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Grey Stone
In the land of the great red sun, dogs sing, wolves kill, humans serve, and wolf-shifters rule with magic and menace. Pietre is a human boy who has spent the last thirteen years afraid of the sunset, the Blodguard, and the wolf-shifting masters who rule his world. Wittendon is a werewolf prince who has spent the last nineteen years afraid of his father, his inability to do magic, and the upcoming tournament he's sure to lose. But when Pietre finds an orphaned pup in the woods and Wittendon is forced to arrest the boy's father soon after, both of them begin to realize that keeping the rules might be just as terrifying as breaking them. Now serf and master must learn to cut through their own prejudices and work together in order to turn their world before it turns on them. Grey Stone is a story of dogs who talk, wolves who kill, and a stone that-for better or worse-can change all that.
388 pages, Paperback
Published August 24, 2019
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Jean Knight Pace
25 books80 followersJean Knight Pace is the author of the young adult novels Grey Stone and Grey Lore. She has had work published in Puerto del Sol, The Lakeview Review, and other literary magazines. She’s also written for Dollar Stretcher and Authors Publish. She has a BA in music and an MFA in creative writing. She lives in southern Indiana with her husband, four children, ten ducks, and a cat. She blogs at jeanknightpace.com and tastycheapskate.blogspot.com.
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January 25, 2019
An unusual world
I enjoyed this. A cleverly crafted world with different species all with their own place. Humans are at the bottom. This has one young protagonist and overall has a young, clean feel but some attention is required to follow everything.
I enjoyed this. A cleverly crafted world with different species all with their own place. Humans are at the bottom. This has one young protagonist and overall has a young, clean feel but some attention is required to follow everything.
May 26, 2018
Thank you to Netgalley for providing me an advanced reader copy in exchange for my honest review.
I really struggled to make myself read this one.
It's a great and imaginative idea, it just really fell flat on the execution for me.
It read very dry, I struggled to feel connected to the characters and the magic was a bit hard for me to wrap my head around.
It had a lot of potential but just wasn't for me I don't think.
I really struggled to make myself read this one.
It's a great and imaginative idea, it just really fell flat on the execution for me.
It read very dry, I struggled to feel connected to the characters and the magic was a bit hard for me to wrap my head around.
It had a lot of potential but just wasn't for me I don't think.
October 17, 2016
NOTE: I received a free ebook copy from the author in exchange for an honest review.
Well, this was a unique tale! I’ve honestly never read anything like it. The whole idea was very creative and…different.
THE RUNDOWN
This is a werewolf story, but before you say, “Ew, gross, no. Not one of those” let me assure you this is NOT some cheesy, romantic interpretation of werewolves. (Because just…no. Not my thing.) These are proper, vicious, epic, shapeshifting people who’d probably eat you if you tried to pet them, no matter how cuddly and soft their fur may appear. They’ve got super powerful magic and live for like a badrillion years and are horrible and awesome at the same time! I didn’t know I could actually like werewolves…? But these were really cool!
In this world, there are four main species—the werewolves, the normal wolves, the dogs, and the humans. The werewolves rule. Not as in they’re cool, man (though I suppose they’re that, too), but as in they actually rule. Like, reign over and oppress the entire world type of rule. Fun times, fun times. Then you got the wolves who are a little below the werewolves, then the dogs, then the poor humans who live in cramped little villages and should really probably bathe more. But, ya know, they CAN’T worry about personal hygiene because they’re too busy working to death for the werewolves and living in awful close quarters and, oh yeah, they’ll get eaten by wolves if they go outside at night. We will not judge them for forgetting to shower now and again.
All the species are very human-like because they can talk, wolves and dogs included. The werewolves basically are human, being as how one of their forms are, well, human. Their other form is wolfish, but they still walk on two legs and all that. And they can turn from wolf-form to human-form at will at any time, which is good fun. Like I said, the werewolves were really cool. Buuuut I wasn’t wild about the talking dogs/wolves bit.
I haven’t really read many talking animal stories, so I didn’t realize this about myself, but I don’t think I like them much. Then again, Narnia is one of the greatest creations on this earth. And there were cats in this story that talked as well, and I loved that part. So maybe it’s something about talking dogs…? I don’t know. I think I’ve been exposed to too many overly-cheesy talking dog movies that perhaps turned me off the idea. Either way, the talking dogs just weren’t my thing. I couldn’t get into that aspect. BUT. This is an entirely “it’s me, not you” deal. The authors did a wonderful job portraying the dogs and weaving their story into the overall plot. I’m just personally not a fan of talking dogs…apparently.
Speaking of the plot…
THE PLOT
The plot was MAGNIFICENT! It’s a royal-and-peasant-come-together-to-bring-down-corrupt-government type of tale, which I’m always a fan of. There’s a reason the dogs and wolves can talk and the humans are oppressed and the werewolves rule and all the thiiings. There’s basically a reason for everything. (But spoilers, sweetie.) And the DEPTH of this plot! There was so. very. much. going on. The plot made me think. I love when plots do that! It was no straight line of a plot. More like a looping, tangled mess of murder and secrets and scandals and revelations. Ah yes, good times.
There were also many a twist and reveal, one or two that I was not expecting. Let’s have a big HUZZAH for fun plot twists!
Now sometimes the plot was a bit…odd. Just the whole feel of the story was very different. But it certainly kept me turning the pages!
CHARACTERS
Obviously we must discuss the characters. This book had some precious babies.
Pietre and Humphrey are two of our main characters. Pietre is a 13 year old, little human boy who just needs to be hugged and protected. BECAUSE HE IS PRECIOUS. He’s sweet and adorable and still very often totally a playful, curious little thing, but he’s got a good heart! And even though his life is basically THE. WORST. he still pushes on and finds his bravery.
Then we’ve got Humphrey who is, in fact, a dog. Even though the talking dog bits weren’t my favorite, they were masterfully done. Humphrey was a dog, through and through. Sure, he can talk and had human-like intelligence, but he’s also mischievous and playful and hyper, and all around dog-like.
You put these two together and EVERYTHING IS ADORABLE. They’re seriously the cutest things—a boy and his dog.
And then there’s Wittendon. Oooh, Wittendon. MY FAVORITE. He’s our werewolf prince who’s lived his whole life with a blind eye toward the unfairness his people inflict on the rest of the world. But he has a weakness, or what he perceives as a weakness—sympathy. AND LET ME JUST HUG THIS BOY, OKAY??? Poor Wittendon is magic-less, in a magic-centered race. Prince or not, his people do not look at him kindly. He struggles to fit in, and realizes maybe he doesn’t want to fit in anyway. His journey was what made this book for me. And he dominated the majority of the story. Which made me a HAPPY BOOK-EATER because I really didn’t care about anyone else’s parts nearly as much as his. Oops?
My other favorite was Zinnegael. She was so…whimsical. Always calm, if not a bit spacey, and mysterious and all around epic. There was not nearly enough of her. SHE WAS AMAZING.
There were quite a few others as well. Such as Sarak, Wittendon’s best friend. He was hilarious and fun and totally precious. I loved Sarak! Sadora, Sarak’s sister, wasn’t my favorite. She was maybe a bit to…high and mighty for my taste? I don’t know. I didn’t hate her by any means, and the part she played in the story was quite fascinating. I just couldn’t get into her quite as much as some of the others.
Then there’s our main villain, the werewolf king, Crespin, who I DETESTED. Seriously, someone needs to stab that man in the face. A.K.A he was an epic villain, I approve. (What? Hating the villain is fun!)
Lastly, TALKING MAGICAL CATS. You can never, ever go wrong with magical cats. They were some of the best parts of the story. And having cats in a doggy dog world, well, it’s fun. *grins*
There are probably a billion other characters I’m forgetting at the moment. But, needless to say, it was a very cool, diverse cast and I highly approve.
WITTENDON, PEOPLE.
Unfortunately, as fun as the plot and characters were, the overall feel of the novel wasn’t my thing. The narration was rather omniscient—a fair amount of head-hopping going on—and pretty much the whole time I felt as though I was being told a story instead of actually living it. Now, much of the writing was very beautiful, but there was always this slight distance that kept me from ever really immersing into the world. Like I was watching the events through a window instead of being out there in the thick of things…if that makes sense. I like stories that utterly transport me into them, and this one just never did that.
The whole thing also had this rather…glum feel to it. I don’t know how else to put it. The werewolves and wolves were so vicious and horrible to the humans, the dogs were a bit standoffish and selfish at times, and the humans’ conditions were of course terrible. The world was extremely unique and interesting, but something about the way it felt just wasn’t my type of thing.
BUT. All the qualms I had with this book are entirely personal preferences. Such as with the talking dogs. The writing was very beautiful and the world creative, I just don’t think this is my type of book too much. But if it intrigues you, I absolutely say give it a try! Because some of the stuff that bothered me, are things other people might love. It’s all personal preference.
Content Cautions
This is a YA book, but it was all quite gory and dark. There are a lot of fights. With much blood and death and pain. So many ears getting torn. o.o I declare by the end of it, every single character had part of their ear torn off. But hey, this is about dogs and wolves. They have TEETH. Ear biting happens. Just do be cautious, because it’s not exactly always a happy book, and you will see much blood.
There’s also much, MUCH magic. As I said, the werewolves are magic-using creatures, and magic plays a huge role in the story. So if that’s not your thing, be aware.
