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The Mage War Chronicles #1
City of Mages
Born a fire mage, destined for something greater.
For hundreds of years, Sombria has lived in peace thanks to the delicate balance the Council fosters between those with magic and those without. But unrest is brewing under the surface of Sombria, and the Council's tenuous hold may be on the verge of collapsing.
All Alara ever wanted was to become a soldier, fighting to protect Sombria from the bruya rebels that threaten its borders with their chaotic magic and lawlessness. In order to succeed, she must first conquer her worst fear--her own innate magical abilities.
Quenti, raised to hate the oppressive thumb of the Council, has only ever wanted a life of peace away from those who wish to control her. When her abilities are revealed, she finds herself at the center of a world she grew up despising, where magic is suppressed under the illusion of control. And her only means of escape may lie in trusting those she grew up doubting most.
When Alara is given one final chance to prove she's worthy of being called a Mage of Sombria, the key to her success may lie within the untrusting Quenti. And Quenti doesn't plan on making things easy. Though as their two lives collide, trusting each other may be the only choice they have to survive what's coming.
For hundreds of years, Sombria has lived in peace thanks to the delicate balance the Council fosters between those with magic and those without. But unrest is brewing under the surface of Sombria, and the Council's tenuous hold may be on the verge of collapsing.
All Alara ever wanted was to become a soldier, fighting to protect Sombria from the bruya rebels that threaten its borders with their chaotic magic and lawlessness. In order to succeed, she must first conquer her worst fear--her own innate magical abilities.
Quenti, raised to hate the oppressive thumb of the Council, has only ever wanted a life of peace away from those who wish to control her. When her abilities are revealed, she finds herself at the center of a world she grew up despising, where magic is suppressed under the illusion of control. And her only means of escape may lie in trusting those she grew up doubting most.
When Alara is given one final chance to prove she's worthy of being called a Mage of Sombria, the key to her success may lie within the untrusting Quenti. And Quenti doesn't plan on making things easy. Though as their two lives collide, trusting each other may be the only choice they have to survive what's coming.
436 pages, Paperback
Published July 27, 2022
About the author
Kiersten Michele
5 books104 followersKIERSTEN MICHELE is an author and bookworm who spends her mornings, evenings, weekends, and in-between times reading. She grew up on mysteries, fantasies, historical fictions, and any other story that would take her on an adventure. Her love of reading turned into a love of writing, and she took that love to college and…got a PhD in counseling psychology. Plot twist. But when she’s not writing extremely fascinating academic articles, she’s creating stories to take her on more adventures.
Her books so far include The Mage War Chronicles, The Shadow Weaver's Gambit, and Dragon Gods.
When not tucked into her reading chair, she’s out adventuring in the real world, climbing rocks, hiking rocks, and taking way too many photos of rocks.
Her books so far include The Mage War Chronicles, The Shadow Weaver's Gambit, and Dragon Gods.
When not tucked into her reading chair, she’s out adventuring in the real world, climbing rocks, hiking rocks, and taking way too many photos of rocks.
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August 17, 2022I might be a bit biased, but I loved reading it as much as I loved writing it.
February 16, 2023
This is as much political intrigue as fantasy. The world of magic vs. non-magic users is well-built, and the character develop throughout the story line. Alara and Quenti are both powerful magic users on opposite sides of the war. Their real enemy is hidden and they must work together, if they can, to save Sombria. It's a long and complex journey, but one worth taking.
July 11, 2024
What a wildly fun book! I am so in love with the characters and cannot wait to follow their journeys and adventures. The world building here was easy to follow and had some recognizable elements that made it familiar but also unique with special abilities and magic weaved throughout. I am thrilled to be able to read fantasy set in an other-worldly Latin America, read familiar Spanish and interesting Spanish-derived phrases.
July 1, 2024
*NO MAJOR SPOILERS WERE HARMED IN THE MAKING OF THIS REVIEW**
**I received a free copy of this audiobook from the author in exchange for an honest review. This has not impacted my opinion in any way, shape or form. Thank you a ton for this opportunity!**
Ah...well. This was a journey and a struggle for both me and the characters. I could tell this was a debut novel, but it had so much going for it. This seemed like something I would enjoy. I did, just...there were some places that I was just not vibing with the storyline and the direction of the plotline. It was an overall a strong debut. The author put heart and soul into the characters, she tried to establish a plot conflict, and the magic system and the use of magic was actually my favorite part of the book!
However, I did find myself drifting alot and dragging alot with some of the directions the storyline. It had a strong beginning, then somewhere I just...got lost in the middle. I tuned in and out as things were happening. There was some travel, some relationship building, some trust and betrayal happening. But nothing really was screaming at me to get my attention. This is not the narrators fault, she was great. It was just...me. It felt like from blood and ash. The first book was a bit...dense and not much happnened because JLA was trying to build the world and stuff. THis book is the same. Its the world building and the beginnings of plot and such. I just...I wish there was more.
I also wish there had been wayy more romance. I thought this was an LGBT romance, so I was expecting some...action between the two main females. Perhaps that shall still happen. But I also see why it was not in the cards at this juncture.
I did like the characters. Alara was a strong narrator than Quenti, in my opinion. But maybe I am biased, I dont know. I just related more to Alara and her struggles and her dreams. When she winds up in the last situation she ever thought she would. She is so strong and I admire her and the journey she goes through in this book. I am sure the next book will have even better characterization for her. As for Quenti, I guess she was there...she did not have as strong of a voice in this novel, in my opinion. She was difficult to connect with and I just..did not like her pov. Perhaps this book would of been as a single pov, as opposed to a dual. But regardless, I admire that Quenti is also a strong warrior and she is learning to curb her mentality on what she believes about society and such. Both women go through a learning curve.
Overall, i thought this was a strong debut. There were some things the author did well, such as building the magic system, describing the magical battles, and imbueing the story with passion. But there are also areas where she could have improved. Her second book releases next month so if you want to read that one, then you have to read this one! Remember, this is all my opinion, if you want your own, read the book!
**I received a free copy of this audiobook from the author in exchange for an honest review. This has not impacted my opinion in any way, shape or form. Thank you a ton for this opportunity!**
Ah...well. This was a journey and a struggle for both me and the characters. I could tell this was a debut novel, but it had so much going for it. This seemed like something I would enjoy. I did, just...there were some places that I was just not vibing with the storyline and the direction of the plotline. It was an overall a strong debut. The author put heart and soul into the characters, she tried to establish a plot conflict, and the magic system and the use of magic was actually my favorite part of the book!
