//Mild Spoilers//
No, just no
Allow me to preface this review with saying that I enjoyed We Are Liars. It wasn’t amazingly jaw droppingly spectacular, but it was cool. I enjoyed it. The plot twists were decent. The writing style was fast paced albeit a bit boring. But it wasn’t horrible.
This book was nothing like I had expected.
It felt like E. Lockhart pasted her previous book into a word document, rearranged the pieces, and added a couple of characters. Lots of plot points served little to no purpose: Uncle Dean’s money schemes, Johnny being there, Major coming out to Harris, Penny coming out, etc. I guess they were supposed to show how this spoiled bourgeoisie family works, but it was all so surface level that it felt as if E. Lockhart was spinning a cliche plot point roulette before deciding to bet on all of them.
And the worst thing? The story was concluded. There was an ending. This book is a prequel to a very angsty YA novel. It should have been written to build up tension and explain why the Sinclair sisters aren’t that close. It should have created a history between them that had been covered up with fake smiles and perfect postures. But instead, they work together and survive a la friendship My Little Pony style.
Here is what I would have done to make this prequel effective. This is just my opinion.
- Rosemary should have died later on in the book. Her death would have been the perfect climax to the book. The youngest Sinclair sister, the one everyone adored, the one who kept her sisters together, died. Her ghost really isn’t necessary but her death sure was.
- Carrie not being liked by boys always seemed a bit off to me. She is the eldest daughter of a prestigious family and many guys may have wanted to take advantage of that. Have her meet a boy who doesn’t know who she is. Someone who likes her for her. Introduce Penny into the scene and have the sisters fall out over the boy. If you want to keep the Buddy Kopelnick plot line, have Penny reveal the truth while in a screaming match. Congratulations! You have now destroyed the relationship between two spoiled rich (half) sisters.
- I refuse to believe Bess would not show any feelings regarding Rosemary’s death. They were the closest in age. Bess is the second youngest. To create conflict between Bess and Carrie (and Penny if you’re feeling ambitious) have her break down and the other two sisters berate her for not being a normal Sinclair.
These situations may seem small, but they would be enough to drive a wedge between the Sinclair sisters. Because it wasn’t too big, they could get over it. Hide it under pretty faces and dazzling smiles. But it sets up the stage for the main book. It shows us into the Sinclair family. They love each other, but they are chained to each other. They are ambitious and lie to get ahead, sometimes hurting each other in the process. That is the Sinclair legacy that this book lacked.