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Dearly & Deviant Daniel
Keir Dearly has a secret he believes he’ll take to his grave because if he told anyone, who would believe him? Saying he has conversations with his “clients” as he prepares them for their last hoorah will surely get him locked in a padded room for the remainder of his life, so he does his best to help the dead with their final requests before they go to their great—or in some cases, not so great—reward. Because of the secret, Keir doesn’t pursue love, living day in and day out with no one to share his life.
When Deviant Daniel Clegg shows up on his table with his final request, “Keep my brother from being blamed for my murder,” will Keir trust Dashiell Clegg with the secret to save the man’s life? When death is the family business, what will it take for Keir to feel alive? Maybe a gorgeous, motorcycle mechanic with a dark past has a few ideas!
When Deviant Daniel Clegg shows up on his table with his final request, “Keep my brother from being blamed for my murder,” will Keir trust Dashiell Clegg with the secret to save the man’s life? When death is the family business, what will it take for Keir to feel alive? Maybe a gorgeous, motorcycle mechanic with a dark past has a few ideas!
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Published October 19, 2022
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September 28, 2022
⭐️⭐️⭐️💫
Keir Dearly is the resident mortician and funeral director of The Dearly Departed funeral home and he can see and talk to dead people. Yeah, like that kid in the movie.
Enter the biggest POS ghost in the form of Daniel Clegg. Daniel was murdered after he did a bunch of shady stuff and pinned it all on his brother, Dash.
Wow, this guy was such a winner. (The heaviest sarcasm known to man) Seriously, I wish we could murder him over and over again in different, crueler fashions.
And now the police want to pin his murder on Dash as well. So, Keir sets out to help the man and through their interactions chemistry grows.
This one had a lot going on with the investigation, very detail oriented which was at times to it’s detriment. There were points where I got bored and I wished we could get on with it but not enough to lose my interest completely.
The romance between Keir and Dash was good at times and others lacked chemistry. I found some of the word choices during sex to be unappealing. I cracked up when we were given the exact measurements of Keir’s stubby member.
Personally I think I would’ve preferred a relationship between Keir and Jay, the detective. I think that would’ve been more interesting.
The paranormal stuff was the best part. All the ghosts with their fun personalities. I liked Scott and Amelie, especially Amelie and I wanted more about them and what they can do. Their quirky personalities added a lot when the main characters felt a bit on the droll side.
Overall an interesting read that I found mostly enjoyable.
I was provided an ARC for an honest review.
Keir Dearly is the resident mortician and funeral director of The Dearly Departed funeral home and he can see and talk to dead people. Yeah, like that kid in the movie.
Enter the biggest POS ghost in the form of Daniel Clegg. Daniel was murdered after he did a bunch of shady stuff and pinned it all on his brother, Dash.
Wow, this guy was such a winner. (The heaviest sarcasm known to man) Seriously, I wish we could murder him over and over again in different, crueler fashions.
And now the police want to pin his murder on Dash as well. So, Keir sets out to help the man and through their interactions chemistry grows.
This one had a lot going on with the investigation, very detail oriented which was at times to it’s detriment. There were points where I got bored and I wished we could get on with it but not enough to lose my interest completely.
The romance between Keir and Dash was good at times and others lacked chemistry. I found some of the word choices during sex to be unappealing. I cracked up when we were given the exact measurements of Keir’s stubby member.
Personally I think I would’ve preferred a relationship between Keir and Jay, the detective. I think that would’ve been more interesting.
The paranormal stuff was the best part. All the ghosts with their fun personalities. I liked Scott and Amelie, especially Amelie and I wanted more about them and what they can do. Their quirky personalities added a lot when the main characters felt a bit on the droll side.
Overall an interesting read that I found mostly enjoyable.
I was provided an ARC for an honest review.
August 20, 2023
DNF at around chapter 10.
I really wanted to like this book - the plot sounded great, the narration was good. But it just was not enjoyable to read. Entirely too much exposition, with unnecessary details and back story on *everything*. The first sex scene was full of cringy euphemisms (“smoking the long pipe” for giving a blowjob). I finally gave up when i realized I was dreading have to pick up my audiobook.
I really wanted to like this book - the plot sounded great, the narration was good. But it just was not enjoyable to read. Entirely too much exposition, with unnecessary details and back story on *everything*. The first sex scene was full of cringy euphemisms (“smoking the long pipe” for giving a blowjob). I finally gave up when i realized I was dreading have to pick up my audiobook.
June 6, 2023
Overall book rating: 3.5
Audio Book: N/A
Book Cover: 3.5
Overall I enjoyed it.
The idea about it was something else.
I got a little frustrated with these guys, being the age
they are, and the up and down with being together
or not.
The detective work left me with some eyebrow lifting
moments and really...some of the choices made by
the MC's wasn't all that bright.
But, I did enjoy the read and there is potential.
Audio Book: N/A
Book Cover: 3.5
Overall I enjoyed it.
The idea about it was something else.
I got a little frustrated with these guys, being the age
they are, and the up and down with being together
or not.
The detective work left me with some eyebrow lifting
moments and really...some of the choices made by
the MC's wasn't all that bright.
But, I did enjoy the read and there is potential.
October 22, 2022
The blurb and the premise for this book which what drew me in. It's pretty rare to see a mortician/funeral director as the main character in a book. Add in the fact that he can see and speak with the dead and there's mystery to solve? Yeah I was in.
I was glad I gave this book a try. I liked Kier a good deal and found him a rather interesting character. The other characters were likeable as well except for Daniel the ghost who's the main reason for the mystery and was the brother of one of the other main character Dashiell. I found Dash' character a bit bland but he did have a good chemistry with Kier.
Generally, I had a good time reading this book. The pacing worked fine but if you're not much into instalust/instalove the romance might not be for you. The mystery did work and I liked how it was resolved. I had some issues with certain word and phrase choices but overall I found the writing to be okay.
This would be 3.75 stars out of 5 stars for me.
I received an ARC of this book from GRR and I have chosen to publish my fair and honest review.
I was glad I gave this book a try. I liked Kier a good deal and found him a rather interesting character. The other characters were likeable as well except for Daniel the ghost who's the main reason for the mystery and was the brother of one of the other main character Dashiell. I found Dash' character a bit bland but he did have a good chemistry with Kier.
Generally, I had a good time reading this book. The pacing worked fine but if you're not much into instalust/instalove the romance might not be for you. The mystery did work and I liked how it was resolved. I had some issues with certain word and phrase choices but overall I found the writing to be okay.
This would be 3.75 stars out of 5 stars for me.
I received an ARC of this book from GRR and I have chosen to publish my fair and honest review.
October 22, 2022
As a debut novel this was overally a good start to a new series. It might have been a bit too long with some explanations that weren't needed but at the end I'm looking forward to the next book.
Keir Dearly is a mortician and if that wasn't wierd enough he also see's ghosts. Dashiel Cleggs is a mechanic with a bit a of a dark past.
Mystery, ghosts, romance, death....Keir and Dash have a lot going on. When these two meet Afters Dash's brother dies(he's an asshole don't feel sorry for him) sparks start to fly. I loved the relationship between these two. Some parts we're a bit teenager-ish for a relationship between adults but they were still sweet.
Fingers crossed the next book in the series is better and we get more of Detective Jay and they mysterious that were left hanging....
I received an ARC of this book and this is my honest review.
