid, TO ME (other people won’t even notice lol). It ruined the fluidity to me 🫣.
”Yeah, Pequeña. I am right here. You are so beautiful, baby. It is going to be ok.”
—more on the sisters and their relationships. We get some basic information but I didn’t feel the closeness like I should’ve felt. I wish we saw them interact more.
—how quick some scenes happened/changed. I wouldn’t have minded in some things had more details/were drawn out.
—what happened to some of the “bad” people? We get some info for potential blackmail, but we don’t find out what happens. Maybe we find out in upcoming books? I wanted a little more closure.
Overall, I really enjoyed this.
⚠️safety squad ⚠️
-no cheating/sharing/owd
-virgin h/not a manwhore H
-verbally abusive father
-OM- there’s an OM that wants the h, but the H takes ownership very quickly 💅
-praise k!nk/degradation k!nk/sp@nking/an@l play
-HEA/epilogue/months later/10 years later
July 24, 2022
The smut in this one- 🥰😍😲😭🤯😛😛😈😈😈👹👹😋😋😋😋🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
✅With all those bad reviews out there ,I had this preconceived notion that this would be meh .
✅I WAS SO DAMN WRONG.
✅This is THE BEST work till date by this author.
✅And it is Jessa Kane level of good.
💙Virgin h/Possible virgin H.(Both 18)
💙AMAZEBALL family dynamics .(I IMMEDIATELY like a book if it has strong family relationships and even the side chars. are JP.)
💙Church Girl/Bad Boy.
💙My favorite- Name calling during intimacy. Yeah call me a perv or whatever but I LOVE it when he calls her 'bit**' and 'wh***' during intimacy.
💙OM drama -The way it's handled is interesting.
💙LOVED the epilogue-Married with 8 KIDS!!!!! 😲🥺
💙I am SO reading all the upcoming books in the series.
Question- Who do you think is Rayna seeing?
✅With all those bad reviews out there ,I had this preconceived notion that this would be meh .
✅I WAS SO DAMN WRONG.
✅This is THE BEST work till date by this author.
✅And it is Jessa Kane level of good.
💙Virgin h/Possible virgin H.(Both 18)
💙AMAZEBALL family dynamics .(I IMMEDIATELY like a book if it has strong family relationships and even the side chars. are JP.)
💙Church Girl/Bad Boy.
💙My favorite- Name calling during intimacy. Yeah call me a perv or whatever but I LOVE it when he calls her 'bit**' and 'wh***' during intimacy.
💙OM drama -The way it's handled is interesting.
💙LOVED the epilogue-Married with 8 KIDS!!!!! 😲🥺
💙I am SO reading all the upcoming books in the series.
Question- Who do you think is Rayna seeing?
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July 8, 2022
3.5 ⭐️
Alex and his whole family moved to this small town which are very religious. He hates it until he meets Imogen and he's sprung for this innocent person that he makes it his mission to have her as his own. As for Imogen her father is the towns pastor and its hell and rules for them. Her father was a dick and has tons of rules the mom I'll be honest was a doormat until the end. I wish she stood up for her daughters more. The sisters were also horrible at watching eachother and taking care of one another. So it sucks that all 4 sisters are dating the 4 brothers.
Back to this couple Alex is making sure he has dirty on certain towns ppls incase he needs to blackmail anyone who stands in his way. And there is a guy who wants his woman.
So he does use that stuff. Beside that he shows Imogen the sinful side. Kisses, touches and well the dirty dirty. His plan is simple love and breed her so no one can't take her.
No ow drama/om drama, no cheating, secondarycharacter, drama, sexy times, virgin gal and no manwhore
Recommend-maybe
Cover-⭐️⭐️⭐️
Heat level-🌶🌶🌶
Slowinsta
Slight push/pull
Religious stuff
Praise kink
Degradation kink
No condom
Verbal abuse
Hea
Epilogue
Alex and his whole family moved to this small town which are very religious. He hates it until he meets Imogen and he's sprung for this innocent person that he makes it his mission to have her as his own. As for Imogen her father is the towns pastor and its hell and rules for them. Her father was a dick and has tons of rules the mom I'll be honest was a doormat until the end. I wish she stood up for her daughters more. The sisters were also horrible at watching eachother and taking care of one another. So it sucks that all 4 sisters are dating the 4 brothers.
