I'm always on the lookout for friends-to-lovers stories because I love them. Truly Wanted even won a Golden Crown Literary Award for Debut Novel, so I had relatively high hopes, even if this is a Bold Strokes Novel and they've not been a reliable publisher lately. Unfortunately, Truly Wanted didn't quite work for me, which is unfortunate because the premise really grabbed me.
Okay, so what didn't work? Just about everything. But here are its big missteps:
1. This book is tell, tell, tell to an astonishing degree. There's no showing the chemistry between BFFs Sam and Brooke, but you'll know about it because the narrative tells you it's there. Part of this is due to my next point:
2. There is very little dialogue in this book. And it's frustrating. Dialogue in novels is key in showing a character's personality, their humour, their sincerity, or lack thereof. In romance, dialogue allows for flirtation to happen before your eyes. But Hale seems to be afraid of extended dialogue, choosing instead to tell us everything we might need to know in prosaic paragraphs that dull the story and leave little to the imagination.
3. For BFFs who can tell each other everything, they spend a lot of time of time telling each other nothing. If you like miscommunication as a narrative device, you're in luck here because the entire book goes like this: I really should tell [Brooke or Sam] about [my feelings/my lunch plans with my friend/the fact that I found your biological sibling/the fact that I met my biological sibling/I'm in love with you and it scares me...] because she's the most important person in my life and I can't lose her, but [we're interrupted/I chicken out/it's not the right time...]. It got frustrating very quickly.
On the other hand, this is a debut novel and there's potential here. But the fact that this is a Bold Strokes Book, which means Hale did not self publish this, is very shocking. Because it means this book had to pass at least some independent scrutiny to make it better and it's just not what I'd expect for a ebook that I paid $10 for.
I'm landing at generous 2 stars because I do feel Hale has potential, but this felt like an early draft of a novel.