Keir Dearly is a mortician and if that wasn't wierd enough he also see's ghosts. Dashiel Cleggs is a mechanic with a bit a of a dark past.
Mystery, ghosts, romance, death....Keir and Dash have a lot going on. When these two meet Afters Dash's brother dies(he's an asshole don't feel sorry for him) sparks start to fly. I loved the relationship between these two. Some parts we're a bit teenager-ish for a relationship between adults but they were still sweet.
Fingers crossed the next book in the series is better and we get more of Detective Jay and they mysterious that were left hanging....
I received an ARC of this book and this is my honest review.
November 2, 2022
A Joyfully Jay review.
4 stars
Dearly & Deviant Daniel is the first installment in L.A. Kaye’s series Dearly and the Departed. As the title suggests, the deceased play a significant role in the story. Not only is Keir an undertaker, he can actually see and interact with some of the dead. To clear up any potential confusion, the action of this story is driven by what the deceased Daniel got up to while he was alive. It’s what brings Kier and Dash together and serves as the framework around which a suspense/thriller story is built. Based on the phrasing in the title, I kept wondering if somehow Daniel would start to figure in as a romantic something. It took me a long time to fully set that notion aside, but eventually I got there. It helped me to know that this book is the first in a series. While there are some common sense world building elements that help explain what makes Keir special (like where and when he can talk to the dead), there was some heavy foreshadowing of things to come in future books (like Keir’s long-deceased grandfather mentioning an encroaching evil).
Read Camille’s review in its entirety here.
4 stars
Dearly & Deviant Daniel is the first installment in L.A. Kaye’s series Dearly and the Departed. As the title suggests, the deceased play a significant role in the story. Not only is Keir an undertaker, he can actually see and interact with some of the dead. To clear up any potential confusion, the action of this story is driven by what the deceased Daniel got up to while he was alive. It’s what brings Kier and Dash together and serves as the framework around which a suspense/thriller story is built. Based on the phrasing in the title, I kept wondering if somehow Daniel would start to figure in as a romantic something. It took me a long time to fully set that notion aside, but eventually I got there. It helped me to know that this book is the first in a series. While there are some common sense world building elements that help explain what makes Keir special (like where and when he can talk to the dead), there was some heavy foreshadowing of things to come in future books (like Keir’s long-deceased grandfather mentioning an encroaching evil).
Read Camille’s review in its entirety here.
October 15, 2022
I’m so glad this author started this series. This is such an entertaining book. Right from the start it held my attention and even though it is a cliffhanger (which normally I don’t do) I love this story.
These two characters, Keir and Dash are so attracted to each right from the start. Keir being the mortician and funeral director of his family’s mortuary. He is trying to deal with his mom’s retirement and his being responsible for everything. He also has a gift or curse depending on the spirit. He is able to see and talk to some. He is visited by Dash’s brother whose death causes Keir and Dash to meet.
Dash has his life set to be routine. The only thing missing is a relationship. He is doing his best to keep his dad’s repair shop in the black. His meeting with Keir and his brother’s death changes everything in his life.
The background of these characters helped me picture who they and the other characters are. The story flow is constant. The main characters are both likable. The secondary characters all add to the story. My only negative is that it is a cliffhanger and believe me it stops right at where I had hoped answers would be. It is not a HFN. Yet, I’m looking forward to the next book and really enjoyed this story.
These two characters, Keir and Dash are so attracted to each right from the start. Keir being the mortician and funeral director of his family’s mortuary. He is trying to deal with his mom’s retirement and his being responsible for everything. He also has a gift or curse depending on the spirit. He is able to see and talk to some. He is visited by Dash’s brother whose death causes Keir and Dash to meet.
Dash has his life set to be routine. The only thing missing is a relationship. He is doing his best to keep his dad’s repair shop in the black. His meeting with Keir and his brother’s death changes everything in his life.
The background of these characters helped me picture who they and the other characters are. The story flow is constant. The main characters are both likable. The secondary characters all add to the story. My only negative is that it is a cliffhanger and believe me it stops right at where I had hoped answers would be. It is not a HFN. Yet, I’m looking forward to the next book and really enjoyed this story.
October 28, 2022
This is the first in a new series between Kier, a mortician who can see dead people, and Dash, a mechanic and ex-con. Dash’s brother is murdered and comes back to tell Kier that his brother will be blamed.
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I am still reading this and am enjoying the premise and set up! I don’t think I’d like to be able to talk to spirits, I feel like it’ll be too much Six Sense-eque lol. Dash is a good guy and he doesn’t deserve what happened to him. And his brother is…yes, a deviant lol. If you’re a fan of the paranormal, a slow burn, and are OK with a cliffhanger/HFN type ending, check out this book!
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I am still reading this and am enjoying the premise and set up! I don’t think I’d like to be able to talk to spirits, I feel like it’ll be too much Six Sense-eque lol. Dash is a good guy and he doesn’t deserve what happened to him. And his brother is…yes, a deviant lol. If you’re a fan of the paranormal, a slow burn, and are OK with a cliffhanger/HFN type ending, check out this book!
July 30, 2023
DNF chapter 4 - not what I expected from the blurb
I just got so annoyed - My imagination does not stretch far enough that I can believe the police would look at a man murdered at his office and think - no we don't have to talk to anyone, not his coworkers, not his fiancé, dont't have to search his appartment BECAUSE oh look his younger brother spent a year in prison for working at a chop shop, so he obviously shot his brother for no reason - REALLY???
I just got so annoyed - My imagination does not stretch far enough that I can believe the police would look at a man murdered at his office and think - no we don't have to talk to anyone, not his coworkers, not his fiancé, dont't have to search his appartment BECAUSE oh look his younger brother spent a year in prison for working at a chop shop, so he obviously shot his brother for no reason - REALLY???
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October 19, 2022
You know when you find a character that touches your heart in a truly special way? That was Keir Dearly for me. He runs his family business… which is death. Well, not exactly, but he is a mortician. But what makes him the most capable to do the job is that he speaks to the dead.
When a new body is rolled in named Daniel Clegg (The jokes about 007 alum, Daniel Craig, were puuuuuurfect Dad jokes! I approve!), he isn’t surprised when the snarky jerk asks him to help get his brother, Dash, out of the mess that he himself got him into. The dearly departed had been using his brother’s name and social security number to do a lot of illegal things… including money laundering millions of dollars. So it’s no surprise that the police suspect Dash of murdering his brother. Except he didn’t do it.
Dash runs his father’s old mechanic repair shop. He’s an ex-con who since leaving jail has lived his life on the straight and narrow. Making the right choices to turn his life around.
When Keir and Dash meet, chemistry grows into something more. And for the two of them, they aren’t used to wanting more than a fling. Both of them are damaged in some way, but by working together to find the real murderer they’ll kindle more than just some hot sexy times…
I really loved both of the MC’s. Their love story was extremely sweet and I hope that we get to see their relationship cemented in the next book. If not, one of the detectives, Jay Frick, was really into Keir. I am definitely not opposed to a poly situationship… just saying!😂
When a new body is rolled in named Daniel Clegg (The jokes about 007 alum, Daniel Craig, were puuuuuurfect Dad jokes! I approve!), he isn’t surprised when the snarky jerk asks him to help get his brother, Dash, out of the mess that he himself got him into. The dearly departed had been using his brother’s name and social security number to do a lot of illegal things… including money laundering millions of dollars. So it’s no surprise that the police suspect Dash of murdering his brother. Except he didn’t do it.