Back to this couple Alex is making sure he has dirty on certain towns ppls incase he needs to blackmail anyone who stands in his way. And there is a guy who wants his woman.
So he does use that stuff. Beside that he shows Imogen the sinful side. Kisses, touches and well the dirty dirty. His plan is simple love and breed her so no one can't take her.
No ow drama/om drama, no cheating, secondarycharacter, drama, sexy times, virgin gal and no manwhore
Recommend-maybe
Cover-⭐️⭐️⭐️
Heat level-🌶🌶🌶
Slowinsta
Slight push/pull
Religious stuff
Praise kink
Degradation kink
No condom
Verbal abuse
Hea
Epilogue
dnf
July 20, 2022Dnf @ 50% - I was excited for the premise but I couldn’t hang with the execution. This was like JK on steroids with only the most cringe aspects pumped up. Too goofy to be sexy. Too insta. Too juvenile. Too silly. Too safe. Too long. Just too TOO.
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(Color me DUMBFOUNDED to discover that this is NOT a debut book. 😳😳😳🙈)
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(Color me DUMBFOUNDED to discover that this is NOT a debut book. 😳😳😳🙈)
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July 28, 2022
This is an over-the-top insta-love story about a bad boy who moves to town and sets his sights immediately on the pastor’s daughter. It’s sweet and fairly straightforward. I was hoping for a little more angst or drama, and while there’s other man drama (the heroine has an unofficial fiance that her father has picked out for her), there’s not much other drama with her father.
The book feels like a Jessa Kane book–with the over-the-top hero and scenarios–but it isn’t quite as well executed. It also needs to be edited and proofread.
The book feels like a Jessa Kane book–with the over-the-top hero and scenarios–but it isn’t quite as well executed. It also needs to be edited and proofread.
August 22, 2022
Basically the only thing I liked about this book was the smut, and I feel like even that went downhill as the book progressed. Here’s my breakdown:
- Smut: 3 stars 🌟 — the br€€ding k!nk was 🥵 🔥 but sometimes the the smutty parts were CRINGY! I’m not a fan of “creative” words for body parts. These are just some examples: for her — flower, gash, snatch, snug cave, raspberries; for him — rod, tool, meat, mushroom. The dirty talk was also sometimes really bad — like when he called her his “cum dumpster” 🤢
- “Plot”: 1 star 🌟 — I had to put that in quotations because to say that this book had a “plot” would be stretching the definition of that word. What little “plot” there was revolved around religion because Imogen was a pastor’s daughter and very religious. The Jesus talk was especially weird because it was followed by dirty talk!
- Characters: 2 stars 🌟 — the book is written in dual POV. The parts written from Imogen’s POV were annoying because she would talk to herself in her head as if she had two different personalities. The “good girl”, Imogen, and the “dirty girl”, who she very “creatively” named Jezebel 🙄. Imogen and Jezebel would talk to each other inside of Imogen’s head. It was WEIRD! Thank goodness Jezebel’s parts were in a different font so I could skip those parts and save myself some annoyance. I knew that the characters were in high school when I started this, but Alex’s character was just beyond what could possibly be believable! He was an 18 year old badass, sex god, with millions of dollars?!?! Good lord! I didn’t realize I was reading science fiction!
- Writing: 1.5 stars 🌟 it was kind of juvenile. Another reviewer said this book felt like it was written by a 16 year old for wattpad, and I have to agree. I can honestly say that I have never read the word “jizz” in a romance novel before, but it was used 6 times in this short novella! 🤣
- Smut: 3 stars 🌟 — the br€€ding k!nk was 🥵 🔥 but sometimes the the smutty parts were CRINGY! I’m not a fan of “creative” words for body parts. These are just some examples: for her — flower, gash, snatch, snug cave, raspberries; for him — rod, tool, meat, mushroom. The dirty talk was also sometimes really bad — like when he called her his “cum dumpster” 🤢
- “Plot”: 1 star 🌟 — I had to put that in quotations because to say that this book had a “plot” would be stretching the definition of that word. What little “plot” there was revolved around religion because Imogen was a pastor’s daughter and very religious. The Jesus talk was especially weird because it was followed by dirty talk!
