Sadly, though it was really well written, there was way too much repetition in this one for me.
•Dialogue - Ex. The repetitive use of "I love you." as an emotional bandaid/apology/conversation.
•Sex Scenes - Ex. The same positions, order, and description over and over with little variety. (There was a ton of sex in this book. Yay! But, I can only think of two that were decidedly different scenes from the rest. And only one where the heroine was giving instead of receiving. Usually, everything was happening TO her.)
•Character/action - Ex. Our heroine would panic, sob, and run every time things got difficult.
That last one was a deal breaker for me. I love character dynamism in the books I read. Given the first book, I was expecting her to evolve as a stronger more self-confident woman. Instead, she became weaker and relied on the men to plan everything while she panicked. Eek.
The first book really grabbed me and the second held my attention. This one let me down. I almost DNF. Still, the author has a really great flow and delivers emotion well. I will def try the next series and cross my fingers for a better outcome.