Dash runs his father’s old mechanic repair shop. He’s an ex-con who since leaving jail has lived his life on the straight and narrow. Making the right choices to turn his life around.
When Keir and Dash meet, chemistry grows into something more. And for the two of them, they aren’t used to wanting more than a fling. Both of them are damaged in some way, but by working together to find the real murderer they’ll kindle more than just some hot sexy times…
I really loved both of the MC’s. Their love story was extremely sweet and I hope that we get to see their relationship cemented in the next book. If not, one of the detectives, Jay Frick, was really into Keir. I am definitely not opposed to a poly situationship… just saying!😂
October 20, 2022
Keir Dearly did not really want to be a mortician but when his father died and his mother needed help, he became a mortician. He does have some secrets though. He can talk to the dead. That combined with his job led him to believe his love life would never take off. Dashiell Clegg owns Clegg Cycles along with his estranged brother. When that brother turns up in Keir’s mortuary, he asks that Kier make sure his brother is not charged with his murder. When Keir and Dash meet, Keir cannot resist helping with that request
This story was so very captivating. Not only dId L.A. Kaye create two amazing heroes but added in some incredible side characters to add extra richness. Keir was just existing until Dash entered his life. You can see him coming to life and growing. The same was true for Dash. Both men came with issues but neither one was upset about the other’s past issues or present one’s either. A delight from beginning to end, Dearly & Deviant Daniel is perfect for those who enjoy a touch of mystery, some suspense, and a bit of creepy with their romance. The best part is that more is coming.
This story was so very captivating. Not only dId L.A. Kaye create two amazing heroes but added in some incredible side characters to add extra richness. Keir was just existing until Dash entered his life. You can see him coming to life and growing. The same was true for Dash. Both men came with issues but neither one was upset about the other’s past issues or present one’s either. A delight from beginning to end, Dearly & Deviant Daniel is perfect for those who enjoy a touch of mystery, some suspense, and a bit of creepy with their romance. The best part is that more is coming.
February 28, 2023
A funeral director who is also a medium is bound to be fuel for interesting stories. Toss some romance inside a murder mystery and you have my attention. This type of story is new to the author, and I could see a few places where the story could have the edges smoothed out. I had fun listening rough edges and all. I was engaged the entire story. A few tidbits of info could have unfolded a little more slowly. I think it would make sense to have the origins of Kier's abilities be part of the ongoing mystery rather than lay them out in the first book, but I prefer a multi-layered mystery over a simple "who dunnit".
The narration was decent. Some of the narrators pauses were a touch awkward, and I was a bit confused by his pronunciation of Bogart. I did enjoy the narrator's voice, and his character voices were distinct enough.
Overall, this was an entertaining story with great characters including the side characters. I am looking forward to the next book.
The narration was decent. Some of the narrators pauses were a touch awkward, and I was a bit confused by his pronunciation of Bogart. I did enjoy the narrator's voice, and his character voices were distinct enough.
Overall, this was an entertaining story with great characters including the side characters. I am looking forward to the next book.
December 20, 2023
It's not...bad? But the author sure is taking A LOT of liberties with how anything related to crime/detectives/police work. And I say that as someone who's only real knowledge comes from Law & Order and Forensic Files.
Like...the cops have a murder victim and they tell the mortician all about their undercover plans to catch the guy they've already decided is the murderer based on the fact that he's been in jail before? Thats it. That's all they've got?
They have an ex fiance who was cheated on but they're still going after the brother with no motive? They haven't even interviewed the ex fiance? Or searched the dead guy's apartment???
The cop threatens the mortician and then asks him on a date? OK. Maybe that one seems realistic.
Anyways, I've been on a gay mystery binge and had high hopes because I adored Spectral Files by SE Harmon (similar plot) but this book is really letting me down.
Like...the cops have a murder victim and they tell the mortician all about their undercover plans to catch the guy they've already decided is the murderer based on the fact that he's been in jail before? Thats it. That's all they've got?
They have an ex fiance who was cheated on but they're still going after the brother with no motive? They haven't even interviewed the ex fiance? Or searched the dead guy's apartment???
The cop threatens the mortician and then asks him on a date? OK. Maybe that one seems realistic.
Anyways, I've been on a gay mystery binge and had high hopes because I adored Spectral Files by SE Harmon (similar plot) but this book is really letting me down.
October 16, 2022
This definitely had a different twist to ghosts and it is perfect timing for Halloween. Keir Dearly’s family own a funeral parlour and he inherited it when his father passed away. Oh and he can speak/see ghosts. One night he got a new “guest” who started talking to him. His name is Daniel Clegg and he asked Keir to help his brother not get arrested. Keir met Dash and, even though it was a terrible time, they started talking. You can tell the chemistry was there. They slowly started to get to know each other while trying to solve the mystery. This is HFN book and looking forward to reading the next one
I received a copy of this book for my review.
I received a copy of this book for my review.
June 10, 2024
My first ever book read on a kindle, we cheered!!
Disappointing but honestly I didn't have much hopes for it. The mcs were forgettable and lame, and don't even get me started on their romance. It was rushed, cringy, and honestly didn't make sense. I read the second book's sypnosis and lo-and-behold; they broke up.
Disappointing but honestly I didn't have much hopes for it. The mcs were forgettable and lame, and don't even get me started on their romance. It was rushed, cringy, and honestly didn't make sense. I read the second book's sypnosis and lo-and-behold; they broke up.
October 17, 2022
This was an okay read, not the best but not the worst. This is the first book of this type by this author and sometimes that can be a little slow, so I'll read the next one and save judgement.
October 18, 2022
I really enjoyed this new PNR series by L.A Kaye, I liked Keir and Dash the two main characters and enjoyed seeing them go from attraction to more. I liked that Keir trusted his gut and went to bat for Dash when the police were out to pin his brother Daniel's murder on him. Daniel was not a nice character at all and I feel if he'd really wanted to help his brother out when the police were out to get him he'd have told Keir everything and not played games by beating around the bush, a really unlikeable character in life and in death.
I enjoyed meeting Keir's best friend Barry and his two new employees Amelie and Scott, I liked that they have special gifts like Keir and were able to help him with the mystery surrounding Daniel's death and I'm guessing they'll play a part in future mysteries.
The two cops, good cop, Jay Frick and bad (very unlikeable) cop, Ramon Torres, didn't seem to want to do much more digging than they had to, though Frick did redeem himself somewhat later on.
I liked that Jay Frick and Keir had a connection and that Keir's relationship with Dash, while strong and real wasn't completely cut and dried, adding Jay into the mix allows for some potentially interesting situations in the future if L.A Kaye goes that way. I'm not opposed to a triad between them.
I found it odd that Keir's father never mentioned the family gift for talking to the dead, maybe if he had, Keir's life would have been a little different. But I'm glad that even though he is dead, he is now reaching out to help Keir where he can. Because it sounds like things could get hairy.
I'm looking forward to book 2 in this series.
I enjoyed meeting Keir's best friend Barry and his two new employees Amelie and Scott, I liked that they have special gifts like Keir and were able to help him with the mystery surrounding Daniel's death and I'm guessing they'll play a part in future mysteries.
