When an evil lord goes to military school, the voluminous opportunities to overindulge in bribery scandals, instigate interagency corruption, and garner a flock of pretty ladies are sure to consume all of one's time, right? Somehow, Liam Sera Banfield keeps screwing up all of his best-laid plans at becoming a scourge of the cosmos. Not all of his plans go awry, but most of them do, and when that happens, there's a feud to settle, a mech prototype to test, and a clumsy mechanic in a swimsuit groveling at his feet.
I'M THE EVIL LORD OF AN INTERGALACTIC EMPIRE v4 continues the steady drip of situational irony that ensures Liam's ongoing success. The volume teeters, however, with how it invests in following the young man as he completes what amounts to vocational school. This novel probably could have told the same story with one-quarter fewer pages. On the plus side, waiting on the wings of Liam's lazy days in military training, enemies are roused into action and rivals surface will ill intent. Everyone is scheming to take out House Banfield, although mostly corrupt nobles with deep connections to overpowered pirates.
In any case, the current novel covers roughly a dozen years, including Liam's stint through the Algrand Empire Imperial Military Academy (six years), practical armed forces training (two years), and patrol work in the army reserve force (four years). The novel is structured such that much of these efforts are rudimentary. Narratively speaking, this is a deliberate move on the part of the author (e.g., Liam is vocally bored), because the final few chapters of the book thrust the young noble into a massive conflict, featuring tens of thousands of ships. The wild and directionless chaos of the book's culmination is awkward but fun. The buildup and the payoff aren't equal; but in a novel series in which the lead character is fated to subvert expectations (often by accident), one should anticipate nothing less.
EVIL LORD v4 splits its time between Liam's work at military school and the sordid affairs of House Berkely. Casimilo Berkeley, a baron, recruits all sorts of baddies to scheme up plans to stamp out House Banfield. Hundreds of thousands of ships? Underhanded alliances with pirates? Paying off delinquent nobles to fill out the ranks? The intrigue offers a fun, if predictable glimpse into the life of an incompetent foe. The novel's real fun rests in how Liam unwittingly subverts each of House Berkeley's efforts. Building up his private fleet of soldiers? Disrupting pirated shipping lanes? Putting delinquent nobles in their place?
However amusing the scenario of two competing noble houses sharpening their blades upon one another's territory, one must first acknowledge that much of this conflict manifests in the abstract. In short, the conflict between House Berkeley and House Banfield all comes down to paperwork: plans and plots and shenanigans that come about not through war-room strategizing but from a disciplined economic heatmap. EVIL LORD v4 reveals one of the novel series' inherent faults: Due to the accidental nature of Liam's fortune, readers are continuously deprived of the intrigue native to legitimate strategy. Defeating conspiracy with convenience may be fun, but it's also excruciatingly contrived.
One might argue the author sought to counter-navigate the generic inevitability of Liam's clash with House Berkeley with an occasional aside affirming the young man's awareness of the rival noble, but readers are granted multiple helping hands throughout the volume. For example, Tia and Marie, the dual knights in Liam's service, when not conducting brilliant military maneuvers, hilariously scrap and fight every chance they get. The author encourages readers to overlook the former (serious, plot-driven events) for the latter (comical, character-defining episodes). Blink and miss the fact that Tia is a superb operations strategist. Blink and miss how Marie's mech has four arms that wield indestructible energy axes and massive chainsaw beam swords.
Nevertheless, readers can take solace in the plodding nature of Liam's occasional bouts of underhanded kindness. When the young noble is approached by a pair of crafty merchants seeking self-enrichment, Liam shrugs his shoulders and brings them onboard. When the drunk heir of a marquis badmouths Amagi, everyone's favorite android lady, it's quite clear the man will not live to see another day. When Nias accidentally reveals she's wearing "plain and practical" boy shorts, rather than frilly and feminine underthings, and Liam blushes, readers are reminded that the inelegant factory engineer is the chief designer of the young noble's most deliciously brutal weapons of war.