Flying is a novel in three parts and two eras, a high-school aged boy from Long Island on his cross-country adventure via aerocycle, and the middle-aged man with his wife retracing his path. The first part, Taking Off, was brilliant, insightful, and hilarious, with thoughts on nostalgia, small towns, and fame. Kraft's writing here was clever, with great anecdotes, and thoughtful ideas. But after this first 175 pages, the novel starts to drag. The anecdotes become heavy-handed and long-winded, the plot starts to feel flat, and the reader just wishes the book were 200 pages shorter. Or maybe 300 pages shorter. Fortunately, the last section of the novel, with the protagonist in New Mexico, winds up the novel on an amusing note about the teenage years for geeky kids. [return][return]This novel felt like it should have been split up. There were too many ideas, themes, and most of all, too many words for one book. A heavier hand by the editor would have been valuable as well. Still, for readers with time on their hands and the willingness to slog through some excess prose, the best parts of this novel are well worth it.