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After finding an abandoned cottage, Devin Holloway and his boyfriend come to learn that the camp they're working at has a more tragic and disturbing past than they had expected.
463 pages, Kindle Edition
Published July 1, 2022
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July 23, 2023
2.5/5
I worked at a summer sleepover camp for a couple years as a teen and the vibes of FIVE brought me right back to those years only with creepier vibes! Overall I enjoyed this read though personally I found it to be long and wordy.
If you’re looking for a scary ghost story with an emotional back story then FIVE definitely fits the bill. I appreciated the depth in the characters Sullivan wrote and how character was loveable in their own way. I think just for me personally, it was missing something to keep me fully engaged in the story.
I worked at a summer sleepover camp for a couple years as a teen and the vibes of FIVE brought me right back to those years only with creepier vibes! Overall I enjoyed this read though personally I found it to be long and wordy.
If you’re looking for a scary ghost story with an emotional back story then FIVE definitely fits the bill. I appreciated the depth in the characters Sullivan wrote and how character was loveable in their own way. I think just for me personally, it was missing something to keep me fully engaged in the story.
April 3, 2023
Five: A Tale of Loss by David Sullivan is a story about grief and doomed romance. When Devin comes out to his family, his parents reject him and their relationship devolves into a cycle of abuse. When Devin’s suffering is further compounded by his brother’s death, he retreats to a hotel room to attempt the unthinkable. (Check trigger warnings)
But then , as if by faith he wanders into a bar and serendipitously meets Connor. The two share an instant connection and develop a deep romantic bond. Now a couple, Connor and Devin take on seasonal work at a a summer camp. But something dark waits in the woods around the place of respite. A tormented spirit lingers, unable to move beyond the veil after the tragic death of a lover. Sullivan’s writing is both compassionate and brutally graphic, showing the true horror that’s born from losing the ones we love. This is grief, hope ,despair, love and loss all in one, This is definitely an author to watch out for!
But then , as if by faith he wanders into a bar and serendipitously meets Connor. The two share an instant connection and develop a deep romantic bond. Now a couple, Connor and Devin take on seasonal work at a a summer camp. But something dark waits in the woods around the place of respite. A tormented spirit lingers, unable to move beyond the veil after the tragic death of a lover. Sullivan’s writing is both compassionate and brutally graphic, showing the true horror that’s born from losing the ones we love. This is grief, hope ,despair, love and loss all in one, This is definitely an author to watch out for!
March 7, 2023
This novel was so beautifully written. The emotion and time that went into this astounds me and it is truly unique. It was so cool (and partially frightening lol) to read a book so similar to a place I know, the setting was almost exactly the same and it made it easy to imagine the world I was reading about. I LOVED how interconnected all of the characters and stories were and how we heard every character’s point of view. No doubt about it, this is definitely a 5 star book, amazing work David! You have amazing potential and I’m so glad I took the time to read your book!
“Sometimes you have to remember that you can always make the present something beautiful” -Sullivan (296)
“Sometimes you have to remember that you can always make the present something beautiful” -Sullivan (296)
March 4, 2024
“Whispering Pines wasn’t only a home, but also a lighthouse for those lost in the dark, grasping for a new life.”
Five is so much more than a horror story. It’s a story about grief and love. It is so heartbreakingly tragic that I felt so many emotions in one book. The characters all unique in their own way with each stories of their own that intertwine.
It’s a horror that gave me chills. With Sullivan’s attention to detail, he painted such vivid scenes that I felt like I was there watching. Five is not a book you want to miss. Be sure to check any trigger warnings.
Five is so much more than a horror story. It’s a story about grief and love. It is so heartbreakingly tragic that I felt so many emotions in one book. The characters all unique in their own way with each stories of their own that intertwine.
It’s a horror that gave me chills. With Sullivan’s attention to detail, he painted such vivid scenes that I felt like I was there watching. Five is not a book you want to miss. Be sure to check any trigger warnings.
June 4, 2022
“Are you the devil, or an angel?”
This wasn’t your usual horror in that there was a ‘monster’, but the real horror was in the atrocities we inflict on each other. This was largely about the traumas of each character so be sure and check trigger warnings before reading this one. The sweet love stories between Julie and Benny, and the main characters Connor and Devin contrasted with the horrible things each character went through multiplied each emotion.
“I found my home. My home wasn’t a building, it wasn’t made of wood, bricks, or stone, but instead of blood, veins, and bone. I found my home in the man I love, for you see, home isn’t always a structure.”
This book was well done as a whole, but there were a few really beautifully written lines, and writing choices that stuck with me and set apart this book as not your typical horror. Like when the author said “The dead boy tried to wipe away his velvet tears, but when he did, one of his fingernails dug into his skin, leaving behind a small cut. Benny didn’t notice, for he was too numb.” The rich, engaging description of the heartbreaking scenes really made you feel them. The art that was scattered throughout ranged from haunting, to beautiful and things like that show the attention and time put in to this book. I loved the idea of the ‘forever home’ and it was one of my favorite depictions of what happens after we die that I have read. This was such a bittersweet (mostly bitter) read I really liked it!
This wasn’t your usual horror in that there was a ‘monster’, but the real horror was in the atrocities we inflict on each other. This was largely about the traumas of each character so be sure and check trigger warnings before reading this one. The sweet love stories between Julie and Benny, and the main characters Connor and Devin contrasted with the horrible things each character went through multiplied each emotion.
