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All Out War #1
The Eleventh Hour
1940: In Europe Hitler’s original plans to start a war the year before have been delayed, giving Germany another year to build up it’s vast military strength.
The Allies, by contrast, continue to try and appease the dictator in vain hopes of avoiding a repeat of the First World War. Prime Minister Chamberlain attempts to negotiate a treaty before things get too far out of control.
Meanwhile, Winston Churchill tries desperately to rally his country in order to meet the threat that he knows is coming. Elsewhere, Japan’s war in China continues to ravage that country.
Millions are already dead and now the Japanese eye Siberia and the East Indies as prizes to be won. They also understand that their aggression may very well bring them into conflict with the United States.
In America, President Roosevelt watches as the situation unfolds and begins making his own country’s plans if they have to fight.
From Europe to the Far East the world seems to be teetering on the brink of another global conflict. Atrocities committed by Japanese troops on Chinese civilians are just a warm up for crimes to come.
A delayed war could have given the Axis Powers the edge they needed in order to achieve a victory!
Will America’s vast industry and resources be enough to support their allies?
Will Britain survive against a Germany much stronger than it otherwise would have been in 1939?
A single delay in planning could very well change history...
The Allies, by contrast, continue to try and appease the dictator in vain hopes of avoiding a repeat of the First World War. Prime Minister Chamberlain attempts to negotiate a treaty before things get too far out of control.
Meanwhile, Winston Churchill tries desperately to rally his country in order to meet the threat that he knows is coming. Elsewhere, Japan’s war in China continues to ravage that country.
Millions are already dead and now the Japanese eye Siberia and the East Indies as prizes to be won. They also understand that their aggression may very well bring them into conflict with the United States.
In America, President Roosevelt watches as the situation unfolds and begins making his own country’s plans if they have to fight.
From Europe to the Far East the world seems to be teetering on the brink of another global conflict. Atrocities committed by Japanese troops on Chinese civilians are just a warm up for crimes to come.
A delayed war could have given the Axis Powers the edge they needed in order to achieve a victory!
Will America’s vast industry and resources be enough to support their allies?
Will Britain survive against a Germany much stronger than it otherwise would have been in 1939?
A single delay in planning could very well change history...
512 pages, Kindle Edition
Published August 19, 2022
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September 11, 2022
Great alt-history
Great story, dialog and characters seem real. Reminds me of Turtledove in his writing style. Can’t wait for the next book.
Great story, dialog and characters seem real. Reminds me of Turtledove in his writing style. Can’t wait for the next book.
August 12, 2023
Is there a clone of Harry Turtledove!?
Loved it. Saying this novel reminds me of Turtledove is just too easy. Harry can get a little descriptive and bog down a chapter, Tavian Brack kept it quick and explosive . Alternate history at its best. I enjoyed everything about this. Book 2, here I come!
Loved it. Saying this novel reminds me of Turtledove is just too easy. Harry can get a little descriptive and bog down a chapter, Tavian Brack kept it quick and explosive . Alternate history at its best. I enjoyed everything about this. Book 2, here I come!
July 6, 2023
Too detailed for me
My question is: who is the target audience? I am a baby boomer and quite knowledgeable about the start of WWII. I even was raised on Oahu in Hawaii and am aware of the Dec 7 attack on American assets on Oahu. I was even able to take boat tours before any memo trials were built.
I do believe it is important to share military history with newer generations. However this book goes into too much detail of each person Which really alowa.down the pace and allows boredom to creep in. My opinion is that this book needs to be condensed to "just the facts ma'am".
My question is: who is the target audience? I am a baby boomer and quite knowledgeable about the start of WWII. I even was raised on Oahu in Hawaii and am aware of the Dec 7 attack on American assets on Oahu. I was even able to take boat tours before any memo trials were built.
I do believe it is important to share military history with newer generations. However this book goes into too much detail of each person Which really alowa.down the pace and allows boredom to creep in. My opinion is that this book needs to be condensed to "just the facts ma'am".
January 5, 2023
not a dull minute
I thoroughly enjoyed this narrative. Not much of a variation from factual. It moves from areas of interest to the next in a very rational way, keeping interest at high alert. There was stages that increased my heart rate as if I was there. My advice is to buy this book you will not be disappointed.
