Pool Party Promise

by Jack Edward Dove

Maddie has been in love with her dad’s best friend James for years, and she wants him to be The One Who Does It.



James is a tall and shapely silver fox who has known Maddie all of her life, because he’s her dad’s best friend. He’s been helping her get ready to go to college, but she has something else she wants him to help her with. Egged on by a coworker, she makes her move at her dad’s birthday pool party.

How will James respond?

Will he rebuff her or will he give her what she to be her first.



For readers 18+ and older only. Contains explicit sexual content involving consenting adult characters taking part in fun times.

38 pages, Kindle Edition

Published July 15, 2021

Reviews

[James · Rating 3 out of 5]

Maddie has been admiring dad’s best friend James for some time now. A summer pool party before she heads off to college is the perfect opportunity to act on her desires.

Dove has penned what I would consider a decent age-gap story with a pool party theme. I say decent, because, while the writing is pretty solid, there’s nothing that really makes it stand out from all the other age-gap, pool party stories.But if you haven’t read a lot of stories in this trope (I have), you’ll find this to be a spicy and enjoyable tale.

I felt the HFN ending could leave the door open for additional stories with this pair. I would be interested to read more of their developing relationship.

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[Missile Dude · Rating 5 out of 5]

Good thing her Uncle James isn't really her uncle, but her Dad's best Friend, and the one man who treated her like a real lady all through high school, plus helping her figure out college plans. So who does she dream of when those teenage thoughts grow into a young women's dreams? And when dreams get presented the opportunity at her dad's birthday party? Anything could happen.

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[Patricia · Rating 4 out of 5]

Maddie is a lot more daring than she gives herself credit for. Once she decides to seduce her dad's bff James Maddie goes all out. The chemistry lead up to the pool party is tame and flirty. Maddie's seduction of James is scandalous. Their bathroom tryst is everything for an age gap first time. It's steamy, and salacious with no going back afterwards. A fun and spicy quickie story.

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[Tristi Palmer · Rating 3 out of 5]

Now hear me out. It definitely was an amazing amazing short story. However it just didn’t have enough spice in it as I was expecting. Nor was it as descriptive as I expected. It was still absolutely amazing as well as hot hot hot. However I just expected a bit more for an erotica short story.

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[Michele Flannery · Rating 5 out of 5]

This age gap romance leads a college hopeful to fulfill her dream of being the man she's wanted for years. She needs to convince him even though he's wanted her for years as well. When they finally cave to the heat, they know there's no going back to what they were before.

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[Chris · Rating 5 out of 5]

This is a hot erotic age gap short story. There's a very enjoyable graphic spicy scene. Good set up for continued story between Maddie and James. This book is 18+ not for the faint of heart.

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[Micaela Bieber · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was a very spicy dad’s best friend read. It was short, sweet, spicy, and an overall good read. Would read again.

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[Narelle · Rating 5 out of 5]

A deliciously naughty read with young Maddie and her dads’s best friend James. I’m not so sure she’s sweet, but her story is certainly a quick and steamy off limits read.

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[Jen M · Rating 4 out of 5]

It was ok, a very quick read. Very hot!

Not really my cup of tea, typical young woman older man read.

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[Hadiza · Rating 5 out of 5]

This was a short yet fiery read, with just enough depth to build both the plot and the tension beautifully.

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