NUR NADIA Seorang gadis pendek yang berumur 20 tahun. Memakai kaca mata tebal akan tetapi dia bukan sembarangan nerd. Tidak mudah dibuli, dia mempunyai prinsip dan meskipun cara pemakaiannya yang 'up to date' itu tidak ada alasan bagi dia untuk tidak menutup aurat. Seorang gadis ceria dan peramah, dia juga rajin menolong orang yang memerlukan bantuan.
TENGKU ADRIAN HARIS Lelaki tinggi lampai yang berumur 29 tahun. Berwajah tampan dan digilai oleh semua perempuan diluar sana. Seorang usahawan yang berjaya dan juga mafia yang digeruni. Selalu berwajah ketat. Dia akan melakukan apa sahaja untuk mendapatkan apa yang dia hendaki termasuk membunuh. Apabila si gadis nerd yang gedik dan manja bertemu dengan mafia yang kejam dan beku. Apa yang akan berlaku?
"Eleh... dasar diktator. Semua benda nak dengar cakap dia." - Nur Nadia
"Aku bagi kau dua pilihan. Kahwin dengan aku atau kau nak aku sembelih kucing kesayangan kau ni depan mata kau." - Adrian Haris
"Aku kahwin dengan kau ni sebab amanat ayah kau. Bukan sebab cinta. Jangan berharap lebih untuk aku balas cinta kau. Lagipun hati aku dah mati untuk bercinta sejak daddy dengan mommy aku mati." - Adrian Haris
Adakah misi Si Nerd untuk mencairkan hati Mafia Beku itu berjaya? Adakah rumah tangga mereka mencapai kebahagiaan seperti dalam novel-novel romantik? Bagaimanakah dengan pengakhiran dendam si mafia itu?
UPDATE 27/12: I just found out this review blew up bcs someone shared it on twitter. And I read a comment accusing I intentionally take this matter to twitter bcs I’m aiming the author since the beginning. Lol i dont even use twitter & do check my prev reviews. I’ve bn pointing out sensitive matters like this, which hv bn treated insensitively by the authors & the editors. The publisher has made their statement too. They’ll halt the book sale for the moment, correct the things that shd be done for the next printing. Which is good bcs as I said; the idea is good. Just bear in mind, rape is not something to be joked around & it’s a sensitive matter. Hopefully this serves as a lesson to us, especially those who think rape/rape joke is normal.
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The author: • Umur 23 • Menuntut di UKM Bangi • Jurusan: Dakwah dan Kepimpinan
The book:
pg 193 - “tapi aku rasa nak rogol kau je sekarang. Itu sebab aku nak cepat-cepat nikah dengan kau. Boleh aku rogol kau selalu.”
pg 281 - “Kalau kau buat macam tu kat aku lagi, aku akan pastikan kau mengandung anak aku sebelum kita kahwin nanti.”
pg 322 - Bulu romanya semakin merinding apabila dia merasakan tangan kasar Adrian mengusap perutnya.
Adrian terus menyelak baju Nadia sehingga menampakkan perut putih isterinya. Tanpa sebarang kata, Adrian terus mencium perut Nadia bertalu-talu.
pg 326 - “Baring! Kalau tak baring, aku rogol kau kat sofa ni.”
Rogol? Ada ke istilah rogol dalam perkahwinan sah antara suami dan isteri?
pg 399 - ‘Kalau kau nak kena rogol dengan aku, kau buat la.’
‘Kena rogol dengan biy? Awww takutnya kita. Hari2 pun saya mau.’
pg 458 - “Kalau kau tak bagi, aku rogol kau.”
WHAT KIND OF SICK FETISH IS THIS? Yes, marital rape exists. Rape is not love. No normal wife would want to be raped repeatedly fgs. Rape joke is not romantic at all. Ni ke formula buku bestseller terjual beribu-ribu naskhah? Mafia + rape joke + intimate scenes, sikit2 cium bibir.
Among some editings that could be done:
Let’s the game begin - Let the game begin This girl can being tool - can be a tool You will dead - You will die You’re wife is beautiful - Your wife is beautiful
Dear author, altho the dialogues & narratives are too wattpad-ish, your idea is good. But you need to work on it. I believe you’re good in action & thriller but pls stop romanticising rape. What did you learn in Dakwah dan Kepimpinan, that makes you think this is okay & normal? Editor shd hv done a better job. It’s kinda worrying seeing this kind of book in our mainstream market. Had this been published by Fixi, I wouldn’t have much to complain.