The two cops, good cop, Jay Frick and bad (very unlikeable) cop, Ramon Torres, didn't seem to want to do much more digging than they had to, though Frick did redeem himself somewhat later on.
I liked that Jay Frick and Keir had a connection and that Keir's relationship with Dash, while strong and real wasn't completely cut and dried, adding Jay into the mix allows for some potentially interesting situations in the future if L.A Kaye goes that way. I'm not opposed to a triad between them.
I found it odd that Keir's father never mentioned the family gift for talking to the dead, maybe if he had, Keir's life would have been a little different. But I'm glad that even though he is dead, he is now reaching out to help Keir where he can. Because it sounds like things could get hairy.
I'm looking forward to book 2 in this series.
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November 24, 2023DNF at 23%
I have been having trouble with liking books. This was actually one of the better ones in the slew of DNFs I have been having but still. It was not exciting. The talking to ghosts part read like watching paint dry. The MCs by themselves were quirky but together they did not have chemistry. Some authors have the knack for writing $*exual tension between the MCs and this was not it. *sigh*
I have been having trouble with liking books. This was actually one of the better ones in the slew of DNFs I have been having but still. It was not exciting. The talking to ghosts part read like watching paint dry. The MCs by themselves were quirky but together they did not have chemistry. Some authors have the knack for writing $*exual tension between the MCs and this was not it. *sigh*
October 21, 2022
I really enjoyed this book. The characters were engaging and kept me reading to find out what happened to Daniel. Urgh Daniel. Lol.
Kier is the own of Dearly and Som, a funeral home. He can see the recently deceased as ghosts as well as talk to them. He meets Dash, shop mechanic and owner when Dash brother Daniel is murdered
Kier and Dash are super sweet with each other. Dash had been burned badly in the past and Kier is too busy for relationships. Their story ends on a HFN and we get a glimpse into book 2.
I look forward to the next book to see if they can make this relationship work as I really did enjoy them together. I also hope there is a book for Jay in the future.
Kier is the own of Dearly and Som, a funeral home. He can see the recently deceased as ghosts as well as talk to them. He meets Dash, shop mechanic and owner when Dash brother Daniel is murdered
Kier and Dash are super sweet with each other. Dash had been burned badly in the past and Kier is too busy for relationships. Their story ends on a HFN and we get a glimpse into book 2.
I look forward to the next book to see if they can make this relationship work as I really did enjoy them together. I also hope there is a book for Jay in the future.
October 22, 2022
You lost me about the time of cheese platter and wine..
I had high hopes for this book, because I am a sucker for MM mystery. If it is a paranormal MM mystery, even better. And yet... this one disappointed me. The inconsistencies were killing me. And while I realize the arc is before edits, it still made me twitchy. And then I got to that cheese platter and wine... Too much. Way too much. So far along in the story, that person was not liked by the MC, but suddenly after one fight with his love interest, he goes all drama queen and "why not". Seriously? Sure, they had that take things slow, being in denial and not admitting their feeling thing going, but after all those accidental "love" nicknames? Buddy, you are subtle as a sledgehammer. So after all that sappy stuff and romantic getaway, suddenly it is fine to go on a date with another person? You don't go on dates with the guy you are sleeping with, but can play twenty questions and divulge family stuff to another person on a semi-date? Yeah no. There is a name for such people who date other people while in a relationship, justifying it with "but we were on a break at the time". I am not a fan of that. I am not a fan of love triangles either, and this felt too artificial and inconsistent. After years of not being considered very attractive and scaring dates off with his occupation, MC is suddenly what I term "a golden goose" - everyone wants him and in this case finds him attractive. Not a fan of that trope either. So while it was a interesting if a bit tedious read up to that point, after that it lost a lot of its shine. Sadly, it went downhill from that point. The change of pen name didn't change the writing style and I can only conclude that I am just not compatible with it. So thanks for the book, but I am giving up on this author.
**I was provided an ARC of this book from the GRR for an honest review**
I had high hopes for this book, because I am a sucker for MM mystery. If it is a paranormal MM mystery, even better. And yet... this one disappointed me. The inconsistencies were killing me. And while I realize the arc is before edits, it still made me twitchy. And then I got to that cheese platter and wine... Too much. Way too much. So far along in the story, that person was not liked by the MC, but suddenly after one fight with his love interest, he goes all drama queen and "why not". Seriously? Sure, they had that take things slow, being in denial and not admitting their feeling thing going, but after all those accidental "love" nicknames? Buddy, you are subtle as a sledgehammer. So after all that sappy stuff and romantic getaway, suddenly it is fine to go on a date with another person? You don't go on dates with the guy you are sleeping with, but can play twenty questions and divulge family stuff to another person on a semi-date? Yeah no. There is a name for such people who date other people while in a relationship, justifying it with "but we were on a break at the time". I am not a fan of that. I am not a fan of love triangles either, and this felt too artificial and inconsistent. After years of not being considered very attractive and scaring dates off with his occupation, MC is suddenly what I term "a golden goose" - everyone wants him and in this case finds him attractive. Not a fan of that trope either. So while it was a interesting if a bit tedious read up to that point, after that it lost a lot of its shine. Sadly, it went downhill from that point. The change of pen name didn't change the writing style and I can only conclude that I am just not compatible with it. So thanks for the book, but I am giving up on this author.
**I was provided an ARC of this book from the GRR for an honest review**
November 18, 2023
DNF'd at 55%
The blurb sounded amazing and I couldn't wait to jump start into it honestly. I may have pushed aside an arc or two in favor of starting this one.
But honestly? The first sex scene was just... If you don't want to write spice, don't. Although I love spicy books and scenes, they're not a requirement. Just... please don't use euphemisms through the entire thing for every. single. body. part. Blegh. I really didn't need exact measurements of this dudes dick but am still left confused on how this dude legit was rocking a pepsi can penis?
The few sex scenes I got through made it feel more like MF sex than MM, so I'm curious if this author has another name they write under.
These two felt more like confused teenagers than adults and I mean, I get it. Who knows how to sort out a funeral and everything that comes with it until you HAVE to do it? But the fact that this dude was just so absolutely clueless about EVERYTHING just made me want to smash my head into a table.
The cops pull Dash to let him know his brother was murdered and he then proceeds to go and tell them every single thing he did that night (aka: he has no alibi as he was alone). Then this dude goes to his murdered brothers apartment, to find clothing for his funeral, and instead rustles through his stuff touching, ALL the things. Like, dude. Just... no. GET A LAWYER. HAVE LAWYER GET YOU HIS CLOTHING.
Also, how was the murdered brother able to use all of his information and Dash didn't get a single notification for it? Or the murdered brother didn't have to show a SINGLE piece of ID to open so many accounts in his name?
I appreciated how Keir went from being a gangly, pale looking weirdo to apparently the sexiest thing this town has ever seen and suddenly now all the dudes want in. Because sure, why not at this point.
CAN WE JUST TALK ABOUT THIS LINE THOUGH?
"It felt so fucking good, I had to think about dead puppies to keep from shooting too soon."
Yeah, no. NOOOOOOOPE.
The blurb sounded amazing and I couldn't wait to jump start into it honestly. I may have pushed aside an arc or two in favor of starting this one.
But honestly? The first sex scene was just... If you don't want to write spice, don't. Although I love spicy books and scenes, they're not a requirement. Just... please don't use euphemisms through the entire thing for every. single. body. part. Blegh. I really didn't need exact measurements of this dudes dick but am still left confused on how this dude legit was rocking a pepsi can penis?