One thing that did particularly bother me was the mention of gods. There were supposedly two gods—the God of the White Sun and God of the Red Sun. At first it seemed like that was going to be a pretty big factor in the story, but after the beginning the whole mention of the gods kinda fizzled out. I got the impression some characters even thought they were more myths than anything. Still, I’m never happy of the idea of fake gods.
There’s also a plot thread that involves someone having intimacy out of wedlock in their past. Now, it was only hinted at, never even sort of shown, and happened before the current events of the story. So it was handled delicately and didn’t bother me too much, but I want you guys to be aware of things before diving into any book I recommend. And, kinda similar to this, there’s mention of a wolf breeding with other wolves and dogs. I didn’t really know how to feel about this. Because they are wolves and dogs, but they’re also…rather human-ish intelligent-wise in this story so…? I don’t know. It was just kinda weird…
What I was very happy to see was the fact that there’s wasn’t a stitch of foul language. And, though there was a touch of romance, the overall plot took complete dominance, and the romance was mostly in the background. I feel like that’s usually the opposite with YAs… Huzzah for YAs that have plots other than romance!
Conclusion
At 338 pages, this book may appear kinda long, but once you start reading, it’s not at all. The pacing is action-packed, with surprises and intrigue on every page. If anything it could have stood to be LONGER. Some scenes I felt were almost too fast. But it kept me reading, that’s for sure! I will say, the last half of the book is much better than the first half. For the first whole half of the book I wasn’t sure how into it I was, but then once I got to the halfway mark I had a hard time putting it down. And the CLIMAX. It. Was. Epic. Like keep-me-up-late-reading-even-though-I-had-to-get-up-early-for-work-the-next-day kinda epic. I JUST HAD TO FINISH IT.
Overall, I didn’t love this story, but I had an enjoyable time reading it. The plot was excellent, the premise unique, the characters a lot of fun. It’s the kind of book I feel like young boys would absolutely love. (Though due to the content maybe not too young.) It’s fast, and action-packed, and, ya know, has cuddly/killer werewolves. How can you go wrong? Also WITTENDON. JUST READ IT FOR WITTENDON OKAY?
Review originally posted on my blog:
http://musingsofanelf.blogspot.com/2016/10/book-review-grey-stone-by-jean-knight.html
Well, this was a unique tale! I’ve honestly never read anything like it. The whole idea was very creative and…different.
THE RUNDOWN
This is a werewolf story, but before you say, “Ew, gross, no. Not one of those” let me assure you this is NOT some cheesy, romantic interpretation of werewolves. (Because just…no. Not my thing.) These are proper, vicious, epic, shapeshifting people who’d probably eat you if you tried to pet them, no matter how cuddly and soft their fur may appear. They’ve got super powerful magic and live for like a badrillion years and are horrible and awesome at the same time! I didn’t know I could actually like werewolves…? But these were really cool!
In this world, there are four main species—the werewolves, the normal wolves, the dogs, and the humans. The werewolves rule. Not as in they’re cool, man (though I suppose they’re that, too), but as in they actually rule. Like, reign over and oppress the entire world type of rule. Fun times, fun times. Then you got the wolves who are a little below the werewolves, then the dogs, then the poor humans who live in cramped little villages and should really probably bathe more. But, ya know, they CAN’T worry about personal hygiene because they’re too busy working to death for the werewolves and living in awful close quarters and, oh yeah, they’ll get eaten by wolves if they go outside at night. We will not judge them for forgetting to shower now and again.
All the species are very human-like because they can talk, wolves and dogs included. The werewolves basically are human, being as how one of their forms are, well, human. Their other form is wolfish, but they still walk on two legs and all that. And they can turn from wolf-form to human-form at will at any time, which is good fun. Like I said, the werewolves were really cool. Buuuut I wasn’t wild about the talking dogs/wolves bit.
I haven’t really read many talking animal stories, so I didn’t realize this about myself, but I don’t think I like them much. Then again, Narnia is one of the greatest creations on this earth. And there were cats in this story that talked as well, and I loved that part. So maybe it’s something about talking dogs…? I don’t know. I think I’ve been exposed to too many overly-cheesy talking dog movies that perhaps turned me off the idea. Either way, the talking dogs just weren’t my thing. I couldn’t get into that aspect. BUT. This is an entirely “it’s me, not you” deal. The authors did a wonderful job portraying the dogs and weaving their story into the overall plot. I’m just personally not a fan of talking dogs…apparently.
Speaking of the plot…
THE PLOT
The plot was MAGNIFICENT! It’s a royal-and-peasant-come-together-to-bring-down-corrupt-government type of tale, which I’m always a fan of. There’s a reason the dogs and wolves can talk and the humans are oppressed and the werewolves rule and all the thiiings. There’s basically a reason for everything. (But spoilers, sweetie.) And the DEPTH of this plot! There was so. very. much. going on. The plot made me think. I love when plots do that! It was no straight line of a plot. More like a looping, tangled mess of murder and secrets and scandals and revelations. Ah yes, good times.
There were also many a twist and reveal, one or two that I was not expecting. Let’s have a big HUZZAH for fun plot twists!
Now sometimes the plot was a bit…odd. Just the whole feel of the story was very different. But it certainly kept me turning the pages!
CHARACTERS
Obviously we must discuss the characters. This book had some precious babies.
Pietre and Humphrey are two of our main characters. Pietre is a 13 year old, little human boy who just needs to be hugged and protected. BECAUSE HE IS PRECIOUS. He’s sweet and adorable and still very often totally a playful, curious little thing, but he’s got a good heart! And even though his life is basically THE. WORST. he still pushes on and finds his bravery.
Then we’ve got Humphrey who is, in fact, a dog. Even though the talking dog bits weren’t my favorite, they were masterfully done. Humphrey was a dog, through and through. Sure, he can talk and had human-like intelligence, but he’s also mischievous and playful and hyper, and all around dog-like.
You put these two together and EVERYTHING IS ADORABLE. They’re seriously the cutest things—a boy and his dog.
And then there’s Wittendon. Oooh, Wittendon. MY FAVORITE. He’s our werewolf prince who’s lived his whole life with a blind eye toward the unfairness his people inflict on the rest of the world. But he has a weakness, or what he perceives as a weakness—sympathy. AND LET ME JUST HUG THIS BOY, OKAY??? Poor Wittendon is magic-less, in a magic-centered race. Prince or not, his people do not look at him kindly. He struggles to fit in, and realizes maybe he doesn’t want to fit in anyway. His journey was what made this book for me. And he dominated the majority of the story. Which made me a HAPPY BOOK-EATER because I really didn’t care about anyone else’s parts nearly as much as his. Oops?
My other favorite was Zinnegael. She was so…whimsical. Always calm, if not a bit spacey, and mysterious and all around epic. There was not nearly enough of her. SHE WAS AMAZING.
There were quite a few others as well. Such as Sarak, Wittendon’s best friend. He was hilarious and fun and totally precious. I loved Sarak! Sadora, Sarak’s sister, wasn’t my favorite. She was maybe a bit to…high and mighty for my taste? I don’t know. I didn’t hate her by any means, and the part she played in the story was quite fascinating. I just couldn’t get into her quite as much as some of the others.
Then there’s our main villain, the werewolf king, Crespin, who I DETESTED. Seriously, someone needs to stab that man in the face. A.K.A he was an epic villain, I approve. (What? Hating the villain is fun!)
Lastly, TALKING MAGICAL CATS. You can never, ever go wrong with magical cats. They were some of the best parts of the story. And having cats in a doggy dog world, well, it’s fun. *grins*
There are probably a billion other characters I’m forgetting at the moment. But, needless to say, it was a very cool, diverse cast and I highly approve.
WITTENDON, PEOPLE.
Unfortunately, as fun as the plot and characters were, the overall feel of the novel wasn’t my thing. The narration was rather omniscient—a fair amount of head-hopping going on—and pretty much the whole time I felt as though I was being told a story instead of actually living it. Now, much of the writing was very beautiful, but there was always this slight distance that kept me from ever really immersing into the world. Like I was watching the events through a window instead of being out there in the thick of things…if that makes sense. I like stories that utterly transport me into them, and this one just never did that.
The whole thing also had this rather…glum feel to it. I don’t know how else to put it. The werewolves and wolves were so vicious and horrible to the humans, the dogs were a bit standoffish and selfish at times, and the humans’ conditions were of course terrible. The world was extremely unique and interesting, but something about the way it felt just wasn’t my type of thing.
BUT. All the qualms I had with this book are entirely personal preferences. Such as with the talking dogs. The writing was very beautiful and the world creative, I just don’t think this is my type of book too much. But if it intrigues you, I absolutely say give it a try! Because some of the stuff that bothered me, are things other people might love. It’s all personal preference.
Content Cautions
This is a YA book, but it was all quite gory and dark. There are a lot of fights. With much blood and death and pain. So many ears getting torn. o.o I declare by the end of it, every single character had part of their ear torn off. But hey, this is about dogs and wolves. They have TEETH. Ear biting happens. Just do be cautious, because it’s not exactly always a happy book, and you will see much blood.
There’s also much, MUCH magic. As I said, the werewolves are magic-using creatures, and magic plays a huge role in the story. So if that’s not your thing, be aware.
One thing that did particularly bother me was the mention of gods. There were supposedly two gods—the God of the White Sun and God of the Red Sun. At first it seemed like that was going to be a pretty big factor in the story, but after the beginning the whole mention of the gods kinda fizzled out. I got the impression some characters even thought they were more myths than anything. Still, I’m never happy of the idea of fake gods.