I thoroughly enjoyed this narrative. Not much of a variation from factual. It moves from areas of interest to the next in a very rational way, keeping interest at high alert. There was stages that increased my heart rate as if I was there. My advice is to buy this book you will not be disappointed.
January 8, 2026
This alternate history novel brings a fascinating what‑if scenario to life by imagining what might have happened if World War II had been delayed long enough for the Axis powers to grow even stronger. Set against the looming threat of global conflict in 1940, the story follows leaders like Chamberlain, Churchill, and Roosevelt as they struggle to respond to rapidly changing geopolitical realities and the expanding ambitions of both Germany and Japan. The narrative combines historical tension with speculative twists that keep the stakes high and the reader engaged.
The world on the brink of war setting, along with the sense that every strategic decision could change history, makes this a compelling read for fans of military fiction and alternate timeline stories. If you enjoy imagining how small changes in key moments might reshape the world, you’ll find this book thought‑provoking and immersive.
📧 With admiration for your creative exploration of history feel free to connect with me at authorsarahalderson@gmail.com
or visit www.sarahalderson.com
The world on the brink of war setting, along with the sense that every strategic decision could change history, makes this a compelling read for fans of military fiction and alternate timeline stories. If you enjoy imagining how small changes in key moments might reshape the world, you’ll find this book thought‑provoking and immersive.
📧 With admiration for your creative exploration of history feel free to connect with me at authorsarahalderson@gmail.com
or visit www.sarahalderson.com
August 5, 2023
Exciting World War 2 Drama! But Very Slow Developing into the Expected Alternate History SciFi
I’ve plowed thru the first 10 chapters, and this is an interesting World War 2 book, but so far with only a minor change (delay) in dates for the start of the real German invasion of Europe [and giving Hitler a more powerful fighting force].
My history knowledge may also be fuzzy on the British political side of things written so far, but there’s not much in this book to grab a SciFi interest, and I’m not sure I want to read the other 3/4 of a war book without a distinct Alternate History angle … (so I’ve elected to quit, and move on to something that grabs me more).
I’ve plowed thru the first 10 chapters, and this is an interesting World War 2 book, but so far with only a minor change (delay) in dates for the start of the real German invasion of Europe [and giving Hitler a more powerful fighting force].
My history knowledge may also be fuzzy on the British political side of things written so far, but there’s not much in this book to grab a SciFi interest, and I’m not sure I want to read the other 3/4 of a war book without a distinct Alternate History angle … (so I’ve elected to quit, and move on to something that grabs me more).
September 15, 2026
The Eleventh Hour
I found the storyline to be rather good, but the book itself could have been better. There are a lot of characters to keep track of. A lot of locations as well. The saving grace is that, for the most part, the author stays in one spot for a while, rather than skipping about like a bunny in a freshly sprouted garden. Then there are spelling & grammar errors throughout. It was very distracting & made the book difficult to read. The author used artistic license, but it didn't interfere with the storyline.
I found the storyline to be rather good, but the book itself could have been better. There are a lot of characters to keep track of. A lot of locations as well. The saving grace is that, for the most part, the author stays in one spot for a while, rather than skipping about like a bunny in a freshly sprouted garden. Then there are spelling & grammar errors throughout. It was very distracting & made the book difficult to read. The author used artistic license, but it didn't interfere with the storyline.
May 25, 2026
WW2 8 mos later.
This was a decently written book, though editing and details could have been better. Biggest disappointment was that this was essentially the same war story as real history, just shifted 8-10 mos later. While this may truly have been what would have happened if Hitler has been incapacitated right before Poland, it it’s not very interesting as alternate history.
This was a decently written book, though editing and details could have been better. Biggest disappointment was that this was essentially the same war story as real history, just shifted 8-10 mos later. While this may truly have been what would have happened if Hitler has been incapacitated right before Poland, it it’s not very interesting as alternate history.
December 18, 2022
I’ve read many books of this type over the years but this is by far one of the best
I won’t go into the plot which is plausible and not a million miles away from reality but will say it is very well written and I couldn’t put it down
I can’t wait to read the next one in the series which I hope is soon
I won’t go into the plot which is plausible and not a million miles away from reality but will say it is very well written and I couldn’t put it down
I can’t wait to read the next one in the series which I hope is soon
March 28, 2023
Interesting take on the start of ww2
The characters are well established and very plausible , their actions pretty much conform to what they actually did and how the reacted. It is a good read and well worth the time to take it in and consider how close we may have come to catastrophe. Appeasement never works.
