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Broken Omegas #1
The Last Rose
Corie
When I was young, just before I presented as an omega, a boy in my class told me I was pretty. His cheeks flamed red as he held his breath, waiting for me to respond. I giggled, covering my mouth, the way little girls do when silly things happen.
His eyes went dark as I continued to laugh.
Then he stomped off, calling me nasty names.
I never understood why boys acted like that. They do silly things, then get angry when you smile.
But the thing I remember the most about that moment was it was the last time I felt normal. A few weeks later, during a fancy dinner party, men broke into my parents' house and killed everyone.
My family, their friends, the staff, even those awful men that took me away. They all died. And the only thing that scares me more than what happened that night, is being forced to explain why I was the only one to survive.
This is a love story between a broken omega and her new pack.
The Broken Omega series centers around omegas that are abused, traumatized, or have even broken the law. Each book tells the journey of an omega trying to find love and acceptance in a world that has broken them.
NOTE: The Last Rose is a standalone MMMMF omegaverse, paranormal romance. It contains violence and dark themes. HEA. Please heed the warnings before reading.
When I was young, just before I presented as an omega, a boy in my class told me I was pretty. His cheeks flamed red as he held his breath, waiting for me to respond. I giggled, covering my mouth, the way little girls do when silly things happen.
His eyes went dark as I continued to laugh.
Then he stomped off, calling me nasty names.
I never understood why boys acted like that. They do silly things, then get angry when you smile.
But the thing I remember the most about that moment was it was the last time I felt normal. A few weeks later, during a fancy dinner party, men broke into my parents' house and killed everyone.
My family, their friends, the staff, even those awful men that took me away. They all died. And the only thing that scares me more than what happened that night, is being forced to explain why I was the only one to survive.
This is a love story between a broken omega and her new pack.
The Broken Omega series centers around omegas that are abused, traumatized, or have even broken the law. Each book tells the journey of an omega trying to find love and acceptance in a world that has broken them.
NOTE: The Last Rose is a standalone MMMMF omegaverse, paranormal romance. It contains violence and dark themes. HEA. Please heed the warnings before reading.
412 pages, Kindle Edition
Published March 1, 2023
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April 9, 2023
Holy moly I loathe Finn
Sorry I couldn’t hold that in any longer.
Finn (one of the MMCs and the Pack Alpha) does not deserve Corie nor does he deserve his packmates. I’m so upset that he was so prevalent in the book and basically got rewarded for being a terrible person, consistently. His views on omegas was scary, as he almost didn’t view them as human but animals. And it’s like he didn’t care that he had Corie, as long as he had any omega. He really put a damper on my enjoyment. I do think the book deserves between a 3 and 4⭐️ rating tho. Okay. Now onto other things.
Corie (FMC) was such a joy to read. Her personality was beaming insecurity and innocence, but dang she’s also had something sinister in her and I loved that dichotomy. You’d think she’s just another weak omega but then the climax of the book happened and she would prove you wrong. Nonstop. 😌
Noah (MMC-Beta) was the greatest and I wanted him and Corie to run off into the sunset together. Just them. Sigh. He stood up for her AND for what was right! Mad respect. The others (Van and Hartley) had some problems that didn’t make me feel any one way towards them tbh.
I was here for Corie and for Corie, I’d give all the stars. 💅
Sorry I couldn’t hold that in any longer.
Finn (one of the MMCs and the Pack Alpha) does not deserve Corie nor does he deserve his packmates. I’m so upset that he was so prevalent in the book and basically got rewarded for being a terrible person, consistently. His views on omegas was scary, as he almost didn’t view them as human but animals. And it’s like he didn’t care that he had Corie, as long as he had any omega. He really put a damper on my enjoyment. I do think the book deserves between a 3 and 4⭐️ rating tho. Okay. Now onto other things.
Corie (FMC) was such a joy to read. Her personality was beaming insecurity and innocence, but dang she’s also had something sinister in her and I loved that dichotomy. You’d think she’s just another weak omega but then the climax of the book happened and she would prove you wrong. Nonstop. 😌
Noah (MMC-Beta) was the greatest and I wanted him and Corie to run off into the sunset together. Just them. Sigh. He stood up for her AND for what was right! Mad respect. The others (Van and Hartley) had some problems that didn’t make me feel any one way towards them tbh.
I was here for Corie and for Corie, I’d give all the stars. 💅
March 28, 2024
I've had this book saved on my To Be Read list for ages now and I finally got around to reading it... and I am so disappointed that it was so much less than I was expecting.
The first issue I have is the dynamic portrayed between alphas and omegas, but especially with the lead pack alphas. Not only was there expectation that an Omega would just blindly listen to their alphas every command as if they were a child that needs direction, but the lead alphas were domineering pricks 100% of the time. There's just something extremely off-putting how the lead Alpha gets to dictates everybodies moves to the point where another pack member can't even be around their Omega without his permission. That's not a pack, that's a dictatorships, and a very very gross relationship.
Basically the entire book I struggled really hard to try and like Finn because of this lead Alpha nonsense. He was passionate at the beginning with his want and need to care for Corie, but after she actually started living with the pack he was just so insufferable as if he was trying to over compensate his authority. He constantly told her what to do, he dictated which members of the Pack were allowed to touch her and even be in the same room as her, he breached her trust and felt unrepentant for it so much so that he laughed in her face when she asked him to apologize, etc. He was not a character that I could even think about being a fan of at all... and that's a really hard hit when they are a MMC. Because of Finn's abusive behaviours it prevented Corie from really created any bonds or connections to Van and Hartley, which really sucked because they at least both had somewhat decent personalities.