However, I did find myself drifting alot and dragging alot with some of the directions the storyline. It had a strong beginning, then somewhere I just...got lost in the middle. I tuned in and out as things were happening. There was some travel, some relationship building, some trust and betrayal happening. But nothing really was screaming at me to get my attention. This is not the narrators fault, she was great. It was just...me. It felt like from blood and ash. The first book was a bit...dense and not much happnened because JLA was trying to build the world and stuff. THis book is the same. Its the world building and the beginnings of plot and such. I just...I wish there was more.
I also wish there had been wayy more romance. I thought this was an LGBT romance, so I was expecting some...action between the two main females. Perhaps that shall still happen. But I also see why it was not in the cards at this juncture.
I did like the characters. Alara was a strong narrator than Quenti, in my opinion. But maybe I am biased, I dont know. I just related more to Alara and her struggles and her dreams. When she winds up in the last situation she ever thought she would. She is so strong and I admire her and the journey she goes through in this book. I am sure the next book will have even better characterization for her. As for Quenti, I guess she was there...she did not have as strong of a voice in this novel, in my opinion. She was difficult to connect with and I just..did not like her pov. Perhaps this book would of been as a single pov, as opposed to a dual. But regardless, I admire that Quenti is also a strong warrior and she is learning to curb her mentality on what she believes about society and such. Both women go through a learning curve.
Overall, i thought this was a strong debut. There were some things the author did well, such as building the magic system, describing the magical battles, and imbueing the story with passion. But there are also areas where she could have improved. Her second book releases next month so if you want to read that one, then you have to read this one! Remember, this is all my opinion, if you want your own, read the book!
August 10, 2023
This is a fun YA story involving relationships, Latin american culture, and LGBTQ+ representation. I listened to this one, and I thought the audio was well done as well!
I really liked the world and the elemental magic. The relationships were believable and definitely the focus of this YA story. I did feel like our MC's struggle with magic was a bit overdone at times. Yes, we know she struggled, but we didn't really figure out why until very late in the book, which at times made me feel a bit put out by it. Overall, I would definitely recommend this to YA readers.
For my full review check out my video! https://youtu.be/Hkv-WGjEtt8
I really liked the world and the elemental magic. The relationships were believable and definitely the focus of this YA story. I did feel like our MC's struggle with magic was a bit overdone at times. Yes, we know she struggled, but we didn't really figure out why until very late in the book, which at times made me feel a bit put out by it. Overall, I would definitely recommend this to YA readers.
For my full review check out my video! https://youtu.be/Hkv-WGjEtt8
October 29, 2023
This book was good!! I moved after I won it in a giveaway so it took some time getting back to it, but I really liked this book! I just love fire-related powers in fantasy. This book was everything I was looking for in a fantasy book!
April 24, 2024
You guys are sleeping on this book. What a great debut novel. It’s such a unique world! Sometimes I don’t like multiple POVs, but this story was written so well with the different characters. This is book is good for fans of ATLA, strong female leads, and found family!
October 27, 2024
In terms of fantasy and political storytelling it hits the mark.though if it wanted to be a fantasy,political,and romance story.the romance was a bit lacking. Overall everything else about the story was good
May 9, 2024
A great debut novel with some interesting concepts into the heavily saturated magical genre.
While it was slow to start, some world-building holding us in place while everything was set up, soon the whole thing came together in an amazing and difficult to put down way. I loved most of the characters, with a few that made my lips curl in disgust whenever they were in a scene. Seeing the two sides in the ongoing war and their perspective of it added together very nicely. You couldn't help but root for a specific side, especially after the introduction into their world.
It was a bit frustrating to see the reactions of the two main characters, but with the knowledge that I have now after reading, it was understandable that they acted the way they were. While I prefer Alara over Quenti initially, they both developed in their own ways as the story went on. I hope to see more of them both in the future.
Were some bits predictable? Yes. Did I care about that? Nope.
Do I hope that two of the characters meet an enemies-to-lovers trope? Yes.
Did I enjoy this book? Definitely. Am I looking for the sequel? Absolutely.
While it was slow to start, some world-building holding us in place while everything was set up, soon the whole thing came together in an amazing and difficult to put down way. I loved most of the characters, with a few that made my lips curl in disgust whenever they were in a scene. Seeing the two sides in the ongoing war and their perspective of it added together very nicely. You couldn't help but root for a specific side, especially after the introduction into their world.
It was a bit frustrating to see the reactions of the two main characters, but with the knowledge that I have now after reading, it was understandable that they acted the way they were. While I prefer Alara over Quenti initially, they both developed in their own ways as the story went on. I hope to see more of them both in the future.
Were some bits predictable? Yes. Did I care about that? Nope.
Do I hope that two of the characters meet an enemies-to-lovers trope? Yes.
Did I enjoy this book? Definitely. Am I looking for the sequel? Absolutely.
February 15, 2023
I received an audio ARC of this book and am voluntarily leaving this review. I'd highly recommend City of Mages in the audio format, and I personally found it an enhancement to the aspects of the story I enjoyed the most. As somebody who has only a few years of high school/college Spanish Kim Ramirez's narration helped me to further immerse myself in the Latin-American culture that serves as the primary foundation for the worldbuilding. Ramirez gives each character a genuine voice, lends energy to the story throughout, and overall made City of Mages very easy to listen to and follow.
To review the story itself, a major strength is the colorful worldbuilding - the Latin-American basis for the world really shines in the glimpses of day-to-day life you get in various locales as the story progresses. I absolutely adored getting to see the growth of the two protagonists, particularly the well-handled evolution of their relationship growing from their intense distrust and mutual dislike when they first meet. The magic system leans heavily into the classical elements but has its flairs that keep things fresh and exciting while still being familiar. While I wouldn't remove a star and it was by no means enough to diminish the rest of the story, there could be some more polish to the prose in a few spots. Additionally, some of the tactical decisions made by the main characters ended up feeling somewhat repetitive as the story transitioned into the main action sequence.
Overall, City of Mages is absolutely worth the read (or better yet, listen) and I can't wait to find out where the story goes.
To review the story itself, a major strength is the colorful worldbuilding - the Latin-American basis for the world really shines in the glimpses of day-to-day life you get in various locales as the story progresses. I absolutely adored getting to see the growth of the two protagonists, particularly the well-handled evolution of their relationship growing from their intense distrust and mutual dislike when they first meet. The magic system leans heavily into the classical elements but has its flairs that keep things fresh and exciting while still being familiar. While I wouldn't remove a star and it was by no means enough to diminish the rest of the story, there could be some more polish to the prose in a few spots. Additionally, some of the tactical decisions made by the main characters ended up feeling somewhat repetitive as the story transitioned into the main action sequence.