- Characters: 2 stars 🌟 — the book is written in dual POV. The parts written from Imogen’s POV were annoying because she would talk to herself in her head as if she had two different personalities. The “good girl”, Imogen, and the “dirty girl”, who she very “creatively” named Jezebel 🙄. Imogen and Jezebel would talk to each other inside of Imogen’s head. It was WEIRD! Thank goodness Jezebel’s parts were in a different font so I could skip those parts and save myself some annoyance. I knew that the characters were in high school when I started this, but Alex’s character was just beyond what could possibly be believable! He was an 18 year old badass, sex god, with millions of dollars?!?! Good lord! I didn’t realize I was reading science fiction!
- Writing: 1.5 stars 🌟 it was kind of juvenile. Another reviewer said this book felt like it was written by a 16 year old for wattpad, and I have to agree. I can honestly say that I have never read the word “jizz” in a romance novel before, but it was used 6 times in this short novella! 🤣
July 8, 2022
Wow… I never read… such… dirty breeding Christianity romance type of shit… def Jessa Kane vibes. Innocent doormat heroine turns into a bad gorl sinner for bad boy hero with marvels tats (🤮) who tarnish her virginity.
Plot is good, smut is great, but too much holy Jesus for me…
Plot is good, smut is great, but too much holy Jesus for me…
dnf-too-early-to-mark-it-read
December 17, 2025This gave me secondhand embarrassment
DNF @ 11%
If I kept reading this, I would've had to demand compensation for the strained muscles in my eyes and face 😬
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If I kept reading this, I would've had to demand compensation for the strained muscles in my eyes and face 😬
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October 25, 2023
Wow!!
This was super quick and easy to read, no major drama or fights between the couple. Love at the first sight and they have been inseparable after.
Super steamyyy 💥🥵🥵
The only thing I disliked was the four of the sisters with the four of the brothers. Kinda weird. 🫣
This was super quick and easy to read, no major drama or fights between the couple. Love at the first sight and they have been inseparable after.
Super steamyyy 💥🥵🥵
The only thing I disliked was the four of the sisters with the four of the brothers. Kinda weird. 🫣
April 16, 2023
I needed this read after being a little disappointed with the last 2 I read!! OMG Alex was my type of H❤️🥰This man was so OTT JP of his girl I and LOVED it❤️Alex, our tatted bad boy, and his family just moved to this new town. His new neighbor is Imogen, the preachers daughter. Her father keeps her and her sisters basically in prison at home, he is crazy! Alex and Imogen are finishing there senior year of HS and as soon as he sees her in class this boy is obsessed! There is no miscommunication or OW drama🙌🏻He knows Imogen is his and takes what he wants and can’t wait to get her pregnant. She is very willing so no worries there😉She is very inexperienced , he is no manho but I get the impression he is no v…I need more books like this!!
dnf
October 15, 2024-=- DNF: 10% -=-
How I felt when reading this (especially from the H's POV):
All this was missing was some evanescence 'bring me to life' playing in the background 😭😭.
This was too much for me from the start 💀.
How I felt when reading this (especially from the H's POV):
All this was missing was some evanescence 'bring me to life' playing in the background 😭😭.
This was too much for me from the start 💀.
December 21, 2022
I wanted smut and an over the top possessive love interest. While this book gave me that, I couldn’t find myself enjoying it. Why was this book so long? This would have worked so much better as novella. There are only so many times we can go back and forth between Imogen’s thoughts about straying from God (Don’t even get me started on the jezebel thing) and them having sex.
While I can suspend my disbelieve a lot of the time while reading, I don’t believe this high schooler could have been doing all the ground work. Alone with his father just along for the ride with no context on what’s going on.
I have read books by this author and enjoyed them, however this was a miss for me.
While I can suspend my disbelieve a lot of the time while reading, I don’t believe this high schooler could have been doing all the ground work. Alone with his father just along for the ride with no context on what’s going on.
I have read books by this author and enjoyed them, however this was a miss for me.