Another aspect I didn't like is the divided relationship within the Pack regarding the pack beta Noah and Corie. It was very much portrayed that both Noah and Corie were friends but there was never really a romantic relationship shown between them other than very very briefly during her heat. Noah was mated to Van and Finn along with having intimate relations with Hartley, and Corie was mated to all the alphas... it was like two very separate relationships. It's like Noah was the Pack boyfriend and Corie was the Pack girlfriend but not towards each other. I felt that they would have felt like a much more cohesive pack if there wasn't such a stark divide between him and them, and her and them. I think the Corie and Noah deserved each other's love and sweetness and would have made an wholesome romantic pair if given the chance.
There was also like no romance involved at all within this story and that was just so weird. Like there was absolutely no wooing and sweetness. Corie spent a good portion of time spending time with Noah while the Alphas were all at work... like okay and??? They all did nothing to entice her to be interested in them, barely even spending time with her outside of family dinner, and considering that she was able to leave them at any time it was just so cold. Which also brings up the point that it felt super weird at the beginning how it started with Corie already having an established connection with the pack while she was at the Omega academy and they were courting over the phone. We didn't even get to see the lead up to how they started, it was just already established and they liked her enough after talking on the phone for 2 months that they wanted her... and then the story starts... so we miss so much of that created connection.
Just... everything about this book screamed "impersonal" from the Pack dynamic, to the relationships with the Pack, to character development, and the love story. It didn't feel like a love story, there was no affection really had and that's just so disappointing considering that it was supposedly a HEA.
The first issue I have is the dynamic portrayed between alphas and omegas, but especially with the lead pack alphas. Not only was there expectation that an Omega would just blindly listen to their alphas every command as if they were a child that needs direction, but the lead alphas were domineering pricks 100% of the time. There's just something extremely off-putting how the lead Alpha gets to dictates everybodies moves to the point where another pack member can't even be around their Omega without his permission. That's not a pack, that's a dictatorships, and a very very gross relationship.
Basically the entire book I struggled really hard to try and like Finn because of this lead Alpha nonsense. He was passionate at the beginning with his want and need to care for Corie, but after she actually started living with the pack he was just so insufferable as if he was trying to over compensate his authority. He constantly told her what to do, he dictated which members of the Pack were allowed to touch her and even be in the same room as her, he breached her trust and felt unrepentant for it so much so that he laughed in her face when she asked him to apologize, etc. He was not a character that I could even think about being a fan of at all... and that's a really hard hit when they are a MMC. Because of Finn's abusive behaviours it prevented Corie from really created any bonds or connections to Van and Hartley, which really sucked because they at least both had somewhat decent personalities.
Another aspect I didn't like is the divided relationship within the Pack regarding the pack beta Noah and Corie. It was very much portrayed that both Noah and Corie were friends but there was never really a romantic relationship shown between them other than very very briefly during her heat. Noah was mated to Van and Finn along with having intimate relations with Hartley, and Corie was mated to all the alphas... it was like two very separate relationships. It's like Noah was the Pack boyfriend and Corie was the Pack girlfriend but not towards each other. I felt that they would have felt like a much more cohesive pack if there wasn't such a stark divide between him and them, and her and them. I think the Corie and Noah deserved each other's love and sweetness and would have made an wholesome romantic pair if given the chance.
There was also like no romance involved at all within this story and that was just so weird. Like there was absolutely no wooing and sweetness. Corie spent a good portion of time spending time with Noah while the Alphas were all at work... like okay and??? They all did nothing to entice her to be interested in them, barely even spending time with her outside of family dinner, and considering that she was able to leave them at any time it was just so cold. Which also brings up the point that it felt super weird at the beginning how it started with Corie already having an established connection with the pack while she was at the Omega academy and they were courting over the phone. We didn't even get to see the lead up to how they started, it was just already established and they liked her enough after talking on the phone for 2 months that they wanted her... and then the story starts... so we miss so much of that created connection.
Just... everything about this book screamed "impersonal" from the Pack dynamic, to the relationships with the Pack, to character development, and the love story. It didn't feel like a love story, there was no affection really had and that's just so disappointing considering that it was supposedly a HEA.
April 4, 2023
After reading Sana’s Escape last year by the same author, I’ve been dying to read more omegaverse romance with multiple love interests. This is a 18+ MMMMF why choose romance where a pack of 3 alphas and 1 beta obtain a “broken” omega. Broken omegas have gone through a traumatising experience and need extra care. The story is character driven and focused on Corie’s relationship with her new pack, after 14 years of being in a rehabilitation center.
The smut is INCREDIBLE! 🔥 prepare for some steamy group scenes between Corie and her pack! I love how they are all obsessed with Corie and want to do everything right to make sure she is comfortable with them. My absolute favorite element of the story though is sweet and loving Noah, the beta. His dynamic with Corie is absolutely adorable and makes me want to jump in and hug them. I love it how he stands up against their alphas.
I love how the story explores deeply the omegaverse world, down to the small details such as the nesting of the omega, the scent free lotions, their interactions… Kitt Lynn’s books are perfect for those looking for a lush and spicy omegaverse experience.
The smut is INCREDIBLE! 🔥 prepare for some steamy group scenes between Corie and her pack! I love how they are all obsessed with Corie and want to do everything right to make sure she is comfortable with them. My absolute favorite element of the story though is sweet and loving Noah, the beta. His dynamic with Corie is absolutely adorable and makes me want to jump in and hug them. I love it how he stands up against their alphas.
I love how the story explores deeply the omegaverse world, down to the small details such as the nesting of the omega, the scent free lotions, their interactions… Kitt Lynn’s books are perfect for those looking for a lush and spicy omegaverse experience.