“I found my home. My home wasn’t a building, it wasn’t made of wood, bricks, or stone, but instead of blood, veins, and bone. I found my home in the man I love, for you see, home isn’t always a structure.”
This book was well done as a whole, but there were a few really beautifully written lines, and writing choices that stuck with me and set apart this book as not your typical horror. Like when the author said “The dead boy tried to wipe away his velvet tears, but when he did, one of his fingernails dug into his skin, leaving behind a small cut. Benny didn’t notice, for he was too numb.” The rich, engaging description of the heartbreaking scenes really made you feel them. The art that was scattered throughout ranged from haunting, to beautiful and things like that show the attention and time put in to this book. I loved the idea of the ‘forever home’ and it was one of my favorite depictions of what happens after we die that I have read. This was such a bittersweet (mostly bitter) read I really liked it!
November 28, 2022
Going in I wasn't sure what exactly to expect, which in my opinion is the best way to go into a book. Be sure to check tw's if needed (they're mentioned in the authors note). This story centers on grief and all its evolutions from sadness, hurt, and anger. My heart hurt for the characters at almost every page it was definitely an emotional rollercoaster. At one point it made me feel soo mad I had to take a small break. It's told in the present and the past. It gives you flashbacks of the things the characters went through that made them into who they are now. Which helps you get to know the characters better and makes everything hurt a lot more. I'm not usually a fan of the insta love trope but I can make an exception for this. The relationship between Conner and Devin and Julie and Benny was beautiful it made the ending as a whole feel bittersweet. The only complaint I have was it gave away certain situations (I'm assuming to build more dread?) that should've been left a surprise. It would've felt more shocking and a definite punch to the gut. I wish I would've read this during the summer, it's a perfect summer read but I also recommend reading it now. If you like books with lgbt representation and supporting indie authors definitely check this out !!
February 15, 2024
“And the end of my life, he thought, is gonna be one hell of an ending.”
There is something to be said for the pain and beauty of grief. It’s such a human emotion that everyone experiences at some point in life, sometimes more than others, that has so many different ways to describe it. It has stages, and that’s something that was so exquisitely depicted in such a poetic way throughout this amazing ghost story!
David Sullivan had written a masterpiece of a horror story that will have the reader experiencing a whole spectrum of emotions. I laughed, I sobbed, I smiled with my whole heart, and I got so angry I wanted to throw something. It’s one thing when a good horror story gives you the creeps, but it’s something special when a great horror story can elicit more than just fear from the reader. FIVE, and the family I found within its pages, will forever have a place in my heart.
Take a chance and read this book!
There is something to be said for the pain and beauty of grief. It’s such a human emotion that everyone experiences at some point in life, sometimes more than others, that has so many different ways to describe it. It has stages, and that’s something that was so exquisitely depicted in such a poetic way throughout this amazing ghost story!
David Sullivan had written a masterpiece of a horror story that will have the reader experiencing a whole spectrum of emotions. I laughed, I sobbed, I smiled with my whole heart, and I got so angry I wanted to throw something. It’s one thing when a good horror story gives you the creeps, but it’s something special when a great horror story can elicit more than just fear from the reader. FIVE, and the family I found within its pages, will forever have a place in my heart.
Take a chance and read this book!
June 16, 2022
3.5 stars rounded up to 4 stars.
Devin and his boyfriend Connor are hired to work at Whispering Pines, a Christian sleepaway camp. With decent pay, free food and a gorgeous setting in the wilderness, it’s a no-brainer! Devin is assigned to sleep alone in cabin Five, which is odd considering it hasn’t been used since the 90’s but he doesn’t seem to mind. But cabin Five and the woods it sits on has a dark history and Devin may soon find out he isn’t the only one sharing his cabin…
This story had me on an emotional rollercoaster that ranges from feelings of uneasiness to anger, sadness and repulsion. The feeling of dread was persistent throughout as most of the characters encountered in this story have a tortured past that eventually catches up to them. It’s a melancholy horror story that’s heavy on the topic of grief. There are trigger warnings mentioned in the beginning so be sure to check those out before diving in. There are hurtful jaw-dropping scenes that could be hard to read about for some.
The Author’s descriptive writing style covers every last detail of not only a gorgeous and at times terrifying atmosphere but of the thoughts and feelings of a character. I loved that I can picture the imagery perfectly in my head while also getting glimpses of a characters inner thoughts and emotions. There’s also creepy art by Toni Vingle throughout the book that I especially loved and felt it enhanced the story for me.
Devin and Connor had such a powerful and sweet relationship. I fell in love with the couple as soon as they were introduced, they were my absolute favorite when they were together but I really felt for Devin and his devastating backstory. There’s a scene with his little brother that nearly brought me to tears. 😞
My only complaints are that the book could have been edited down. Some thoughts and descriptions tended to get repeated, making it drag at times. I also would have preferred if certain situations weren’t given away before they happened, it created an emotional disconnect with me knowing what was coming. I like to be surprised and shocked instead but that’s my preference.
Overall it’s a fantastic book and If you’re looking for horror with good queer representation especially during June Gay pride, this should be added to your TBR.
Many thanks to the author for a copy of this book in exchange for my honest review!
