I love dystopians, I love fantasies, I love action, and I really REALLY wanted to love this book. It felt like a cross between The Hunger Games and Divergent, both of which I have read over and over and over again.
To start with, the action here was great. The story started off running. But I felt like it started in the middle of a story that I should have known (this book is the first in the series). It felt like I couldn't quite catch up for a long time.
There were some things that seemed inconsistent to me. For example, Vallen was in charge of putting Larken in a squad and making sure all was copacetic, but then there was a possible transfer that he knew nothing about. Also, Larken supposedly didn't trust Dominic, but she kept agreeing to see him. And there was a war going on, but I don't have any idea why.
Another thing that bothered me, and this ties in to Dominic too, is that Larken kept leading him on and giving him mixed signals. And then when he tried to kiss her, she got mad. One of the quotes from that scene is "And even if I do keep changing my mind, who cares? You should respect my decisions!" No. You don't lead someone on like that and then get infuriated with him.
I did really enjoy the banter between the squad. I think that was written well. It was highly entertaining.
If you like fantasy, dystopian, YA, and/or action in your books, give this one a try. Don't take my word for it. This is just my opinion, and there are several 5 star ratings on Amazon, so go check it out. You may love it!
~I was given a complimentary copy of this book for my honest opinion.~