This was good! I was in the kind of mood where I wanted to read like 10 different books at once and was having trouble focusing on any single one of them, but when I started this one, my brain calmed down a bit, and I was able to finish the entire book in one evening, so I feel like that speaks well to it.
I did feel like the pacing was kind of weird, but I also don't know how I would've improved it? It's not like scenes were going on too long or it felt like there was a lot of unnecessary stuff that could've been cut out. It almost felt like the opposite. I kind of felt like it was a bit too short, even though it's a reasonable length for a historical romance. But Sophia doesn't even get to Finn's place until almost halfway through the book, if I'm remembering correctly. It felt like the story had barely started and it was already halfway done. I guess I could've done with less in the beginning, like maybe only one attempt at paying Sophia off rather than two and then the offer to take George from Sophia. Also, I love slow burn, but the slow burn here, like… I won't say it DIDN'T work for me because I swooned a bit at the ending, but I also think it could've worked BETTER for me. Like, Finn's jump to love felt a bit fast, but at least he was realizing his feelings/attraction when Sophia stayed with him and Bess. Sophia only seems to start realizing her feelings at the very, very end (and seems more to be realizing his feelings for than the other way around), and I just needed her to start developing feelings sooner, I think. I also wouldn't have minded literally any scene between just Finn and George. Like, they're going to be raising him together, and yeah, the whole story is about George, but I felt like I needed a bonding scene between Finn and George because it felt like everything Finn was doing at the end was for Sophia, and that's fine, but it felt a bit lopsided. I just wanted a sense that he cared about George beyond him being his and Sophia's nephew.
Despite all those complaints, I really did enjoy the romances. Even with the pacing issues, it was still a nice slow burn. I liked the initial dynamic of them not getting along and not really understanding each other, and then how they started interacting more and got to know one another better and found themselves on the same side with regards to George vs. their siblings. And Bess! Bess was sweet, and I loved how she was basically just like, "ugh, Finn, you're so fucking dumb." I wouldn't mind reading a romance centered around her.