The few sex scenes I got through made it feel more like MF sex than MM, so I'm curious if this author has another name they write under.
These two felt more like confused teenagers than adults and I mean, I get it. Who knows how to sort out a funeral and everything that comes with it until you HAVE to do it? But the fact that this dude was just so absolutely clueless about EVERYTHING just made me want to smash my head into a table.
The cops pull Dash to let him know his brother was murdered and he then proceeds to go and tell them every single thing he did that night (aka: he has no alibi as he was alone). Then this dude goes to his murdered brothers apartment, to find clothing for his funeral, and instead rustles through his stuff touching, ALL the things. Like, dude. Just... no. GET A LAWYER. HAVE LAWYER GET YOU HIS CLOTHING.
Also, how was the murdered brother able to use all of his information and Dash didn't get a single notification for it? Or the murdered brother didn't have to show a SINGLE piece of ID to open so many accounts in his name?
I appreciated how Keir went from being a gangly, pale looking weirdo to apparently the sexiest thing this town has ever seen and suddenly now all the dudes want in. Because sure, why not at this point.
CAN WE JUST TALK ABOUT THIS LINE THOUGH?
"It felt so fucking good, I had to think about dead puppies to keep from shooting too soon."
Yeah, no. NOOOOOOOPE.
April 19, 2023
Kier Dearly is a mortician that sees spirits/ghosts and Dash Clegg is a mechanic.
It seemed like 90% of the people that die and end up in Dearly & Sons Funeral Home are jerks. Their ghosts are always repentant and sorry for being bullies/jerks while they were alive. And even though Kier is able to see them, he is not a medium that works/does big grand gestures to help the ghosts cross over. They all seem to cross over easily after regretting their life except Daniel Clegg, Dash's older brother, which is what most of this book is about.
The murder mystery surrounding Daniel Clegg was interesting, but Daniel himself was super annoying--which is a testament to the writer because he was a huge jerk of a character. I didn't buy his act of trying to be nice to his brother as a last hurrah, and also didn't buy Dash being heartbroken over his death since they were pretty estranged.
The love story between Kier and Dash was very sweet. Also maybe with Jay Frick, the detective; there seems to be something there, or maybe he'll just end up staying in the friend zone, who knows? Kinda hoping for an MMM in the next book, even if it's not a true triad but with Kier having 2 boyfriends instead. That'd be an even bigger shock for the small town that seems to still have homophobic residents about.
I received an ARC of this book and this is my honest review. All opinions are my own and not influenced by the author.
It seemed like 90% of the people that die and end up in Dearly & Sons Funeral Home are jerks. Their ghosts are always repentant and sorry for being bullies/jerks while they were alive. And even though Kier is able to see them, he is not a medium that works/does big grand gestures to help the ghosts cross over. They all seem to cross over easily after regretting their life except Daniel Clegg, Dash's older brother, which is what most of this book is about.
The murder mystery surrounding Daniel Clegg was interesting, but Daniel himself was super annoying--which is a testament to the writer because he was a huge jerk of a character. I didn't buy his act of trying to be nice to his brother as a last hurrah, and also didn't buy Dash being heartbroken over his death since they were pretty estranged.
The love story between Kier and Dash was very sweet. Also maybe with Jay Frick, the detective; there seems to be something there, or maybe he'll just end up staying in the friend zone, who knows? Kinda hoping for an MMM in the next book, even if it's not a true triad but with Kier having 2 boyfriends instead. That'd be an even bigger shock for the small town that seems to still have homophobic residents about.
I received an ARC of this book and this is my honest review. All opinions are my own and not influenced by the author.
October 22, 2022
I'm afraid this was a DNF for me.
First of all, when I accepted the ARC, I was not made aware that this was a Cliffhanger series. I don't do cliffhangers.
Secondly, although the premise is an interesting one, and quite unique, I simply could not tolerate the childish cat & mouse game that Daniel was playing.
He was quite possibly the most hateful man when he was alive. Could he not have shown at least a little remorse in death?
I was not going to hang around for his abuse of Keir & Dash for a moment past 40% (at which point I felt the plot was getting ridiculous)
So, no. I won't be following up on this series.
Moving on.
First of all, when I accepted the ARC, I was not made aware that this was a Cliffhanger series. I don't do cliffhangers.
Secondly, although the premise is an interesting one, and quite unique, I simply could not tolerate the childish cat & mouse game that Daniel was playing.
He was quite possibly the most hateful man when he was alive. Could he not have shown at least a little remorse in death?
I was not going to hang around for his abuse of Keir & Dash for a moment past 40% (at which point I felt the plot was getting ridiculous)
So, no. I won't be following up on this series.
Moving on.
Read
April 18, 2024Great premise but the execution was off.
Problems with:
-Disjointed storyline
-Characters run hot/cold
-Weak “detective” work
-Sex scenes were odd: Like many M/M romances, the book could do with some research or sensitivity readers. I found myself questioning some of the phrasing/descriptions the author uses which read more like a F/M pairing.
Problems with:
-Disjointed storyline
-Characters run hot/cold
-Weak “detective” work
-Sex scenes were odd: Like many M/M romances, the book could do with some research or sensitivity readers. I found myself questioning some of the phrasing/descriptions the author uses which read more like a F/M pairing.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
August 3, 2023
interesting, some promising ideas and some issues
Rating: 3.75🌈
Dearly & Deviant Daniel is the first in a new series, Dearly and The Departed, by L.A. Kaye. Centered firmly in the popular trope of main characters who’re able to see and converse with the dead/newly departed, Kaye’s MC is Mortician Keir Dearly, of Dearly & Son Mortuary, a business that’s been handed down through generations of Dearly men.
He’s been able to see and talk to the dead since his teens, a fact he’s kept to himself. Naturally. Unfortunately, since he’s always in the mortuary, there’s dead people ready to talk to him and ask for favors constantly.
Which happens when a particularly nasty person dies and asks Keir to help his brother stay out of the prison . Seems that the dead man has framed his brother for things he regrets but definitely not murder.
That’s the basic premise of the story.
Around that Kaye needs to build her storyline,as well as fill in the paranormal background , all the weird characters, and continue with the growing relationships that started within the narrative.
Is the author successful? Only partially. The world building has the feeling of jumbled assembly. As a reader, I’m just getting into the interesting aspects of the historical paranormal history and foundations being setup but instead of continuing to explore the universe being laid out, the opposite happens. The narrative breaks here and there , so only bits and pieces are visible, or it opens gaps where elements disappear all together.
A mysterious helper arrives, background of which is constantly changing. A grandfather appears in an unexpected place and just as quickly disappears. His supportive role diminished when it is explained that it’s really a portent of darkness coming. So why not embellish it ? Why allow this to dribble narratively away? It’s elements like this that add up to storyline with issues.
There’s the odd physical descriptions. Forty-ish, Keir describes himself as tall, thin, of the whitish skin, with brown hair and ice blue eyes. An appearance typical of someone, he thinks, you associate with the mortuary and dead. He very much resembles all the Dearly men. Sounds a bit on the vampire/ghoul side. Not even a hint that’s he’s remotely attractive. But the other main character insists Keir is insanely hot. That’s so odd because the author hasn’t put in the groundwork for this. He’s kind, compassionate, and intelligent. Insanely hot? Nope, haven’t done the paperwork on that.