Devin and his boyfriend Connor are hired to work at Whispering Pines, a Christian sleepaway camp. With decent pay, free food and a gorgeous setting in the wilderness, it’s a no-brainer! Devin is assigned to sleep alone in cabin Five, which is odd considering it hasn’t been used since the 90’s but he doesn’t seem to mind. But cabin Five and the woods it sits on has a dark history and Devin may soon find out he isn’t the only one sharing his cabin…
This story had me on an emotional rollercoaster that ranges from feelings of uneasiness to anger, sadness and repulsion. The feeling of dread was persistent throughout as most of the characters encountered in this story have a tortured past that eventually catches up to them. It’s a melancholy horror story that’s heavy on the topic of grief. There are trigger warnings mentioned in the beginning so be sure to check those out before diving in. There are hurtful jaw-dropping scenes that could be hard to read about for some.
The Author’s descriptive writing style covers every last detail of not only a gorgeous and at times terrifying atmosphere but of the thoughts and feelings of a character. I loved that I can picture the imagery perfectly in my head while also getting glimpses of a characters inner thoughts and emotions. There’s also creepy art by Toni Vingle throughout the book that I especially loved and felt it enhanced the story for me.
Devin and Connor had such a powerful and sweet relationship. I fell in love with the couple as soon as they were introduced, they were my absolute favorite when they were together but I really felt for Devin and his devastating backstory. There’s a scene with his little brother that nearly brought me to tears. 😞
My only complaints are that the book could have been edited down. Some thoughts and descriptions tended to get repeated, making it drag at times. I also would have preferred if certain situations weren’t given away before they happened, it created an emotional disconnect with me knowing what was coming. I like to be surprised and shocked instead but that’s my preference.
Overall it’s a fantastic book and If you’re looking for horror with good queer representation especially during June Gay pride, this should be added to your TBR.
Many thanks to the author for a copy of this book in exchange for my honest review!
March 18, 2023
Five is a poignantly emotional story. It's subtitle is "A Tale about Loss", which I didn't consider until I was deep into the book. With beautifully evocative writing, David Sullivan tells the tale of several lost souls trying to find a sense of family at Whispering Pines Christian camp, and discovering terrible and deadly secrets.
This book broke me. It was haunting and full of despair. The story was atmospheric, tragic, and then somehow full of hope. I appreciated that the horror aspect was unique and that all mysteries were ultimately revealed. This one will stick with me for a long time.
Thank you to the author for reaching out to me to review this phenomenal book in exchange for an honest review.
This book broke me. It was haunting and full of despair. The story was atmospheric, tragic, and then somehow full of hope. I appreciated that the horror aspect was unique and that all mysteries were ultimately revealed. This one will stick with me for a long time.
Thank you to the author for reaching out to me to review this phenomenal book in exchange for an honest review.
July 6, 2022
I didn’t know what to expect going into this book because I didn’t want to be spoiled by a lot of description. I’m happy about that because I thoroughly enjoyed every minute of Five! It had romance, loss and death, creep factors, and a solid, fluid story. Sullivan did an excellent job of keeping my interest and biting my nails!
This was a great summer read since the setting was at a summer camp with kids, bonfires, cabins, canoes, and killing. The main characters Devin and Connor were a gay couple in love, wanting to move to the camp to get away. And what they found was way more than they bargained for. I loved all of the main characters and even Grace, one of the side characters because she has a great story to tell.
This was a great summer read since the setting was at a summer camp with kids, bonfires, cabins, canoes, and killing. The main characters Devin and Connor were a gay couple in love, wanting to move to the camp to get away. And what they found was way more than they bargained for. I loved all of the main characters and even Grace, one of the side characters because she has a great story to tell.
August 31, 2022
I didn't know what to expect when I opened this book, I hadn't even read a summary, I just saw a cover that I really liked on a horror book about a gay couple and that was enough to make me read it. Well, I don't regret it at all! Two of the things I love most in books are interesting, endearing characters, and gore. Five offers both. There are many different and realistic characters, each with their own story and way of thinking and seeing the world, as well as intense and disturbing horror scenes, made even more impactful by the time spent getting to know the characters.
May 22, 2024
3.5 rounded up to 4.
There's a whole lot of things to love about this novel. As others have said, it is very much a slow burn of a horror novel, with Sullivan taking his time to set the world, the tone, and make you feel the losses. I think one of the biggest strengths of this novel, and the part I enjoyed the most was a wonderful, beautiful, healthy, loving relationship between Devin and Connor. It just worked for me.
Some of the things that brought the score down a bit were...
The pacing. Again, as others have said, I do believe the novel to be a touch overlong. Sullivan's writing style is excellent, if a touch too detailed at times. It did slow the narrative down a bit.
There were also a couple of times—again, no spoilers—around the disappearance of one of the children, and also around Devin and Connor considering when to leave, that I felt were not treated realistically, as time didn't necessarily be of the essence in either case. I kept finding myself saying to the involved parties, "Oh, would you hurry up?"
Moreso toward the ending. Without spoiling anything, I will say the author intercuts flashbacks in around the ending. I understand fully what the author was doing and why, however some of the flashbacks seemed a touch repetitive, having already gone through parts of those scenes earlier in the novel, and the sheer number of them did get a bit much.
As with any indie release, there were a few grammatical and editing errors and—at least in my experience—like most indie releases, they did tend to multiply toward the latter third. However, they weren't egregious, but it does tend to impact my enjoyment of the writing style.