March 27, 2023
If Kitt asks me to read her grocery list, I would and give it 5 stars.
The author knows how to get your heart pumping! She creates characters that you love and sometimes want to strangle when they act a fool. But she also has you reading way past your bed time.
The Last Rose was smutty, dark, and also strangely adorable. Where can I get a Van and Hart?? And a nosy? Finn too, but he intimidated me! Lol
I need Violet’s story now!
The author knows how to get your heart pumping! She creates characters that you love and sometimes want to strangle when they act a fool. But she also has you reading way past your bed time.
The Last Rose was smutty, dark, and also strangely adorable. Where can I get a Van and Hart?? And a nosy? Finn too, but he intimidated me! Lol
I need Violet’s story now!
June 3, 2023
It's been some time since I've read Omegaverse. I liked this book. The whole backstory was traumatic, the thoughts, emotions, feelings, the back and forth, the relationships, joining, the smut, becoming a pack, bonding, some setbacks, plot twists, revelation of who she actually was. Finn was an asshole, and I'm so annoyed with him. There was kind of like minor redeeming but like it wasn't redeeming because he did not grovel or anything which, as you know, I desperately need, like that is a main part with angsty books. This wasn't that angsty though. Noah the beta was obviously amazing, and sweet. The huge plot twist being the truth about her past and what she did at the end. The coyote thing was hilarious and the fact that they didn't believe that she could do that. It was awesome to see their reactions at the end when she revealed the truth and when she stood up. The HEA was cute. I liked the fluff and caring bits as well.
April 5, 2023
Kitt’s books just get better and better with each new release.
I loved this book! It was such a fun, quick read and I loved the storyline. I think that’s what I love most about Kitt’s books…yes, they’re very spicy, but they all have super interesting plots that carry you through the book!
I loved the concept of “broken” Omegas going to a facility to rehabilitate. This whole world felt like such an interesting take on the omegaverse tropes, which I loved. Definitely hoping to see more of Corie’s friends in the future books in this series!
Thanks to the author for gifting me a copy. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
I loved this book! It was such a fun, quick read and I loved the storyline. I think that’s what I love most about Kitt’s books…yes, they’re very spicy, but they all have super interesting plots that carry you through the book!
I loved the concept of “broken” Omegas going to a facility to rehabilitate. This whole world felt like such an interesting take on the omegaverse tropes, which I loved. Definitely hoping to see more of Corie’s friends in the future books in this series!
Thanks to the author for gifting me a copy. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
April 6, 2023
cordelia rose very violet carmine coded ahh my boo bears ❤️😭
April 13, 2023
A STRONG 4.5star
If you like Pack Darling, you should read this.
If you like Pack Darling, you should read this.
April 13, 2023
4.25 ⭐️
February 25, 2024
3.5⭐️
This slightly different twist on omegaverse with the broken omega academy was good.
The pack was awesome and Corie was secretly one fierce little omega 🔪 🐰
This slightly different twist on omegaverse with the broken omega academy was good.
The pack was awesome and Corie was secretly one fierce little omega 🔪 🐰
May 10, 2023
4 STARS ✨
The Last Rose is great for fans of:
• Omegaverse
• Found family
• Why choose?
• Possessive male characters
I was fortunate enough to receive an ARC of The Last Rose from Booksprout in exchange for an honest review. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
Corie is an omega who remains haunted by the traumatic events of her past and is deemed as 'broken' as she spends a large majority of her life at Havenfield, a rehabilitation centre for omegas to heal before, hopefully, finding a pack that they fit in where their life can begin anew. After two months of contact with them, Corie is able to move in with the Renard Pack — consisting of alphas Finn, Hartley, Van and their beta, Noah — who hold their own skeletons.
I actually really enjoyed this one, although some parts are hard to read. I do believe that The Last Rose shines an important life that everyone reacts to trauma in different ways; Corie did not want to be treated delicately, she wished to be treated as the adult she was and to have the life of a regular omega, which was a struggle at the beginning. There was miscommunication there of what Havenfield felt Corie needed and what she knew she needed, which was a nightmare, but I loved Corie for fighting to fate and the steps that she wanted to make, rather than anyone else.
I do understand the issues that a lot of people have with Finn, as he is a tough character to try and get a hold of, but I didn't mind him too much. I think I just have an awful habit of liking the characters that you're not supposed to be fond of? But I did like all of the boys in the pack, and Noah had my whole heart.
The main issue I had with the book was the rehabilitation centres. The idea that all of the omegas placed there are damaged, and were only usually chosen by packs with problems because 'normal' packs would go anywhere, was a hard pill to swallow. Just because you've went through trauma, it does not make you any less worthy and, yeah — it's a shame, but I am glad that Corie managed to find happiness and love despite of the awful societal structures that are set in place.
I also don't want to be that person, but with some of the content, there really should have been some aftercare.
I'm not going to spoil it, but the ending was amazing, and I thought that it reiterated the message of the whole book, so, complete props to you, Kitt Lynn. I would recommend this one, but please make sure that you do adhere to the trigger warnings, as it is one on the darker side.
The Last Rose is great for fans of:
• Omegaverse
• Found family
• Why choose?
• Possessive male characters
I was fortunate enough to receive an ARC of The Last Rose from Booksprout in exchange for an honest review. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
Corie is an omega who remains haunted by the traumatic events of her past and is deemed as 'broken' as she spends a large majority of her life at Havenfield, a rehabilitation centre for omegas to heal before, hopefully, finding a pack that they fit in where their life can begin anew. After two months of contact with them, Corie is able to move in with the Renard Pack — consisting of alphas Finn, Hartley, Van and their beta, Noah — who hold their own skeletons.
