I was thrilled to receive this advance reader copy in trade for an honest review and to support my local independent bookstore and press: Wild Lark Books. wildlarkbooks.com All thoughts and opinions in this review are my own.
My Review:
You should read this book that boosted the stakes from book one in the Knights series. And I believe you can read this standalone work without reading DL Hammons' first Knight book.
This story opens on a big day in the life of Brady Jones, a typical teenager in high school, living through what he thinks will be a special day which then morphs into the horrific nightmare of a school shooting. After the prologue, we're with Dianne, manager of Silent Sleuth Investigations as she is on her way to meet Ebe, Steven Ebe, who has been on a rare field mission, now aborted. Unfortunately, Dianne and Ebe don't exactly meet.
The writer kicks off this book with two fantastic opening chapters launching two separate POVs and separate plot threads with only loose ties connecting them, but the clues allude to more than just simple crimes. Just a few minutes in, I was hooked and reading quickly to see where these two plots might intersect. Then, in the third chapter the two plot lines came together in a jolt of excitement.
The midpoint of this book elevates the risk level to an almost unthinkable concern that has even our self-sufficient and strong team questioning their own involvement in this unraveling nightmare. But they continue to show leadership and fortitude as they expand their team to include a rogue FBI agent.
This thriller is satisfying from several measures. First, it delivers a plot with dozens of clues that some readers may put together as it unfolds and some may praise in retrospect as a great puzzle. Second, it's a bit different from your average thriller once the antagonist is fully revealed and understood--not unique, but certainly uncommon. The pacing is great, especially in the second half--it speeds up as it goes. For me the playfulness of the adult Knights Who Say "Ni"--a historic nod to Monty Python--worked better in this book than in the first Knights book. With such an obscure and silly reference, I believe it works better the more the writer steers into it.
This bold author tried to (and did) summon sympathy for a school shooter on more than one occasion--that is one difficult task under today's backdrop of nearly constant deadly school events, which we all hope could be prevented.
I only have a few criticisms. One, the speech and colloquialisms of the protagonist and the Knights are aged beyond their years and sometimes seemed out of character, but on the other hand, this writer supports protagonists above the age of thirty, which is a great thing in this art form. Two, there are a few places where the gender roles are amplified and older men ogle or sexualize younger women, which could have used a sensitivity reader for 2022--or perhaps that is the point of these particular manifestations: that even good and well-behaved older men have thoughts about the desirability of significantly younger women--dangerous topic to take on, even tangentially, yet it was done in good taste.
Overall, this was a solid thriller and might even be called a mystery. The plot was well-constructed and ever expansive with characters I cared about. One other mention--in my last thirty ARCs, this was the cleanest edit I've seen--if you find a typo in this one, you're better than me.
You should read about Dianne and these Knights and decide what you think.
FALLEN KNIGHT by DL Hammons
Published by: Wild Lark Books
Publication date: July 29, 2022
Pages: 384
Genres: Mystery / Thriller (classified by publisher); (and from me: Thriller, possibly mystery)
POV: Multi-POV; Third person, past (for Brady's prologue); First person, past (for Dianne's chapters); Third person, past (for Lee's chapters and anyone except Dianne);
Narrator: True and usually authentic, often very close
Opening setting: Virginia road in a 1997 Dodge pickup on the way to school
Other significant locations: Manchester, Virginia; Charlotte, NC
Number of named, identified or described characters: 64+
Publisher's Summary:
The prefect mashup of The Camel Club and The Goonies - An elusive killer has been recreating and improving crimes from long-forgotten headlines. The FBI finally uncovers the surprising identity of the suspect - a disturbed high school student - but only after he has taken his own life while committing a terrible crime. Unfortunately, the threat doesn't end there. The boy left behind a note announcing his pre-arranged scheme to unleash one final "improvement" - minus the crucial details of where, when, or how.
Eighteen months ago, Lee Hamilton and his five middle-aged companions (nick-named the Knights Who Say Ni), crossed paths with Dianne Williams, a feisty private investigator examining a decades-old murder. Together they would solve the crime and see justice done. That chance encounter would be the beginning of a rather unique collaboration... and friendship.
When Dianne's newest investigator, who is also a Knight, is attached after returning home from a routine investigation, Lee and the others take matters into their own hands to find the person responsible. The trail leads inexplicably to the doorstep of a dead teenager blamed for a mass shooting and a swarm of FBI agents investigating it. Little do they know they've become part of a race against time to stop the single largest bioterrorist attack in US history.