Overall, City of Mages is absolutely worth the read (or better yet, listen) and I can't wait to find out where the story goes.
June 28, 2024
This is one of my first indie published books, and I'm doing my best to read and support more indie authors this year. So let's just go ahead and say that I liked this book a lot and dove right into the sequel as fast as I finished this one. That's high enough praise just to start with!
The Mage War Chronicles is a fantasy story set in a wonderful, vivid South American-based world with unusual animals that sometimes have their own magical cores and well-built societies with warring values. Our MC Alara lives in the City of Mages and studies to control her fire magia, but she struggles with a fear of the fire and memories of a traumatic childhood event that flood her mind whenever she's asked to use her magic. In addition to her fire magia, she also has a unique ability that allows her to sense others' magical cores around her, which makes her an incredibly valuable asset. We initially meet her far from her home when she's gone on a training mission with other magites (student mages) to try and stop the attacks of the bruyas against a small town.
It's in the aftermath of this failed mission that we meet our other MC Quenti, a villager trying to lay low in her town who gets caught when Alara notices that she has a magical core. Within moments, Quenti has been taken into custody to be removed to the City of Mages alongside Alara, who, in the face of her failure, has to go back and wait to see if she can continue her studies or if she'll fail out of the school and have to find her way with uncontrolled magia.
This story sets us up with two fun and fiery characters from the get-go who are at odds. Alara and Quenti come from two very different backgrounds, or so Alara thinks, and they're forced together as they head into a place Quenti dreads and Alara calls home. The adventure starts strong and just keeps up the pace, not going too fast but not leaving me bored with the plot.
This book has some queer representation if that's something you like to see in your books as well.
I appreciate that even though there's romance in the story, it's not the focus and is not at all spicy. I like romance, but there are times when I want my fantasy to be adventures and derring-do and saving the world. This book gives me adventure without too much spice, and I appreciate that.
Without offering spoilers, I enjoyed where the story went. There were a couple twists and turns I wasn't expecting, and they came out of nowhere to give me a pleasant surprise. (Or unpleasant, as a few of them were.) And at the end of the first book, I felt compelled to move onto the sequel, which is a good sign for me!
As for the writing, it had vivid descriptions, good details, and created pictures of amazing, fantastical places. Do you want to live in a city in the trees where ropes and planks and specially grown tree branches come together far overhead and people's home wrap around giant tree trunks? If so, this book is for you.
I noted just a couple places where there were errors, which is great considering how often errors tend to occur in trad published books. There was one notable instance where the person speaking was named incorrectly. It happened when Quenti was talking, but the name written was Lili, even though she'd just exited the scene. So yeah, very well written and edited overall, and an enjoyable read.
For a fun fantasy story with elemental magic galore and characters with unique mind magic abilities, check out this book and its sequel. I definitely recommend it.
The Mage War Chronicles is a fantasy story set in a wonderful, vivid South American-based world with unusual animals that sometimes have their own magical cores and well-built societies with warring values. Our MC Alara lives in the City of Mages and studies to control her fire magia, but she struggles with a fear of the fire and memories of a traumatic childhood event that flood her mind whenever she's asked to use her magic. In addition to her fire magia, she also has a unique ability that allows her to sense others' magical cores around her, which makes her an incredibly valuable asset. We initially meet her far from her home when she's gone on a training mission with other magites (student mages) to try and stop the attacks of the bruyas against a small town.
It's in the aftermath of this failed mission that we meet our other MC Quenti, a villager trying to lay low in her town who gets caught when Alara notices that she has a magical core. Within moments, Quenti has been taken into custody to be removed to the City of Mages alongside Alara, who, in the face of her failure, has to go back and wait to see if she can continue her studies or if she'll fail out of the school and have to find her way with uncontrolled magia.
This story sets us up with two fun and fiery characters from the get-go who are at odds. Alara and Quenti come from two very different backgrounds, or so Alara thinks, and they're forced together as they head into a place Quenti dreads and Alara calls home. The adventure starts strong and just keeps up the pace, not going too fast but not leaving me bored with the plot.
This book has some queer representation if that's something you like to see in your books as well.
I appreciate that even though there's romance in the story, it's not the focus and is not at all spicy. I like romance, but there are times when I want my fantasy to be adventures and derring-do and saving the world. This book gives me adventure without too much spice, and I appreciate that.
Without offering spoilers, I enjoyed where the story went. There were a couple twists and turns I wasn't expecting, and they came out of nowhere to give me a pleasant surprise. (Or unpleasant, as a few of them were.) And at the end of the first book, I felt compelled to move onto the sequel, which is a good sign for me!
As for the writing, it had vivid descriptions, good details, and created pictures of amazing, fantastical places. Do you want to live in a city in the trees where ropes and planks and specially grown tree branches come together far overhead and people's home wrap around giant tree trunks? If so, this book is for you.
I noted just a couple places where there were errors, which is great considering how often errors tend to occur in trad published books. There was one notable instance where the person speaking was named incorrectly. It happened when Quenti was talking, but the name written was Lili, even though she'd just exited the scene. So yeah, very well written and edited overall, and an enjoyable read.
For a fun fantasy story with elemental magic galore and characters with unique mind magic abilities, check out this book and its sequel. I definitely recommend it.
October 31, 2023
This was a great debut indie novel. I thoroughly enjoyed many aspects of this. I loved Alara's journey the most, I loved the worldbuilding and magic system. I liked a ton of the side characters. The writing is really well done with only a few typos here and there as happens with any book really, trad or indie, doesn't matter. This was an intriguing take on a theme that I seem to be reading which is basically telling us a story about propaganda and brainwashing in favor of basically magic cops which literally the last three books I've read have all had this theme. Not mad about it, just weird they all ended up this way. I like stories where unlearning what one was brought up on is a major theme and this one really hit it.
There are a few cons I have to mention for myself tho:
1. I don't think Quenti's POV was actually necessary for this story. If it had been told purely from Alara's POV I think it would have had the same aspect as Quenti didn't really have any character growth of her own, at least not to the extent Alara did.
2. The names. There's a lot of fantasy names: Alara, Quenti, Runeo, etc. And then there was Tony and Linda...and i'm just like...what? lol, kind of took me out. Also there were a ton of A names in the beginning that made it hard to remember who was who for a little bit.