Finally, and I believe this may have been more noticeable simply because there was just shy of 500 pages to read, but the shift from black type to a dark grey, then back again was irritating. For this, I place the blame squarely on Amazon's printing, as I've seen this too many times for it to be anything else.
So, for me, the biggest factor was the pacing. I think this could have been a mind-blowing, stellar, absolute 5-star read as a 350-page novel.
But, for all of that, it's still an absolutely excellent read that deep dives into the characters and truly does examine grief in its many forms. Definitely worth the read.
There's a whole lot of things to love about this novel. As others have said, it is very much a slow burn of a horror novel, with Sullivan taking his time to set the world, the tone, and make you feel the losses. I think one of the biggest strengths of this novel, and the part I enjoyed the most was a wonderful, beautiful, healthy, loving relationship between Devin and Connor. It just worked for me.
Some of the things that brought the score down a bit were...
The pacing. Again, as others have said, I do believe the novel to be a touch overlong. Sullivan's writing style is excellent, if a touch too detailed at times. It did slow the narrative down a bit.
There were also a couple of times—again, no spoilers—around the disappearance of one of the children, and also around Devin and Connor considering when to leave, that I felt were not treated realistically, as time didn't necessarily be of the essence in either case. I kept finding myself saying to the involved parties, "Oh, would you hurry up?"
Moreso toward the ending. Without spoiling anything, I will say the author intercuts flashbacks in around the ending. I understand fully what the author was doing and why, however some of the flashbacks seemed a touch repetitive, having already gone through parts of those scenes earlier in the novel, and the sheer number of them did get a bit much.
As with any indie release, there were a few grammatical and editing errors and—at least in my experience—like most indie releases, they did tend to multiply toward the latter third. However, they weren't egregious, but it does tend to impact my enjoyment of the writing style.
Finally, and I believe this may have been more noticeable simply because there was just shy of 500 pages to read, but the shift from black type to a dark grey, then back again was irritating. For this, I place the blame squarely on Amazon's printing, as I've seen this too many times for it to be anything else.
So, for me, the biggest factor was the pacing. I think this could have been a mind-blowing, stellar, absolute 5-star read as a 350-page novel.
But, for all of that, it's still an absolutely excellent read that deep dives into the characters and truly does examine grief in its many forms. Definitely worth the read.
October 14, 2022
Thank you to the author for giving me an opportunity to read this!
• I’ve not read many horror books but I can easily say that this is without a doubt one of my favorites.
• Going into this, I didn’t expect it to be that intricate and layered, but every character had their own unique story
• I also didn’t expect to be feeling a range of emotions but this made me laugh and terrified me at the same time.
• The writing was so beautiful and I loved the descriptions of each scene, they truly make you feel like you’re with the characters. There were also so many good quotes but these are just a few that I know will stay with me
• The characters were also well-formed, even the side characters had unique traits and I loved their banter and support for one another
• Devin and Connor’s relationship was really wholesome and I loved how they always look out for each other and support each other during their difficult times. Devin’s story was heartbreaking because of how realistic it is for a lot of people.
• There’s a lot of gory descriptions that genuinely terrified me but there’s also much more to it, there are themes of loss and loneliness throughout the book and you can feel the characters’ pain through the page.
• It also shows how important it is for even one person to listen to your story and be there for you.
• The ending had twists I didn’t see coming at all and I liked how everything was uncovered and how the stories linked to each other
• The illustrations are beautiful and they captured the emotions of each part perfectly. More books should definitely have illustrations!
• I think this was my first time reading a book by an Indie author and it definitely won’t be my last! There’s just something about finding a hidden gem like this that makes you want to tell everyone about it
• I highly recommend this, and I will cherish this story till I’m in my “forever home” 💙
April 21, 2023
How can something be so terrifying and so beautiful?
This book has some heavy themes, please be warned! If you can deal with this though, I highly recommend reading as it's so worth it.
I really enjoyed learning about each character, especially Devin who felt like a friend. His time at camp and his awfully sad back story. I was glad he found Connor. Their time at camp was terrifying. There were two parts of this book which genuinely freaked me out! Literally!! Turn the lights on and ask my partner to walk me to the bathroom frightening, I kid you not! This was some Stephen King vibes!
However, despite the supernatural camp terror vibes, this book focuses primarly on the horror which is life. Grief in particular. We learn each character has their own grief and we learn each of their reactions. Reactions which we understand, reactions which we may not. But who are we to judge? Because when you lose someone you love, wouldn't you do just about anything to see them again? To have a second chance? Sometimes that desire can make us delusional and sometimes that delusion can make us dangerous, not just to others but ourselves. We see this in particular with Devin and another character (no spoilers!). We also see this with who is portrayed as the villain. I was surprised by who it turned out to be, but due to the theme mentioned above, I felt it worked really well and made alot of sense.
The book is highly descriptive, putting you right there in the moment. This made it extra powerful, as the sad moments were intense and the scary moments....eeek!
Wonderfully written and very unique, a bit of everything. I recommend! Plus, bonus: some beautiful and scary art. Cover and inside the book too.
This book has some heavy themes, please be warned! If you can deal with this though, I highly recommend reading as it's so worth it.
I really enjoyed learning about each character, especially Devin who felt like a friend. His time at camp and his awfully sad back story. I was glad he found Connor. Their time at camp was terrifying. There were two parts of this book which genuinely freaked me out! Literally!! Turn the lights on and ask my partner to walk me to the bathroom frightening, I kid you not! This was some Stephen King vibes!