October 17, 2022
This was so bad, but it was my favorite kind of bad.😏
July 17, 2022
OTT H/ religious sheltered h/ dirty talk/ br33ding/hs
This was delicious.
Some things:
-OTT JP Obsessive H. Alex is all in from first sight of his h. He comes from a hardworking family whose made their legacy so he’s got the money and he’s is all the yummy
-Latino tatted up H 🤤 he was so damn fine lol
-our h is super sheltered. Her dad is the priest and has all his girls basically shackled by their religion and he Bible beats them into submission. She’s completely innocent
-Br33ding k!nk…. Holy hell this was so yummy. Who doesn’t like a “I wanna knock her up and tie her to me forever?” Alex is determined to make sure no one can take h from him so he’s making sure to get her nice and full 💦 🥜 😂 I loved this
-high school… this didn’t feel like hs but it fit the story of it being kinda more good girl/bad boy type vibes
-I can’t wait to hear about the others
-dirty talk… whew-we Alejandro’s mouth was filthhyyyyy. I mean 🔥 🥵
-HEA
Overall I liked it. The story itself was… good. I feel like it coulda been even better if it was cleaned up but it’s not a big deal and didn’t stop me from reading. This was a good read for anyone who loves a OTT JP H and br33ding
This was delicious.
Some things:
-OTT JP Obsessive H. Alex is all in from first sight of his h. He comes from a hardworking family whose made their legacy so he’s got the money and he’s is all the yummy
-Latino tatted up H 🤤 he was so damn fine lol
-our h is super sheltered. Her dad is the priest and has all his girls basically shackled by their religion and he Bible beats them into submission. She’s completely innocent
-Br33ding k!nk…. Holy hell this was so yummy. Who doesn’t like a “I wanna knock her up and tie her to me forever?” Alex is determined to make sure no one can take h from him so he’s making sure to get her nice and full 💦 🥜 😂 I loved this
-high school… this didn’t feel like hs but it fit the story of it being kinda more good girl/bad boy type vibes
-I can’t wait to hear about the others
-dirty talk… whew-we Alejandro’s mouth was filthhyyyyy. I mean 🔥 🥵
-HEA
Overall I liked it. The story itself was… good. I feel like it coulda been even better if it was cleaned up but it’s not a big deal and didn’t stop me from reading. This was a good read for anyone who loves a OTT JP H and br33ding
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
dnf
February 26, 2023DNF at 35%
So this book has insta-love. Honestly I do not mind insta-love but there has to be some emotion to back it up and I just did not feel that. But the main reason I DNFed "Stir" was that the writing was just not for me. Oh well onto the next one :D
So this book has insta-love. Honestly I do not mind insta-love but there has to be some emotion to back it up and I just did not feel that. But the main reason I DNFed "Stir" was that the writing was just not for me. Oh well onto the next one :D
January 17, 2023
Saw this recommended and seemed fun- and it definitely got the job done for what I wanted. Fast paced, ultra smutty, good-girl bad boy corrupting her, hella OTT possessive and jealous hero, and hard core breeding kink. It's super ridiculous, and so I enjoyed that.
So just know what you're going in for- I did, so it was fun for me, even though I'm not rating it highly because my bar was super low. There's no real plot or character development outside of the religious/smut tension, and once these two bang, I got a bit bored after that waiting for it to go anywhere else. It'd have rated it a bit higher if there wasn't some weird writing style things (characters not using natural diction when talking- no contractions, I am vs. I'm, some humorous or cringey creative words for sex stuff). If you're looking for meaningful romance, this isn't your jam, if you're looking for a quick palette cleanser that hits on some of your fav tropes and hits them HARD, then come in, the water will feel fine.
So just know what you're going in for- I did, so it was fun for me, even though I'm not rating it highly because my bar was super low. There's no real plot or character development outside of the religious/smut tension, and once these two bang, I got a bit bored after that waiting for it to go anywhere else. It'd have rated it a bit higher if there wasn't some weird writing style things (characters not using natural diction when talking- no contractions, I am vs. I'm, some humorous or cringey creative words for sex stuff). If you're looking for meaningful romance, this isn't your jam, if you're looking for a quick palette cleanser that hits on some of your fav tropes and hits them HARD, then come in, the water will feel fine.