3. Were some of the twists predictable? Yes. Am I mad about that? No. But as soon as the subject of literal mind-wiping came up I knew exactly where this was going.
Things that I reeeeeally wanna see in the sequel:
1. This series has potential to do a really proper enemies-to-lovers trope with two characters, I won't spoil.
2. I want Quenti to go on a bigger journey as I feel she didn't have a lot to do in this one.
3. Obviously we gotta fix our young boy and also hopefully not make who I believe is the (unfortunately) intended love interest to see the error of his ways.
4. Alara to really get more confident. She was so confident in the beginning with her fighting skills, I want her to actually grow really confident in both now that we know the truth.
Overall, a great indie debut, can't wait for the next.
There are a few cons I have to mention for myself tho:
1. I don't think Quenti's POV was actually necessary for this story. If it had been told purely from Alara's POV I think it would have had the same aspect as Quenti didn't really have any character growth of her own, at least not to the extent Alara did.
2. The names. There's a lot of fantasy names: Alara, Quenti, Runeo, etc. And then there was Tony and Linda...and i'm just like...what? lol, kind of took me out. Also there were a ton of A names in the beginning that made it hard to remember who was who for a little bit.
3. Were some of the twists predictable? Yes. Am I mad about that? No. But as soon as the subject of literal mind-wiping came up I knew exactly where this was going.
Things that I reeeeeally wanna see in the sequel:
1. This series has potential to do a really proper enemies-to-lovers trope with two characters, I won't spoil.
2. I want Quenti to go on a bigger journey as I feel she didn't have a lot to do in this one.
3. Obviously we gotta fix our young boy and also hopefully not make who I believe is the (unfortunately) intended love interest to see the error of his ways.
4. Alara to really get more confident. She was so confident in the beginning with her fighting skills, I want her to actually grow really confident in both now that we know the truth.
Overall, a great indie debut, can't wait for the next.
July 14, 2024
City of Mages by Kiersten Michele and A.J. Cerna is a captivating YA fantasy novel that introduces readers to the richly imagined world of Sombria. The story revolves around two protagonists, Alara and Quenti, whose lives intersect amidst brewing unrest and political intrigue.
For centuries, Sombria has maintained a fragile peace through the Council's efforts to balance those with magic and those without. Alara, a fire mage, dreams of becoming a soldier to protect Sombria from the chaotic magic of the bruya rebels. However, she must first overcome her fear of her own magical abilities. Quenti, on the other hand, was raised to despise the Council's oppressive control and yearns for a peaceful life away from their influence. When her magical abilities are discovered, she finds herself thrust into the very world she detests.
One of the standout aspects of City of Mages is its world-building. The non-Eurocentric setting feels fresh and distinctive, with each new location vividly described and cohesively integrated into the overall world. This immersive environment provides a solid foundation for the series, helping readers feel grounded as they explore the intricate dynamics of Sombria.
Understanding that City of Mages is a YA novel, it's expected that some characters will exhibit youthful and emotionally immature traits. While this adds authenticity to their portrayals, it can also lead to frustration, particularly with the two main characters. At times, the conflict between Alara and Quenti seems contrived, serving more to emphasize their discord rather than advancing the plot. This repetitive emphasis on their conflict can feel redundant, though it doesn't significantly detract from the overall enjoyment of the story.
Despite these moments of frustration, Alara and Quenti are likable protagonists. Their personal growth and the challenges they face make them relatable, and their interactions with the side characters add depth to the narrative. The supporting cast is well-developed, contributing to the richness of the story and enhancing the main characters' journeys.
The plot of City of Mages strikes a balance between predictability and surprise. While many elements are familiar tropes within the fantasy genre, the authors manage to introduce unexpected twists that keep the story engaging. This blend of familiarity and novelty ensures that readers remain invested in the unfolding events.
As the first novel in a series, City of Mages successfully sets the stage for future installments. The groundwork laid in this book promises an exciting and dynamic continuation in the sequel. The anticipation for the next book is palpable, as the story leaves readers eager to see how the plot develops and how the characters evolve.
Overall, City of Mages earns a solid 4 out of 5 stars. It is a strong start to a series with immersive world-building, engaging characters, and a plot that balances predictability with the right amount of surprises. While the character conflicts can sometimes feel repetitive, the book's strengths far outweigh its weaknesses. Fans of YA fantasy will find much to enjoy in this promising debut.
For centuries, Sombria has maintained a fragile peace through the Council's efforts to balance those with magic and those without. Alara, a fire mage, dreams of becoming a soldier to protect Sombria from the chaotic magic of the bruya rebels. However, she must first overcome her fear of her own magical abilities. Quenti, on the other hand, was raised to despise the Council's oppressive control and yearns for a peaceful life away from their influence. When her magical abilities are discovered, she finds herself thrust into the very world she detests.
One of the standout aspects of City of Mages is its world-building. The non-Eurocentric setting feels fresh and distinctive, with each new location vividly described and cohesively integrated into the overall world. This immersive environment provides a solid foundation for the series, helping readers feel grounded as they explore the intricate dynamics of Sombria.
Understanding that City of Mages is a YA novel, it's expected that some characters will exhibit youthful and emotionally immature traits. While this adds authenticity to their portrayals, it can also lead to frustration, particularly with the two main characters. At times, the conflict between Alara and Quenti seems contrived, serving more to emphasize their discord rather than advancing the plot. This repetitive emphasis on their conflict can feel redundant, though it doesn't significantly detract from the overall enjoyment of the story.
Despite these moments of frustration, Alara and Quenti are likable protagonists. Their personal growth and the challenges they face make them relatable, and their interactions with the side characters add depth to the narrative. The supporting cast is well-developed, contributing to the richness of the story and enhancing the main characters' journeys.
The plot of City of Mages strikes a balance between predictability and surprise. While many elements are familiar tropes within the fantasy genre, the authors manage to introduce unexpected twists that keep the story engaging. This blend of familiarity and novelty ensures that readers remain invested in the unfolding events.
As the first novel in a series, City of Mages successfully sets the stage for future installments. The groundwork laid in this book promises an exciting and dynamic continuation in the sequel. The anticipation for the next book is palpable, as the story leaves readers eager to see how the plot develops and how the characters evolve.
Overall, City of Mages earns a solid 4 out of 5 stars. It is a strong start to a series with immersive world-building, engaging characters, and a plot that balances predictability with the right amount of surprises. While the character conflicts can sometimes feel repetitive, the book's strengths far outweigh its weaknesses. Fans of YA fantasy will find much to enjoy in this promising debut.