However, despite the supernatural camp terror vibes, this book focuses primarly on the horror which is life. Grief in particular. We learn each character has their own grief and we learn each of their reactions. Reactions which we understand, reactions which we may not. But who are we to judge? Because when you lose someone you love, wouldn't you do just about anything to see them again? To have a second chance? Sometimes that desire can make us delusional and sometimes that delusion can make us dangerous, not just to others but ourselves. We see this in particular with Devin and another character (no spoilers!). We also see this with who is portrayed as the villain. I was surprised by who it turned out to be, but due to the theme mentioned above, I felt it worked really well and made alot of sense.
The book is highly descriptive, putting you right there in the moment. This made it extra powerful, as the sad moments were intense and the scary moments....eeek!
Wonderfully written and very unique, a bit of everything. I recommend! Plus, bonus: some beautiful and scary art. Cover and inside the book too.
August 8, 2022
I loved Devin and Connor so much. They're probably the cutest couple I've read about and wanted nothing bad to happen to them the whole time. They could have just stayed in that coneflower field being all sweet and encouraging to each other and I would still recommend you this book.
I liked the slow burn, get know the characters, explore the camp feel that this book had in the beginning. I'm normally the "where's all the blood and guts" kinda person right from the start but definitely liked that this one took it's time. (There will be blood and guts later, so enjoy the slow part while you can!)
David's writing was beautiful. In a message exchange we had a few days ago they mentioned a certain part in the book having a fairytale kind of feeling and I definitely agreed with that because of how their writing style comes through in the story. Can you have whimsical fairytale horror? I think so.
If you're a fan of summer camp horror/thrillers with a bit of romance and some teary parts then this one's for you. (Maybe you won't cry, but I'm a big baby so I did.)
Thanks to the author for the free copy in exchange for an honest review. I look forward to checking out any future books you may write.
I liked the slow burn, get know the characters, explore the camp feel that this book had in the beginning. I'm normally the "where's all the blood and guts" kinda person right from the start but definitely liked that this one took it's time. (There will be blood and guts later, so enjoy the slow part while you can!)
David's writing was beautiful. In a message exchange we had a few days ago they mentioned a certain part in the book having a fairytale kind of feeling and I definitely agreed with that because of how their writing style comes through in the story. Can you have whimsical fairytale horror? I think so.
If you're a fan of summer camp horror/thrillers with a bit of romance and some teary parts then this one's for you. (Maybe you won't cry, but I'm a big baby so I did.)
Thanks to the author for the free copy in exchange for an honest review. I look forward to checking out any future books you may write.
May 18, 2023
FIVE A Tale About Loss | David Sullivan
5 ⭐️
Devin and his boyfriend Connor are looking forward to a relaxing summer at Whispering Pines. The last minute job opportunity offers good pay, a rustic summer camp setting, and time alone with his partner. Upon arrival their relaxation quickly turns to concern as closely guarded secrets and a dark history start to emerge. What really happened in Cabin Five and are they in danger?
FIVE is unlike most horror I've read, with detailed, extremely emotive writing and exceptional world building. I felt like I was standing there in Whispering Pines.
I loved the depth of this story, the backstory is so well explained and I found myself invested in the main characters and really hoping for a happy ending but expecting the worst.
There are some very graphic depictions in this book.
If you read this you're in for:
- Death and grief from multiple perspectives.
- A Summer Camp Setting.
- Heartbreak and emotional turmoil
- A great new indie author!
Thank you @david for allowing me to read your amazing debut novel.
5 ⭐️
Devin and his boyfriend Connor are looking forward to a relaxing summer at Whispering Pines. The last minute job opportunity offers good pay, a rustic summer camp setting, and time alone with his partner. Upon arrival their relaxation quickly turns to concern as closely guarded secrets and a dark history start to emerge. What really happened in Cabin Five and are they in danger?
FIVE is unlike most horror I've read, with detailed, extremely emotive writing and exceptional world building. I felt like I was standing there in Whispering Pines.
I loved the depth of this story, the backstory is so well explained and I found myself invested in the main characters and really hoping for a happy ending but expecting the worst.
There are some very graphic depictions in this book.
If you read this you're in for:
- Death and grief from multiple perspectives.
- A Summer Camp Setting.
- Heartbreak and emotional turmoil
- A great new indie author!
Thank you @david for allowing me to read your amazing debut novel.
June 29, 2023
I absolutely loved this book. But if you go to camp stay away from cabin 5! I loved all the characters in this book. They were all very drawn out and the author gave you a lot of background on them, so you know what has happened in their life and why they are at the camp. David Sullivan described the characters and scenery around the camp so well that you don't have a problem imagining what they looked like. This is a very good thriller/horror novel that will have you biting your nails and keeps you engrossed throughout the whole book. I loved the ending that the"virus" was put to an end but hated what happened to Conner and Devan, but was also happy that they were united again. There are some surprise moments in the book also. I would recommend this book to anyone needing a good scary read. I will be looking to read more from David Sullivan.
September 23, 2023
“𝒮𝑜𝓂𝑒𝓉𝒾𝓂𝑒𝓈, ℐ 𝒻𝑒𝑒𝓁 𝓁𝒾𝓀𝑒 𝓉𝒽𝑒 𝓊𝓃𝒾𝓋𝑒𝓇𝓈𝑒 𝒽𝒶𝓃𝒹𝓈 𝓊𝓈 𝓅𝑒𝑜𝓅𝓁𝑒 𝓌𝒽𝑒𝓃 𝓌𝑒 𝓂𝑜𝓈𝓉 𝓃𝑒𝑒𝒹 𝓉𝒽𝑒𝓂,”
Five is a powerful tale about love, loss and grief.
