What do you think?
Rate this book
The Dark Sorcerer #6
The Dark Fragment
Jayna must finally understand the truth of her power.
With the Society now restored and the kingdom safe, Jayna turns her attention to finding Ceran.
She can’t help him alone. She’ll need the aid of all her friends, but even that might not be enough.
All along, she’s believed she served a Sul’toral, but Ceran is something else.
Learning what he is will be key to saving him, but others have their own plans for his power.
With the Society now restored and the kingdom safe, Jayna turns her attention to finding Ceran.
She can’t help him alone. She’ll need the aid of all her friends, but even that might not be enough.
All along, she’s believed she served a Sul’toral, but Ceran is something else.
Learning what he is will be key to saving him, but others have their own plans for his power.
276 pages, Kindle Edition
Published September 30, 2022
70 people are currently reading
49 people want to read
Ratings & Reviews
Friends & Following
Create a free account to discover what your friends think of this book!
Community Reviews
Displaying 1 - 8 of 8 reviews
February 7, 2024
Serious editing issues
I've read a number of Holmberg's books, and while there are often some issues and he tends to be a little repetitive with his characterizations, the stories are solid and entertaining.
This one, though, is riddled with so many quality issues that it borders on unreadable at times. There's an entire section at the beginning of the climax where it's like he completely forgot to mention a key event, and the whole thing makes no sense. I actually went back several times convinced I had missed a page.
He's in serious need of a competent editor. I know he can do better, so it's disappointing.
I've read a number of Holmberg's books, and while there are often some issues and he tends to be a little repetitive with his characterizations, the stories are solid and entertaining.
This one, though, is riddled with so many quality issues that it borders on unreadable at times. There's an entire section at the beginning of the climax where it's like he completely forgot to mention a key event, and the whole thing makes no sense. I actually went back several times convinced I had missed a page.
He's in serious need of a competent editor. I know he can do better, so it's disappointing.
May 11, 2024
Felt short & Simplistic for some reason
In general like the Dark Sorcerer series better than Chainbreaker series because it's not as much tortured existential complexity. But for some reason, although there were a couple mysteries and hidden twists, this sequel seemed shallow. Maybe it was the fact that were no real emotional ties or questions. Even the late issue with Eva seemed pretty out of the blue and handled very analytically.
In general like the Dark Sorcerer series better than Chainbreaker series because it's not as much tortured existential complexity. But for some reason, although there were a couple mysteries and hidden twists, this sequel seemed shallow. Maybe it was the fact that were no real emotional ties or questions. Even the late issue with Eva seemed pretty out of the blue and handled very analytically.
November 15, 2022
Great read
Well written and a great pace and thrilling another great book in the dark sorcerer series and to and great addition to the world d.k. holmberg has created the already reads such as the first of the blade
And the chain breaker series are must reads if you've enjoyed this series thus far
Well written and a great pace and thrilling another great book in the dark sorcerer series and to and great addition to the world d.k. holmberg has created the already reads such as the first of the blade
And the chain breaker series are must reads if you've enjoyed this series thus far
October 3, 2022
a lot of repeat material
If you are following the other story lines you will read a lot of repeat narrative. Of course it’s from her perspective. Still good though.
If you are following the other story lines you will read a lot of repeat narrative. Of course it’s from her perspective. Still good though.
November 2, 2022
While I enjoy a good fantasy novel, the author needs to find better proof readers. There are times where I couldn't follow the story due to erroneous words or missing words.
June 3, 2023
Very good.
I enjoyed this last book in the series. I wish there was more because it seems as if there is a lot more for Jayna to do.
I enjoyed this last book in the series. I wish there was more because it seems as if there is a lot more for Jayna to do.
August 31, 2023
A beginning
All things end, but do they cease to exist? Mistakes are made, time gathers experience, experience creates knowledge, knowledge corrects mistakes.
All things end, but do they cease to exist? Mistakes are made, time gathers experience, experience creates knowledge, knowledge corrects mistakes.
May 16, 2024
An entertaining read.
Displaying 1 - 8 of 8 reviews