July 14, 2022
I don’t know why, but reading the dirty talk felt so strange for me due to both the characters being 18. As a teenager I feel like I LOVED teen/ high school romance, but now it just feels weird to read as an adult. Still loved!
-Virgin h✔️
-Good girl/ Bad boy✔️
-High school romance✔️
-Class difference✔️
-Religious girl✔️
-Pregnancy ✔️
There’s some time jumps a little towards the end so it kinda threw me off on the time span of things.
-Virgin h✔️
-Good girl/ Bad boy✔️
-High school romance✔️
-Class difference✔️
-Religious girl✔️
-Pregnancy ✔️
There’s some time jumps a little towards the end so it kinda threw me off on the time span of things.
August 13, 2023
4.5/5 stars
Imogen & Alejandro were so cute together. Religion is a big part of this book but nothing too crazy. Alejandro is ott/p/j to the max, from the start he had to have Imogen no matter the cost. Imogen is the town pastors daughter and basically has an identity crisis about this new way of life that she sees for herself but she’s into it nonetheless. Ale main goal is to lock her down to him by breeding her & getting his ring on her finger asap love it.
Steam-3/3 major breeding kink
Imogen & Alejandro were so cute together. Religion is a big part of this book but nothing too crazy. Alejandro is ott/p/j to the max, from the start he had to have Imogen no matter the cost. Imogen is the town pastors daughter and basically has an identity crisis about this new way of life that she sees for herself but she’s into it nonetheless. Ale main goal is to lock her down to him by breeding her & getting his ring on her finger asap love it.
Steam-3/3 major breeding kink
October 11, 2023
I wasn't sure about this one, but it ended really good.
I loved that Alex was so OTT and protective. This man was obsessed in everyway about her and I loved it. I think the pacing got in the way with this one. It felt like a novella but dragged in a few places. There was some degradation in this one (not a lot by any means) but that is a no go for me. So that took me out of it.
Overall, this was a fun read. Probably a good palette cleanser if you love your heroes completely obsessed and OTT.
I loved that Alex was so OTT and protective. This man was obsessed in everyway about her and I loved it. I think the pacing got in the way with this one. It felt like a novella but dragged in a few places. There was some degradation in this one (not a lot by any means) but that is a no go for me. So that took me out of it.
Overall, this was a fun read. Probably a good palette cleanser if you love your heroes completely obsessed and OTT.
July 29, 2022
No. Just no.
Dnf @ 58%
Honestly i can't believe I made it so far.
Worst writing ever.
Dnf @ 58%
Honestly i can't believe I made it so far.
Worst writing ever.
July 20, 2022
Well, to be fair the writer already warned us that this book was a filthy carnal-desire-met-breeding kind book and young love at that too. Some devil may care teenage love but had so much loyalty and throw-caution-to-the-wind romance. Thus, it was heavily advised that readers should throw logic when reading this. A good (very dirty filthy) what-if story. What if you meet your first love at a young age and you both made it? What if that love was so hot and consuming that you throw caution to the wind and you landed just fine? A very hot what if that was.
Virgin h
Both on the final year of high school
No condoms, breeding
OTT instalove
Bit drama with h's family
No cheating, No OW, OM was some crushing h
Spanking, anal, dirty talk
Medium-high heat steams
Safe read-ish, HEA, epilogue
Overall score: 3.5 OTT instalove stars
Virgin h
Both on the final year of high school
No condoms, breeding
OTT instalove
Bit drama with h's family
No cheating, No OW, OM was some crushing h
Spanking, anal, dirty talk
Medium-high heat steams
Safe read-ish, HEA, epilogue
Overall score: 3.5 OTT instalove stars
July 10, 2022
2.5 stars
Alex moved with his family to a religious town and expects his life to start sucking greatly. Across the street from him is a pastor with four daughters, one of whom catches his eye and he falls into insta-love. While this had some things I enjoyed like the hot sex scenes(yaas to the breeding talk!) and an OTT crazy alpha (bitch boy, lol) willing to do anything to get his girl, there were some issues. Way too much focus on religion for my liking. I've no problem reading books with a religious undertone but the bible discussions were a huge turn off. I like my smut with a little less Jesus please. I wish there'd been more depth of connection between the sisters. It didn't feel like they cared much about each other and neither protected the other from their father's abuse. Including their mom, who felt like she was a ghost. I also found the writing and sentence syntax awkward. Maybe this author's writing style isn't for me since I previously DNF on of her books due to the same issue.