I started this book knowing nothing about the story and it completely blew me away. I can’t even describe how much this story captivated me, after I started reading it I could’t put the book down.
The writing style was absolutely beautiful, getting to know all the different characters was such a unique experience. They all felt so real, they all been through so much! This whole book was brilliant and honestly just so perfect. There was gore, disturbing horror scenes and so many emotions.
I’m so glad I’ve read this book, I know I’m never going to forget it!
I highly highly recommend reading this spectacular book!
Five is a powerful tale about love, loss and grief.
I started this book knowing nothing about the story and it completely blew me away. I can’t even describe how much this story captivated me, after I started reading it I could’t put the book down.
The writing style was absolutely beautiful, getting to know all the different characters was such a unique experience. They all felt so real, they all been through so much! This whole book was brilliant and honestly just so perfect. There was gore, disturbing horror scenes and so many emotions.
I’m so glad I’ve read this book, I know I’m never going to forget it!
I highly highly recommend reading this spectacular book!
November 29, 2022
This book was so intense and it kept me hooked the entire time! I am so impressed with the writing and how much work must have gone into this project! Congrats David!!
December 3, 2022
Exceptional effort.
April 28, 2025
Well done David Sullivan. Well done.
February 12, 2023
It's been months since I've read this book and it still sticks with me. It's horrific, sweet and the perfect balance of terror, drama, and tender moments. Definitely recommend
December 9, 2022
4.5 stars
Thanks David Sullivan for the free copy!!
[TWs: death of family member, self-harm, gore, homophobia, animal death, grief and loss depiction, assumptions of suicide, suicidal thoughts] (that's all I can remember for now)
I really loved the premise, I love how the story went along so smoothly, especially the transition between the past/flashbacks and the present story. I love how unique Five is, that horror isn't only gore and slasher stuff, but it also touches on the less-acknowledged-but-very-realistic horror of losing your loved ones and the grief that follows.
There were parts I felt that sort of dragged the story? Like especially the beginning. I thought that maybe some descriptions/chunky paragraphs could be edited down, and there were a lot of redundant words/sentences and punctuation issues. Other than that, i think Sullivan really nailed this story, and the writing is so [incomprehensible noises, followed by chef's kiss]!!!
The cast is perfect, they seem so real and believable to me, and I love their monologues. the couples in this story ARE SO SWEET oml,,, devin & connor and benny & julie are *the* most couples ever,, and btw I Adore Connor and his family ,, sorry, i'm being very Pinoy Pride rn :"(( the tagalog translation 'sabihin mo hello' is excellent too (coming from an ''estranged'' filipino (not exactly fluent in my own language)) AND!! "Forever Home" just breaks my heart every single time because of how Beautifully it;s written, like I was otw home just a few hours ago, and the whole time I gnawed on the inside of my cheek cus crying in public is embarrassing HAHA
Oh, and there's a sweet sweet hidden message near 80% of the book; I thought it's such a fun addition (because I Love hidden messages) There were times I felt that, yes, the characters' fates were already spoiled in the text itself, I kinda wanted to feel that shock from not seeing it coming yk?
Still, I enjoyed reading Five :)) Such a beautiful, bittersweet piece of work this book is. The ending is so fucking beautiful and so nicely done. David Sullivan really showed their amazing talent in Five.
Thanks David Sullivan for the free copy!!
[TWs: death of family member, self-harm, gore, homophobia, animal death, grief and loss depiction, assumptions of suicide, suicidal thoughts] (that's all I can remember for now)
I really loved the premise, I love how the story went along so smoothly, especially the transition between the past/flashbacks and the present story. I love how unique Five is, that horror isn't only gore and slasher stuff, but it also touches on the less-acknowledged-but-very-realistic horror of losing your loved ones and the grief that follows.
There were parts I felt that sort of dragged the story? Like especially the beginning. I thought that maybe some descriptions/chunky paragraphs could be edited down, and there were a lot of redundant words/sentences and punctuation issues. Other than that, i think Sullivan really nailed this story, and the writing is so [incomprehensible noises, followed by chef's kiss]!!!
The cast is perfect, they seem so real and believable to me, and I love their monologues. the couples in this story ARE SO SWEET oml,,, devin & connor and benny & julie are *the* most couples ever,, and btw I Adore Connor and his family ,, sorry, i'm being very Pinoy Pride rn :"(( the tagalog translation 'sabihin mo hello' is excellent too (coming from an ''estranged'' filipino (not exactly fluent in my own language)) AND!! "Forever Home" just breaks my heart every single time because of how Beautifully it;s written, like I was otw home just a few hours ago, and the whole time I gnawed on the inside of my cheek cus crying in public is embarrassing HAHA
Oh, and there's a sweet sweet hidden message near 80% of the book; I thought it's such a fun addition (because I Love hidden messages) There were times I felt that, yes, the characters' fates were already spoiled in the text itself, I kinda wanted to feel that shock from not seeing it coming yk?
Still, I enjoyed reading Five :)) Such a beautiful, bittersweet piece of work this book is. The ending is so fucking beautiful and so nicely done. David Sullivan really showed their amazing talent in Five.