July 9, 2024
Epic is the first and best word I can use to describe City of Mages by Kiersten Michele & A.J. Cerna. The detailed world based in Andean culture is nothing short of breathtaking. It is a privilege to be carried all throughout the land of Sombria with our main characters, Alara and Quenti. Usually my current eBook is full of annotations and highlights, but not so this time around. I was too busy reading. Literally and colloquially, this YA fantasy was epic.
My complaints are few, but there are enough to keep City of Mages from the fifth star that I so desperately wanted to give it. The occasional formatting inconsistencies and misused phrases aside, this novel was a dual-perspective book with a major imbalance between the importance of the narrators. We get to see so much of Alara, the fire mage’s history, loyalties, inner struggles and general character growth. Her journey is, frankly, awe-inspiring. Her captive-turned-enemy-turned-friend Quenti, gifted with water powers, is confident, defiant and sure. She’s awesome, but doesn’t get nearly the amount of air time or development as Alara does. Hopefully, the upcoming sequel, Canyon of Crystal will rectify this and give readers as deep and meaningful a connection to Quenti as we felt with Alara.
If you enjoy Peruvian culture, history, clever plays on Spanish words, and echoes of real prejudices played out in a fantasy setting, read City of Mages. If you love queer characters existing outside of a queer trauma narrative, read City of Mages. If you love elemental magic, reluctant hero(ine)s, and struggles between governments seeking to control the unknown and rebels seeking to embrace it- you guessed it- read City of Mages. What are you waiting for? Pick it up before the sequel comes out August 6th!
My complaints are few, but there are enough to keep City of Mages from the fifth star that I so desperately wanted to give it. The occasional formatting inconsistencies and misused phrases aside, this novel was a dual-perspective book with a major imbalance between the importance of the narrators. We get to see so much of Alara, the fire mage’s history, loyalties, inner struggles and general character growth. Her journey is, frankly, awe-inspiring. Her captive-turned-enemy-turned-friend Quenti, gifted with water powers, is confident, defiant and sure. She’s awesome, but doesn’t get nearly the amount of air time or development as Alara does. Hopefully, the upcoming sequel, Canyon of Crystal will rectify this and give readers as deep and meaningful a connection to Quenti as we felt with Alara.
If you enjoy Peruvian culture, history, clever plays on Spanish words, and echoes of real prejudices played out in a fantasy setting, read City of Mages. If you love queer characters existing outside of a queer trauma narrative, read City of Mages. If you love elemental magic, reluctant hero(ine)s, and struggles between governments seeking to control the unknown and rebels seeking to embrace it- you guessed it- read City of Mages. What are you waiting for? Pick it up before the sequel comes out August 6th!
July 13, 2024
City of Mages follows Alara, a mage reluctant to use her powers, and an Quenti, an outcast who is greatly against the Council. The two form an unlikely friendship, which opens Alara's eyes about the true nature of things in Sombria.
If there is one thing that Michele and Cerna do (and do it well) is world building. Everything in Sombria is meticulously detailed, and the authors do an excellent job to fully immerse you in the world. I especially loved the descriptions of the food as I feel that's something that really puts me into a world. However, as is often the case with books I read with immense world building (and this may very well be a ME problem) it comes at the expense of the characters. I personally prefer character stories over world stories. With this book, I found myself a bit lost in the world and more often than not disconnected from the characters. This caused my interest to wane at times, and it was hard to pull myself back into the story. I was also a bit confused as this book is labeled LGBT, but there wasn't anything like that between the Alara and Quenti and to be honest I was kind of hoping for that...a lot.
This is a good book, and I would definitely recommend it if you enjoy a fully immersive world. For me, I was just hoping for a little more connection to the characters.
If there is one thing that Michele and Cerna do (and do it well) is world building. Everything in Sombria is meticulously detailed, and the authors do an excellent job to fully immerse you in the world. I especially loved the descriptions of the food as I feel that's something that really puts me into a world. However, as is often the case with books I read with immense world building (and this may very well be a ME problem) it comes at the expense of the characters. I personally prefer character stories over world stories. With this book, I found myself a bit lost in the world and more often than not disconnected from the characters. This caused my interest to wane at times, and it was hard to pull myself back into the story. I was also a bit confused as this book is labeled LGBT, but there wasn't anything like that between the Alara and Quenti and to be honest I was kind of hoping for that...a lot.
This is a good book, and I would definitely recommend it if you enjoy a fully immersive world. For me, I was just hoping for a little more connection to the characters.
July 30, 2024
Cool things about this book/series: the fantasy land that it takes place in is South Amercian inspired, which is a fun change of pace from the sort of European medieval style high fantasy world. It features elemental magic, which is also one of my favorite things... I may have a fire/water tattoo, and one of the MCs uses fire, and the other water, lol.
I appreciate having two female leads, especially since one is queer! Alara is a fire mage who is quite tentative in using her powers, and trusts in the Council that rule the land of Sombria. Quenti, on the other hand, has water powers and is on the side of the rebel faction. When the two get tangled together, Alara has to figure out which side her loyalties fall to.
This book is 4/5 stars for me—it's well written, the plot is solid, as well as the worldbuilding... One of those weird cases where, I feel like something didn't quite connect for me, but I'm not entirely sure what. I think I struggled a bit with how long it takes Alara to come into her powers? Maybe just too many tropes/similarities that have come up in other things I've been reading lately and my brain wants something different? Overall pretty solid though it didn't totally capture me, I will likely try out some other books by these authors.
I appreciate having two female leads, especially since one is queer! Alara is a fire mage who is quite tentative in using her powers, and trusts in the Council that rule the land of Sombria. Quenti, on the other hand, has water powers and is on the side of the rebel faction. When the two get tangled together, Alara has to figure out which side her loyalties fall to.
This book is 4/5 stars for me—it's well written, the plot is solid, as well as the worldbuilding... One of those weird cases where, I feel like something didn't quite connect for me, but I'm not entirely sure what. I think I struggled a bit with how long it takes Alara to come into her powers? Maybe just too many tropes/similarities that have come up in other things I've been reading lately and my brain wants something different? Overall pretty solid though it didn't totally capture me, I will likely try out some other books by these authors.
