Let's start with saying I gave book 1: 5 stars and book 2 and 3: 4 stars.
So this means that in my opinion this conclusion had a HUGE drop.
I'm definitely disappointed.
I think over all this series is a good one but book 4...I'll make points:
1)the writing: I always thought it was a bit dramatic, with a lot of similitudes (really not needed because: Ehi, the reader is not an idiot you can trust me to know basic things thank you). It was also tiring because the time of the story was again and again stretched by long and repetitive description of Zoey's emotions. I'll come back on this but basically: if a book makes me want to skip paragraphs because I can see by the way they start what they are about and I already read something almost identical in the chapter before (and this book has really short chapters so basically every 5 pages I mean) that's useless info. I know it! I just read it! I'm not dumb!
2)mistakes: this is really just one thing but it bothers me beyond reason! Zoey calls The Unseelie King Lars His Highness. WHAT ARE YOU DOING?! He is a KING! You can't call him Highness that's reserved for uncrowned royalty like princes and princesses! He is HIS MAJESTY!! Now, either Zoey knows nothing about titles (possible but then she was rude and showed ignorant to the King) or the author did not check her vocabulary and neither did her editor. Either way: NOPE! I'M OUT.
3)the excessive and dramatic EMOTIONS: in the first half it was a chocking and endless angst. in the second Half it was the cringy-horniness. Calm down everyone okay? Thinking back on it the angst was better because honestly I got to the point when the fact that Zoey could AT ALL TIMES FEELS SEX WAVE OFF RYKER WAS INFURIATING ME! Stop being ridiculous, you have shit to do like save everyone and yourself, stop thinking with your vagina! Honestly, when in the last 'mission' they stopped to kiss in the middle of the first assault or when during the sneaking Zoey said things like 'It took everything I had to ignore it (my desire to jump Ryker)' I was so pissed: your sis is probably dying, the other kid is too, Cryogen is somewhere being tortured to death...GET YOUR HEAD OUT OF YOUR ASS! Plus Zoey in general was a MESS. I say this as someone that actually really loved her in the rest of the books so calm your horses. She was instable and acting recklessly and she would say 'I hated that I kept acting like that' but also if someone pointed out to her she was being stupid she got angry and did worse. It was horrible. Too much emotion and not well done! I made no sense! BOOOORING too.
4)The action: SO UNNECESSARY!! How many attacks and missions and near death (or actual death even) experiences? We could have done with half of it, the plot would have been easier to follow. Also by the 1929483901487439 time they almost died and then didn't but of course lots of injuries (that in no way stopped the sex, beware the boner power!) I simply had no adrenaline left. I felt no excitement or apprehension...they were gonna live. The author totally spent my emotional potential in this book (and Zoey spent all my patience.)!
4.5) too many antagonists: the DMC, Vadik, Amara, Aro, the stone..omg stop! Stop there!
5)Amara: I had hoped for her. The betrayal over betrayal felt so wrong...I didn't like it because wasting the potential of her redemption over the fact that 'her nature and the trauma made her impossible to save'...after book 3!! I felt lied to, simply.
Also, when she asks why everyone is so taken with Zoey...well in this book I was like: I'm wondering the same thing Amara. I mean you suck, but Zoey is not far behind right now.
5.5) Maria: respect for the woman who tortured you and enslaved and used girls as gladiators? Are you kidding me? Survivors my ass! Save her from slavery and death? SURE! She us a human being and that is the least you can do here, but RESPECT? I am so out of here.
6)Ryker: WHY NO RYKER POV?! After book 3 when that was introduced I EXPECTED IT! I definitely felt the lack of it as a fault here. We needed it especially in the first half when it was Ryker battling his feelings! It could have simply been like in book 3, the first half Ryker and the second one Zoey! The story actually would have followed this perfectly! Now, I'm not the author and I won't say: THIS SHOULD HAVE BEEN DONE LIKE THIS! That would be horrible and just No, I won't. BUT! We needed his POV, as readers, I think. another thing: the fact that Ryker doesn't want to get separated by Zoey is a thing and makes total sense, the fact that he voices that in a high stress situation is worth of a high school student with a crush not a centuries old badass super powerful fae. Love makes fool of all of us, but really...I think an InCharacter Ryker would have thought the embarassing bs and not shared it with the class DURING THE LIFE OR DEATH SITUATION.
7)the dialogue: this links back to the emotions being on too high and al over the place. It felt werid and forced, with super long and articulated and "deep" almost monologues that were just OUT OF PLACE! This is not a Shakespear play dude. Bah.
8)Croygen and Lexie: do I ship it (in the future)? Yes. Do I think the going back to DMC together and all that bs was senseless? YES. No plot meaning at all, just a thrown in scene to build up the ship. As ship trash I love it, as a reader with a brain for me is a NOPE. (But really, putting the hot pirate fae with the smart and sweet but sassy disabled girl was A+so don't come to me all ragey, I'm talking about the plot value here okay?).
9)This book desperately needs editing. Merciless editing. Scenes needs to cut and the dialogue could definitely use a radical revision. It felt forced. I know Brown can write funny, witty and natural dialogues...I read it! I hope it comes back. In general with 100 pages less this would probably have worked way better.
10) I loved the epilogue tho. I was smiling like a lunatic and excluding the Chevelle (the car...is that the name?) that was once again a very cringey sexual remark, I would honestly love a novella about Croygen and Lexie. Or a full lenght comapnion (please no series without an actual plot!).
11) Spring was my everything I love him unconditionally! I wouldn't have finished the book if not for Ryker and Spring.
12) Lars. Oh Gosh. I want a series on him pretty please!
Basically this was a 2 star read but the epilogue made me happy so I bumped it to 2.5 in my mind and to 3 stars here...because I'm weak and I loved the series so much up till this one that it made me too sad to give a bad rating. So here, a medium rating.
I'll probably come back and add more things if I come up with them but for now this is it.
Still recommend the series because it really is nice, despite this...fall. ^^
25/12: as I said one more thing!
The stone: I said I didn't like the ALL THE FEELINGS ARE ALL OVER THE PLACE for Zoey and I stand by that even knowing about the stone and the 'addiction' Zoey felt for it because honestly for such an important and pivotal plot point it was underdeveloped and I basically FORGOT about it? Like this is a tough thing to talk about but it really felt just another thing thrown in the pot that this book is...so there's that.