July 14, 2022
What a unique read.
Five is certainly a story about loss, and all that happens to create loss. How hope, love, fear, disappointment, anger, sorrow, and grief evolve across a series of characters. It’s a thoughtful emotional read (several trigger warnings abound) and while there is a horror in the woods that you can view as the big bad, taking innocent lives at Whispering Pines, it’s not the only ‘monster’ you come across throughout the story. That is perhaps the most painful part - the everyday monsters - that any one of us may encounter. Sometimes we meet people at the right moment. Sometimes you just meet someone and everything in your life trajectory changes. Each of our main characters is led to Whispering Pines for different reasons - Devin & Connor, Grace, Hannah, Benny & Julie. Each backstory heartbreaking and memorable.
While the setting is a summer camp - it’s not camp horror. And while there are many horrors depicted on the pages, I’d say this book is in a unique category all it’s own with it’s strong themes of love, grief and redemption.
The only slightly ‘unbelievable’ part for me was how quickly some of the characters shared their most pained moments w/ a new stranger and/or then formed an immediate bond of trust/love. I’d also have loved to understand more about what other powers might have been at play in the woods that fateful day the horror was born from grief.
Overall really great debut novel and an author to watch!
Five is certainly a story about loss, and all that happens to create loss. How hope, love, fear, disappointment, anger, sorrow, and grief evolve across a series of characters. It’s a thoughtful emotional read (several trigger warnings abound) and while there is a horror in the woods that you can view as the big bad, taking innocent lives at Whispering Pines, it’s not the only ‘monster’ you come across throughout the story. That is perhaps the most painful part - the everyday monsters - that any one of us may encounter. Sometimes we meet people at the right moment. Sometimes you just meet someone and everything in your life trajectory changes. Each of our main characters is led to Whispering Pines for different reasons - Devin & Connor, Grace, Hannah, Benny & Julie. Each backstory heartbreaking and memorable.
While the setting is a summer camp - it’s not camp horror. And while there are many horrors depicted on the pages, I’d say this book is in a unique category all it’s own with it’s strong themes of love, grief and redemption.
The only slightly ‘unbelievable’ part for me was how quickly some of the characters shared their most pained moments w/ a new stranger and/or then formed an immediate bond of trust/love. I’d also have loved to understand more about what other powers might have been at play in the woods that fateful day the horror was born from grief.
Overall really great debut novel and an author to watch!
July 7, 2022
(3.5/5) - rounds up to 4
First off, I want to say thank you so much to the author for providing me a copy of his debut novel in exchange for an honest review. To be blunt, I wasn't sure what to expect coming into this book, but it did not disappoint me at all. "Five" centers around a gay couple (Devin and Connor) who are hired to work at a Christian camp during the summer. One of them stays in Cabin 5 and we get to see the campground's horrific history and the background of Devin. The attention to detail in this story is amazing (although to be fair, it can get wordy at times, but that's a stylistic decision). The horror elements are disturbing and unsettling. This is a different kind of horror that I suggest readers check out.
First off, I want to say thank you so much to the author for providing me a copy of his debut novel in exchange for an honest review. To be blunt, I wasn't sure what to expect coming into this book, but it did not disappoint me at all. "Five" centers around a gay couple (Devin and Connor) who are hired to work at a Christian camp during the summer. One of them stays in Cabin 5 and we get to see the campground's horrific history and the background of Devin. The attention to detail in this story is amazing (although to be fair, it can get wordy at times, but that's a stylistic decision). The horror elements are disturbing and unsettling. This is a different kind of horror that I suggest readers check out.
August 2, 2024
I’m going with a 3.75 and rounding to 4. I loved the premise! It’s really a great story.
Some thoughts:
The author has excellent descriptive prose. You were truly able to visualize everything that he wanted you to. However, I did feel that there was too much description in this book. I didn’t need to know the size of the TV of each place or the labels on the bins for dishes. I think the novel could’ve been trimmed down a lot with the over-descriptions.
I wasn’t expecting to read any smut/sex scenes in this book, but when I got one scene in the beginning, I was kind of expecting a few more scenes. Couldn’t we have had at least one camp sexy time? 😂
I really liked Grace’s character in the story. Her background story was sad and the real life events of the residential schools are an awful part of history. I just didn’t see the point of her background story though. It didn’t seem to fit into the premise of the book other than just telling her backstory.
Devin and Connor - what a sweet relationship. I loved how they met and how they supported each other. I loved Connor’s family taking in Devin after the awful experiences he had with his family. BUT CONNOR!!! I’m gonna just stop now. Whyyyyyyy???? 😭
To extend on that though, when Devin found about Connor, I didn’t believe it. His actions just didn’t portray someone who just lost the love of their life.
Wrapping up - I enjoyed it overall!!! I’m never staying in a cabin numbered Five. Amazing read especially for a debut novel.
Some thoughts:
The author has excellent descriptive prose. You were truly able to visualize everything that he wanted you to. However, I did feel that there was too much description in this book. I didn’t need to know the size of the TV of each place or the labels on the bins for dishes. I think the novel could’ve been trimmed down a lot with the over-descriptions.
I wasn’t expecting to read any smut/sex scenes in this book, but when I got one scene in the beginning, I was kind of expecting a few more scenes. Couldn’t we have had at least one camp sexy time? 😂
I really liked Grace’s character in the story. Her background story was sad and the real life events of the residential schools are an awful part of history. I just didn’t see the point of her background story though. It didn’t seem to fit into the premise of the book other than just telling her backstory.