I actually really enjoyed this one, although some parts are hard to read. I do believe that The Last Rose shines an important life that everyone reacts to trauma in different ways; Corie did not want to be treated delicately, she wished to be treated as the adult she was and to have the life of a regular omega, which was a struggle at the beginning. There was miscommunication there of what Havenfield felt Corie needed and what she knew she needed, which was a nightmare, but I loved Corie for fighting to fate and the steps that she wanted to make, rather than anyone else.
I do understand the issues that a lot of people have with Finn, as he is a tough character to try and get a hold of, but I didn't mind him too much. I think I just have an awful habit of liking the characters that you're not supposed to be fond of? But I did like all of the boys in the pack, and Noah had my whole heart.
The main issue I had with the book was the rehabilitation centres. The idea that all of the omegas placed there are damaged, and were only usually chosen by packs with problems because 'normal' packs would go anywhere, was a hard pill to swallow. Just because you've went through trauma, it does not make you any less worthy and, yeah — it's a shame, but I am glad that Corie managed to find happiness and love despite of the awful societal structures that are set in place.
I'm not going to spoil it, but the ending was amazing, and I thought that it reiterated the message of the whole book, so, complete props to you, Kitt Lynn. I would recommend this one, but please make sure that you do adhere to the trigger warnings, as it is one on the darker side.
May 2, 2023
1st person/multi pov
Spice: 4/5
Another great A/B/O read from this author! I love that this book shows our FMC overcoming some of her trauma and finding the love and acceptance that she’s been searching for. This poor girl went through something terrible as a child and her past has been kept a secret for 14 years. After several attempts at being matched with a pack only to be rejected, she finally finds a home with Finn, Van, Hartley, and their beta Noah. Thanks to some strict instructions from her doctor however settling into her new home is not going the way she expected.
I guess you could chalk this up to the miscommunication trope a little bit. She is unaware of the doctor’s orders and they are unaware that Corie just wants to be treated like any other Omega instead of someone they see as “broken”. This of course leads to misunderstandings, unclear expectations, and a whole lot of frustration between all of the pack members at one point or another. But that does lead to some rather spicy moments to relieve said frustrations. 😏
I love the pack dynamic here with Finn and Van being mated to Noah but not Hartley. I feel like Hartley has a special connection with Corie and if he’d been mated to anyone before her it wouldn’t have felt so special between the two of them. He really is a big teddy bear and I adore how sweet he is with Corie. I really liked the relationship that Finn has with Van as well. They seem to be almost on the same wavelength most of the time and the scene with just the two of them before the gala was SO hot!
But my favorite thing in the whole book is the connection between Noah and Corie. These two together run that pack and you can’t convince me otherwise! 😂 Noah is a whole mood on his own and his character was instantly a favorite, but when you combine his feisty personality and rebellious flares with Corie’s sweetness and caring Omega nature it’s a pairing that you can’t help but love. Plus their loyalty to each other just warms my heart. They always have each other's backs and Noah has made sure to be the one person she can always come to no matter what. The way he steps up in solidarity with Corie to make sure nothing gets in the way of Corie bonding and getting to stay just made me love him even more.
I thoroughly enjoyed this story and I’m very much looking forward to what else we will see in this series.
Spice: 4/5
Another great A/B/O read from this author! I love that this book shows our FMC overcoming some of her trauma and finding the love and acceptance that she’s been searching for. This poor girl went through something terrible as a child and her past has been kept a secret for 14 years. After several attempts at being matched with a pack only to be rejected, she finally finds a home with Finn, Van, Hartley, and their beta Noah. Thanks to some strict instructions from her doctor however settling into her new home is not going the way she expected.
I guess you could chalk this up to the miscommunication trope a little bit. She is unaware of the doctor’s orders and they are unaware that Corie just wants to be treated like any other Omega instead of someone they see as “broken”. This of course leads to misunderstandings, unclear expectations, and a whole lot of frustration between all of the pack members at one point or another. But that does lead to some rather spicy moments to relieve said frustrations. 😏
I love the pack dynamic here with Finn and Van being mated to Noah but not Hartley. I feel like Hartley has a special connection with Corie and if he’d been mated to anyone before her it wouldn’t have felt so special between the two of them. He really is a big teddy bear and I adore how sweet he is with Corie. I really liked the relationship that Finn has with Van as well. They seem to be almost on the same wavelength most of the time and the scene with just the two of them before the gala was SO hot!
But my favorite thing in the whole book is the connection between Noah and Corie. These two together run that pack and you can’t convince me otherwise! 😂 Noah is a whole mood on his own and his character was instantly a favorite, but when you combine his feisty personality and rebellious flares with Corie’s sweetness and caring Omega nature it’s a pairing that you can’t help but love. Plus their loyalty to each other just warms my heart. They always have each other's backs and Noah has made sure to be the one person she can always come to no matter what. The way he steps up in solidarity with Corie to make sure nothing gets in the way of Corie bonding and getting to stay just made me love him even more.
I thoroughly enjoyed this story and I’m very much looking forward to what else we will see in this series.