Kebetulan balik kampung, nampak dekat rak buku adik. Ambil , buka , baca. Selepas 5 minit dah turn off. Author harap lepas ni jangan guna lagi perkataan yang boleh buat org trigger/geli geleman/mati mood nak sambung bacaan. . Panggilan 'budak' contohnya, tu sumpah annoying ever. Sikit2 budak. Haih. "kau milik aku budak. diam lah budak. mari sini budak. " Aku ni dh mcm urghhh STOP IT ✋🏻. Sikit sikit dah la... . Lagi satu penggunaan bahasa, si Ad suka mentioned nak rogol wife dia. Kalau tak dengar arahan nak rogol. 🙄 Sumpah, tak romantik langsung. . No wonder adik aku cakap best, bagi aku buku melayu dark gaya2 wattpad disukai oleh golongan muda yang belum berjumpa realiti hidup. Rogol bukan mainan ya adik2. Mangsa rogol ramai bunuh diri. Inikan pula nak romanticising rape even conversation tu adalah sesama suami isteri. . Lagi satu, mafia vibes tu tak sampai..kumpulan mafia halal? takda aktiviti rasuah atau pelacuran, atau benda2 haram. .
I read this a few months ago, so let me try to recall my experience:
Nothing much to say (or write), I just have one issue - the flashback scene when both MMC and FMC were young somewhat didn't make sense. How did a child less than 10 years have such complex thoughts? It'd makes more sense if they were in their teenage years.
When they became adults, we get to see a tsundere MMC, and a witty FMC. I don’t really mind the age gap between the characters except for when he kept calling her “budak”, lol. Good writing style and flow, despite the mediocre plot.
I can't comment on the Spanish because I'm not fluent in it, but I did notice some grammatical errors in the English sentences. Did the editor make any effort to correct them? I'm curious. Perhaps hiring a professional could solve the problem.
There are numerous areas that need to be improved. I'm looking forward to seeing the author's progress!
Shame on you author for writing such a terrible novel! Do you really think RAPE is a joke? MEROGOL ADALAH SATU JENAYAH and you should know more based on background of your study. This softporn kind of novel should be banned since the reader might be from young teenagers.
Terfikir macam mana buku ni lepas untuk di publish at the first place. Sangat turn off bila baca novel ni, and im not able to finish it since so childish!
I'm glad that people finally speak up about this. some of my friends read this book and they love it soo much. but when I read it I feel nothing but disappointment bcs of the triggering content written in this book. how far, the author would've made a great book if the intimacy scenes were lessened and the sensitive jokes removed. the Malay book industry really needs more educational book to be published. just because the author is well-known and their books are likable it doesn't mean that they deserve to go any further. please, choose a book wisely before publishing.
Tak tahulah kenapa boleh terbeli buku ni..beli pun sbb mcm hype kt tiktok dulu..dan lepas viral dgn isu terbaru ni, kita cubalah baca..Ya, novel ni tersangatlah childish dan tak masuk dek akal (sangat annoyed dgn word budak tu)..Penulis menjadikan kerjaya mafia tu mcm kerja yg halal, suci lg murni pulak..Ayat kasar dan ganas dlm novel ni pun nampak mcm try hard sgt dan too cringe for me..
Terbaca sikit. Disgusting. Lebih jijik daripada najis. Lebih hina daripada khinzir. Maaf cakap.
Semoga sang penulis duduk diam-diam dalam bilik & fikir apa tujuan anda menulis novel jijik sebegini. Adakah kerana mahu mewarisi pemikiran kotor anda kepada generasi muda yang sedang taksub dengan hal-hal tular?
Malu sikit. Anda seorang muslimah, bukan kafir. Fikirlah.
Buku yang mengarut. Adakah penulis cuba nak sampaikan yang raped jokes itu adalah satu benda yang boleh dibawa bergurau. Kalau ya, then, meh saya rogol awak wahai cik penulis. Lawak kan?
Buku dibeli kerana terpengaruh dekat TikTok.. percubaan yang baik buat penulis.. Idea yang bagus tapi gaya bahasa perlu diperhebatkan. Mungkin utk muda mudi.. jiwa remaja sangat suka naskah ini.. bagi saya... Masih boleh dilayan.. saya sentiasa sokong karya dan usaha penulis baru..
sampah ape yang aku dah baca ni? first jalan cerita dia cringe nak mampus tapi aku dapat habiskan juga. tapi benda yang aku tak boleh bla kan author ade letak “rape joke” dalam novel ni. ingat hot ke? 🤦🏻
“boleh aku r#### kau selalu” bitch the fuck??? mcm manelah buku ni boleh di publish jadi novel, tak boleh brain. Ape lah yang ade dalam kepala otak author masa dia buat story ni. tak recommended 🙏😭
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The author needs to read at least 10,000 books and also do some research. I don't even understand how the publisher/editor approved this kind of book. Full or errors. 😮💨😮💨😮💨. This gives Malay novels bad names 😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨😮💨.
