I thought I would like this, but it started turning into the typical trope instead of something different, with some imagination.
Why is it that almost every time something goes wrong between the H and h, the h tries to hide her warm, loving nature by turning herself into a cold "keep your distance" type, putting her long lovely hair into a tight controlled chignon, wearing uptight business suits 24/7 and keeping all that made her special encased in ice?
I could never stand the whole hair symbolism, it's just so DUMB! After the H is out of her life, the h tries to deny she's a woman by binding up her hair. That's almost as bad as the h who cuts her hair short because the H liked it long. It's so childish and also sounds emotionally unstable. Why not just wear her hair the way she always did, the way she always liked it for herself, and be the person she always was? What better way to get back at someone then to be yourself and not hide who you are, and prove they didn't damage or change you in any way?
How about a h who remains her warm, free-spirited self, even with her broken heart and unexpected pregnancy? One who doesn't get all cold and uptight and efficient, one who doesn't play games and try and keep the H from knowing he's a father, one who doesn't let bitterness turn to spite and try and keep her son from knowing his father because of it?
And the h was too much of an artistic soul to settle for becoming a businesswoman at her father's beck and call.
As for the H, no matter the circumstances, there was no excuse for him not telling the h he was married. He should have stayed away from her like he planned, instead of letting his hormones do the talking and coming back, then disappearing right after he slept with her? He should have had the guts to say straight out, "I'm married, but not married, since my wife's been in a coma for two years", then let the h decide what happens next. She was young but seemed levelheaded enough where she could decide what she wanted to do.
To tell the truth, this H acted too much like a martyr for me to like him and when I don't like one (or in this case, both) of the MC that ruins the book for me.
DNF