May 3, 2023
Corie (h) experiences a tragic event as a child just as she’s on the cusp of preventing as an omega and ends up in a rehabilitation center for broken omegas. She longs for a pack to take her in as their omega and finally the Renard Pack seems to want her. Alphas Finn (H), Hartley (H), and Van (H) bring her home but find it difficult to bring Corie into the pack due to the strict limitations her doctors have issued and because of ‘work’ demands that can’t be postponed. Beta Noah (H), already mated to Finn and Van, helps Corie fit in and tries to guide her in dealing with the alphas, though at times he seems more like an omega. But Corie’s past isn’t done with her and there’s a lot of action and danger for the pack to face. Corie is not your typical omega waiting for an alpha to take care of her – she’s strong and lethal. Noah is just delightful with his spunky, sexiness and he’s such a great friend for Corie. Loved all three alphas – yes, Finn can be abrasive, but he had a lot on his plate and still had to function as head of the pack. Lot of ultra-hot and steamy action build all throughout the story, with spanking, crossed swords, and plenty of Omegaverse elements (nesting, biting, claiming, heats, ABO). Keep Corie away from the knife block!
May 16, 2025
There was a lot of Finn hate in the reviews but I didn’t think he was that bad. Yes he was rough and insensitive at times but he’s the leader of a criminal Alpha pack, you can’t expect him to shit rainbows. Corie put him in his place by the end of the book and she clearly liked the rough sex so to each their own. The only reason I didn’t totally love this book was because the ending wasn’t what I expected. I wanted the Alphas to dig into Cories past and take revenge on her behalf. Instead everyone just sat at home with miss communication after miss communication until the danger literally knocked on their door. The reason a lot of people loved this book was because of how violent Corie was at the end which was fine but I needed the Alphas to act more Alphaish in regards to her safety and background
May 22, 2023
This was one of the best omegaverses I’ve read in a really long time! I loved it from start to finish and I didn’t want to ever put it down! I loved the FMC, she was such a joy to read. And the male characters were pretty great too, though I wish there was a little more growth/development there at times.
June 4, 2024
I didn’t like any of the male alpha characters 🤷♀️
I’ll try the next book, eventually, but if it’s more of the same it’ll likely be my last
I’ll try the next book, eventually, but if it’s more of the same it’ll likely be my last
December 18, 2024
Why are there so many “romance” books with zero actual romance? 🫤
December 13, 2025
my aching heart!
Ohhhh this one hurt my heart to read and also healed it at the same time! I loved it! Can’t wait to read the next one!
Ohhhh this one hurt my heart to read and also healed it at the same time! I loved it! Can’t wait to read the next one!
February 17, 2024
This needs to be a must read if you like darker mafia type romance. It’s reverse harem and omegaverse, but the story and characters are the point of this book. Corie is amazing and resilient.
March 19, 2023
I liked Noah and Corie’s friendship better than Finn and hers. Noah makes her speak her mind and protects her from their mates at every turn in the book. Finn is an idiot. I really didn’t understand his need to have his way stubbornly at the cost of his bonds. He was considerate towards Corie but to have declared that she cannot decide for herself was a minus point that he never really earned back throughout the book.
I liked the concept of the story. The end was precious. I would have liked more build-up to the end because everything happened at once. Many characters were introduced whose connections to the plot were added in haste. I feel that the villain foreboding could be expanded on more.
I liked the concept of the story. The end was precious. I would have liked more build-up to the end because everything happened at once. Many characters were introduced whose connections to the plot were added in haste. I feel that the villain foreboding could be expanded on more.
May 11, 2023
I'm obsessed with omegaverse and of course Kitty Lynn did not disappoint--she always exceeds expectations!! I found the concept of a broken omega to be very fascinating and I adored each relationship she built with members of the pack. The spice was SO GOOD of course and the plot twist in this absolutely blew my mind. Equal parts dark and lighthearted in its sense of humor and high stakes action. This is a forever fave author for sure!!
Thank you so much to the author for sending me a copy of the book in exchange for an honest review! All thoughts and opinions expressed above are entirely my own.
Thank you so much to the author for sending me a copy of the book in exchange for an honest review! All thoughts and opinions expressed above are entirely my own.
April 11, 2023
I really tried to like this one
But I just couldn’t. I like to be able to fall at least a little in love with the MMCs, but with Finn- I just couldn’t even like him. What a pompous, arrogant, insensitive jerk. Most of the FMC’s problems with the pack would have been mitigated if he would have just listened to her and made her feel safe instead of bullying her and trying to force her to do what he wanted. I spent most of the second 1/2 of the book wishing she would reject him.
Despite the fact that I really loathe Finn’s character, the book was well written, the plot was tight, and the conflict resolution engaging. I hated Finn so much that I put the book down to do chores I’ve been avoiding so I could get some distance from him. Yes, I finished the book. I felt like I owed it to both Corie and Noah. Both of them deserve so much better.
But I just couldn’t. I like to be able to fall at least a little in love with the MMCs, but with Finn- I just couldn’t even like him. What a pompous, arrogant, insensitive jerk. Most of the FMC’s problems with the pack would have been mitigated if he would have just listened to her and made her feel safe instead of bullying her and trying to force her to do what he wanted. I spent most of the second 1/2 of the book wishing she would reject him.
Despite the fact that I really loathe Finn’s character, the book was well written, the plot was tight, and the conflict resolution engaging. I hated Finn so much that I put the book down to do chores I’ve been avoiding so I could get some distance from him. Yes, I finished the book. I felt like I owed it to both Corie and Noah. Both of them deserve so much better.
April 4, 2023
I liked the plot idea and the beta and two of the alphas. But Finn was just an asshole without any grovel or redeeming. By the end I honestly hoped he would leave the pack or die or something. He was just so awful to her and didn’t respect her boundaries. Also the whole I have to control her for her own good is just bullshit.
I did like that Corie although traumatized protected her pack when needed.
As mentioned I loved the beta and the other alphas. Especially Hart.
I don’t know if this counts as a rage read but I powered through because I desperatere needed to know how it endet.
I did like that Corie although traumatized protected her pack when needed.
