In Graveyard Gods, the first book in the Raider and The Rapier series, Daniel & Arneson invite readers to join a rollicking adventure. The setting involves ships, underwater tombs, and dangerous cities. The story starts with a bang and rarely slows down.
The main characters are well-rounded and memorable. Edmond Mondego, a grave robber and alchemist, seeks a God Grave hoping the hidden magic will allow him to bring back his murdered wife's soul. Instead of immense power, he finds an imprisoned goddess. Edmond's profane profession and notoriety make him a target of the Lord Captain Augustin Mora, newly appointed commander of His Imperial Majesty's Ship Intrepid. Things get complicated when unexpected events will force them to cooperate.
I absolutely loved Edmond's chapters. His cunning and guile make him intriguing. His deep love for his murdered wife makes him relatable. His interactions with others, especially with the mentioned goddess, are always fun. Augustin, on the other hand, is a much stiffer character. Definitely likable, but I felt his chapters lacked the spark and strength of Mondego's POV. I also felt Mora's chapters had weaker structure and lower stakes. In consequence, I impatiently looked for Edmond's POV while trudging through other POV.
Graveyard Gods tells a great story powered by great ideas. Unfortunately, it needs another pass of editing to make the writing stronger (you'll find a bit of everything here: grammar errors, misspellings, awkward similes, weird sentence structure). This book can shine - it has strong characters, a great plot, and a fascinating setting. With the help of a ruthless editor, it can shake the Nautical Fantasy charts.
7/10