Alex moved with his family to a religious town and expects his life to start sucking greatly. Across the street from him is a pastor with four daughters, one of whom catches his eye and he falls into insta-love. While this had some things I enjoyed like the hot sex scenes(yaas to the breeding talk!) and an OTT crazy alpha (bitch boy, lol) willing to do anything to get his girl, there were some issues. Way too much focus on religion for my liking. I've no problem reading books with a religious undertone but the bible discussions were a huge turn off. I like my smut with a little less Jesus please. I wish there'd been more depth of connection between the sisters. It didn't feel like they cared much about each other and neither protected the other from their father's abuse. Including their mom, who felt like she was a ghost. I also found the writing and sentence syntax awkward. Maybe this author's writing style isn't for me since I previously DNF on of her books due to the same issue.
July 21, 2022
I almost put this book down when I started it. The first couple chapters are heavy info dump and it was a bit off putting and tedious to read through. However, once past all that the story kicks off and I was hooked.
Total instalove, the 18 yo H knows the instant he sees the also 18 yo h, that’s she’s it. He becomes laser focused on how to not only marry her but breed her to further tie her to him.
She’s a pastors daughter and raised in a very strict religious home. She’s completely overwhelmed by H in the best way and everything falls into place. H sneakily collects blackmail material on many key figures who could come between him and h.
Virgin h
No condoms
Heavy breeding kink
No OW drama
Extremely mild OM drama
No cheating
No scenes with others
No cliffhanger
HEA
Multiple epilogues
Safety - 100% safe, IMO. The h isn’t aware but her father has promised her to OM, another 18 yo classmate but she isn’t interested and H isn’t letting that happen.
Total instalove, the 18 yo H knows the instant he sees the also 18 yo h, that’s she’s it. He becomes laser focused on how to not only marry her but breed her to further tie her to him.
She’s a pastors daughter and raised in a very strict religious home. She’s completely overwhelmed by H in the best way and everything falls into place. H sneakily collects blackmail material on many key figures who could come between him and h.
Virgin h
No condoms
Heavy breeding kink
No OW drama
Extremely mild OM drama
No cheating
No scenes with others
No cliffhanger
HEA
Multiple epilogues
Safety - 100% safe, IMO. The h isn’t aware but her father has promised her to OM, another 18 yo classmate but she isn’t interested and H isn’t letting that happen.
July 9, 2022
What even was this??? Felt like I was reading a Wattpad book written by a 16 year old.
July 6, 2022
Stir is a standalone but interconnected book in the Sinfully Awakened Series by ChaShiree M. This insta-love romance is brimming with sizzling off-the-charts chemistry between an obsessed young man in love with a sheltered young woman that lives across the street. This five star read is perfect for readers that love a possessive alpha male, lots of steamy scenes, and a happily-ever-after ending.
Imogen Abell has been isolated from non-church members for all of her life. Her father is a pastor at the town church and he has raised all 4 of his daughters to be pure, innocent, and obedient. Her sisters are Adriel, Aasta, and her twin; Rayna. Imogen recently turned 18-years-old and is in her final year of school. She’s a people pleaser and follows all of her father’s rules. Well, at least she followed them until a certain boy sweeps her off her feet.
Alejandro (Alex) Luna recently moves with his family to help open another location for his father’s business, Luna & Sons Customs. He was displeased with the move since it is his senior year of high school and starting over in a new town is challenging. The pangs of sadness and anger quickly diminish when he spots the most beautiful girl he has ever seen; Imogen. Alex is a man possessed and becomes addicted to developing a life-long romantic relationship with Imogen.
