This is another Jackie French Historical Fiction book, this time dealing with a move-back-in-time character, Ming, who is transported from the present to WW1’s Belgian battlefield villages, in 1915. She meets Marie, a resourceful child of the era, who helps her survive. Both plot versus the German occupiers and thwart a mustard gas attack.
There are some inconsistencies that gall just a little. Ming is sent back in time by ‘Herstory’, a disembodied character apparently based on ‘History’ being the teller of his-story, and ‘Herstory’ being a female presence that retells the female gender point of view of past events. Herstory is never properly explained. There should have been more clarification to set the scene at the start of the book.
The reason why Ming is sent back in time, along with her twin brother, Tuan, is also not made clear. Had she done something wrong? Her father is referred to, but not contextualised. The reason for the mother’s abandonment of the children is not explained. But this is peripheral stuff.
There are many superfluous loose ends. I would rather that Jackie French simply wrote the story in the real time of 1915, without the modern-meets-historical characters. Once Jackie kicks into her historical fiction mode, she does what she does best, i.e. she sets the scene of what life was like more than 100 years ago.
A German station master who shares his soup with young Ming comes across as a sympathetic character, telling her of his daughter and seeking Ming’s advice as to what he should buy her for Christmas. He is killed off in an explosion, which was a pity.
While I enjoyed the book, I thought it could have been written in a less complicated and more realistic way.
Perhaps in another book on the ‘Her-story’ series, the behind-the-scenes ‘stuff’ could be better explained.