Still the Worst Read of My Life.
It took me sixteen months to finish this book because it was so tedious, that reading it was like pulling teeth. The only reason why I was even able to finish it at all was because I forced myself to bring it with me to my routine hospital visits.
Ok, so what’s wrong with Jus Accardo’s “Omen of Ice”? Let me count the ways.
1) Unoriginal plot that’s been reused and recycled to death, resurrected, and then killed again: a royal (in this case—a fae prince) who is supposedly an orphan, is raised by an uncle (the king) with an agenda and his sketchy wife. The prince has hidden powers that are practically extinct, which the king uses to do his bidding. Then, the prince discovers that his guardians may not be as good as they seem to be. Wow, so original.
2) Unlikable and unremarkable female love interest with a stupid first name (Keltania), whom the author tries really hard to make us like her without giving us any reason to. She’s unlikable, bland, and you fail to see why the fae prince falls for her, but wait—she’s a human with the ability to tap into fae magic! She’s intriguing because she’s like no other humans! Yawn.
I’m not saying that protagonists have to be likable in order for us to root for them, but a boring plot with boring characters, not to mention inadequate world-building, leave us with nothing but a book that makes us wonder, “But why? Why did this need to be published?”
And the MMC (whatever his name is) is so unattractive in personality, deeds, and appearance (he has a low ponytail).
3) Inadequate world-building: you can read the entire book and still don’t know what the world looks like, its culture, etc.
4) Fanfic-quality writing: it’s all very “first I did this, then I did this” in style. You know, very play-by-play. Oh, my God, it’s so boring.
It reads like a bad fanfic written by an 8th grader. No offense to 8th graders because I—too—was once an 8th grader who wrote fanfics that I’d rather not think about.
5) Juvenile and under-developed writing. I don’t mean juvenile as in having a youthful voice; I mean juvenile as in being unready to be a published author. I don’t need flowery prose; simple and precise prose are just as good from a competent writer, especially when it’s stylized and intentional. This is just the work of poor storytelling.
Also, we’re told that Keltania is a badass warrior, but we never see it demonstrated. We’re told that the prince is a womanizer and player, but we’re never shown it, and I can’t imagine any woman wanting him. But I guess if you’re a prince, that’s enough, so…🤷🏻♀️
6) Awful out-of-time and out-of-place dialogues that break readers’ immersion. Imagine reading a bad group chat on Discord; that’s how our characters communicate. So many modern-day-America slangs and verbiage.
7) It fails as a romance and fantasy. It isn’t romantic enough to be a romance, because an effective romance is swoon-worthy and inspires love in readers, and it isn’t a fantasy because it just isn’t, primarily due to poor world-building.
8) At the end of the day, this book doesn’t know what it wants to be, or what age group it’s for. Also, “When a fae falls in love, it’s forever”? Sounds suspiciously familiar.
I got this book in an Owlcrate box, and it was so painfully clear that not one person back at headquarters read it, because no reader would want to put their credibility and integrity on the line by recommending it to anyone, unless they’re incentivized to do so. Think of all of the amazing works released from the last few years; this book had no business being in a book box.
This was THE book that made me log into my Owlcrate account and unsubscribe. I had been receiving mediocre books in that box, but this was the one that inspired me to close out my subscription.
I have read countless books in my life, but this one takes the cake for being the worst one I’ve ever read.