Alex is SWOON-WORTHY! There are so many things to say about him. He’s obsessed with everything about Imogen and he will stop at nothing to claim what is his. He’s so sweet, attentive, caring, kind, and sexy. His entire life purpose is to spend eternity with Imogen. It doesn’t matter that her parents wouldn’t approve or that they are both only 18. He knows she is the one for him for life. The spicy scenes were *chefs kiss* TOP TIER! I kept thinking — where can I get myself an Alex?!
Now I HAVE to go read the other books written by this author and I can’t wait for Imogen’s sisters; Adriel, Aasta, and her twin Rayna have their own books with Alex’s brothers; Manuel, Sebastian, and Mateo. It sounds like they will be just as possessive of their women (squeal!!!)
Tropes: Insta-love, forbidden romance, stalking, breeding, bad boy/good girl, virgin heroine
Heat: 4/5
Imogen Abell has been isolated from non-church members for all of her life. Her father is a pastor at the town church and he has raised all 4 of his daughters to be pure, innocent, and obedient. Her sisters are Adriel, Aasta, and her twin; Rayna. Imogen recently turned 18-years-old and is in her final year of school. She’s a people pleaser and follows all of her father’s rules. Well, at least she followed them until a certain boy sweeps her off her feet.
Alejandro (Alex) Luna recently moves with his family to help open another location for his father’s business, Luna & Sons Customs. He was displeased with the move since it is his senior year of high school and starting over in a new town is challenging. The pangs of sadness and anger quickly diminish when he spots the most beautiful girl he has ever seen; Imogen. Alex is a man possessed and becomes addicted to developing a life-long romantic relationship with Imogen.
Alex is SWOON-WORTHY! There are so many things to say about him. He’s obsessed with everything about Imogen and he will stop at nothing to claim what is his. He’s so sweet, attentive, caring, kind, and sexy. His entire life purpose is to spend eternity with Imogen. It doesn’t matter that her parents wouldn’t approve or that they are both only 18. He knows she is the one for him for life. The spicy scenes were *chefs kiss* TOP TIER! I kept thinking — where can I get myself an Alex?!
Now I HAVE to go read the other books written by this author and I can’t wait for Imogen’s sisters; Adriel, Aasta, and her twin Rayna have their own books with Alex’s brothers; Manuel, Sebastian, and Mateo. It sounds like they will be just as possessive of their women (squeal!!!)
Tropes: Insta-love, forbidden romance, stalking, breeding, bad boy/good girl, virgin heroine
Heat: 4/5
January 20, 2024
Quick Romance
I appreciate Author ChaShiree M being straightforward about what type of story “Stir” is. She straight up says it’s fiction. I know, duh. But often, it needs to be told. The characters are in high school. It’s love at first sight for Alejandro, though the challenges are Imogen is raised in an incredibly strict religious household. In addition, she is the mayor’s daughter. The idea around s3x is taught to be negative. That’s what we’re working with.
Alejandro is hugely OTT. He wants to have Imogen and br33d her. Side note: there’s a lot of br33d¡ng stuff from pillows and other unique actions to ensure things happen. Imogen has never experienced anything like him and the things they do, but she sure does enjoy every moment.
Yes, there is quite a bit of naiveté on Imogen’s end, but I just had to keep in mind how sheltered she had been all her life.
ChaShiree writes a quick, hot, and steamy OTT romance that I enjoyed reading, and the twist at the end made it even more entertaining.
I appreciate Author ChaShiree M being straightforward about what type of story “Stir” is. She straight up says it’s fiction. I know, duh. But often, it needs to be told. The characters are in high school. It’s love at first sight for Alejandro, though the challenges are Imogen is raised in an incredibly strict religious household. In addition, she is the mayor’s daughter. The idea around s3x is taught to be negative. That’s what we’re working with.
Alejandro is hugely OTT. He wants to have Imogen and br33d her. Side note: there’s a lot of br33d¡ng stuff from pillows and other unique actions to ensure things happen. Imogen has never experienced anything like him and the things they do, but she sure does enjoy every moment.
Yes, there is quite a bit of naiveté on Imogen’s end, but I just had to keep in mind how sheltered she had been all her life.
ChaShiree writes a quick, hot, and steamy OTT romance that I enjoyed reading, and the twist at the end made it even more entertaining.
