Wow! Complex & Thought-Provoking Yet Dark & Dirty, This Story Goes Down The Rabbit Hole & Keeps You Guessing. Mercer, Locke, Olsen, & Nova Are Caught Up In An Elite World Where Old Money Buys Anything.
This story largely takes place on Private Island #1 in Meredith Bay, New Hampshire. The ninety-two-acre island houses a research facility run by the Institute. The Institute is a secretive organization operated by the uber-elite, and its motivations are questionable. The organization conducts R&D on world-changing pharmaceuticals. For fifteen years, they have been conducting human trials on the island. Subjects are given the opportunity to live out a fantasy, and the drug being tested allows that memory to become real in the subject’s mind. It has the ability to alter perception. In the wrong hands, it has the ability to change the world. FDA approval is close, and Nova’s role is historic.
Nova Ryanzski, roughly in her late twenties, has just finished presenting her dissertation. She is now a behavioral and systems neuroscientist, though she hardly feels prepared to commence her professional career. She is a little nervous to start her one-year contract to work for the Institute, but she is honored to have been selected for the prestigious position. For a girl raised in a trailer park, it is a fairy tale. She won’t complain about her childhood, though. They might have been poor, but she had two loving parents growing up. Her best friend since middle school lived there, too. She and Travis were inseparable, but they had just been friends. Nova developed a bit of a reputation in high school, but it was Travis that she finally gave her innocence to right before leaving for college. Years of dedication to academics have finally paid off and led her to the first day of her new job.
Silas Mercer, thirty-seven, is the face of the trials. His dark good looks and expensive suits exude power and control. He likes rules and doesn’t care for intimacy. He is cold and calculating. For Mercer, life is a game. If you don’t play, you can’t win. He enjoys provoking others then sitting back to observe their reactions. He lives in a grand home and runs everything on the island. He personally recruited Nova Ryan, and if all works as planned, their work together will soon lead to a breakthrough. Years of research and trials are about to finally pay off.
Michael Locke, thirty-seven, loves life on the island. He helps to recruit new participants for their ongoing trials, travelling across the country in search of candidates. Although his original commitment is largely done, he is allowed to remain living on the island as long as he continues to work under Mercer, with whom he lives. They have been best friends for many years, but they are also more. Their relationship is complicated, to say the least. They each see other people, but at the end of the day, they choose one another. That is part of the complicated game they play. Locke also fools around occasionally with Olsen, but mostly they share women together. They have been friends for seven years now, and they typically attend Institute recruitment weekends together. Mercer and Olsen are not friends, but since there is never any jealousy, it all works out.
Olsen, thirty-ish, has been on the island for seven years. Unlike Mercer and Olsen, he was not born to privilege. His childhood in West Virginia was not a happy one. The island presented an incredible opportunity for someone like him, but he cannot wait to leave. Unlike his friend Locke, Olsen plans to leave the moment his contract expires. He worries about Locke, though, who seems stuck in an abusive relationship.
This is Locke and Nova’s story, but their twisted tale involves the myriad of relationships they share with Mercer and Olsen. Their story finally ends with a happy ending.
Wow! Complex and thought-provoking yet dark and dirty, this story goes down the rabbit hole and keeps you guessing. Mercer, Locke, Olsen, and Nova are caught up in an elite world where old money buys anything. The story has some parallels with Total Recall, an old Schwarzenegger movie. It is also drawn from the quiet but ongoing efforts in real life to perfect mind-control methods. If following this story is confusing, just imagine how confusing a real-life application could become. The story provokes thoughts of ethics, morals, corruption, and the difficulties in oversight.
There are some issues that merit mention. First, there were things I thought might be explained that were not, such as the death of Mercer’s sister. Next, there are many shifts in time, and they are not always smooth. Additionally, the games are an interesting aspect of the story, but they are never fully exposed and they seem to drift later in the story. I feel like they could have been the basis for an entirely separate story, and they could have been eliminated here. The goals did not need to be presented in the form of a game. Finally, since Nova finished her last trial, what happened to the Institute and the trial five years later remains fuzzy. One might have expected progress with another candidate by then. A sentence or two more clarification would have been helpful for detail-oriented readers.
In the end, there is so much that is unanswered that it is a little disappointing. On the other hand, the story was so captivating and the ride so rewarding, that it is forgivable. Had the story not been built upon lies, it would be a bigger sin to leave so many loose ends. Ages, intentions, true feelings – all could have been manipulated. Some is unwound, but not all. One loose end that should have been neatly clarified was Olsen’s participation in the study. There are contradictory statements, and the issue could impact his life afterward. As for ages, note that Olsen is recruited at age twenty-three and Nova at age nineteen. One or both of those ages are wrong, and it is never clarified. Similarly, Mercer and Locke are both thirty-seven, but one or both of those ages is wrong and never clarified. Since none of the facts can be trusted, their real ages are anyone’s guess.
The end leaves me feeling badly for both Mercer and Olsen. How things settled the way they did is not entirely clear. We are privy to their deepest thoughts. Moreover, it is not entirely clear how things actually did settle for them – much is left up in the air. I want to see them all find a happy ending, but as a standalone, this leaves me rather unsatisfied. In the end of the book stuff, the author mentions the possibility of something more about Mercer, and maybe Olsen. I would have preferred this to be presented more like the Taking Turns series (the original series with the first three books). If I knew this was going to be a series, I would be more satisfied.
I didn’t understand the conversation with Eliana at the end. Perhaps it is a lead-in to another book – maybe with Mercer – but the library comment was barely a suggestion. And the idea that Patricia didn’t want the final trial didn’t add up since Patricia was in fact involved in it and could have easily put an end to it herself. My only guess is that Eliana knew what was expected in the final trial and was jealous – hence the possibility of a story with Mercer and Eliana. That would certainly be incestuous since Mercer was Patricia’s pet. But that is strictly speculation, and without more information, Eliana’s comments are just confusing.
Finally, I wanted more from Locke’s POV at the end. This was his and Nova’s story, after all. I wanted to hear more about how things settled with him and Mercer. I also wanted to hear more about his life with Nova. Nova indicates that family is important to Locke, but I want to hear his feelings on the matter. I am unclear that he got his HEA because we don’t know quite how he and Mercer felt after fully crashing – nor how much was real.
This is Locke and Nova’s story, but it is just a small piece of this book. Mercer and Olsen are there at their sides, and their relationships are complex. Their plural relationships are hard to follow at first. It gets more and more twisted as the story unfolds. Eventually, despite the vague information and confusion, the characters do begin to solidify and the complexity of their relationships fades to the background. It takes some patience to get to that point, but it pays off because then the focus can shift to unwinding the nature of what takes place on the island. It feels like an accomplishment when the story finally begins to unwind. The story is smart and well-written written. The storytelling is fabulous. The plot is extremely complex. It is almost too complex, though, because there are unanswered questions. The characters are carefully crafted and three-dimensional. Unfortunately, I wanted more. I wanted to know who they are outside of the trials. I wanted to know what was true as well as what feelings and characteristics carry over. The story ended too quickly for all that. I would love an extended epilogue to give answers to the many unanswered questions and real-life closure for each of the characters. The story is told in first person. The POV alternates between Locke and Nova. I rate this book 4.5 stars.