July 28, 2023
A fantasy that represents the Latin American community
City of Mages is a YA, coming of age fantasy. I don’t want to spoil anything, so I’ll try to be brief. The FMC, Alara, is a mind stalker and a fire magites (mage). She has worked her whole life to be part of the council guard. The goal of the Magites is to rescue Bruyas, and steer them towards the path of the Magites.
On one mission, she rescues a girl her age, and finds out she has magic, and that she’s actually pretty good a wielding it despite never being trained. Though Alara rescued the girl, the girl escapes, sending them all after her.
Side note, Alara has powers, but doesn’t like to use them.
So, why does the girl Alara rescued run away? Who is she? Are the Magites actually good? Or are the just manipulating everyone into thinking they are? Will Alara accept who she is and learn to us her powers? Read to find out!!
P. S.
I don’t see many fantasy books that represent different cultures, so I love that this book does! I hope someone in the Latin American Community gets ahold of this book, and shared it with their friends.
City of Mages is a YA, coming of age fantasy. I don’t want to spoil anything, so I’ll try to be brief. The FMC, Alara, is a mind stalker and a fire magites (mage). She has worked her whole life to be part of the council guard. The goal of the Magites is to rescue Bruyas, and steer them towards the path of the Magites.
On one mission, she rescues a girl her age, and finds out she has magic, and that she’s actually pretty good a wielding it despite never being trained. Though Alara rescued the girl, the girl escapes, sending them all after her.
Side note, Alara has powers, but doesn’t like to use them.
So, why does the girl Alara rescued run away? Who is she? Are the Magites actually good? Or are the just manipulating everyone into thinking they are? Will Alara accept who she is and learn to us her powers? Read to find out!!
P. S.
I don’t see many fantasy books that represent different cultures, so I love that this book does! I hope someone in the Latin American Community gets ahold of this book, and shared it with their friends.
November 4, 2022
I listened to the audiobook version of City of Mages, and found myself getting invested in the characters really quickly. The narrator did a great job voicing the different attitudes and tones of each character’s voices, and the actually character development itself in the writing felt really solid to me. I had a clear sense of who each of these people were and what they stood for. As a Queer person, I am always on the hunt for stories that don’t a) kill off their Queer characters as a plot point, b) exploit Queerness in a clear attempt to get diversity points, or c) force romance into platonic relationships. City of Mages didn’t do any of that, and I couldn’t have been more grateful. In fact, the authors incorporation of Queerness into the story felt really validating and intuitive. I also love the idea of the different types of mages/bruyas—it reminded me of other stories I’ve loved but with a new twist. Overall, I can’t say enough good things about the story and the audiobook. I didn’t want it to end!
June 16, 2024
City of Mages is book 1 of the Mage War Chronicles. Set in Sombria, a South American inspired fantasy world where the Council keeps a fragile balance between those with magic and those without. Alara dreams of being part of the Council guard to help protect Sombria from bruya rebels. Before she can do that, she must face her fear of her own magical abilities. Quenti wanted nothing but peace but finds herself trapped by the council and escapes the Haven where magic is taught to be a thing that must be controlled.
Alara and Quenti become unlikely and reluctant allies as the world (and government) as they know it crumbles around them.
This book is beautifully written. The two main characters are drastically different and the growth they experience during the story is wonderful. I especially loved that Alara was not your typical strong and confident FMC. The fear she had of her own power and talent is relatable on many levels.
Memorable Quote:
“I’m sure it soothes their souls to pretend they don’t kidnap children from their parents to raise as weapons for their government.”
Alara and Quenti become unlikely and reluctant allies as the world (and government) as they know it crumbles around them.
This book is beautifully written. The two main characters are drastically different and the growth they experience during the story is wonderful. I especially loved that Alara was not your typical strong and confident FMC. The fear she had of her own power and talent is relatable on many levels.
Memorable Quote:
“I’m sure it soothes their souls to pretend they don’t kidnap children from their parents to raise as weapons for their government.”
July 12, 2024
It's been a bit since I've read YA, but I would strongly recommend this one! City of Mages incorporates an elemental magic system, which reminded me of my days as a kid watching Avatar the Last Air Bender, as well as a world based on Andean Latin America, which I found to be a refreshing take in epic YA fantasy.
I think my favorite part of City of Mages was getting to know the two POV characters, Alara and Quenti. I enjoyed seeing the two different perspectives on magic (magia) vis a vis a magite and a bruya. I also truly enjoyed seeing Alara mature as a protagonist throughout the book as she came to learn the true nature of the magite/bruya conflict. I love a story with government intrigue (and maybe even corruption), and this is definitely one of them!
I did also enjoy the Latin American worldbuilding, and as someone who's spent time in South America (Peru, Argentina, Chile, and Uruguay for a few hours), I thought the author did a good job of incorporating cultural elements (MORE CUY, please!) into the book!
I think my favorite part of City of Mages was getting to know the two POV characters, Alara and Quenti. I enjoyed seeing the two different perspectives on magic (magia) vis a vis a magite and a bruya. I also truly enjoyed seeing Alara mature as a protagonist throughout the book as she came to learn the true nature of the magite/bruya conflict. I love a story with government intrigue (and maybe even corruption), and this is definitely one of them!
I did also enjoy the Latin American worldbuilding, and as someone who's spent time in South America (Peru, Argentina, Chile, and Uruguay for a few hours), I thought the author did a good job of incorporating cultural elements (MORE CUY, please!) into the book!
January 18, 2025
I got this book as an audiobook ARC and the narrator was very good so I didn't have any issues there. Unfortunately for me, I DNF at 20% as I struggled with the characters as they clashed more than I would have liked and often found myself frustrated at them. Also I found the story pacing and development a bit slower than my preference which are generally fast paced stories.
I appreciated having a non-European inspired world but I didn't find myself as immersed as I thought I'd be, I guess I'm greedy and needed more details. There are hints but I personally couldn't visualize it much. The magic system intrigued me but I guess I wanted to see more integration in the world.
There's potential in this story but I feel like maybe it wasn't for me, but if you like epic gradual magic/world building stories, then this book might be for you.
2.2 out of 5 for me!
(An ARC was provided in exchange for an honest review. I leave this review voluntarily and I was not compensated in any other way.)
I appreciated having a non-European inspired world but I didn't find myself as immersed as I thought I'd be, I guess I'm greedy and needed more details. There are hints but I personally couldn't visualize it much. The magic system intrigued me but I guess I wanted to see more integration in the world.
There's potential in this story but I feel like maybe it wasn't for me, but if you like epic gradual magic/world building stories, then this book might be for you.
2.2 out of 5 for me!
