I always strive to give debut authors the benefit of the doubt. There’s a lot that goes on behind the scenes to produce a book and letting it out into the world can be anxiety-inducing. The idea behind Hazel Fine Sings Along is brilliant. It was the way the author went about writing it that lost me.
Before we start, I want to preface that while this is marketed as a rom-com…it’s not.
It was very difficult for me to empathize with Hazel as a character. She was unbearable and wasn’t sure what ground she stood on…as an almost thirty-year-old adult. She didn’t appear to be as passionate about music, or anything, the way the author wants us to believe. She was very much self-involved and immature. She lies to anyone and everyone when truthfully, there’s no reason to. Even she admits she takes it too far. That, my friends, is called a pathological liar. She didn’t think about anyone else but herself when making decisions. I also cannot believe after creating this entirely different identity to separate herself from her childhood trauma, she forgives and mends her relationship with her parents without a second thought. Hazel’s parents came across as narcissistic and manipulative and yet I’m supposed to believe, that after all the damage they caused her, they deserve to be back in her life. Okay…
Her bunny, Checkers, also just annoyed me. What was the point? She has this deep emotional connection to it…but we’re not sure why because it was never explored.
Hazel and her love interest, Nick, had absolutely zero chemistry, either platonic or romantic. I don’t see this partnership lasting very long. At all. He gave off the vibes of every mediocre, misogynistic white man I’ve ever had the displeasure of coming in contact with.
There was no one I rooted for in this story. Not the main characters and most definitely not the supporting characters. There are certain morals that you just cannot compromise when it comes to being friends with someone. The way Zoey blatantly invalidated Hazel’s experience with sexual harassment was astounding. Not only that, but she compares it to the way she feels when her girlfriend brings her to rallies and marches. The red flag is working overtime at the speed it's waving. Point blank, her character was ignorant and tone-deaf.
The character growth as it pertains to everyone was stagnant. I wish there was a more stable sense of camaraderie between the contestants, especially the girls. After the accusations against Martin came out, they should’ve banded together. Or at least some of them. But yet, it drove a bigger wedge between them than anything. While I understand this may be within the realm of believability for some, it wasn’t for me.
The plot was just…chaotic. There was too much going on all at once, yet nothing at all. Every conflict was met with a surface-level introduction and solution. The story lacked direction. Not to mention the constant TikTok references. Now, that may just be a stylistic preference on my end, but a lot of times, readers are using reading as an escape from that aspect of their life. I could look past it if it wasn’t being brought up every other chapter. It dates the book rather than making it timeless. After that, I’m also supposed to pretend the names Bella and Benji weren’t intentional?
The last straw? Hazel choosing to sing Fight Song. I draw the line there. Absolutely not. I could bear the constant pop culture references, but I will not let this slide. It wasn’t the slay she thought it was. I took off at least two stars for that alone. Atrocious.
The story had so much untapped potential and overall just felt very underdeveloped, earning it only two stars for me.
Thank you to Wattpad Books and Katie Wicks for providing me with a finished copy for PR purposes. As always, all opinions are my own and are not influenced by gifted access to this title.