As mentioned I loved the beta and the other alphas. Especially Hart.
I don’t know if this counts as a rage read but I powered through because I desperatere needed to know how it endet.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
May 16, 2023
possibly the worst book
Lovely? Absolutely not. The description for the book isn’t all accurate, for some reason the author wants to use the word “lovely” 50 times and throws it in everywhere, the FMCs men already have an omega that the author says is a beta so all she’s good for is eventual babies. There relationship with her is toxic, abusive and has all kinds of consent issues. No trigger warnings shared and really just a mess of a book.
Lovely? Absolutely not. The description for the book isn’t all accurate, for some reason the author wants to use the word “lovely” 50 times and throws it in everywhere, the FMCs men already have an omega that the author says is a beta so all she’s good for is eventual babies. There relationship with her is toxic, abusive and has all kinds of consent issues. No trigger warnings shared and really just a mess of a book.
January 17, 2024
dnf
Another one bites the dust.
Holy unlikeable alphas with all the fragile male ego right up there. I heavily disliked them. I could have gotten past it in hopes they would turn around.
But then their first smex scene was absolutely awful. And not exciting at all.
It could have been so much more.
Another one bites the dust.
Holy unlikeable alphas with all the fragile male ego right up there. I heavily disliked them. I could have gotten past it in hopes they would turn around.
But then their first smex scene was absolutely awful. And not exciting at all.
It could have been so much more.
May 29, 2023
a bit bumpy but ended well ( spoiler-ish) read at will
I wasn’t sure about this book for 70% of it. It was by no means a bad story or being told badly. On that end it’s a very interesting take on omegaverse stories. There wasn’t really any background on why all parties in the pack from omega, beta and alphas didn’t really seem to know what to really expect from each. What I mean is the omega had what I assumed beta assumed ideas on what to expect from alphas, the alphas had random assumptions from living with a omega behaving beta and doctors orders from betas who again I don’t feel talked to any alphas or omegas about how those two interact with each other in a pack and the beta is the only one seeming to be able to bridge the gap between the two ends expectations of each other but kept getting shut down when he tried to help for 70% of the book.
This is the first time I felt that this was the early times of designations occurring in a world cause nobody seemed to be adequately trained in how to deal with alphas and omegas.
Moving on from that, I knew going in that this was a dark themed story. It’s definitely more on the grey side than black side of the spectrum and that was mostly due to behaviors of the alphas than the actually story. While the pack aren’t good guys they aren’t vile abusive men either.
My biggest im not sure about this, was the choices being made by the pack leader. He made some mistakes that cause the bonding of the pack to be delayed unnecessarily. It was getting annoying. I mean this as the character made mistakes in character with who they were and I wasn’t sure I wanted to read about this asshole fucking things up accidentally. The story made sense, the character was being an idiot.
In closing I very much recommend you read the about this book and the trigger warnings. When I opened this book, I was sent to the opening chapter, it skipped the warnings. Read the warning. I was reading and getting triggered cause I forgot to look at the warning page and didn’t know what to expect.
Read this story it was good.
I wasn’t sure about this book for 70% of it. It was by no means a bad story or being told badly. On that end it’s a very interesting take on omegaverse stories. There wasn’t really any background on why all parties in the pack from omega, beta and alphas didn’t really seem to know what to really expect from each. What I mean is the omega had what I assumed beta assumed ideas on what to expect from alphas, the alphas had random assumptions from living with a omega behaving beta and doctors orders from betas who again I don’t feel talked to any alphas or omegas about how those two interact with each other in a pack and the beta is the only one seeming to be able to bridge the gap between the two ends expectations of each other but kept getting shut down when he tried to help for 70% of the book.
This is the first time I felt that this was the early times of designations occurring in a world cause nobody seemed to be adequately trained in how to deal with alphas and omegas.
Moving on from that, I knew going in that this was a dark themed story. It’s definitely more on the grey side than black side of the spectrum and that was mostly due to behaviors of the alphas than the actually story. While the pack aren’t good guys they aren’t vile abusive men either.
My biggest im not sure about this, was the choices being made by the pack leader. He made some mistakes that cause the bonding of the pack to be delayed unnecessarily. It was getting annoying. I mean this as the character made mistakes in character with who they were and I wasn’t sure I wanted to read about this asshole fucking things up accidentally. The story made sense, the character was being an idiot.
In closing I very much recommend you read the about this book and the trigger warnings. When I opened this book, I was sent to the opening chapter, it skipped the warnings. Read the warning. I was reading and getting triggered cause I forgot to look at the warning page and didn’t know what to expect.
Read this story it was good.
September 5, 2025
It was really good. Though by the end there were a few things that could have been worked better.
The way it’s written makes it seem like she killed those 8 bad alphas all alone. Then you get to the end and it’s just Pace and her father. Kind of anticlimactic honestly. I read the last flash back and was bored with it.
The entire situation once the Jossep shows up at their house was not at all entertaining. Why was he even allowed past the gate to come to the front door to begin with? Why was the door even open by Sarah? They’re supposed to be in high alert plus coming down from her heat and they just let the brother of her families murder waltz up to their door? Where was all the added security that they had when they got back from the gala? It makes zero sense that they would call them all off. Her going into heat should have solidified their need for the security to stay since they would all be a little unfocused.
I think it would have been nice to see more of the time they spent talking to her before they took her home. And it definitely needed more of them day to day getting to know her and actually building a bond beyond the dynamics of Alpha/Omega and sexually. The only one we see her build a relationship with is Noah. And a bit from Hart before he was allowed to touch her when she taught him chess.