(An ARC was provided in exchange for an honest review. I leave this review voluntarily and I was not compensated in any other way.)
March 17, 2025
This was so good! This is a story full of politics. I’m talkin scheming government, war between two types of magic users and everywhere you turn you aren’t sure who to trust.
The characters were definitely likable with a bit of depth but not too touched on in this story (I’m assuming more to come).
The plot had a lot of interesting side moments that helped shape the outcome of everything and the side characters also shine. We also have culture throughout the story as well as lgbtq+ representation in a casual way which I loveeeee.
There are a few characters I’m excited to learn more about and hoping the next book touches on & the plot twists were mildly predictable but it didn’t take away from the book and I was EXCITED waiting for the big reveal on some.
Rating 4 stars because I don’t know if this story will live rent free in my mind, as not super amounts of emotions were brought out but it was really good and I am looking forward to the next installment in the series.
The characters were definitely likable with a bit of depth but not too touched on in this story (I’m assuming more to come).
The plot had a lot of interesting side moments that helped shape the outcome of everything and the side characters also shine. We also have culture throughout the story as well as lgbtq+ representation in a casual way which I loveeeee.
There are a few characters I’m excited to learn more about and hoping the next book touches on & the plot twists were mildly predictable but it didn’t take away from the book and I was EXCITED waiting for the big reveal on some.
Rating 4 stars because I don’t know if this story will live rent free in my mind, as not super amounts of emotions were brought out but it was really good and I am looking forward to the next installment in the series.
March 18, 2025
Highly recommend this one for fans of YA fantasy. It took me a little time to get into it (which might have been more about me than the book) but once I hit a certain point, I couldn’t put it down. I can’t wait to read the next book!
Plot ⭐⭐⭐⭐
This story is full of political intrigue, secret backstories, and plenty of twists. I predicted most of the twists, but in a “the foreshadowing was sufficient” way rather than a “wow this was so predictable” way. The set-up for some of the twists was excellent. I loved how everything came together in the end, all in a beautiful story that focuses more on friendship and other relationships than romance. If you’re looking for a story heavy on the romance, you won’t find it in this one.
Characters ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
I loved the characters in this. Alara’s arc especially had me invested. I loved her from the beginning and every second of her journey. You learn pretty quickly that Alara is terrible at magic, and her story is about learning why that is and her having to overcome her fear. It was wonderful.
Quinti was also a likeable character. Stand-offish, judgmental, and sharp-tongued. You know… my type. In my opinion, she didn’t have the depth of Alara’s arc, but I’m hoping that changes in the second book and we get more from her!
Worldbuilding ⭐⭐⭐⭐
This world has South American influence, which was really fun to see. Their food, the names, the fact that they ride l’lamas instead of horses (and l’lagamas which I’m assuming are made up but I honestly don’t know). It was nice to read a high fantasy that wasn’t based in medieval Britain.
The magic system is classic four element magic. Each mage (or bruya) can control one of the four elements. Not much to say beyond that.
Plot ⭐⭐⭐⭐
This story is full of political intrigue, secret backstories, and plenty of twists. I predicted most of the twists, but in a “the foreshadowing was sufficient” way rather than a “wow this was so predictable” way. The set-up for some of the twists was excellent. I loved how everything came together in the end, all in a beautiful story that focuses more on friendship and other relationships than romance. If you’re looking for a story heavy on the romance, you won’t find it in this one.
Characters ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
I loved the characters in this. Alara’s arc especially had me invested. I loved her from the beginning and every second of her journey. You learn pretty quickly that Alara is terrible at magic, and her story is about learning why that is and her having to overcome her fear. It was wonderful.
Quinti was also a likeable character. Stand-offish, judgmental, and sharp-tongued. You know… my type. In my opinion, she didn’t have the depth of Alara’s arc, but I’m hoping that changes in the second book and we get more from her!
Worldbuilding ⭐⭐⭐⭐
This world has South American influence, which was really fun to see. Their food, the names, the fact that they ride l’lamas instead of horses (and l’lagamas which I’m assuming are made up but I honestly don’t know). It was nice to read a high fantasy that wasn’t based in medieval Britain.
The magic system is classic four element magic. Each mage (or bruya) can control one of the four elements. Not much to say beyond that.
August 3, 2024
I'm so glad that I decided to listen to the audiobook version of "City of Mages" because Ramirez’s narration was spot on. Her performance brought each character to life with unique, authentic voices, adding so much energy to the story.
The vibrant Latin-American culture at the heart of the story really came to life. The worldbuilding is colorful and engaging, with the Latin-American influences shining through in the depictions of everyday life across various settings. I really enjoyed watching the growth of the two protagonists, especially as their relationship shifts from initial distrust to a deeper connection. The magic system, while drawing on classical elements, introduces fresh twists that keep things exciting.
Alara’s struggle with long-held beliefs and confronting harsh truths is both relatable and compelling. And Quenti is my standout favorite—her humor, sarcasm, and determination are captivating and offer a great balance to Alara's more naive outlook.
Overall, "City of Mages" is a fantastic book that I’m thrilled to recommend, especially in audiobook format. I’m excited to see where the story goes next.
I received a #ALC of "City of Mages" from the authors, the publishing company, and Hidden Hollow Book Tours.
The vibrant Latin-American culture at the heart of the story really came to life. The worldbuilding is colorful and engaging, with the Latin-American influences shining through in the depictions of everyday life across various settings. I really enjoyed watching the growth of the two protagonists, especially as their relationship shifts from initial distrust to a deeper connection. The magic system, while drawing on classical elements, introduces fresh twists that keep things exciting.
Alara’s struggle with long-held beliefs and confronting harsh truths is both relatable and compelling. And Quenti is my standout favorite—her humor, sarcasm, and determination are captivating and offer a great balance to Alara's more naive outlook.
Overall, "City of Mages" is a fantastic book that I’m thrilled to recommend, especially in audiobook format. I’m excited to see where the story goes next.
I received a #ALC of "City of Mages" from the authors, the publishing company, and Hidden Hollow Book Tours.
August 24, 2022
I received an ARC copy of this book and am leaving a review voluntarily.
I really enjoyed this story. It has everything I love in a story: worldbuilding, great characters, beautiful characters interactions and an intriguing plot. It’s so great to find one that has them all.
The worldbuilding was brilliant. I love the magic system explored here. It’s that wonderful mix of characters knowing the basic layout while also having just enough mystery to peak the reader’s creativity.