Mechanic Dashiell Clegg and his dead dreadful brother are weak points here. Not sure why Kaye called Daniel deviant outside of the need for a cute name. Dead Daniel is reprehensible. A man who thought nothing of betraying everyone around him, framing his brother, putting others into danger, a sexual predator, oddly he now decides to save his living brother he supposedly hates and has setup makes zero sense. Especially when he’s still a manipulative dead mess throughout the book. Great smarmy character though. Dashiell is younger hotheaded mechanic who borders on the TSTL character. When in doubt, run off into dangerous situations without telling anyone then be surprised at the obvious consequences. SMH.
When Keir has a chance to date two people, a great detective and Dashiell, I started rooting for the detective.
What saves Dearly & Deviant Daniel is the side storylines, those of the dearly departed of lesser characters . Some are funny, some grim, and one had me outright sobbing, it was so well written that the pain, regret , and bitter loss was overwhelming. That was believable and raw.
I wish the main characters and theme had showcased more of that aspect and emotion.
I’m onto the next to see what happens after the cliffhanger this ends on. A strange one that again made absolutely zero sense.
Read this for the fun of the trope, and the beauty of those small scenes I indicated above. They are worthy of the entire story.
Dearly and Departed series:
- [x] Dearly & Deviant Daniel #1
- [ ] Dearly & Vain Valentino #2
- [ ] Dearly & Notorious Nancy #3
- [ ] Dearly & Homeless Horace #4-Jan 16,2024
- [ ] Dearly & Threatening Thane #5-June 28, 2024
Rating: 3.75🌈
Dearly & Deviant Daniel is the first in a new series, Dearly and The Departed, by L.A. Kaye. Centered firmly in the popular trope of main characters who’re able to see and converse with the dead/newly departed, Kaye’s MC is Mortician Keir Dearly, of Dearly & Son Mortuary, a business that’s been handed down through generations of Dearly men.
He’s been able to see and talk to the dead since his teens, a fact he’s kept to himself. Naturally. Unfortunately, since he’s always in the mortuary, there’s dead people ready to talk to him and ask for favors constantly.
Which happens when a particularly nasty person dies and asks Keir to help his brother stay out of the prison . Seems that the dead man has framed his brother for things he regrets but definitely not murder.
That’s the basic premise of the story.
Around that Kaye needs to build her storyline,as well as fill in the paranormal background , all the weird characters, and continue with the growing relationships that started within the narrative.
Is the author successful? Only partially. The world building has the feeling of jumbled assembly. As a reader, I’m just getting into the interesting aspects of the historical paranormal history and foundations being setup but instead of continuing to explore the universe being laid out, the opposite happens. The narrative breaks here and there , so only bits and pieces are visible, or it opens gaps where elements disappear all together.
A mysterious helper arrives, background of which is constantly changing. A grandfather appears in an unexpected place and just as quickly disappears. His supportive role diminished when it is explained that it’s really a portent of darkness coming. So why not embellish it ? Why allow this to dribble narratively away? It’s elements like this that add up to storyline with issues.
There’s the odd physical descriptions. Forty-ish, Keir describes himself as tall, thin, of the whitish skin, with brown hair and ice blue eyes. An appearance typical of someone, he thinks, you associate with the mortuary and dead. He very much resembles all the Dearly men. Sounds a bit on the vampire/ghoul side. Not even a hint that’s he’s remotely attractive. But the other main character insists Keir is insanely hot. That’s so odd because the author hasn’t put in the groundwork for this. He’s kind, compassionate, and intelligent. Insanely hot? Nope, haven’t done the paperwork on that.
Mechanic Dashiell Clegg and his dead dreadful brother are weak points here. Not sure why Kaye called Daniel deviant outside of the need for a cute name. Dead Daniel is reprehensible. A man who thought nothing of betraying everyone around him, framing his brother, putting others into danger, a sexual predator, oddly he now decides to save his living brother he supposedly hates and has setup makes zero sense. Especially when he’s still a manipulative dead mess throughout the book. Great smarmy character though. Dashiell is younger hotheaded mechanic who borders on the TSTL character. When in doubt, run off into dangerous situations without telling anyone then be surprised at the obvious consequences. SMH.
When Keir has a chance to date two people, a great detective and Dashiell, I started rooting for the detective.
What saves Dearly & Deviant Daniel is the side storylines, those of the dearly departed of lesser characters . Some are funny, some grim, and one had me outright sobbing, it was so well written that the pain, regret , and bitter loss was overwhelming. That was believable and raw.
I wish the main characters and theme had showcased more of that aspect and emotion.
I’m onto the next to see what happens after the cliffhanger this ends on. A strange one that again made absolutely zero sense.
Read this for the fun of the trope, and the beauty of those small scenes I indicated above. They are worthy of the entire story.
Dearly and Departed series:
- [x] Dearly & Deviant Daniel #1
- [ ] Dearly & Vain Valentino #2
- [ ] Dearly & Notorious Nancy #3
- [ ] Dearly & Homeless Horace #4-Jan 16,2024
- [ ] Dearly & Threatening Thane #5-June 28, 2024
October 19, 2022
This story started out great and had all the potential of a 5-star read.
The I-see-dead-people trope isn't new, but the whole thing with Keir running a funeral home was a new angle that made the story setup feel new and interesting.
After the first few chapters I was fully convinced I would end up giving it all the stars, but it became apparent after a while that the writing was a bit too uneven for that to happen.
Both Keir and Dash are likable characters. Their outward appearances couldn't be more different, but personality-wise they're both very kind men who just wants to find someone to call their own. But I thought that a lot of the character building, and the interactions and dialogues between the MCs were occasionally stilted when the intent was in fact to relay how they grew closer. It didn't really gel for me. Separately, Keir and Dash were great. But I wasn't as convinced as I would've liked by their chemistry and togetherness. It didn't really feel organic. And it wasn't only Keir's and Dash's interactions that felt off at times. How Keir and the Detective, Jay Frick, were together also had some strange moments.
The plot was a bit convoluted. I won't go into details, but there were one or two plot-holes that irritated me. However, the main focus of this book isn't the mystery itself but Keir's and Dash's relationship, so I wasn't bothered too much.
All in all, it's a good read. And as I understand it it's actually Kaye's debut novel. As such it is very promising indeed.
But there's no denying there were some quirky stuff in there. For example, this was the first book I've ever read containing such precise measurements of a certain part of the male anatomy - Keir's anatomy to be precise (despite having read stories with p*rn-star MCs). And honestly, that part, with such an unusual girth/length ratio did ruin it a bit for me. Like, why?! It was an odd detail to include and didn't really add to the story. Instead it became an uncomfortable oddity, mentioned over and over, and it was made the focus in way too many scenes. It's safe to say the story would have been better without Keir's unusual proportions.
My final rating is 3.75 stars. Still, I'll probably read the sequel. I liked the premise, I liked the universe. And I absolutely want more of Keir and Dash.
* A free e-book was kindly provided by Gay Romance Reviews and this is my unbiased and voluntary review *
The I-see-dead-people trope isn't new, but the whole thing with Keir running a funeral home was a new angle that made the story setup feel new and interesting.
After the first few chapters I was fully convinced I would end up giving it all the stars, but it became apparent after a while that the writing was a bit too uneven for that to happen.