Seeing more of Hart’s relationship with Noah would have been nice. At first I hadn’t realized they were a thing since they weren’t mated and it wasn’t obvious really until he found him and Van in the guest room.
I liked the conflict of Hart marking her first. The punishment from Finn seemed harsh but overall I don’t think it was honestly that out of line considering what he could have done.
We never see anyone check on her or see her doing weekly calls to the docs. That whole beginning scene made it seem like she was going to be all up in their business making sure everything was okay… and then it was literally nothing. You saw one phone call to Violet. Eh?! And if the doc knew who she was I’m not sure I understand why her pack wasn’t informed. If she was told never to say anything because it could get her killed surely they needed to know that there could be a chance of damages? Seems not at all smart for them not to know.
With all that it was still a really great story. Finn was a little harder to like but I got there in the end.
I think the hard part of series that are just a bunch of stand alones is that you never truly get enough of each groups story. I want a hell of a lot more from these guys. I want to see them properly fix the fractures that occurred and start to build that family that Noah wants so badly. I wanted to see her rebuild her nest! I want to see how they come together in the time they take off from work! One book is rarely ever enough for stories like these.
The epilogue was cute. I like the way Noah makes sure the alphas know they aren’t taking care of her! Now I want to see more even more though. I want to see the whole pregnancy and them with the baby afterwards!!
The way it’s written makes it seem like she killed those 8 bad alphas all alone. Then you get to the end and it’s just Pace and her father. Kind of anticlimactic honestly. I read the last flash back and was bored with it.
The entire situation once the Jossep shows up at their house was not at all entertaining. Why was he even allowed past the gate to come to the front door to begin with? Why was the door even open by Sarah? They’re supposed to be in high alert plus coming down from her heat and they just let the brother of her families murder waltz up to their door? Where was all the added security that they had when they got back from the gala? It makes zero sense that they would call them all off. Her going into heat should have solidified their need for the security to stay since they would all be a little unfocused.
I think it would have been nice to see more of the time they spent talking to her before they took her home. And it definitely needed more of them day to day getting to know her and actually building a bond beyond the dynamics of Alpha/Omega and sexually. The only one we see her build a relationship with is Noah. And a bit from Hart before he was allowed to touch her when she taught him chess.
Seeing more of Hart’s relationship with Noah would have been nice. At first I hadn’t realized they were a thing since they weren’t mated and it wasn’t obvious really until he found him and Van in the guest room.
I liked the conflict of Hart marking her first. The punishment from Finn seemed harsh but overall I don’t think it was honestly that out of line considering what he could have done.
We never see anyone check on her or see her doing weekly calls to the docs. That whole beginning scene made it seem like she was going to be all up in their business making sure everything was okay… and then it was literally nothing. You saw one phone call to Violet. Eh?! And if the doc knew who she was I’m not sure I understand why her pack wasn’t informed. If she was told never to say anything because it could get her killed surely they needed to know that there could be a chance of damages? Seems not at all smart for them not to know.
With all that it was still a really great story. Finn was a little harder to like but I got there in the end.
I think the hard part of series that are just a bunch of stand alones is that you never truly get enough of each groups story. I want a hell of a lot more from these guys. I want to see them properly fix the fractures that occurred and start to build that family that Noah wants so badly. I wanted to see her rebuild her nest! I want to see how they come together in the time they take off from work! One book is rarely ever enough for stories like these.
The epilogue was cute. I like the way Noah makes sure the alphas know they aren’t taking care of her! Now I want to see more even more though. I want to see the whole pregnancy and them with the baby afterwards!!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
April 5, 2023
*The Last Rose by Kitt Lynn*
5/5 ⭐
2.5/5 🌶️
**Tropes**
- Broken & Unstable FMC
- Touch her and Die
- Serial Killer MMCs
- Dark Past
📖 **My Thoughts**
This book was so good! I loved everything about it from cover to cover. The character developments were so strong and progressed in such a rewarding way. My favourite aspects of this story was our FMC and her dark past. The plot twist that occurred completely slipped by me and I didn't see it coming at all. Our MMC's were amazing. Their flaws did not take away from the story at all. I honestly could not get enough of this story and was gutted to see this book was standalone.
⚠️ **Triggers**
violence, kidnapping, murder, panic attacks, Dub-Con
🏳️🌈**Representation**
This story is advertised as why choose but it's definitely a polyamorous relationship with MM.
🌶️ **Spice**
The spice was good but it wasn't super overwhelming. I definitely found myself more interested in the plot because it was written so well and the stakes and the characters instead of the spice. Which honestly? Doesn't happen often but when it does?? The book and author usually end up becoming an immediately physical copy purchase and an auto read author.
📝 **Special Notes**
I WANTED MORE!! that ending left me craving a continuation of their story. I have so many what if's and questions that are burning through me.
**Link to Book**
https://www.amazon.com/Last-Rose-Book...
5/5 ⭐
2.5/5 🌶️
**Tropes**
- Broken & Unstable FMC
- Touch her and Die
- Serial Killer MMCs
- Dark Past
📖 **My Thoughts**
This book was so good! I loved everything about it from cover to cover. The character developments were so strong and progressed in such a rewarding way. My favourite aspects of this story was our FMC and her dark past. The plot twist that occurred completely slipped by me and I didn't see it coming at all. Our MMC's were amazing. Their flaws did not take away from the story at all. I honestly could not get enough of this story and was gutted to see this book was standalone.
⚠️ **Triggers**
violence, kidnapping, murder, panic attacks, Dub-Con
🏳️🌈**Representation**
This story is advertised as why choose but it's definitely a polyamorous relationship with MM.