There’s also a plot thread that involves someone having intimacy out of wedlock in their past. Now, it was only hinted at, never even sort of shown, and happened before the current events of the story. So it was handled delicately and didn’t bother me too much, but I want you guys to be aware of things before diving into any book I recommend. And, kinda similar to this, there’s mention of a wolf breeding with other wolves and dogs. I didn’t really know how to feel about this. Because they are wolves and dogs, but they’re also…rather human-ish intelligent-wise in this story so…? I don’t know. It was just kinda weird…
What I was very happy to see was the fact that there’s wasn’t a stitch of foul language. And, though there was a touch of romance, the overall plot took complete dominance, and the romance was mostly in the background. I feel like that’s usually the opposite with YAs… Huzzah for YAs that have plots other than romance!
Conclusion
At 338 pages, this book may appear kinda long, but once you start reading, it’s not at all. The pacing is action-packed, with surprises and intrigue on every page. If anything it could have stood to be LONGER. Some scenes I felt were almost too fast. But it kept me reading, that’s for sure! I will say, the last half of the book is much better than the first half. For the first whole half of the book I wasn’t sure how into it I was, but then once I got to the halfway mark I had a hard time putting it down. And the CLIMAX. It. Was. Epic. Like keep-me-up-late-reading-even-though-I-had-to-get-up-early-for-work-the-next-day kinda epic. I JUST HAD TO FINISH IT.
Overall, I didn’t love this story, but I had an enjoyable time reading it. The plot was excellent, the premise unique, the characters a lot of fun. It’s the kind of book I feel like young boys would absolutely love. (Though due to the content maybe not too young.) It’s fast, and action-packed, and, ya know, has cuddly/killer werewolves. How can you go wrong? Also WITTENDON. JUST READ IT FOR WITTENDON OKAY?
Review originally posted on my blog:
http://musingsofanelf.blogspot.com/2016/10/book-review-grey-stone-by-jean-knight.html
March 1, 2018
One-Line Summary:
The race of wolves have ruled the kingdom mercilessly for many thousands of years, walking all over the dogs and humans that live there, but is equality really worth fighting for, with everything that would be lost?
Summary:
When a dog and her pups are attacked by a wolf sent to dispose of them, Pietr doesn’t hesitate to grab the one pup that’s set at his feet, the only one of the litter he can save, and take it back to his village. When the mother arrives not long after and collapses at his doorstep, his mother tends to her wounds and soon buries her after the dog succumbs. But in the attack, one of the King’s wolves is killed, and it’s a crime to kill a wolf, punishable by death. As the dog is no longer around to pay for her crime, guilt falls on the shoulders of those who aided her, and Pietre hides, helpless, as his father is carted away to what will surely be his death.
On the other side of the kingdom, Prince Wittendon is gearing up for the Motteral Mal, a massive tournament held among the wolves every hundred years. As the king’s eldest, it’s his job to win against the fierce competition. Only, there’s one problem: he’s verlorn. He has no magic. It’s practically a death sentence against all the powerful magic users he’ll be facing in the tournament, and as talented as his best friend and mentor Sarak is, not even his training can fix that.
It is Wittendon who is sent to the village to retrieve Pietre’s father, who sacrifices himself rather than letting the wolves take his wife. When he leaves, he touches foreheads with his wife—a gesture that is inconceivable among the wolves. Wittendon is intrigued by this closeness and warmth share between family members. This interest only deepens when he notices Pietre risking his life to sneak to the mines to visit his father. The more Wittendon thinks about it, the more it seems these humans aren’t the weak, pathetic animals wolves consider them to be.
All the while, a storm is brewing that’s been centuries in the making. There’s disrest among the humans, but they’re too weak to fight. There’s disrest among the dogs, but they refuse to fight. There’s disrest among the wolves, but they have no reason to fight. Yet somehow, something must be done before the wolves become too powerful and the other two races are crushed beneath their paws.
The Positives:
- There is something about this writing style that I’m just absolutely in love with. I said this when I read Grey Lore, and I’ll say it again. It’s very folklore-ish and just invokes a wonderful feeling that transports me into the plot and takes me along for a ride. There weren’t any major scenes that jumped out at me as being dull or boring. It moved along quick enough to keep my attention and always leave me wanting more, but slow enough where I wasn’t lost in the lack of details somewhere.
- Zinnegael is an easy favorite, since her character is just brilliant. She’s smart and witty and powerful and obviously has it all figured out. I love the cat-and-mouse game she plays with the king. She’s a bit overpowered, but it’s not overdone and she has her limitations. I just really enjoyed her. I’d go have tea with her any day, if only I were invited.
- I need a Humphrey. He’s such a good boy. He’s loyal to Pietre, but strong and adorable. He knows there’s no place for him in this world, as the dogs won’t take him and the wolves want him dead, yet he’s determined to make one for himself and refuses to give up. 10/10 would give a bone.
- The lore is really marvelously done. Worldbuilding isn’t easy, but I slipped into this world quite nicely and loved the way it was built up and the lore and tales that are told about the world. It really brought the setting to life, and they were foreboding and lovely to read.
- The moral questions that are raised in this are poignant and meaningful. Because nothing comes easy, right? Not even for Wittendon and especially not for anyone else in the kingdom. There were so many issues that were explored, from class issues to race issues to loyalty and sacrifice and love and destiny. None of them felt like lectures or after-school specials, but they arose naturally because that’s what the characters themselves were facing. There was just so much depth there, and because these are pertinent issues in life, it made me connect to the characters all the more.
- I laughed. I cried. I swore a few times. As I said before, I was pretty invested in these characters because I connected with them, and they pretty much run the gamut personality-wise. Each character had their own personal challenges and backstories that were slowly drudged up and placed nicely into the plot in the appropriate places, right where they tugged at my heartstrings the most. Everyone has secrets, and nothing is as it first seems.
The Negatives:
- I was already familiar with this world and still ended up confused at the beginning. The feeling didn’t last long, but it did take a little while for me to get my bearings when I started the book and get a feel for the setting. I wasn’t sure what to expect, and since it’s a high fantasy, it took a little time for it to actually make sense.
- I was a bit disappointed with Zinder’s role. I won’t say much because spoilers, but it seemed like he was going to play this major, pivotal role, and he sort of did, but it wasn’t really what I was expecting. Maybe I just misread where it was going, but I didn’t like the way his arc ended. It felt sudden and anticlimactic, considering how it was built up. He seemed to be shaping up to be a really interesting character, and I felt like he ended up more as a deus ex machina than anything.
- The plot twists were somewhat predictable. Then again, I’ve been told I’m really good at spotting plot twists or predicting how something is going to end, so there’s that. However, by the time the most pivotal moments came, it was old news. Most of the time, I already knew what the big reveal was going to be. Still, that didn’t make the scenes any more boring. Actually, I was almost more excited to see how it was going to go down, since I knew it was coming.
Overall:
So, I read Grey Lore first because I didn’t realize they were related, which is probably not a great idea. The two books can stand alone, but some of the characters make a reappearance in Grey Lore, so it makes more sense to start here. I mean, that being said, I was very excited to see the old characters I loved from that have a place here. Writing this review was hard, because while I really enjoyed the book and would highly recommend it, I feel like everything is woven so tightly together that I can’t boil the plot down all that easily and I’m not sure how much I can give away without actually ruining it. Everything works together like a well-rehearsed dance, where everything happens exactly when and where it needs to, and I don’t want to be the clumsy oaf barreling through knocking everyone else over. So all I can say is that it was a great read, and I would highly recommend it.
Disclaimer: I received a free copy of this from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
The race of wolves have ruled the kingdom mercilessly for many thousands of years, walking all over the dogs and humans that live there, but is equality really worth fighting for, with everything that would be lost?
Summary:
When a dog and her pups are attacked by a wolf sent to dispose of them, Pietr doesn’t hesitate to grab the one pup that’s set at his feet, the only one of the litter he can save, and take it back to his village. When the mother arrives not long after and collapses at his doorstep, his mother tends to her wounds and soon buries her after the dog succumbs. But in the attack, one of the King’s wolves is killed, and it’s a crime to kill a wolf, punishable by death. As the dog is no longer around to pay for her crime, guilt falls on the shoulders of those who aided her, and Pietre hides, helpless, as his father is carted away to what will surely be his death.
On the other side of the kingdom, Prince Wittendon is gearing up for the Motteral Mal, a massive tournament held among the wolves every hundred years. As the king’s eldest, it’s his job to win against the fierce competition. Only, there’s one problem: he’s verlorn. He has no magic. It’s practically a death sentence against all the powerful magic users he’ll be facing in the tournament, and as talented as his best friend and mentor Sarak is, not even his training can fix that.
It is Wittendon who is sent to the village to retrieve Pietre’s father, who sacrifices himself rather than letting the wolves take his wife. When he leaves, he touches foreheads with his wife—a gesture that is inconceivable among the wolves. Wittendon is intrigued by this closeness and warmth share between family members. This interest only deepens when he notices Pietre risking his life to sneak to the mines to visit his father. The more Wittendon thinks about it, the more it seems these humans aren’t the weak, pathetic animals wolves consider them to be.
All the while, a storm is brewing that’s been centuries in the making. There’s disrest among the humans, but they’re too weak to fight. There’s disrest among the dogs, but they refuse to fight. There’s disrest among the wolves, but they have no reason to fight. Yet somehow, something must be done before the wolves become too powerful and the other two races are crushed beneath their paws.
