Every time I think I've read the Worst Book Ever, another one comes along.
The plot, while predictable with foreseeable "twists" and a few plot holes, is salvageable. I could see myself giving this book 3 stars had it been written by a more skilled author.
The writing, however, is on par with "Run, Spot, run. See Spot run?" The editing issues abound, from misspellings to massive grammatical mistakes to glaring punctuation errors.
The dialogue is stiff and unnatural. The characters lack depth; turn them sideways, and they disappear.
Caine uses the same words and phrases repeatedly. His favorites include: smirk, shout, scoff, saunter, thin smile, and brandishing a smile. The book isn't indexed, so sadly I can't provide word counts, but someone smirked at least 50 times.
Even more maddening, the words are often used in the wrong context.
For example, smirking typically implies smugness or contempt, but can also be used playfully to indicate teasing/sarcasm. You don't smirk while romantically gazing into your partner's eyes.
To saunter is to walk languidly, almost posturing, no rush, no worries. You do not saunter when a psychopath is prodding you along.
People shout to attract attention or convey a strong emotion, often anger. You don't open the door and shout at your guests to welcome them.
I could go on, but I think I made my point.
James Caine may have some creative ideas but should consider attending a writers' workshop or ten, as he's in desperate need of critical feedback.