I have included a separate review for each of the three books in this collection. I’m thankful that I received an ARC.
Enchant: Beauty and the Beast Retold
4 stars
I’m always impressed by the way Demelza Carlton takes the bones of a well-known fairytale and turns it into something completely different. She chooses to place it in a different world which reflects the same kinds of societal norms and customs of the time period associated with the original, but she injects elements of magic and creates a completely different world. The other thing that’s very clever is that she connects the various fairy tales through sometimes-tangential characters. For example, in this story, Zuleika is the daughter of Zoraida (Fall and Embellish) and the enchantress who turned a certain nasty prince into a frog. I wish she kept a flow chart of some sort on her website so I could remember all of the links.
It’s Beauty and the Beast retold, but in this version, “Belle” is more complex and driven by her desire to do right rather than a desire to save her father from being a prisoner. Likewise, there is more backstory on Vardan, the enchanted prince, and he’s a much nicer guy. I could have done without some of his internal struggle regarding his desire to kiss her because I think it could have been shown to the reader rather than told. And whenever he made a declaration followed by an exclamation point I found it unnecessarily emphatic because he was a “beast” and it would be scary. Some of the miscommunications were a bit exasperating. There was also a scene where Zuleika “imagines” Vardan coming to her rescue, but the very next chapter, he awakens from her dream to rescue her and the scene seems entirely different. This was a bit discombobulating.
Overall, although this wasn’t the best-written story in the series, it was enjoyable and I’m glad to have read it. I’d recommend it for anyone who enjoys Demelza Carlton’s retold fairy tales.
Dance: Cinderella Retold
4 stars
This is Cinderella retold as Mulan. Since I wasn't a big fan of Mulan, I was prepared to dislike this rendition of the story. What is it with women pretending to be men so they can go to war?
There are a couple of reasons this concept doesn't work for me. First of all, how can a soldier expect to disguise his or her gender while at war? On several occasions, the Prince removes his shirt to spar with Mai (aka Mao). Yet, Mao never removes his, and I think this could cause suspicion. Furthermore, they shared a tent!
Mai’s stepmother cast an illusion to make her appear as Mao, so that might explain why no one questioned the lack of facial hair, Adam's apple, or general appearance. What about when she had to urinate? And what about getting her period? Did the spell cover all of that?
Another issue I had was with the burns. They were described as pretty horrific, and the implication was that they were second-degree burns. As anyone who has experienced this can tell you, second-degree burns are extremely painful. I'm told third-degree burns kill the nerve tissue so you feel numb. I guess what I'm saying is that if there are actually any herbal drinks that will knock out that kind of pain, I'd like to know what they are!
Based on my critique, it might seem as if I didn't like this book. However, I really did enjoy it and, like any fairytale, I loved the HEA.
Fly: Goose Girl Retold
3 stars
Since I’m not very familiar with the original Goose Girl story, it’s hard for me to know how this may have been changed. Ava, a princess, is sent with her half-sister Lagle (who, for the record, is pretty nasty) as her lady’s maid on a journey to become empress to a kingdom with which their father’s kingdom is at war. During the journey, Lagle is injured and suffers a loss of her memory so Ava pretends to be the one sent to forge a peace. The emperor’s youngest son Yun (who, for the record, is much nicer than his nasty brothers) rescues Ava from a worse fate by marrying her. There are a lot of barbaric, evil people in this story, with the exception of Ava, Yun, and a few notable others. For this reason, I didn’t find this a terribly pleasant read.
There was a scene in which Ava said good-bye to her friend Bianca and her mother. As Ava’s mother died after giving birth to Ava, she made Bianca’s mother Militsa promise to care for her daughter. Here’s what was weird: “Militsa embraced Ava, in the fashion of the northern tribes, for such things were foreign to Ava’s own people. Yet she endured it, because she knew it was Militsa’s way of showing her love.” How is it possible that Ava knew what was foreign to her people when she has been raised in a foreign land? Militsa raised her as her own daughter, so there’s no reason to believe that Ava would be uncomfortable with a hug from her.
Ultimately, this was not my favorite of the fairy tale retellings and I wouldn’t recommend it as a standalone because I never really felt much for any of the characters and their fate was “whatever.” Yes, it’s creative and well told, but personally, I didn’t care for it.