Both Keir and Dash are likable characters. Their outward appearances couldn't be more different, but personality-wise they're both very kind men who just wants to find someone to call their own. But I thought that a lot of the character building, and the interactions and dialogues between the MCs were occasionally stilted when the intent was in fact to relay how they grew closer. It didn't really gel for me. Separately, Keir and Dash were great. But I wasn't as convinced as I would've liked by their chemistry and togetherness. It didn't really feel organic. And it wasn't only Keir's and Dash's interactions that felt off at times. How Keir and the Detective, Jay Frick, were together also had some strange moments.
The plot was a bit convoluted. I won't go into details, but there were one or two plot-holes that irritated me. However, the main focus of this book isn't the mystery itself but Keir's and Dash's relationship, so I wasn't bothered too much.
All in all, it's a good read. And as I understand it it's actually Kaye's debut novel. As such it is very promising indeed.
But there's no denying there were some quirky stuff in there. For example, this was the first book I've ever read containing such precise measurements of a certain part of the male anatomy - Keir's anatomy to be precise (despite having read stories with p*rn-star MCs). And honestly, that part, with such an unusual girth/length ratio did ruin it a bit for me. Like, why?! It was an odd detail to include and didn't really add to the story. Instead it became an uncomfortable oddity, mentioned over and over, and it was made the focus in way too many scenes. It's safe to say the story would have been better without Keir's unusual proportions.
My final rating is 3.75 stars. Still, I'll probably read the sequel. I liked the premise, I liked the universe. And I absolutely want more of Keir and Dash.
* A free e-book was kindly provided by Gay Romance Reviews and this is my unbiased and voluntary review *
February 21, 2025
Keir Dearly is a mortician who prides himself on ensuring every single one of his guests receives a respectful ceremony and remembrance. But when he meets Dash Clegg, the brother of murder victim Daniel Clegg, and Keir's most recent guest, his quiet life gets turned completely upside down.
Dash is being framed for Daniel's murder, and Keir is determined to help him. He's also determined to get answers from the dead man himself. Which is simple in that Keir can communicate with ghosts, but difficult in that even in death, even with his brother's life on the line, Daniel is a cryptic, grade A asshole.
Now, I've been around these ghosty mysteries long enough to know that something deeper, and darker, is afoot. Something's going on beyond the veil, or something may possibly be after Keir himself. Either way, there is an undefined, uncertain Something going on, and I have a feeling it's going to be a series-long Something. Which is just as well, considering the abilities of the new people in Keir's life.
Running a funeral home takes a lot of work. And that work is made easier with the assistance of Keir's new administrative assistant, Amelie, and his mortuary assistant, Scott. Both of whom also have varying abilities. Both of whom felt it was in their best interests to put themselves in Keir's path to not only help him out around the business, but help him out with all things ghosty.
Add to that a possible love triangle (maybe) in the form of the dashing homicide detective, Jay, and the charming motorcycle mechanic, Dash, and Keir's quiet life has definitely been flipped around and turned upside down.
I enjoyed seeing Keir and Dash grow closer together. It's pretty clear they're endgame at this point, it's just a matter of time. And they may get that time, what with the drama of Dash's brother's murder being all wrapped up in a very, very messy bow. But I also loved Keir getting to know Jay, as well. While more sparks flew between Dash and Keir, that doesn't mean they can't be friends with Jay. And if these paranormal mysteries have taught me anything, befriending a homicide detective is never a bad idea.
Dearly & Deviant Daniel is a really solid start to what I think is going to turn into a very interesting series full of twists and turns. And possibly some mortal peril. Or paranormal peril. Or both. Who knows? But I'm certainly going to have fun finding out.
Dash is being framed for Daniel's murder, and Keir is determined to help him. He's also determined to get answers from the dead man himself. Which is simple in that Keir can communicate with ghosts, but difficult in that even in death, even with his brother's life on the line, Daniel is a cryptic, grade A asshole.
Now, I've been around these ghosty mysteries long enough to know that something deeper, and darker, is afoot. Something's going on beyond the veil, or something may possibly be after Keir himself. Either way, there is an undefined, uncertain Something going on, and I have a feeling it's going to be a series-long Something. Which is just as well, considering the abilities of the new people in Keir's life.
Running a funeral home takes a lot of work. And that work is made easier with the assistance of Keir's new administrative assistant, Amelie, and his mortuary assistant, Scott. Both of whom also have varying abilities. Both of whom felt it was in their best interests to put themselves in Keir's path to not only help him out around the business, but help him out with all things ghosty.
Add to that a possible love triangle (maybe) in the form of the dashing homicide detective, Jay, and the charming motorcycle mechanic, Dash, and Keir's quiet life has definitely been flipped around and turned upside down.
I enjoyed seeing Keir and Dash grow closer together. It's pretty clear they're endgame at this point, it's just a matter of time. And they may get that time, what with the drama of Dash's brother's murder being all wrapped up in a very, very messy bow. But I also loved Keir getting to know Jay, as well. While more sparks flew between Dash and Keir, that doesn't mean they can't be friends with Jay. And if these paranormal mysteries have taught me anything, befriending a homicide detective is never a bad idea.
Dearly & Deviant Daniel is a really solid start to what I think is going to turn into a very interesting series full of twists and turns. And possibly some mortal peril. Or paranormal peril. Or both. Who knows? But I'm certainly going to have fun finding out.
March 6, 2024
So conflicted
So, first I’ll say I DNF book two in this series after about a quarter through. The positive, this is a really fun premise! I love a good, spooky story and always love a main character with some sort of cool gift like talking to/seeing the dead. Also, it’s hard to resist a good cozy mystery to solve: who really murdered the absolutely vile Daniel?
I also really liked Keir Dearly as a character - not a typical male lead as it goes. The emphasis on his care and compassion for both his own family and his ‘guests’ were lovely to see in a main character. I also enjoyed the glimpses of snark such as when he was interacting with his mother.
Now for the first problem, Dash. This character is not developed enough for a lead. He is beyond a doubt TSTL. Spoiler: who on earth agrees to meet up at an office where they have already been accused of one murder WITH SOMEONE WHO HAS ALREADY ADMITTED TO BEING INVOLVED IN THE COVERUP?!?? I mean really? What was the author even doing with that?
Also, I really don’t get the instant connection/devotion Keir had for Dash. Right away Keir’s happy to (incompetently) intervene between him and the police with only a couple conversations between them. They both jump instantly into bed - fine, it happens - but there’s just not enough on page development of the relationship between them or even just a direct acknowledgment of their mutual attraction to justify their decisions.
A final problem, the conflict just kind of…ends. There’s a really underwhelming confrontation between Dash and the case detectives after the second murder. But then they just kind of show up out of the blue, explain the bare minimum facts of the case, and say “Great, you’re no longer wanted for murder!” A lot of set up just goes to waste with no proper climax to the plot.
I’m not even going to get into the frankly bonkers start to book two with Dash just deciding to flee the country BREAKING A DATE with no notice?!? And Keir just going sure we’re still boyfriends because I’m a spineless doormat?!?
Also, I know an author tries to show rather than tell, but too much is happening off the page in terms of world building with no one insisting on someone just sitting down and explaining things.
TLDR: I wanted to love the book with it’s interesting premise, but weak plotting and a bad main character led to a DNF.