I loved the characters here but especially the main characters. They are such polar opposites so watching them try to work together and their worldview points clash was both entertaining and intriguing.
I can’t wait to see more.
I really enjoyed this story. It has everything I love in a story: worldbuilding, great characters, beautiful characters interactions and an intriguing plot. It’s so great to find one that has them all.
The worldbuilding was brilliant. I love the magic system explored here. It’s that wonderful mix of characters knowing the basic layout while also having just enough mystery to peak the reader’s creativity.
I loved the characters here but especially the main characters. They are such polar opposites so watching them try to work together and their worldview points clash was both entertaining and intriguing.
I can’t wait to see more.
August 28, 2022
Alara is desperate to become a Councilguard and prove to her peers she’s a capable fire mage and warrior. So why does her magic never obey her?
A rebel water mage, Quenti has lived her entire life in hiding. Captured and sent to the mage capital for “re-education” - she wonders how to escape when insecure Alara dogs her every move.
This is a polished YA fantasy set in an Inca-inspired world. It took me a while to warm to Quenti, but the action was quick and the plot compelling. The story didn’t astound me - maybe that’s just reader burnout - but I enjoyed it for what it was. This is the first book in what promises to be a fun series.
I received an advance copy of this book for free, and I am leaving a review voluntarily.
A rebel water mage, Quenti has lived her entire life in hiding. Captured and sent to the mage capital for “re-education” - she wonders how to escape when insecure Alara dogs her every move.
This is a polished YA fantasy set in an Inca-inspired world. It took me a while to warm to Quenti, but the action was quick and the plot compelling. The story didn’t astound me - maybe that’s just reader burnout - but I enjoyed it for what it was. This is the first book in what promises to be a fun series.
I received an advance copy of this book for free, and I am leaving a review voluntarily.
May 14, 2024
City of Mages
Rating: 🌟⭐️⭐️🌟
Clean read, minor LGBTQ representation
While this was a relatively classic take on a YA novel, I loved the culture represented in it. The (I’m going to guess and say) Spanish culture was so very interesting in the context of this world the author’s created. And within that world you have a youth terrified of her own potential, the new girl who defies everything the government claims, and a whirlwind adventure that will bring truth and lies to the forefront with betrayal skipping quickly behind. Very enjoyable read and well rounded and interesting characters. I recommend at least a little of the audiobook when reading this story as many words are pronounced differently than they would be in standard American English.
City of Mages {ma-hez}
Rating: 🌟⭐️⭐️🌟
Clean read, minor LGBTQ representation
While this was a relatively classic take on a YA novel, I loved the culture represented in it. The (I’m going to guess and say) Spanish culture was so very interesting in the context of this world the author’s created. And within that world you have a youth terrified of her own potential, the new girl who defies everything the government claims, and a whirlwind adventure that will bring truth and lies to the forefront with betrayal skipping quickly behind. Very enjoyable read and well rounded and interesting characters. I recommend at least a little of the audiobook when reading this story as many words are pronounced differently than they would be in standard American English.
City of Mages {ma-hez}
July 7, 2024
City of Mages. I don't even know what to say. I could not put this book down. I love a good YA Fantasy and this book does not disappoint.
Alara is a character that you want to hug and throttle at the same time. But her struggle with trying to hold onto beliefs that she has been brainwashed with all of her life while confronting the real issues and wrong doings that those beliefs support... who among us hasn't had to face something similar and can't relate.
Quenti is hands down my favorite character in this book. Her humor and sarcasm and grit, ugh I can't get enough. Her own growth and setbacks during the book gave a good balance to Alara's naivety of the world.
I can't wait to dive into the next book. I still have so many questions I need answered!
Alara is a character that you want to hug and throttle at the same time. But her struggle with trying to hold onto beliefs that she has been brainwashed with all of her life while confronting the real issues and wrong doings that those beliefs support... who among us hasn't had to face something similar and can't relate.
Quenti is hands down my favorite character in this book. Her humor and sarcasm and grit, ugh I can't get enough. Her own growth and setbacks during the book gave a good balance to Alara's naivety of the world.
I can't wait to dive into the next book. I still have so many questions I need answered!
July 21, 2024
I loved it. That is all. No notes. There is so much in these pages to love. Magic. Unanswered questions. Found Family vibes. Political Intrigue. Magical llamas. A hidden enemy. A Latin American inspired magical world. Plus, SO much more!
As an avid fantasy reader, I always appreciate world building that is not overwhelming and easy to follow. The way the authors set up this story and introduce us to this world is not only unbelievably enjoyable, it is also done in a way that instantly draws you in. We have a plot that keeps you turning the pages and wanting more AND characters that you just can’t help but root for. I loved the dual POV here! Getting insight from both Alara and Quenti added so much! They are two opposites that are forced together in unexpected ways, and I loved it.
I can honestly say that this one kept me guessing. Every time I was sure I knew what was going to happen next, I was taken by surprise in the best way. The ending sets us up for a great continuation for the story and I CAN’T WAIT to see what is in store for these characters in the next installment of this series.
As an avid fantasy reader, I always appreciate world building that is not overwhelming and easy to follow. The way the authors set up this story and introduce us to this world is not only unbelievably enjoyable, it is also done in a way that instantly draws you in. We have a plot that keeps you turning the pages and wanting more AND characters that you just can’t help but root for. I loved the dual POV here! Getting insight from both Alara and Quenti added so much! They are two opposites that are forced together in unexpected ways, and I loved it.
I can honestly say that this one kept me guessing. Every time I was sure I knew what was going to happen next, I was taken by surprise in the best way. The ending sets us up for a great continuation for the story and I CAN’T WAIT to see what is in store for these characters in the next installment of this series.
July 22, 2025
I was fortunate enough to meet both of these authors at Denver fan expo in July 2025. they gave me this as an ebook, I started reading it and went back the next day and both both books in the series!
I enjoyed the story, lots of detail in the fight scenes. a lot of excitement and cross. double cross and finding out Alara had her mind wiped as a kid afterall! her being told she did something that made her fear her powers, but it did not happen the way she was "programmed" to think. I am excited to start the 2nd book to see how it all plays out! then books 3 and 4 when they get released!
good characters and relationships between them.
I enjoyed the story, lots of detail in the fight scenes. a lot of excitement and cross. double cross and finding out Alara had her mind wiped as a kid afterall! her being told she did something that made her fear her powers, but it did not happen the way she was "programmed" to think. I am excited to start the 2nd book to see how it all plays out! then books 3 and 4 when they get released!
good characters and relationships between them.
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