Devin and Connor - what a sweet relationship. I loved how they met and how they supported each other. I loved Connor’s family taking in Devin after the awful experiences he had with his family. BUT CONNOR!!! I’m gonna just stop now. Whyyyyyyy???? 😭
To extend on that though, when Devin found about Connor, I didn’t believe it. His actions just didn’t portray someone who just lost the love of their life.
Wrapping up - I enjoyed it overall!!! I’m never staying in a cabin numbered Five. Amazing read especially for a debut novel.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
August 25, 2023
I gave this book 3.5 stars (rounded up)
This review might contain a few spoilers.
I really liked this book early on. Devin’s story truly had me from the beginning. Overall I liked the twist in the book and it had a great story. It was suspenseful. And the author really painted the picture. It was easy to visualize what I was reading.
With that being said, I think the book could have been 100-150 pages shorter. There were a lot of descriptive words for the same things. It felt overly fluffed with multiple descriptive words. Also, a few times it did get hard to continue to read the book (but I’m glad I finished) after the author tells you what’s going to happen. Took the mystery of a story out. Like I already know the conclusion of the story because you gave it to me.
The other thing that got to me is totally personal preference. But I don’t enjoy long chapters. This is 3 parts, but I had to skip through pages (kindle) to see when I’d get to the next chapter instead of being able to see it in the table of contents tab. But that’s absolutely a personal preference thing for me. I like to be able to see how many pages from chapter to chapter there are. Gives me a good idea of when I could stop for the night.
Overall though, I did enjoy it. I’m glad I got through it to the end to see what happened with Devin’s story.
This review might contain a few spoilers.
I really liked this book early on. Devin’s story truly had me from the beginning. Overall I liked the twist in the book and it had a great story. It was suspenseful. And the author really painted the picture. It was easy to visualize what I was reading.
With that being said, I think the book could have been 100-150 pages shorter. There were a lot of descriptive words for the same things. It felt overly fluffed with multiple descriptive words. Also, a few times it did get hard to continue to read the book (but I’m glad I finished) after the author tells you what’s going to happen. Took the mystery of a story out. Like I already know the conclusion of the story because you gave it to me.
The other thing that got to me is totally personal preference. But I don’t enjoy long chapters. This is 3 parts, but I had to skip through pages (kindle) to see when I’d get to the next chapter instead of being able to see it in the table of contents tab. But that’s absolutely a personal preference thing for me. I like to be able to see how many pages from chapter to chapter there are. Gives me a good idea of when I could stop for the night.
Overall though, I did enjoy it. I’m glad I got through it to the end to see what happened with Devin’s story.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
June 7, 2022
Sincere thanks to author who recently hooked me up with his debut horror novel, FIVE: a Tale about Loss. It’s such an honour to get early reads from Indie authors!
So, there is a LOT happening in this novel. It’s definitely horror at the core buts it’s full title really hits home as it’s also very much about different degrees of loss.
After taking on new jobs at a lakeside summer kids camp, boyfriends Devin and Conner quickly come to learn that the cabin their staying in has got a ghostly past. And the tragic history of both the cabin and the entire campground goes way back and gets more disturbing as you go.
It’s an emotional read, with some pretty surprising twists and as a debut novel, this story ticks all the right boxes.
So, there is a LOT happening in this novel. It’s definitely horror at the core buts it’s full title really hits home as it’s also very much about different degrees of loss.
After taking on new jobs at a lakeside summer kids camp, boyfriends Devin and Conner quickly come to learn that the cabin their staying in has got a ghostly past. And the tragic history of both the cabin and the entire campground goes way back and gets more disturbing as you go.
It’s an emotional read, with some pretty surprising twists and as a debut novel, this story ticks all the right boxes.
June 14, 2024
Whenever a book doesn't really work for me, I always try to lead with the positives, as there are always a few to be found in every story.
At it's heart, Five is a love story, and as the horrors surrounding the camp in Bevan unfold, you really begin to feel for the characters, all of whom are very well put together. The author also does a great job of making you feel that you are right there as it happens.
The story is definitely s slow burn, but it didn't have to be that way. There was a lot of details added that, for me were unnecessary, and did little to move the story forward, to the point where it felt like a first draft at times.
There is, though, the bones of a very good story in here, as well as some nicely executed twists.
3.5 stars rounded up to 4
At it's heart, Five is a love story, and as the horrors surrounding the camp in Bevan unfold, you really begin to feel for the characters, all of whom are very well put together. The author also does a great job of making you feel that you are right there as it happens.
The story is definitely s slow burn, but it didn't have to be that way. There was a lot of details added that, for me were unnecessary, and did little to move the story forward, to the point where it felt like a first draft at times.
There is, though, the bones of a very good story in here, as well as some nicely executed twists.
3.5 stars rounded up to 4
March 27, 2024
This book was heartbreaking. It is throughly a story about loss, I felt for the characters and their backstory. The story is told in multiple POVs and timelines and even though I enjoyed the mystery, I did feel like it was unnecessarily long. There were in my opinion many characters, details and descriptions that didn’t add anything to the story while other things didn’t make much sense.
But please do give it a chance, it may be your favorite!
But please do give it a chance, it may be your favorite!
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