🌶️ **Spice**
The spice was good but it wasn't super overwhelming. I definitely found myself more interested in the plot because it was written so well and the stakes and the characters instead of the spice. Which honestly? Doesn't happen often but when it does?? The book and author usually end up becoming an immediately physical copy purchase and an auto read author.
📝 **Special Notes**
I WANTED MORE!! that ending left me craving a continuation of their story. I have so many what if's and questions that are burning through me.
**Link to Book**
https://www.amazon.com/Last-Rose-Book...
April 12, 2023
Second Chance At A Better Life
Normally I'm not fond of Omegaverse stories centered around humans but this was a really good story. A new series about broken omegas who suffer through traumatic experiencing receiving counseling and rehabilitation services until they are chosen to join a Pack.
Corie definitely suffered an ordeal. She relives her trauma everyday and it took a long time before she found a Pack who wanted her.
Finn, Hartley, Van and Noah wanted Corie but had to wait for approval to get her because of one of their criminal past; although these men are dangerous they never caused harm to Corie.
I loathe miscommunication tropes and this book was full of unnecessary drama and angst. The tension weaving it's way through the Pack could have been avoided via simple communication. Instead of Finn discussing things with Corie and finding out what she wants he decides to follow the doctor's orders without giving Corie a chance to provide her input. Corie also added to the tension by simply not speaking up. It was as if she expected her Alphas and Beta to read her mind.
When ghosts from Corie's past resurface and her Pack fight to the bitter end to protect her they soon learn that their Omega is not one to underestimate, especially when she is faced with bad men who in her opinion deserve to di3.
If you enjoy Tension filled, Omegaverse Why Choose stories full of Heat, Angst, Tension, Miscommunication, PTSD, Overcoming Adversity and getting a Second Chance at a better life; this is the story for you.
Normally I'm not fond of Omegaverse stories centered around humans but this was a really good story. A new series about broken omegas who suffer through traumatic experiencing receiving counseling and rehabilitation services until they are chosen to join a Pack.
Corie definitely suffered an ordeal. She relives her trauma everyday and it took a long time before she found a Pack who wanted her.
Finn, Hartley, Van and Noah wanted Corie but had to wait for approval to get her because of one of their criminal past; although these men are dangerous they never caused harm to Corie.
I loathe miscommunication tropes and this book was full of unnecessary drama and angst. The tension weaving it's way through the Pack could have been avoided via simple communication. Instead of Finn discussing things with Corie and finding out what she wants he decides to follow the doctor's orders without giving Corie a chance to provide her input. Corie also added to the tension by simply not speaking up. It was as if she expected her Alphas and Beta to read her mind.
When ghosts from Corie's past resurface and her Pack fight to the bitter end to protect her they soon learn that their Omega is not one to underestimate, especially when she is faced with bad men who in her opinion deserve to di3.
If you enjoy Tension filled, Omegaverse Why Choose stories full of Heat, Angst, Tension, Miscommunication, PTSD, Overcoming Adversity and getting a Second Chance at a better life; this is the story for you.
April 18, 2023
Rating,
The Last Rose: 3.75 ⭐️
Plot: 2 ⭐️
Characters: 4.5 ⭐️
Spicy: 3 🌶️
This was unique and interesting. The Last Rose is the first installment of the Broken Omega Series.
This was my first omegaverse book. I have nothing to compare it to. I was surprised they didn’t shift into wolves, that’s what I associate with omegaverse. It’s definitely engaging. The dynamic between characters was done exceptionally well. I understood the patriarchy system.
But the questions I have is one omega per pack or more? Are Violet and Cary going to join the pack or in the books to follow are they getting their own packs?
The book didn’t dive into Finn, Van or Noah’s history. Some background history was included in Hart’s character. Characters history is important to understand the characters for their actions and decisions.
Corie is the most valuable character. The author did Corie’s character justice. I love this character, out of all the characters she is the most layered and whole character.
The plot was lacking. Needed a plot twist or more complex plot. It would have been more interesting if one of the alpha’s from the pack would have been the villain.
Favorite quote from the book:
Page 330, “But trauma is like that sometimes. You feel it. Let it hurt for a while, but eventually have to go on with your life—there’s not really a resolution. You can’t package your pain up with a little bow and go on as if nothing happened. Instead, you sit with it, let it seep, then, when the pain has numbed just enough, you move the fuck on the best you can.”
The Last Rose: 3.75 ⭐️
Plot: 2 ⭐️
Characters: 4.5 ⭐️
Spicy: 3 🌶️
This was unique and interesting. The Last Rose is the first installment of the Broken Omega Series.
This was my first omegaverse book. I have nothing to compare it to. I was surprised they didn’t shift into wolves, that’s what I associate with omegaverse. It’s definitely engaging. The dynamic between characters was done exceptionally well. I understood the patriarchy system.
But the questions I have is one omega per pack or more? Are Violet and Cary going to join the pack or in the books to follow are they getting their own packs?
The book didn’t dive into Finn, Van or Noah’s history. Some background history was included in Hart’s character. Characters history is important to understand the characters for their actions and decisions.
Corie is the most valuable character. The author did Corie’s character justice. I love this character, out of all the characters she is the most layered and whole character.
The plot was lacking. Needed a plot twist or more complex plot. It would have been more interesting if one of the alpha’s from the pack would have been the villain.
Favorite quote from the book:
Page 330, “But trauma is like that sometimes. You feel it. Let it hurt for a while, but eventually have to go on with your life—there’s not really a resolution. You can’t package your pain up with a little bow and go on as if nothing happened. Instead, you sit with it, let it seep, then, when the pain has numbed just enough, you move the fuck on the best you can.”
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