So, first I’ll say I DNF book two in this series after about a quarter through. The positive, this is a really fun premise! I love a good, spooky story and always love a main character with some sort of cool gift like talking to/seeing the dead. Also, it’s hard to resist a good cozy mystery to solve: who really murdered the absolutely vile Daniel?
I also really liked Keir Dearly as a character - not a typical male lead as it goes. The emphasis on his care and compassion for both his own family and his ‘guests’ were lovely to see in a main character. I also enjoyed the glimpses of snark such as when he was interacting with his mother.
Now for the first problem, Dash. This character is not developed enough for a lead. He is beyond a doubt TSTL. Spoiler: who on earth agrees to meet up at an office where they have already been accused of one murder WITH SOMEONE WHO HAS ALREADY ADMITTED TO BEING INVOLVED IN THE COVERUP?!?? I mean really? What was the author even doing with that?
Also, I really don’t get the instant connection/devotion Keir had for Dash. Right away Keir’s happy to (incompetently) intervene between him and the police with only a couple conversations between them. They both jump instantly into bed - fine, it happens - but there’s just not enough on page development of the relationship between them or even just a direct acknowledgment of their mutual attraction to justify their decisions.
A final problem, the conflict just kind of…ends. There’s a really underwhelming confrontation between Dash and the case detectives after the second murder. But then they just kind of show up out of the blue, explain the bare minimum facts of the case, and say “Great, you’re no longer wanted for murder!” A lot of set up just goes to waste with no proper climax to the plot.
I’m not even going to get into the frankly bonkers start to book two with Dash just deciding to flee the country BREAKING A DATE with no notice?!? And Keir just going sure we’re still boyfriends because I’m a spineless doormat?!?
Also, I know an author tries to show rather than tell, but too much is happening off the page in terms of world building with no one insisting on someone just sitting down and explaining things.
TLDR: I wanted to love the book with it’s interesting premise, but weak plotting and a bad main character led to a DNF.
October 18, 2022
This is an entertaining start to a new series with possible romance, a murder to solve and an MC who can talk to spirits. A little bit of everything to keep you invested from start to finish as we meet Keir Dearly, mortician, and Dash Clegg, motorcycle shop owner and murder suspect.
Keir is quite lonely, that comes through from his childhood and lack of connections as an adult except for his mum and a couple of friends. Things look up when he meets Dash and his attraction is returned, though not meeting under the best of circumstances as Dash's brother was killed a couple of days prior. The brother's spirit appears to Keir, telling him to clear his brother's name. Daniel is an awful person and someone who clearly had several people who could have killed him but that doesn't make it any easier to solve.
Dash is similar to Keir in that he seems quite lonely, only with a few people around him at work and no family. He does seems like he would be quite easy to frame for murder in certain aspects - not everyone is tech savvy - but he's such a lovely guy, the complete opposite of his brother. He and Keir have great chemistry that has them easily falling for each other but a lot of circumstances get in the way and it's an up and down road for them. The murder case is interesting in the whodunit sense. I thought a little more would come from the bad cop routine but I'm glad with how things worked out for Dash and we end on a HFN between the MC's.
Along with those two are some interesting characters that should keep things entertaining in the series. Scott and Amelie are Keir's new employees with certain quirks and someone from Keir's past has an ominous message that doesn't really bode well for the future so I'm looking forward to that! Overall, a really good read with good characters and story.
I received an ARC and am happily giving a review.
Keir is quite lonely, that comes through from his childhood and lack of connections as an adult except for his mum and a couple of friends. Things look up when he meets Dash and his attraction is returned, though not meeting under the best of circumstances as Dash's brother was killed a couple of days prior. The brother's spirit appears to Keir, telling him to clear his brother's name. Daniel is an awful person and someone who clearly had several people who could have killed him but that doesn't make it any easier to solve.
Dash is similar to Keir in that he seems quite lonely, only with a few people around him at work and no family. He does seems like he would be quite easy to frame for murder in certain aspects - not everyone is tech savvy - but he's such a lovely guy, the complete opposite of his brother. He and Keir have great chemistry that has them easily falling for each other but a lot of circumstances get in the way and it's an up and down road for them. The murder case is interesting in the whodunit sense. I thought a little more would come from the bad cop routine but I'm glad with how things worked out for Dash and we end on a HFN between the MC's.
Along with those two are some interesting characters that should keep things entertaining in the series. Scott and Amelie are Keir's new employees with certain quirks and someone from Keir's past has an ominous message that doesn't really bode well for the future so I'm looking forward to that! Overall, a really good read with good characters and story.
I received an ARC and am happily giving a review.
October 20, 2022
Good characters but a bit long-winded
I liked Keir, a kind man who treats everyone who enters his funeral home, living or dead, with the utmost care and courtesy. Enter Daniel to change all that, badgering Keir to ensure that his brother is not wrongly convicted of his murder.
Dash was also nice but a bit clueless, not having the faintest idea about the financials of his own business. He was like Keir, only having hookups and no relationships.
Keir and Daniel together were sweet but a bit like two teenage girls at times. Does he like me? Why hasn't he rung me? Their relationship was a bit strange, with both liking the other, thinking they were falling for the other, but not actually committing at any point. They did have the excuse of fighting to prove Dash's innocence but afterwards I thought there would be more between them but it still seems to be friends with benefits.
I liked the detective Jay Frick, after a slightly rocky start, and actually felt as though he would be a better match for Keir, and he was honest and open about his attraction to Keir and they got on very well.
The other characters in the book. apart from the horrid and extremely annoying Daniel, were so interesting. Best friend Barry, new employees Scott and Amelie, Keir's mum and her friend Lenny all fascinated me and I hope we see more of them next time round.
After all the meandering throughout, it surprised me how quickly the case was wrapped up and how little we heard from Dash about his brother. The ending was also abrupt and was not quite a HFN, more like a 'let's stop here and leave them hanging till the next one'. I will be reading that and quite possibly be keeping my fingers crossed for Keir and Jay, or possibly a poly relationship.
I liked Keir, a kind man who treats everyone who enters his funeral home, living or dead, with the utmost care and courtesy. Enter Daniel to change all that, badgering Keir to ensure that his brother is not wrongly convicted of his murder.
Dash was also nice but a bit clueless, not having the faintest idea about the financials of his own business. He was like Keir, only having hookups and no relationships.
Keir and Daniel together were sweet but a bit like two teenage girls at times. Does he like me? Why hasn't he rung me? Their relationship was a bit strange, with both liking the other, thinking they were falling for the other, but not actually committing at any point. They did have the excuse of fighting to prove Dash's innocence but afterwards I thought there would be more between them but it still seems to be friends with benefits.
I liked the detective Jay Frick, after a slightly rocky start, and actually felt as though he would be a better match for Keir, and he was honest and open about his attraction to Keir and they got on very well.
The other characters in the book. apart from the horrid and extremely annoying Daniel, were so interesting. Best friend Barry, new employees Scott and Amelie, Keir's mum and her friend Lenny all fascinated me and I hope we see more of them next time round.
After all the meandering throughout, it surprised me how quickly the case was wrapped up and how little we heard from Dash about his brother. The ending was also abrupt and was not quite a HFN, more like a 'let's stop here and leave them hanging till the next one'. I will be reading that and quite possibly be keeping my fingers crossed for Keir and Jay, or possibly a poly relationship.
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