The Positives:
- There is something about this writing style that I’m just absolutely in love with. I said this when I read Grey Lore, and I’ll say it again. It’s very folklore-ish and just invokes a wonderful feeling that transports me into the plot and takes me along for a ride. There weren’t any major scenes that jumped out at me as being dull or boring. It moved along quick enough to keep my attention and always leave me wanting more, but slow enough where I wasn’t lost in the lack of details somewhere.
- Zinnegael is an easy favorite, since her character is just brilliant. She’s smart and witty and powerful and obviously has it all figured out. I love the cat-and-mouse game she plays with the king. She’s a bit overpowered, but it’s not overdone and she has her limitations. I just really enjoyed her. I’d go have tea with her any day, if only I were invited.
- I need a Humphrey. He’s such a good boy. He’s loyal to Pietre, but strong and adorable. He knows there’s no place for him in this world, as the dogs won’t take him and the wolves want him dead, yet he’s determined to make one for himself and refuses to give up. 10/10 would give a bone.
- The lore is really marvelously done. Worldbuilding isn’t easy, but I slipped into this world quite nicely and loved the way it was built up and the lore and tales that are told about the world. It really brought the setting to life, and they were foreboding and lovely to read.
- The moral questions that are raised in this are poignant and meaningful. Because nothing comes easy, right? Not even for Wittendon and especially not for anyone else in the kingdom. There were so many issues that were explored, from class issues to race issues to loyalty and sacrifice and love and destiny. None of them felt like lectures or after-school specials, but they arose naturally because that’s what the characters themselves were facing. There was just so much depth there, and because these are pertinent issues in life, it made me connect to the characters all the more.
- I laughed. I cried. I swore a few times. As I said before, I was pretty invested in these characters because I connected with them, and they pretty much run the gamut personality-wise. Each character had their own personal challenges and backstories that were slowly drudged up and placed nicely into the plot in the appropriate places, right where they tugged at my heartstrings the most. Everyone has secrets, and nothing is as it first seems.
The Negatives:
- I was already familiar with this world and still ended up confused at the beginning. The feeling didn’t last long, but it did take a little while for me to get my bearings when I started the book and get a feel for the setting. I wasn’t sure what to expect, and since it’s a high fantasy, it took a little time for it to actually make sense.
- I was a bit disappointed with Zinder’s role. I won’t say much because spoilers, but it seemed like he was going to play this major, pivotal role, and he sort of did, but it wasn’t really what I was expecting. Maybe I just misread where it was going, but I didn’t like the way his arc ended. It felt sudden and anticlimactic, considering how it was built up. He seemed to be shaping up to be a really interesting character, and I felt like he ended up more as a deus ex machina than anything.
- The plot twists were somewhat predictable. Then again, I’ve been told I’m really good at spotting plot twists or predicting how something is going to end, so there’s that. However, by the time the most pivotal moments came, it was old news. Most of the time, I already knew what the big reveal was going to be. Still, that didn’t make the scenes any more boring. Actually, I was almost more excited to see how it was going to go down, since I knew it was coming.
Overall:
So, I read Grey Lore first because I didn’t realize they were related, which is probably not a great idea. The two books can stand alone, but some of the characters make a reappearance in Grey Lore, so it makes more sense to start here. I mean, that being said, I was very excited to see the old characters I loved from that have a place here. Writing this review was hard, because while I really enjoyed the book and would highly recommend it, I feel like everything is woven so tightly together that I can’t boil the plot down all that easily and I’m not sure how much I can give away without actually ruining it. Everything works together like a well-rehearsed dance, where everything happens exactly when and where it needs to, and I don’t want to be the clumsy oaf barreling through knocking everyone else over. So all I can say is that it was a great read, and I would highly recommend it.
Disclaimer: I received a free copy of this from NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
April 20, 2018
Thank you netgalley for this e arc!
This was freaking amazing! This is so much different than any other werewolf book I've read. Usually they have to hide but this is a world where humans are the slaves! It is about time where humans weren't the center of attention. Loved it!
This was freaking amazing! This is so much different than any other werewolf book I've read. Usually they have to hide but this is a world where humans are the slaves! It is about time where humans weren't the center of attention. Loved it!
May 5, 2022
I love wolves!
What a world these authors have created!
High epic fantasy with twists and turns that you begin to think to have no end, but somehow, they do! A very definite wonderful read!
But don't start unless you have the time! It won't let you put it down!
What a world these authors have created!
High epic fantasy with twists and turns that you begin to think to have no end, but somehow, they do! A very definite wonderful read!
But don't start unless you have the time! It won't let you put it down!
August 24, 2016
-I was given a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review-
I went into this book with not very high expectations. I'm given copies of books from new authors from time to time for reviews, and sometimes...they're just not very good. Good news: This book was an exception!
The book starts out in a fantasy land where there are four different races of creatures: humans, dogs, wolves, and werewolves. The balance has shifted so that the werewolves are the ruling class, the wolves and dogs somewhere below them, and humans are no better than foul creatures. I normally have a hard time with anthropomorphic animals (see: Redwall, Watership Down, The Warriors series), but I really enjoyed the story.
I loved the world building the author did- every place from the dirtiest human hovel to the palace of the werewolf king and in between had a rich texture to it. She describes the setting so well, you can actually see it. She also has a great way of imbuing each setting with history without making you feel like you're reading an entire history book (see: Tolkien).
I really enjoyed the characters as well. I loved the character of Wittendon. At first I kind of thought he was a wimp, but the way Pace writes him, he grows up a long with the story. At the end, he's a thoughtful and sympathetic character, who contains bravery but also has flaws. Very relateable. I loved Sadora. Because she's smart. And she kicks serious butt! Pietre and Humphrey were also very sweet characters and I enjoyed their stories, but they didn't seem to be as fleshed out as Wittendon. However, my favorite character was Zinnegael. I loved her spunkiness, her quirkness, her love of baking, and the cats! I am entirely a cat person so they appealed to me a little more than the dogs :)
The story was rocking, from the very beginning. As I said, I did not have high expectations and was pleasantly surprised to find myself sucked in, staying up late to read just one chapter more!
So why not five stars? Some of the writing was a little stilted and I had a hard time with the descriptions of the werewolves- what did they look like? Human form? Wolken form? And they talked and walked around on their back legs? Doesn't that seem a little...I don't know...Ninja Turtle-ish? Eh, not the author's fault...I just have a hard time taking a talking animal seriously.
Overall, a great book and a really fun read. I'm pretty picky and for me to have enjoyed it this much, means it's something special. I think fans of the Redwall, Wings of Fire, and Warriors Series especially would really enjoy this book.
I plan on putting my copy in my school library and recommending it to all my students!
I went into this book with not very high expectations. I'm given copies of books from new authors from time to time for reviews, and sometimes...they're just not very good. Good news: This book was an exception!
The book starts out in a fantasy land where there are four different races of creatures: humans, dogs, wolves, and werewolves. The balance has shifted so that the werewolves are the ruling class, the wolves and dogs somewhere below them, and humans are no better than foul creatures. I normally have a hard time with anthropomorphic animals (see: Redwall, Watership Down, The Warriors series), but I really enjoyed the story.
I loved the world building the author did- every place from the dirtiest human hovel to the palace of the werewolf king and in between had a rich texture to it. She describes the setting so well, you can actually see it. She also has a great way of imbuing each setting with history without making you feel like you're reading an entire history book (see: Tolkien).
I really enjoyed the characters as well. I loved the character of Wittendon. At first I kind of thought he was a wimp, but the way Pace writes him, he grows up a long with the story. At the end, he's a thoughtful and sympathetic character, who contains bravery but also has flaws. Very relateable. I loved Sadora. Because she's smart. And she kicks serious butt! Pietre and Humphrey were also very sweet characters and I enjoyed their stories, but they didn't seem to be as fleshed out as Wittendon. However, my favorite character was Zinnegael. I loved her spunkiness, her quirkness, her love of baking, and the cats! I am entirely a cat person so they appealed to me a little more than the dogs :)
The story was rocking, from the very beginning. As I said, I did not have high expectations and was pleasantly surprised to find myself sucked in, staying up late to read just one chapter more!
So why not five stars? Some of the writing was a little stilted and I had a hard time with the descriptions of the werewolves- what did they look like? Human form? Wolken form? And they talked and walked around on their back legs? Doesn't that seem a little...I don't know...Ninja Turtle-ish? Eh, not the author's fault...I just have a hard time taking a talking animal seriously.
Overall, a great book and a really fun read. I'm pretty picky and for me to have enjoyed it this much, means it's something special. I think fans of the Redwall, Wings of Fire, and Warriors Series especially would really enjoy this book.
I plan on putting my copy in my school library and recommending it to all my students!
December 20, 2016
Pace creates a world where medieval caste system places a werewolf-like species at the top (Veranderen) and beneath them in order, wolves, dogs and humans. The wolves and dogs can talk, which helps to further develop their characters and explain their motives and emotions.
As with most novels with caste systems, the central conflict has to do with characters wanting to challenge the status quo. The system is rigid, controlling, and seeks to enrich those at the top of the hierarchy and to enslave those at the bottom of the hierarchy. The humans have very little to lose.
That being said, there are Veranderen and dogs who question the powers that be.
