Rating: 3.5 / 5
Second book in Harlequin Intrigue's "Kenner County Crime Unit" multi-author mini-series. I liked this one better than the first, but as I expected, there are issues with the continuity between books.
In this second book, forensics expert Callie MacBride finds herself in danger once again because of Vincent Del Gardo - head of a Las Vegas crime family who is on the run and believed to be responsible for murdering FBI agent Julie Grainger (which is the overall arc of the series). Callie testified against Del Gardo several years back and helped get him sentenced to jail. During the trial, Callie was under the protection of FBI agent Tom Ryan. The two fell into a relationship and Callie hoped for a future, but Tom - because of his foster child past - was afraid and left Callie.
Now with Del Gardo suspected to be in the area, another killer on the loose the she's helping investigate and after several suspicious incidents, Callie is in danger again and Tom is back to guard her. Both feel the chemistry still between them, but Callie is determined to protect herself this time around. She won't let Tom get to her again.
On its own, without considering the series connection, I enjoyed this book. Good chemistry between the H/H, and an interesting storyline...which sure isn't as developed as it could have been, but that's what you get with a 212 page book. The book itself kept me reading and I would probably, for an Intrigue book, give it a 4.
But the continuity of the series angle is lacking. The discrepancies weren't horrendous...I've read worse from an Intrigue mini-series, but they were still there and still annoying. They probably wouldn't be so obvious if you read these books spaced apart as they were published. But when you read them back to back, the inconsistencies are more glaring.
There's the fact that in the 1st book, supporting character Ben Parrish isn't shown in a favorable light and set up as a potential bad guy, but in this book that whole vibe is almost entirely missing. Then at the end of the first book, Bree sees a necklace she thinks was the strangulation murder weapon but that fact is nearly missing from this book. At the beginning of this book, Callie and Tom act like it's been years since they last saw each other, yet they were together in the same room several times in the first book. There were a bunch of things like that that just didn't match up. For someone like me who is a big fan of romantic suspense and who pays attention to the details of a story, it's rather annoying. And frustrating because you wonder why the authors couldn't communicate a little more to get things right.
Still, not a bad story and it has me wanting to keep reading the series.