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426 pages, Kindle Edition
Published September 19, 2022
3☆. spoilers ahead.
A Taste of Torment was derivative, predictable, filled with unclear lore and worldbuilding, lacked a consistent plot, and featured a cookie-cutter romance between a bad boy who's actually a gentleman and a girl who the reader isn't supposed to find annoying but does anyway.
And I had a pretty good time with it.
All the things I just said were entirely true--I didn't come out of this experience not noticing the issues with it, but the end--the little twist in the romance plot--still gagged me a bit, and I found myself invested in these characters. Am I going to suggest this novel to someone who wants something of the type of the series this one was clearly taking inspiration from (The Folk of the Air, Zodiac Academy, etc.)? No, because, as I said, there are issues with it. The one that would not stop popping out and irritating me was the inconsistency of the characters, particularly Candice.
She trusts Jarron--and develops to a point where she believes he wouldn't have hurt her sister--but can't tell him that to his face because she actually doesn't believe it... even though she convinced the reader that she does. She finds Jarron's aggressive and possessive side sexy, but he better not say that she's his or that'll really make her angry... unless she's in the mood for it. She kind of likes that she may soon have enough power and influence as Jarron's girlfriend to have him take out whoever she wants him to, or do it herself, but Jarron also isn't allowed to kill anyone because, you know, that's wrong--especially if it results from Jarron's power because she doesn't want to utilize his power... even though she said she did. She values her friendship with Jarron and doesn't want to lose him, except when his demon comes out, and then she's gotta take a second to rethink her choice in close pals.
That's not to mention the lore and plot oddities, like the ending of this trying to imply that Liz was chosen as Jarron's mate by his demon, but that Jarron is somehow a seperate entity that loves Candice--but then the demon goes out of his way to say that he and Jarron are the same. Or how Trevor seemed like public enemy number one for five seconds and then was just a naughty brother that made a bad choice. Or how Candice kept bouncing back and forth between what she thought about Jarron, despite literally going through development to like him. She legit spent most of the book realizing he was a good guy only to say, "Well, actually I don't know that for sure," (which, fair; he would absolutely murder someone if he wanted to, but according to Candice thus far--unless he's in demon form--that's a part of his charm), only to think about it for five seconds once she was on her own and deciding, "Actually, I do know, and I like him." Only to change her mind when she saw him transform. Like, she literally thought he'd kill her, even though she said she believed he wouldn't hurt her and that she understands he is the beast (which she also denies within, like, two chapters).
But at the same time, did the Liz being Jarron's mate thing have me raising my eyebrows in interest despite knowing perfectly well that Jarron and Candice are super-duper lovey-dove soulmates? Hell yeah it did. Did the drama that and Candice's inconsideration of Jarron's feelings bring about make me widen my eyes in shock? Yes they did. Did the presence of this not-so-independent entity inside Jarron make me intrigued about what the hell Jarron actually is and what his history might be? You bet your ass. No, A Taste of Torment isn't what I would call a good YA fantasy, and I don't even know if I could call it 100% entertaining--but it got me. It made me want to read the rest of the series. Did it really need to do anything else?