Being a YA novel, the most sympathetic characters are young adults as well. We watch them struggle with issues of identity, parentage and loyalty. The middle chapters were the most engaging. I like it when novels focus on character development. I was glad that I read the novel because I found one of the king's sons to be compelling. He's conflicted, a mix of strengths and weaknesses, and constantly shifting in his awareness of himself, others, his understanding of history and of politics. He's the most complex character.
But I had a rough time with a couple of aspects. The first 50 pages were difficult because the story world is complex. I had to chart all the characters on paper. The last 50 pages were taxing because the use of magical objects became overwhelming. If the characters have to stop the action to explain the use of magic to their foes, it's too technical / inorganic / halting. Or too reliant on deus ex machina devices. Conclusions should flow more naturally from the work of the majority of the novel.
But it was still an engaging read. Once I got "the lay of the land" in her story world, I was amazed at how skillfully the author managed a lot of detail and moved the action along at a good pace. The sentence style was mature without becoming too wordy or abstract. Kudos to the author for all her hard work and to her collaborator for his dream-inspired concept.
As with most novels with caste systems, the central conflict has to do with characters wanting to challenge the status quo. The system is rigid, controlling, and seeks to enrich those at the top of the hierarchy and to enslave those at the bottom of the hierarchy. The humans have very little to lose.
That being said, there are Veranderen and dogs who question the powers that be.
Being a YA novel, the most sympathetic characters are young adults as well. We watch them struggle with issues of identity, parentage and loyalty. The middle chapters were the most engaging. I like it when novels focus on character development. I was glad that I read the novel because I found one of the king's sons to be compelling. He's conflicted, a mix of strengths and weaknesses, and constantly shifting in his awareness of himself, others, his understanding of history and of politics. He's the most complex character.
But I had a rough time with a couple of aspects. The first 50 pages were difficult because the story world is complex. I had to chart all the characters on paper. The last 50 pages were taxing because the use of magical objects became overwhelming. If the characters have to stop the action to explain the use of magic to their foes, it's too technical / inorganic / halting. Or too reliant on deus ex machina devices. Conclusions should flow more naturally from the work of the majority of the novel.
But it was still an engaging read. Once I got "the lay of the land" in her story world, I was amazed at how skillfully the author managed a lot of detail and moved the action along at a good pace. The sentence style was mature without becoming too wordy or abstract. Kudos to the author for all her hard work and to her collaborator for his dream-inspired concept.
August 12, 2018
While at a writing conference, I met Jean Pace Knight, one of the authors, of Grey Stone. Even though we didn't have the chance for an in-depth discussion on life, books or writing at the time - I look forward to interviewing her in the future.
I laughed when she told me that if you love dogs, this is a book you'd enjoy because I don't love dogs (though rest assured, I do like dogs so long as someone else takes care of them), but I decided to read it because I haven't read a werewolf book in a long time.
Another hint from the author explained that the hierarchy in this world:
1- The werewolves, call the Verander, are the top dog (terrible pun intended). They are NOT benevolent rulers.
2- Next in the hierarchy are the wolves. They work as the henchmen for the werewolves.
3- Wild dogs are next. They live in their packs and value their freedom.
4- And finally, the humans landed at the bottom of the heap. They are no better than slaves and live in squalor just barely surviving. Half of their crops goes to support the Verander. Their lives are without value in society.
All four species speak, which is important to know.
The Verander (wolf-shifters/werewolves) have a king, who is the embodiment of a dog eat dog world. He would definitely betray anyone to retain his power. The Verander have the ability to shape-shift between their powerful werewolf form, less powerful wolf form and finally into their weak human form. They are the only carriers of magic.
Sometimes I had to double check if it was a wolf speaking, or a Verander in wolf form, however, pretty much if a wolf is speaking it really is a wolf. Whew! The wolves might be bad, but they're not as ruthless as the king. Even so, I don't want to converse with either.
The wild dogs and humans are easy to keep separate. The dogs have a very playful nature in their games and speech. The poor humans mostly dwell on survival and there are really only three humans to keep track of - Pietre and his parents.
I was a little overwhelmed in the first twenty pages of the novel because they were many new terms and ideas to wrap my head around. I considered re-reading it, but felt like with the tips from the author I had a good enough grasp to continue. I'm glad I moved forward because everything became much clearer as I became accustomed to the new world. In addition to a lot of creative ideas, the characters were interesting and believable. I felt like each approached their problems in a logical way stemming from their background.
Pietre: He is a compassionate child, who rescues a dog. His family supports him in this even though they understand the deeper ramifications of doing so. I enjoyed Pietre because he isn't too wise for his years. He truly feels like a little boy, one who has a special relationship with his dog.
Pietre's mother speaks these words of wisdom to him before she embraces both him and Humphrey. I imagine they both draw comfort from her words.
"No matter what the color the sun might come to, I've never known life to be anything other than terrible and wonderful wound together in different ways." (p. 94)
Pietre has an awakening to the potential power of humans. As part of the downtrodden race he had never questioned his position in the world.
"It was illegal for the humans to own or form weapons when not under the supervision of a Veranderen master. Pietre knew that, but until now, he hadn't thought that the very tools for form devices and weaponry might be used as weapons themselves." (p. 126)
Humphrey: Pietre and Humphrey develop a bond with each other quickly. Initially the dog, Humphrey, is also young as a pup, but he quickly grows into a mature dog in his thinking and actions. I thought it was interesting how Humphrey had so much angst over his father and defining himself. This added a level of complexity to his character.
Humphrey shows the advantage of being a dog, the inherit freedom.
"Humphrey did not hesitate. Pietre could feel him running - his feet pounding the ground with a freedom that seemed to surge through him - a freedom at being neither dog nor wolf, a freedom at being bound by non of their laws or restrictions." (p. 144)
Wittendon: He is the heir to the Wolken kingdom, which had been conquered and subdued by his ruthless father. His mother passed away when he was a young child and he has a younger brother - who is more like the son the kings wants.
I felt like he was one of the most complex characters. Not only is he trying to please a tyrant father, but he is dealing with the loss of his mother, the lack of magic and figuring out his love life. The layers are slowly revealed and Wittendon's true power is found as he discovers his past and understands the world around him. He is often walking between the accepted lines of society, which causes him to better understand the other races. As the future ruler, he has been trained to understand politics, even if he feels ill-suited for the role.
Wittendon isn't valued by his father, he is different than the others of his race. He is more likely despised, but he exudes strength they aren't aware of until much later.
"For most Veranderen, practicing on the hill was exhausting. Wittendon, on the other hand, found it exhilarating. The grass and sky and fresh air, even if it was filled with cracks of thunder - it worked on his nerves to make him feel stronger than he ever felt in the stone-walled pavilion below." (p. 55)
The prince sits on an edge of decision, and must make a choice - a choice that determines more than the kind of leader he will be, more than he knew was possible. The crux of his decision comes in a moment speaking to Sadora, the woman he loves.
"Whittendon realized suddenly that he had made very few choices in his short life and none of any importance." (p. 156)
Whittendon stands in contrast to his father.
"If not loved, King Crespin was respected. If not honored, he was feared. And each Verander depended on the king's strength, his cunning, and his talent in government. He was a masterful politician, a perfect swordsman, and a magician like none had ever seen." (p.24)
I've tried to be careful and not include any big spoilers. There are big pieces of the puzzle that I haven't included, and some of them are game changers. I had never considered my life if werewolves ruled, but after Grey Stone I'm convinced I wouldn't want them as my government leaders.
I recommend this book, it would be considered a clean fantasy and you'll never look at your dog the same.
For other reading suggestions go to www.talesuntangled.wordpress.com
I laughed when she told me that if you love dogs, this is a book you'd enjoy because I don't love dogs (though rest assured, I do like dogs so long as someone else takes care of them), but I decided to read it because I haven't read a werewolf book in a long time.
Another hint from the author explained that the hierarchy in this world:
1- The werewolves, call the Verander, are the top dog (terrible pun intended). They are NOT benevolent rulers.
2- Next in the hierarchy are the wolves. They work as the henchmen for the werewolves.
3- Wild dogs are next. They live in their packs and value their freedom.
4- And finally, the humans landed at the bottom of the heap. They are no better than slaves and live in squalor just barely surviving. Half of their crops goes to support the Verander. Their lives are without value in society.
All four species speak, which is important to know.
The Verander (wolf-shifters/werewolves) have a king, who is the embodiment of a dog eat dog world. He would definitely betray anyone to retain his power. The Verander have the ability to shape-shift between their powerful werewolf form, less powerful wolf form and finally into their weak human form. They are the only carriers of magic.
Sometimes I had to double check if it was a wolf speaking, or a Verander in wolf form, however, pretty much if a wolf is speaking it really is a wolf. Whew! The wolves might be bad, but they're not as ruthless as the king. Even so, I don't want to converse with either.
The wild dogs and humans are easy to keep separate. The dogs have a very playful nature in their games and speech. The poor humans mostly dwell on survival and there are really only three humans to keep track of - Pietre and his parents.
I was a little overwhelmed in the first twenty pages of the novel because they were many new terms and ideas to wrap my head around. I considered re-reading it, but felt like with the tips from the author I had a good enough grasp to continue. I'm glad I moved forward because everything became much clearer as I became accustomed to the new world. In addition to a lot of creative ideas, the characters were interesting and believable. I felt like each approached their problems in a logical way stemming from their background.