August 3, 2023
I really did enjoy this book and wished it was the one that I had started with for this author, and I should have as it was sitting in my TBR for a while!
Alex and Imogen were a great couple, and he was just a great alpha character! Loved how they got together and loved how he was all about her. Kinda hope that the author would write Alex's parents' story...Hmmm
I am with other reviews on the sisters I mean I get it the dad was a dick but really, they had no problem "sneaking" around for the D but couldn't sneak to support and talk with each other better???
All in all, cannot wait for the next book and really hope the author comes out with more soon I would honestly give this a 5 it was entertaining, and I could not stop reading!
Alex and Imogen were a great couple, and he was just a great alpha character! Loved how they got together and loved how he was all about her. Kinda hope that the author would write Alex's parents' story...Hmmm
I am with other reviews on the sisters I mean I get it the dad was a dick but really, they had no problem "sneaking" around for the D but couldn't sneak to support and talk with each other better???
All in all, cannot wait for the next book and really hope the author comes out with more soon I would honestly give this a 5 it was entertaining, and I could not stop reading!
July 19, 2022
Loved the hero!!!❤️❤️❤️
J/P obsessive, demanding, take charge alpha. 18yrs old
Heroine brought up in very religious household. Sweet, innocent and a bit naive.
Steamy sex scenes 🔥🔥🔥🔥breeding kink, dirty talk
HEA✅ And a pretty perfect epilogue ❤️❤️❤️
Would have loved to see a better relationship between the sisters. Just didn’t really feel a bond between any of them.
J/P obsessive, demanding, take charge alpha. 18yrs old
Heroine brought up in very religious household. Sweet, innocent and a bit naive.
Steamy sex scenes 🔥🔥🔥🔥breeding kink, dirty talk
HEA✅ And a pretty perfect epilogue ❤️❤️❤️
Would have loved to see a better relationship between the sisters. Just didn’t really feel a bond between any of them.
August 28, 2022
When his father announces they're moving in the middle of his senior year, tattooed and motorcycle riding Alex becomes an outcast in the heavily religious Midwestern town. That is, until he lays eyes on an angel. Imogen is one of the pastor's daughters; innocent and pure in every way. Alex realizes that he can't live without Imogen. He will do anything to keep her... even sway her mind and consume her thoughts. Corrupting his angel is going to be fun.
Recommended highly for the insane J/P OTT alpha MMC, this book lived up to expectations! I normally don't read books where the characters are young (in this case, high school), but this was an exception. Alex's mindset is based on both the present and future, like it's not how is getting going to get Imogen, it's *when*. His family was super supportive of his goals, both romantic and career-wise, and the side characters relationships were a great addition to the storyline. Imogen is also great. She goes from wallflower to confidence queen. I'm here for a strong heroine and she had her moments that she shined.
Recommended highly for the insane J/P OTT alpha MMC, this book lived up to expectations! I normally don't read books where the characters are young (in this case, high school), but this was an exception. Alex's mindset is based on both the present and future, like it's not how is getting going to get Imogen, it's *when*. His family was super supportive of his goals, both romantic and career-wise, and the side characters relationships were a great addition to the storyline. Imogen is also great. She goes from wallflower to confidence queen. I'm here for a strong heroine and she had her moments that she shined.
September 14, 2022
DNF 59%
This didn't work for me.
At first it was really really good but then it went all wrong.
I needed more built up, i needed more fighting the religion and attraction...something.
It was all so rushed but at the same time not because it was really repetitive too.
And Alex honestly turned out to be kind of a creep in my eyes...like, i get the infatuation but being 18 etc it was all way to much and to unrealistic for my liking.
Her inner bitchy voice? come on now, wtf was that?
At the end of it i was bored and i end up DNF half way in.
This didn't work for me.
At first it was really really good but then it went all wrong.
I needed more built up, i needed more fighting the religion and attraction...something.
It was all so rushed but at the same time not because it was really repetitive too.
And Alex honestly turned out to be kind of a creep in my eyes...like, i get the infatuation but being 18 etc it was all way to much and to unrealistic for my liking.
Her inner bitchy voice? come on now, wtf was that?
At the end of it i was bored and i end up DNF half way in.
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