I can only give a good review for the concept & jalan cerita. It was a good try by the author, but........ Nadia & Adrian beza umur 9 tahun so masa Nadia 10 tahun, Adrian was 19 y.o & Adrian dah start suke kt Nadia at that point. A 10 year old kid!!! I'm not sure if that makes him a paedo but budak 10 tahun kot!!!
Then the rape joke. Seriously???!!! Like I don't know what kind of a girl would fall for a guy who makes rape jokes. A mental one maybe. Adrian suka2 hati cium pipi Nadia, doesn't that count as sexual harassment already?
Penggunaan bahasa yg cringe. Yg xleh tahan nye part Rachel (who is a British girl btw) can make grammar mistakes. Eg: "Oh sorry, I'M just want to meet you and discuss about Black Rose. That's why I'M come here to PICK UP YOU and go to headquarters tonight." I get it if the mistake comes from the author coz nobody's perfect but editor x buat kerja kaaa???
This kind of books la yg buat kan some readers x minat nk baca novel2 melayu. To find a good one nowadays is like looking for a diamond in the rough.
Saya tak tahu previous review pasal novel ni. Tapi bila baca sampai pg 194 yg ambil masa 4 hari (total page 633), saya rasa saya tak nak teruskan lagi bacaan. Then, barulah nak tengok review di goodread. Dan saya tertanya, mcm mana dia boleh sampai cetakan kesepuluh (my book). Dan saya rasa, tiada amendment dari pihak penerbitan which is ada komen dari 2022 nyatakan yg pihak penerbit nak edit semula novel ni, if not mistaken la. Agak kecewa, sebab sinopsis sangat menarik. Tapi bila baca, karakter lelaki ni sangat tak sesuai dgn watak yang writer cuba gambarkan. Watak Ketua mafia dan berumur 29 tahun, tapi karakter yg penulis tonjolkan macam budak�� sekolah menengah yg problematic. Level² jahat budak sekolah je, padahal katanya ketua kumpulan mafia paling berpengaruh. Itu yang saya dapat bayangkan. Lepastu, watak si Sally ni. Boleh tak tolong pecat minah ni. Dia macam, ada ke budak² rempit kerja sykt yg dikatakan gah dan bersikap tidak profesional ? Alamak, sis stress baca macam ni. Ini sajalah yg mampu saya komen setakat pembacaan saya ni.
i'm sorry to say this book is really terrible .. tak sampai 6 minit i baca terus i turn off gile .. author need to stop using ayat yang cringe,trigger everything !! srs i turn off gile baca this book and i really regret buying it fr .. maybe author kena belajar lagi how to use sentences carefully don't use perkataan RAPE ikut suka hati je .. rape is wrong even though you're married !! ugh 0.0 for this book !! popular sebab ape pun tak tahu la mengarut aje .. i bought this book and i didn't even finish read it baru sampai muka surat 28 terus tutup letak jauh jauh haha : )
Not bad for the 1st attempt. Adrian Haris, cold hearted yet a powerful man, a protective n a loving husband to nur nadia. Got married sbb nak protect nadia and of course he fell in love at the end. Tapi, if ikut Malaysian law, mmg Adrian ni dh masuk penjara sbb membunuh his enemies😅…maybe writer boleh write about mafia but jgn sampai become a murderer.
I checked the review here before buying. Even though I had seen quite a lot of bad reviews, I decided to give it a go. And honestly, it's not that bad at all. Memanglah ada beberapa part macam tak masuk akal untuk berlaku di Malaysia. But, hello, ini buku ye! Sebuah fiction semata. Ini bukan kitab atau buku kisah benar. Psst, done backup writer.
Tapi ada beberapa perkara yang saya nak mark dengan harapan writer dapat improve lagi.
1. Gaya penulisan. (Saya rasa gaya penulisan agak kebudak-budakan (tak matang). Writer boleh baca novel2 dari penulis hebat macam arwah Melur Jelita untuk bandingkan penulisan matang dan kurang.)
2. Daya penarik. (Saya sempat stop baca di bab 10 dan tinggalkan selama hampir sebulan sebelum kembali membaca sebab tak nak membazir, dan ia disebabkan daya penariknya yang kurang. Ada sesuatu yang tak mencukupi, dan itu perlu dicari oleh penulis sendiri.)
