I just couldn't continue. There are so many contradictions... Like in the first chapter, fMC is described as being the same height as MMC. Chapter seven, and he's enamored of her "petite frame" Which is it? Because this guy is no short king. Also, in chapter two fMC hears people talking about her friend being MMC's ex-lover. Then in chapter eight, she’s upset because her friend “reveals” that MMC was her ex-lover. And there were more. Also, for some reason “woman” and “women” were both used as plural and singular nouns. That, paired with the many typos, was extremely annoying. The story was so repetitive, and I had trouble believing she was a widow and he was a rake. They both read as horny, inexperienced teenagers. I got tired of her being insecure AF and complaining she can’t seduce this guy while at the same time doing all within her power to keep him at arms length. And I got tired of him doubting her motives. Dude, she told you from the beginning she just wants sex, why are we thinking she might be convinced to marry you? DNF 55%.