Pietre: He is a compassionate child, who rescues a dog. His family supports him in this even though they understand the deeper ramifications of doing so. I enjoyed Pietre because he isn't too wise for his years. He truly feels like a little boy, one who has a special relationship with his dog.
Pietre's mother speaks these words of wisdom to him before she embraces both him and Humphrey. I imagine they both draw comfort from her words.
"No matter what the color the sun might come to, I've never known life to be anything other than terrible and wonderful wound together in different ways." (p. 94)
Pietre has an awakening to the potential power of humans. As part of the downtrodden race he had never questioned his position in the world.
"It was illegal for the humans to own or form weapons when not under the supervision of a Veranderen master. Pietre knew that, but until now, he hadn't thought that the very tools for form devices and weaponry might be used as weapons themselves." (p. 126)
Humphrey: Pietre and Humphrey develop a bond with each other quickly. Initially the dog, Humphrey, is also young as a pup, but he quickly grows into a mature dog in his thinking and actions. I thought it was interesting how Humphrey had so much angst over his father and defining himself. This added a level of complexity to his character.
Humphrey shows the advantage of being a dog, the inherit freedom.
"Humphrey did not hesitate. Pietre could feel him running - his feet pounding the ground with a freedom that seemed to surge through him - a freedom at being neither dog nor wolf, a freedom at being bound by non of their laws or restrictions." (p. 144)
Wittendon: He is the heir to the Wolken kingdom, which had been conquered and subdued by his ruthless father. His mother passed away when he was a young child and he has a younger brother - who is more like the son the kings wants.
I felt like he was one of the most complex characters. Not only is he trying to please a tyrant father, but he is dealing with the loss of his mother, the lack of magic and figuring out his love life. The layers are slowly revealed and Wittendon's true power is found as he discovers his past and understands the world around him. He is often walking between the accepted lines of society, which causes him to better understand the other races. As the future ruler, he has been trained to understand politics, even if he feels ill-suited for the role.
Wittendon isn't valued by his father, he is different than the others of his race. He is more likely despised, but he exudes strength they aren't aware of until much later.
"For most Veranderen, practicing on the hill was exhausting. Wittendon, on the other hand, found it exhilarating. The grass and sky and fresh air, even if it was filled with cracks of thunder - it worked on his nerves to make him feel stronger than he ever felt in the stone-walled pavilion below." (p. 55)
The prince sits on an edge of decision, and must make a choice - a choice that determines more than the kind of leader he will be, more than he knew was possible. The crux of his decision comes in a moment speaking to Sadora, the woman he loves.
"Whittendon realized suddenly that he had made very few choices in his short life and none of any importance." (p. 156)
Whittendon stands in contrast to his father.
"If not loved, King Crespin was respected. If not honored, he was feared. And each Verander depended on the king's strength, his cunning, and his talent in government. He was a masterful politician, a perfect swordsman, and a magician like none had ever seen." (p.24)
I've tried to be careful and not include any big spoilers. There are big pieces of the puzzle that I haven't included, and some of them are game changers. I had never considered my life if werewolves ruled, but after Grey Stone I'm convinced I wouldn't want them as my government leaders.
I recommend this book, it would be considered a clean fantasy and you'll never look at your dog the same.
For other reading suggestions go to www.talesuntangled.wordpress.com
January 3, 2017
This a great young adult novel! Unique premise, excellent writing, compelling characters . . .
March 14, 2018
A long long time ago, when the red sun shone its light unto the creatures of earth, the werewolves reigned ruthlessly. Humans and dogs alike were treated almost like vermin. With close to no rights, humans had scarce food, and lived in constant fear of their shape shifting overlords.
In this land, where the king has turned into a dictator, a human child will save a life from death, thus breaking on of the rulers' laws. But in this unforgiving kingdom, breaking a law means certain death. In a series of chained reactions, a whole movement will arise. Humans, wolf-shifters and dogs alike, will have to realize that it takes a village to make a change. Rulers and ruled alike will come to find that not everything they have heard is true, and the law is not always compassionate or right. Can so many creatures of different species work together in order to change the world?
A magical, elaborate world unravels before the reader's eyes. A cunning, cruel and selfish monarch that would do anything to keep his power. A strong willed, smart boy that wants to change the world. A young wolf-shifter that is more than meets the eye. A prince that has started doubting the ways of his ruling father. A half-breed with special powers. There is an unbelievable variety of smart, brave characters. Some of them evil, some of them virtuous, the reader follows their lives, thoughts and actions.
The plot reminded me a lot of a chessboard. While some moves may seem random at first, the reader soon finds that everything is calculated. All characters, all actions have a reason. What is more, there are some quite unpredictable moves on this particular chessboard.
This was a captivating, even if very heartbreaking at times, story. There was no plot hole, no boring parts, nothing you wished weren't there. Everything comes to the reader with the appropriate explanation in due time, but first they get the chance to guess in a lot of situations.
I personally found a beautiful allegory in this story. This uncontrollable use of power, the inequality of the races, it could all well be transferred into the real world. I do not see much of a difference between today's politics and the land of the red sun, and in this realization I felt that this story is not just engrossing and amusing, but also very useful, as it could probably teach us a lesson or two.
Having already read Grey Lore, I was looking forward to this book. I have to admit, I was certainly not disappointed. Strongly recommended to read Grey Lore before you pick up Grey Stone, although it is not necessary for the plot.
In this land, where the king has turned into a dictator, a human child will save a life from death, thus breaking on of the rulers' laws. But in this unforgiving kingdom, breaking a law means certain death. In a series of chained reactions, a whole movement will arise. Humans, wolf-shifters and dogs alike, will have to realize that it takes a village to make a change. Rulers and ruled alike will come to find that not everything they have heard is true, and the law is not always compassionate or right. Can so many creatures of different species work together in order to change the world?
A magical, elaborate world unravels before the reader's eyes. A cunning, cruel and selfish monarch that would do anything to keep his power. A strong willed, smart boy that wants to change the world. A young wolf-shifter that is more than meets the eye. A prince that has started doubting the ways of his ruling father. A half-breed with special powers. There is an unbelievable variety of smart, brave characters. Some of them evil, some of them virtuous, the reader follows their lives, thoughts and actions.
The plot reminded me a lot of a chessboard. While some moves may seem random at first, the reader soon finds that everything is calculated. All characters, all actions have a reason. What is more, there are some quite unpredictable moves on this particular chessboard.
This was a captivating, even if very heartbreaking at times, story. There was no plot hole, no boring parts, nothing you wished weren't there. Everything comes to the reader with the appropriate explanation in due time, but first they get the chance to guess in a lot of situations.
I personally found a beautiful allegory in this story. This uncontrollable use of power, the inequality of the races, it could all well be transferred into the real world. I do not see much of a difference between today's politics and the land of the red sun, and in this realization I felt that this story is not just engrossing and amusing, but also very useful, as it could probably teach us a lesson or two.
Having already read Grey Lore, I was looking forward to this book. I have to admit, I was certainly not disappointed. Strongly recommended to read Grey Lore before you pick up Grey Stone, although it is not necessary for the plot.
May 10, 2017
Grey Stone is the story of two unlikely allies, a world where the ranking of creatures may surprise you, and finding the courage to do what is right.
In Pietre's universe, humans are on the bottom of the ranking system. Above them are dogs, above the dogs are wolves, and at the top and rulers are the Veranderen (better known as werewolves at one time, but now have the power to shift on command). When the young boy Pietre and his family take in a dying dog's young pup, it sets course for a prophecy told for thousands of years. Pietre's father is accused of illegally owning the pup, and is sentenced to death until the king Veranderen Crespin learns of his skill at weapon making. Now escaping death, he must make the tools the Veranderen will need in the upcoming Motteral Mal competition. It is during this time that his father in imprisoned that Pietre learns the a rebellion growing against the king. Will he be brave enough to fight for what he knows will make his world better? Can he work with those that he has been told all his life to avoid and be frightened of?
Grey Stone is the perfect coming of age, adventure book to me. I could feel the characters courage and strength build while I was reading, and it made me want to root for them the entire time. the world building authors Jean Knight Pace and Jacob Kennedy create is really amazing. I found the rankings between species and the idea of language between them so interesting. Grey Stone has humor, sadness, revenge, and adventure. I highly recommend!
I was given a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
In Pietre's universe, humans are on the bottom of the ranking system. Above them are dogs, above the dogs are wolves, and at the top and rulers are the Veranderen (better known as werewolves at one time, but now have the power to shift on command). When the young boy Pietre and his family take in a dying dog's young pup, it sets course for a prophecy told for thousands of years. Pietre's father is accused of illegally owning the pup, and is sentenced to death until the king Veranderen Crespin learns of his skill at weapon making. Now escaping death, he must make the tools the Veranderen will need in the upcoming Motteral Mal competition. It is during this time that his father in imprisoned that Pietre learns the a rebellion growing against the king. Will he be brave enough to fight for what he knows will make his world better? Can he work with those that he has been told all his life to avoid and be frightened of?
Grey Stone is the perfect coming of age, adventure book to me. I could feel the characters courage and strength build while I was reading, and it made me want to root for them the entire time. the world building authors Jean Knight Pace and Jacob Kennedy create is really amazing. I found the rankings between species and the idea of language between them so interesting. Grey Stone has humor, sadness, revenge, and adventure. I highly recommend!
I was given a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
March 1, 2018
I was so fascinated by this book, this universe, these characters, all of this.