Jangan terlalu selesa dengan review baik dari pembaca. Review yang telus selalunya datang dari pembaca tegar yang lebih mengenal isipadu dan harapan pembaca dalam sesebuah novel. Saya tunggu karya anda lagi dengan harapan ada penambahbaikan. Selamat menulis!
“Aku rasa nak r#### kau je skrg, itu sebab aku bak cepat II nikah dgn kau, boleh aku r#### kau selalu”
WTF AUTHOR??!! bawa II mengucap la 😭turn off gila beb baca buku ni lagi II bila sebut perkataan “r####” tu, lainlah kalau si adrian ni villian faham II lah jalan cerita dia ni tak author ingat lawak ke nak joke pasal r#### ingat hot ke? Tak hot langsung! Jijik aku baca. Dah lah buku mcm ni banyak budak II bawah umur minta lagi II kalau ade mafia II centu mmg budak suka. Mmg tak payah lah habiskan duit beli sampah ni👎🏻
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DNF @ 33% Coming into this, I knew this book was bad due to the controversy that happened on twitter a few months(??) ago. I hadn't reach the part where he threatens to r@pe her, but this book weirded me out. To those who rated it 5 stars and finished the whole book, how did you do it?
I found the book cringey and too childish for my liking. The pet names weren't cute, it was rather embarrassing to read through. The whole mafia thing doesn't make sense, granted I didn't finish but it was so embarrassing to read this book.
After reading a lot of review from readers and also knowing the fact that this book get a bunch of hate comment but for me it just a story that don't give any benefits. For whoever wanna read this book, I advice that don't take this story seriously. After all, it a story that content with irrelevant fact and the words "rape" it actually a harsh words that not suppose to use in writing as a joke because it will effect the reader emotion. Mistake happen in this novel and we can't blame the author 100% because this novel officially publish by Kaki Novel so they suppose double check the content before publish it. We all have over imagination so I don't blame the author at all, she also a normal human that have this side of imagination. Just read this book for fun and don't implement it in the real life, I hope you guys can be open minded and enjoy this story.
adrian seorang ketua mafia black rose yg beku dan x suka senyum..adrian ni nakal ye sebelum dan lepas kawin😭
nadia seorang gadia pendek yang kecil macam budak iidan adrian selalu panggil nadia budak sbb dia pendek..
diorang kawin sebab amanat arwah ayah nadia yg suruh adrian kawin n nadia bila nadiah dh besar
nadia. crush kat adrian masa umur nad 10 tahun lagi sbb adrian tu selalu dtg rumah nad aka kawan ayah nad dan ad pun selalu ikut pegi umah nad
aku suka relationship dorang lps kawin tu😫😫walaupan adrian tu beku gila tapi dia sweet ye..
cerita dia byk mengenai kumpulan black rose dan kumpulan cosa nardos ..ketua kumpulan cosa nardos adala lucas dan lucas tu adalah musuh kpd adrian
ada satu yg kurang aku x suka masa diorang belum kawin tu..belum kawin dh adrian pergi cium pipi nadia la peluk la🙁aku cam what?ko belum kawin an tapi dh berani buat gitu
disclaimer:buku ni x sesuai utk budak bawah umur sbb buku ni tiada tapis ii ye so hati ii dan dia ada rape joke🙁
PLEASE GET GRAMMARLY BRO. THE GRAMMAR IS KILLING MEEEEE
ion remember but this guy was talking abt raping his 'future wife' or smth and the author thought that might be romantic or smth... bc it's not. bought this book bc i saw a girl at my school reading it and i genuinely should start researching abt a book before wasting money on one.
this book was like, trying to mix those smutty wattpad stories and malay into one and it turned out to be horrendous. im js gonna guess this author loves haunting adeline from wtf they wrote in this bs
buku ni sumpah cringe gila. dont know what to say la but perkataan budak tu sumpah annoying. and btw author ni mmg dirty minded eh ? kalau bole setiap scene tu semua 18+ . seb baik tak beli buku ni (i baca kawan i punya buku) kalau tak bazir je duit. bukan setakat bazir duit je weh dapat dosa sekali sbb baca bende tah pape . sekian tu je honest review saya.
hmm .. diluar expetasi , jalan cerita meleret , perkataan yg digunakan sangat tak sesuai cuma agak tertarik dengan watak syafiq and his wife thats all . I hope author can be more professional in writing and dont give up !