Oh, this was fine enough. Diverting. I feel I've got a handle on Fred, at least as he presented himself professionally. As to Fred personally, I'm not so sure. Is it possible he's too good to be true here? I wonder if something's been left out. Or disinfected. I don't think Fred was by any means a bastard. By I do think he was a man, and at times he comes off as a little more machine in these pages. No real love interest until his late twenties? Come now.