We're in a world where four principal races are present. Humans, dogs, wolves, and shifters (a sort of werewolves but don't you dare call them that), all of them who can talk., but not all of them equals. Wolf-shifters are the most powerful (the king is one of them) and can use magic, followed by the wolves. Dogs are mostly independents and humans are basically slaves for the shifters and the wolves.
We follow many characters, like Pietre, a human boy who will help and befriend the half-breed pup Humphrey, who is supposed to be killed for what he is, Wittendon, shifter and son of the king, who can't use magic, the witch Zinnegael or even the king himself. These characters' paths will meet, and we will see them grow and develop, question themselves and everything around them. Every relationship was special in its own way, positive, negative or mixed.
I loved the many POVs because we could see the story through the eyes of people with different backgrounds, different perspectives. But even when I had read the thoughts of many characters, I found myself gasping at some events, not at all expecting what would happen. It's a thing I loved. We read what they do, what they think, but we don't know all of what they do and think. I really love that.
The worldbuilding was especially great, I didn't understand it all at the very beginning but it became clear quickly. It's incredible that such a universe exists and evolve in a book less than 350 pages. Like I said, fascinating.
We're in a world where four principal races are present. Humans, dogs, wolves, and shifters (a sort of werewolves but don't you dare call them that), all of them who can talk., but not all of them equals. Wolf-shifters are the most powerful (the king is one of them) and can use magic, followed by the wolves. Dogs are mostly independents and humans are basically slaves for the shifters and the wolves.
We follow many characters, like Pietre, a human boy who will help and befriend the half-breed pup Humphrey, who is supposed to be killed for what he is, Wittendon, shifter and son of the king, who can't use magic, the witch Zinnegael or even the king himself. These characters' paths will meet, and we will see them grow and develop, question themselves and everything around them. Every relationship was special in its own way, positive, negative or mixed.
I loved the many POVs because we could see the story through the eyes of people with different backgrounds, different perspectives. But even when I had read the thoughts of many characters, I found myself gasping at some events, not at all expecting what would happen. It's a thing I loved. We read what they do, what they think, but we don't know all of what they do and think. I really love that.
The worldbuilding was especially great, I didn't understand it all at the very beginning but it became clear quickly. It's incredible that such a universe exists and evolve in a book less than 350 pages. Like I said, fascinating.
May 3, 2022
A Tangled Web Woven
Parents- PG13 - pretty clean but geared towards middle to high schoolers and up
Language- PG not a lot and no f-bombs
Violence- PG13 some fighting but nothing too graphic
Sexual Content- PG- More or less mentions of dog and wolf mating and a relationship out of wedlock but no details given
Interesting that this is more from the animal perspective (dog and wolf / werewolf). This has so many different POV and reads a bit slow and drawn out to the point that it lost my attention several times. Each of the POV tangle their own subplots into one bigger plot of basically wanting to overthrow the corrupt government and King... Although it really took a while to put it all together. There's a lot of action points that keep this moving but aspects of the story felt a little odd with the way the magic, human / wolf elements worked and then the two gods also fit in funny. The world building was great and really brought the backdrop to life. I don't know, the story or the characters just never connect with me. I can see it appealing to the middle grade fantasy and animal reader.
Narrator- 2.5 ⭐ Not the best differentiations between voices but it's a pleasant voice to listen to. I preferred listening at 1.35x speed.
—I was given this free review copy audiobook at my request and have voluntarily left this review.
Parents- PG13 - pretty clean but geared towards middle to high schoolers and up
Language- PG not a lot and no f-bombs
Violence- PG13 some fighting but nothing too graphic
Sexual Content- PG- More or less mentions of dog and wolf mating and a relationship out of wedlock but no details given
Interesting that this is more from the animal perspective (dog and wolf / werewolf). This has so many different POV and reads a bit slow and drawn out to the point that it lost my attention several times. Each of the POV tangle their own subplots into one bigger plot of basically wanting to overthrow the corrupt government and King... Although it really took a while to put it all together. There's a lot of action points that keep this moving but aspects of the story felt a little odd with the way the magic, human / wolf elements worked and then the two gods also fit in funny. The world building was great and really brought the backdrop to life. I don't know, the story or the characters just never connect with me. I can see it appealing to the middle grade fantasy and animal reader.
Narrator- 2.5 ⭐ Not the best differentiations between voices but it's a pleasant voice to listen to. I preferred listening at 1.35x speed.
—I was given this free review copy audiobook at my request and have voluntarily left this review.
February 22, 2018
Rating: 3.5 rounded up to 4 stars
Grey Stone was a surprisingly good read. Despite being a stand alone novel ( I think, I'm not sure) the world building was well done. Based in an unnamed medieval land, there are four main races, the wolf shifters, wolves, dogs, and humans, and you get a good feel of each of their goals and mentality. The humans and dogs are the most oppressed due to wolves stealing all the power during a powerful eclipse that happens every 100 years and their ruthless king, Crespin. The book takes place in the point of view of one or two creatures from each of the four races and documents the oppressed races fight to even the playing field for every race.
I appreciated how despite the large cast, following the story is not confusing at all. In my opinion, the characters could have been a bit more developed but considering how it seems to be a stand alone book, I can see how it could be difficult to do so. I enjoyed the presence of magic and the way dogs could talk and werewolves could practice magic, it added to the story a lot. Definitely a worthwhile read and I would love to see more stories based in this world/universe.
Grey Stone was a surprisingly good read. Despite being a stand alone novel ( I think, I'm not sure) the world building was well done. Based in an unnamed medieval land, there are four main races, the wolf shifters, wolves, dogs, and humans, and you get a good feel of each of their goals and mentality. The humans and dogs are the most oppressed due to wolves stealing all the power during a powerful eclipse that happens every 100 years and their ruthless king, Crespin. The book takes place in the point of view of one or two creatures from each of the four races and documents the oppressed races fight to even the playing field for every race.
I appreciated how despite the large cast, following the story is not confusing at all. In my opinion, the characters could have been a bit more developed but considering how it seems to be a stand alone book, I can see how it could be difficult to do so. I enjoyed the presence of magic and the way dogs could talk and werewolves could practice magic, it added to the story a lot. Definitely a worthwhile read and I would love to see more stories based in this world/universe.
April 26, 2022
I was given this free review copy audiobook at my request and have voluntarily left this review.
Really interesting. I think this book is supposed to be the first of the Grey books. I liked this one better than Grey Lore but both books are good. This is a great adventure for a young boy and his dog. They are werewolves, cats, shifters, witches and dogs. My favorite part is when Humphrey the dog plays in a match of mud ball! That was fun. There are lots things happening in the book. There are two main sides the kings side and the other side. The king can be cruel and kind. But the Prince eventually comes to the conclusion that his father will do anything to secure his reign as king. Sedora is my favorite character. She wants what’s right and true with the least amount of bloodshed. She believes that everyone can work to get along. It may not be easy but it is worth it. And finding the right people for her cause to help fulfill the prophecy is her quest.
Lots of twists and turns, make sure to pay attention to the tiny details. Very good book!
Really interesting. I think this book is supposed to be the first of the Grey books. I liked this one better than Grey Lore but both books are good. This is a great adventure for a young boy and his dog. They are werewolves, cats, shifters, witches and dogs. My favorite part is when Humphrey the dog plays in a match of mud ball! That was fun. There are lots things happening in the book. There are two main sides the kings side and the other side. The king can be cruel and kind. But the Prince eventually comes to the conclusion that his father will do anything to secure his reign as king. Sedora is my favorite character. She wants what’s right and true with the least amount of bloodshed. She believes that everyone can work to get along. It may not be easy but it is worth it. And finding the right people for her cause to help fulfill the prophecy is her quest.
Lots of twists and turns, make sure to pay attention to the tiny details. Very good book!
May 20, 2018
Most of the books I get from NetGalley are well written and have cool concepts. This was no exception. It was very original and had lots of great conflict. But like most of the new authors/books I try, they sag in the middle. I stayed with this one longer than most. But the problem was that there were too many POVs and subplots. The book is HUGE and sooooo slow. Lots of stuff happens, but hardly any of it seems connected. I got through 33% with no sign of a true plot and they were still introducing new characters! So much potential. Doesn’t seem very kid-friendly. Long, complicated, and surprisingly violent. That said, my 9 and 10 year olds were sad when I stopped reading it to them. (But weren’t interested enough to read the rest themselves.)
August 25, 2017
Thoroughly captivating
The authors have done a superb job of making the reader feel like they have been transported into another world. The storyline is original, engaging, and does not plod along. Character development (which is one of my key factors in judging a work of fiction--if I don't care about the characters, the book is a bust. ), was spot on. All in all, I was well pleased with this book and highly recommend it. As another reviewer posted, I can see this story being made into a movie.
The authors have done a superb job of making the reader feel like they have been transported into another world. The storyline is original, engaging, and does not plod along. Character development (which is one of my key factors in judging a work of fiction--if I don't care about the characters, the book is a bust. ), was spot on. All in all, I was well pleased with this book and highly recommend it. As another reviewer posted, I can see this story being made into a movie.
June 10, 2023
Audiobook: I enjoyed this first book in "The Grey" series. The worldbuilding was complex and intricate. I liked the varied races that interacted within the confines of this clever fantasy. I liked that humans played a role in events but weren't the featured race. I enjoyed the magic and magical instances. I'm looking forward to the next book in the series. Tom Howery's narration was fine, and his voice was pleasant. I was given a free copy of the audiobook, and I have voluntarily posted this review.
