3 stars to the first half of the book, 4 to the last half.
I enjoyed the premise of this book, which is that Mage, who can control energy in different ways, can be made. A Mage is not a witch. A Mage can live forever and stay young forever. A Mage can only be made by a Mage that has the special power of making. Once a Mage is made and presented to the council that oversees all Mage, they are given a Mage name.
The plot of this book includes a twenty-something girl names Zoe, who is forced into becoming a Mage. This is her story (Geese - don't I sound like an episode of Law and Order..."and these are their stories" clink, clink). Zoe is a girl, who has gotten out of a bad relationship with some guy names Brandon. She is more introverted that her best friend, Sunny, who is a dazzling, blonde flirt. Zoe's and her mom are not close, and she doesn't know who her father is. One night, while on her way home from a night out with her friend, Sunny, Zoe is attacked, her throat slit and left for dead. When she awakens, she is in a body bag and takes off running to find some answers.
While running through a wooded area, she runs into Adam, who conveniently is out for a walk. He sees Zoe, terrified and covered in blood and takes her to his house to care for her wounds. Thus begins the story.
Let me start with Adam. I kind of liked him at first, but his dialogue seemed forced to me after a while. He dropped the f-bomb for no apparent reason aside from machoism, and he said things like, "Feel me?" which only reminded me of the BDB boys. One one hand, he's supposed to be this clean cut, all-American hot hunk of man, and then he's forcing out this dialogue that I just didn't think worked for him.
So Zoe goes on living with Adam for weeks and weeks, while they grow closer. It's kind of odd at this point. Zoe had told Adam what happened, has gathered her belongings from her old life, and it still playing house with Adam. Adam hasn't really questioned her - just took her in, bought her cloths, makes every meal for her and pretty much just dotes on her.
While away at a photo shoot (Adam is a photographer), Zoe goes out for a bit, and stops in a bar for a drink. In enters Justus, who is beautiful. All the women at the bar are pawing over Justus, who comes over to talk to Zoe. Justus immediately knows what Zoe is, and is puzzled as to why she is not affected by his manly charms.
Once Justus figures out what is going on, he explains that he will take guardianship of Zoe, and teach her what it is to be a Mage. Adam and Zoe relent, and then she's off to live with Justus.
Justus is determined to teach Zo how to defend herself and to learn about Mage history from books. He is a teacher in every aspect, pushing Zoe to her limits. Unfortunately, Justus is all work and no play. There are no sweet, or even friendly moments between Justus and Zoe. It is completely a student/teacher relationship. One night, Justus' friend Simon shows up, and this is where the book starts to get really good.
Simon is a Mage and a good friend of Justus. He is British and way more fun loving than Justus. He is a hot, flirt of a man, described as having a rock star look, but is genuinely nice beneath the exterior. Simon and Zoe hit is off, and Simon suggest that they all go out to a bar. Zoe jumps at this since she has had no fun in months of training with Justus. While out, Simon and Zoe get a little tipsy, Simon and Zoe do this bonding/sharing of energy thing, and these two almost fall into bed together, of course until Justus walks in on them.
Simon is a great friend to Zoe. He's sexy, sweet, caring and flirtatious, but I have a thing for Justus. Justus is trying to do the right thing by Zoe, without getting too involved with her. He takes his guardianship seriously. But it is obvious that he has the hots for Zoe, although he doesn't know how to go about doing anything about it.
Justus cradled my wet cheek. "You break me with those tears, Silver. Please don't cry."
One night, Zoe's maker steps forward and wants her back by his side. There is nothing Zoe and the boys can do, so she is sent back with her Maker who is a tortuous, awful, using thing. Zoe is exposed to a week of terribleness - I won't spill anymore about this plot point. Simon and Justus eventually come to Zoe's rescue, but she is broken at this point, and can't fathom a life with her maker, Samil.
At the end, there is a nice, bloody battle, and Zoe goes on to learn more about becoming a Mage.
There are a few things I didn't like. One being that every male in this story is falling all over themselves in one way or another to get to Zoe. Please. Spare me. Two, I don't particularly like Adam. He reminds me of a golden retriever - nice for cuddling with a throwing catch with, but not for having a serious relationship with. Three, I wish the attraction between Zoe and Justus would have been explored more. It's obvious these two have the hots for one another, and I REALLY like Justus. I want to see more of a relationship develop between these two.
Four, I don't mean to bitch about the little things, but there are a lot of grammatical and copyediting issues with this book. Maybe it's because I'm a teacher, or because I majored in journalism in college, or because I read a lot, but comma issues and copyediting issue make me crazy. Now, I don't write books, but I do read a lot. And to be fair, this is a self-published book. I'm sure it is extremely difficult to copyedit on your own. But there needs to be more copyediting done on the second book whenever it comes out...Just a few examples:
"He stood up I winced as a shooting pain ran up my thigh. Run-on sentence.
"Both chairs slid back and as they rose to their feet." Not a sentence
"How did you hear was I was thinking? Replace the first was with what.
There is one on the Council that has who has such a gift. Huh?
This is the kind of trivial stuff that gets in the way of really enjoying the book. And believe me, there is a LOT to enjoy here.
Here are some quotes I thoroughly enjoyed:
"When the only tongue you're getting is from you cat....it's time to get out more."
"There are few things in life that are worth waking up to: sex, the dark spices of freshly brewed coffee, and bacon."
"But now, I had none of that to go on outside of what I saw in the mirror - was I still wine, or was I beer? Hell, maybe now I was moonshine."
"He was the sun...my sun. He was the center of my new life and I basked in his light and protection. My eyelids sank heavily and his hand rested over mine. Despite what I had told him - my hand was healed by his magic. Justus made me whole again."
So overall, the second half of the book made up for the slower first half. I think Dannika Dark is an up-and-coming writer, and I am very interested to see where she takes these characters in the second book in this series.
I would recommend this book to anyone who likes UF, with some romance thrown in. This is not a PNR, although the romantic interest part could be expanded easily and dramatically in upcoming books. I look forward to reading the next one!
I also think it's important to support up-and-coming authors, especially those who are self-publishing. This is hard work, writing books. Go ahead and give this one a try - I think you'll probably like it :)