This was a story with a lot of potential that felt like a modern retelling of an Arabian fable. (It's kind of implied that the two main characters end up being the ancestors of the genie we know in Aladdin.)
That said, the book felt more like a first draft than a complete thing. It left me with many questions, but before I get to those...
What I liked about this book:
• Vinn and Ulika as a couple had chemistry. I enjoyed that they already knew each other before the story begins, although the extent of their relationship isn't established.
I wanted more romance-y things with them and I was kind of disappointed with how little of it we got.
Now, on what I disliked:
• It was unclear how the curse came to be. Vinn moved some rocks and Ulika found a golden lamp and she kept it to herself and that somehow set the curse off. It's also implied the goat guy god was behind it. Overall, the curse felt lazily done, as though not enough thought was put into it.
• The evil monsters of the book are also really easily defeated. The entire book was Vinn and Ulika travelling to their lair to defeat them but not once during their travel did they talk about the sand devils, what they do and how they might kill them. Most of the travel was spent them anguishing over being in love with each other and trying not to kiss and, don't get me wrong, I was super into that, it vaguely gave me the same vibes as Mulder and Scully from The X Files, but I would have liked for there to be more... something about the monsters of this book.
It really felt that the author wanted there to be an external conflict so they have the two characters do shippy things in the desert. And I was really into the shippy thing, but it felt like there was ultimately no purpose behind the sand devils.
• It is revealed in the end that Ulika is a fire mage and just ??? There's something mentioned in the beginning about fairies and mages having a rivalry I think? I don't know, like all the ~lore in this book it wasn't really explored or developed, so I don't remember exactly what it was. Anyway, this wasn't addressed at all when it's mentioned in the end. Which should be, seeing that Vinn is a fairy? I get that the two were drowning in their pheromones and wanted to bang after that slosburn in the desert, but still.
Was Ulika somehow left in the desert and her "family" found her? Is everyone in her family a fire mage too? Or a mage in general?
Also, how come she, a mage, is mortal and Vinn is immortal and a fairy turned god? The hierarchy if gods, faeries and mages is never properly developed either.
• Vinn isn't really punished in the end and if anything, Ulika gains powers (or it's confirmed she had them all along, idk, not properly developed). There is this ~warning that their offspring may end up the genie from Aladdin but it's unclear how they will actually get trapped in the lamp, just that this ~might happen. And anyway, didn't the goddess Justice take the lamp to store it away after they trapped the monsters inside? How would it reach their offspring so we get the Aladdin genie? I really think that this was added just so we, the readers, would read the part about being trapped in a lamp and having to grant 3 wishes and hope that one of them is that the genie is freed, so we go "omg! That's just like in Aladdin!" And I did like the correlation but that didn't last.
Overall, everything felt rushed and as though the writer didn't really feel like properly developing her world-building.
I was initially going to do a three star rating but ultimately the only thing I liked about his book were Ulika and Vinn's romantic scenes and we didn't even get enough of those. We could have at least gotten a proper love making scene that another half-bootied "they made love and then also wandered around this garden of paradise and lived happily ever after".