December 6, 2017
Forewarning: I enjoyed this book so much that I completely forgot to take notes on the book! So if the review sounds a little choppy, that would be why.
Grey Stone is an incredible book, and it tells a wildly unique story about werewolves and how the world would function if they were in charge. In the world of Grey Stone, werewolves (though they don’t like that name) are the ruling monarchy. Wolves are their loyal servants, and dogs are free to roam the land and sing their hondsong. Where are the humans, you might ask? The humans are at the bottom of the hierarchy, crammed into tight living spaces and ravaged by starved packs of wolves if caught out of doors after dark.
The author (Jean Knight Pace) sent me this book for free in exchange for my honest review, and when she told me that her book told an unusual story about werewolves, I did not foresee just how unusual this story would become. The world in which Grey Stone is set is so unique and different from our own. This book transported me there and then wouldn’t let me leave!
Grey Stone is chock full of gorgeous and vivid descriptions, even of just the simplest things. Within the first few pages (back when I was taking notes), there was a breathtaking description of the moon! Everything in this book is so vivid, and the words painted pictures in my mind.
Each turn of the page had me on the edge of my seat, sometimes dreading, sometimes cheering for what would happen next. I am a hardcore werewolf fan, and this book was exactly what I needed--and more! I promise that if you like werewolves, you will LOVE Grey Stone! Happy reading!
Grey Stone is an incredible book, and it tells a wildly unique story about werewolves and how the world would function if they were in charge. In the world of Grey Stone, werewolves (though they don’t like that name) are the ruling monarchy. Wolves are their loyal servants, and dogs are free to roam the land and sing their hondsong. Where are the humans, you might ask? The humans are at the bottom of the hierarchy, crammed into tight living spaces and ravaged by starved packs of wolves if caught out of doors after dark.
The author (Jean Knight Pace) sent me this book for free in exchange for my honest review, and when she told me that her book told an unusual story about werewolves, I did not foresee just how unusual this story would become. The world in which Grey Stone is set is so unique and different from our own. This book transported me there and then wouldn’t let me leave!
Grey Stone is chock full of gorgeous and vivid descriptions, even of just the simplest things. Within the first few pages (back when I was taking notes), there was a breathtaking description of the moon! Everything in this book is so vivid, and the words painted pictures in my mind.
Each turn of the page had me on the edge of my seat, sometimes dreading, sometimes cheering for what would happen next. I am a hardcore werewolf fan, and this book was exactly what I needed--and more! I promise that if you like werewolves, you will LOVE Grey Stone! Happy reading!
January 25, 2023
Wow!
I was drawn into this novel & had a hard time putting it down! This story show the difference between love of others in contrast to love of power, & I enjoyed watching the characters grow & change as they made choices & dealt with matters of life & death. Well worth the read! I am excited to read the sequel!
I was drawn into this novel & had a hard time putting it down! This story show the difference between love of others in contrast to love of power, & I enjoyed watching the characters grow & change as they made choices & dealt with matters of life & death. Well worth the read! I am excited to read the sequel!
June 10, 2023
I much enjoyed this book by a new to me author. I often read such books with trepidation until I learn how the writer will deal with the characters. With this one I knew almost from the start that I could trust that reason would prevail. A great story with well-drawn characters, a finely turned plot, and enough excitement to have me reading most of it in a sitting. Would certainly recommend.
July 8, 2024
It was definitely different with so many underlying messages rolled up in a supernatural hot dog I was choking on it. This book was not my usual cup of tea, mainly because I found it rather boring a lot of times, but the author did do a really good job building up the characters and bringing this world to life for you.
March 13, 2020
Wonderful Adventure!
What a world the authors have created! High epic fantasy with twists and turns that you begin to think have no end, but somehow, they do! A very definite good read! But don't start unless you have the time! It won't let you put it down!
What a world the authors have created! High epic fantasy with twists and turns that you begin to think have no end, but somehow, they do! A very definite good read! But don't start unless you have the time! It won't let you put it down!
August 13, 2022
Excellent world building
The Grey books are both an excellent job of world building. Sure, we know werewolves, witches and magic, but I don't think l recall another book that flipped this lore on it's ear and started a wholly new premise. Very well done.
The Grey books are both an excellent job of world building. Sure, we know werewolves, witches and magic, but I don't think l recall another book that flipped this lore on it's ear and started a wholly new premise. Very well done.
March 4, 2023
This is one story you don’t want to miss. In the Land of the Red Sun, strange things happen. Animals talking, shifters and more. Loved it.
March 21, 2017
This book was on my list of books to read before it was actually finished... I knew it was coming and the author, Jean Knight Pace, is the daughter of a cousin of mine. So, yes, I wanted to read it I think because family means so much to me... When I finally started reading... last week I think... I could hardly put it down. I have been steeling moments... leaving projects unfinished.. I think I was not sure how long it would keep me going... I just finished and must admit it completely captivated me.. I loved every minute of it... Thank you Jean.... and Jacob... would love to more about how you wrote this together???
July 28, 2016
I was given an advance copy of this book in exchange for an honest review. Young adult fantasy novels aren't exactly my typical genre of choice, so I wasn't sure what I would think about this book. But, after the first chapter or two I was hooked! The storyline has a lot going on, but isn't so convoluted that you can't keep track of what is happening. I loved the way that the different plots intertwined and switched back and forth. I thought the pacing was spot on, and the characters were well-developed. I thought they were likable and not too black-and-white. I was really interested in seeing how the relationships between different characters would unfold, which I don't always feel invested in with these type of books. I have read a couple of young adult books that focus more on a single relationship; I was impressed how Jean Pace was able to make all of the relationships interesting to me (I loved the contrast with different father/son relationships, the friendships between several of the characters, and the love story, which is a very small angle in the book). The book was a little bit longer than I expected (reading the kindle version), but I read it on vacation and it was a lightning-fast read. I was able to predict some of the plot lines, but the back story unfolded in an unexpected way, and I was pleasantly surprised with it. I loved the ending and seriously couldn't put it down! My 12-year-old son and husband are both interested and going to read it as well. I ordered a physical copy for my son to read, and he is excited for it to arrive. I would love to see more of these characters!
November 25, 2016
Now I know what you're thinking, "Ew. Gross. Werewolves." It's not like that at all, I swear. There are four races. The wolves, the dogs, the humans, and the "wolf-shifters" called the Veranderen. All four races are fighting for power and/or equality in this magical universe of purples sunrises. The Veranderen are at the top of the of the food chain controlling the wolves, while the dogs are able to run free, and the humans are enslaved as serfs. Dissatisfaction grows until quiet complaining whips up into a torrent of revolution. THERE ARE MAGIC LIGHTENING BATTLES!
I knew I would be entranced by this book as soon as Jean Knight Pace in partnership with Jacob Kennedy told me that "Pietre tossed in his bed for the better part of the night until at last the amethyst dawn washed down into his nightmares, pressing against the dagger-like silver of a moon and woke him" on page 5. I was not disappointed.
My only complaint is this book is a little too dark for my taste. I am happy to report however it DOES have a happy ending.
My favorite characters are the riddle talkers. Zinnnegael's penchant for constantly drinking tea and baking goodies in the worst of times amuses me. The little witch and her friends provide a good balance in the story with their peaceful ways.
I think this is a superb fantasy novel with a premises so unique it's in a category of it's own.
I knew I would be entranced by this book as soon as Jean Knight Pace in partnership with Jacob Kennedy told me that "Pietre tossed in his bed for the better part of the night until at last the amethyst dawn washed down into his nightmares, pressing against the dagger-like silver of a moon and woke him" on page 5. I was not disappointed.
My only complaint is this book is a little too dark for my taste. I am happy to report however it DOES have a happy ending.
My favorite characters are the riddle talkers. Zinnnegael's penchant for constantly drinking tea and baking goodies in the worst of times amuses me. The little witch and her friends provide a good balance in the story with their peaceful ways.
I think this is a superb fantasy novel with a premises so unique it's in a category of it's own.
December 30, 2016
I was given a copy for an honest review.
What a fantastic read! I had trouble choosing between 4 and 5 stars, only because I had a hard time imagining just what the Verandeen - or werewolf - looked like. It seemed they had matured beyond what most of us picture werewolf's as today, which made it difficult to imagine.
Aside from that one issue, this truly is a fantastic book. And because of that, I had to give it 5 stars.
Jean and Jacob have created a world unlike any other you will read. Yes it seems medieval, yet is placed in the future. Yes the species are all known fantasy species. What Grey Stone has done however, has changed the world entirely. No longer are humans above all others. Can that be changed though? Can one person make a difference so big, the fate of all will be forever altered? You'll have to read to find out.
What a fantastic read! I had trouble choosing between 4 and 5 stars, only because I had a hard time imagining just what the Verandeen - or werewolf - looked like. It seemed they had matured beyond what most of us picture werewolf's as today, which made it difficult to imagine.
Aside from that one issue, this truly is a fantastic book. And because of that, I had to give it 5 stars.
Jean and Jacob have created a world unlike any other you will read. Yes it seems medieval, yet is placed in the future. Yes the species are all known fantasy species. What Grey Stone has done however, has changed the world entirely. No longer are humans above all others. Can that be changed though? Can one person make a difference so big, the fate of all will be forever altered? You'll have to read to find out.
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