John Cooper.
The characters are well established and very plausible , their actions pretty much conform to what they actually did and how the reacted. It is a good read and well worth the time to take it in and consider how close we may have come to catastrophe. Appeasement never works.
John Cooper.
June 11, 2023
Worth a read
An enjoyable read with historical characters written accurately and the altered battle outcomes are worth the read the only thing that let's it down is it hasn't been proof read for spelling mistakes which unfortunately can break the flow of the writing and there are many spelling mistakes
An enjoyable read with historical characters written accurately and the altered battle outcomes are worth the read the only thing that let's it down is it hasn't been proof read for spelling mistakes which unfortunately can break the flow of the writing and there are many spelling mistakes
September 27, 2024
Exellant
Nothing to dislike, a well researched book . I would recommend this book to all. There is plenty of action, and a very well written description of the events in the seats of power, also well described events on land and sea, a really enthralling read
Nothing to dislike, a well researched book . I would recommend this book to all. There is plenty of action, and a very well written description of the events in the seats of power, also well described events on land and sea, a really enthralling read
October 7, 2024
Eleventh hour
How a year can change the outcome of the war Hitler in a coma after a car accident some of the main players are killed a good novel of an alternate timeline of history
How a year can change the outcome of the war Hitler in a coma after a car accident some of the main players are killed a good novel of an alternate timeline of history
May 8, 2025
What a difference a year could have made. Very well thought out story, and a enjoyable read. Small minor grammar errors but they did not take away from the story. If you like Alternate History, then this is a story for you. Recommend.
June 17, 2025
Make alternate history great again
Great character development. Battles seemed mostly realistic. Did not care for the not-so-subtle jab at America (complaining about immigrants and comparing conservatives to national socialists with the "make Germany great again" comment).
Great character development. Battles seemed mostly realistic. Did not care for the not-so-subtle jab at America (complaining about immigrants and comparing conservatives to national socialists with the "make Germany great again" comment).
December 7, 2022
The Eleventh Hour
Reminds me of Harry Turtledove. Definitely enjoyed the book and am looking forward to the next one . Great plot and interesting historical twists.
Reminds me of Harry Turtledove. Definitely enjoyed the book and am looking forward to the next one . Great plot and interesting historical twists.
December 21, 2022
Great story, fun read
Great read, followed history with twists. Great plot lines. Detailed, but not dull. Fast paced. Can't wait until book 2 comes out
Great read, followed history with twists. Great plot lines. Detailed, but not dull. Fast paced. Can't wait until book 2 comes out
December 29, 2022
Well written alternative history. Much like a Harry Turtledove minus the page filling narrative on 12 different characters. Close enough to reality you go “hhhmmm could be”
February 5, 2023
Good
Better then many other alternate histories I have read. Hopefully follow ups will not disappoint. Spoiler, Japan going North could be an interesting twist.
Better then many other alternate histories I have read. Hopefully follow ups will not disappoint. Spoiler, Japan going North could be an interesting twist.
February 6, 2023
Eye opener
I know this story came out of the author's mind, but he wrote in such detail, when tge French general got killed, it brought back to me FICTION. Excellent reading.
I know this story came out of the author's mind, but he wrote in such detail, when tge French general got killed, it brought back to me FICTION. Excellent reading.
May 10, 2023
Great read
If you like alternative history this book for you. A small change make big difference. Lookinf forward to book two
If you like alternative history this book for you. A small change make big difference. Lookinf forward to book two
July 25, 2023
Glaring historical inaccuracies!
The two most glaring; Graf Spee was not sunk in the South Atlantic by a British submarine and Charles DeGaulle did not die in a tank battle!!
The two most glaring; Graf Spee was not sunk in the South Atlantic by a British submarine and Charles DeGaulle did not die in a tank battle!!
July 6, 2024
Replaying WWII
Hitler is in a car accident. This delays the start of WWII. Germany has more time to train and build up its military. The USA and Britain continue hoping for peace.
Hitler is in a car accident. This delays the start of WWII. Germany has more time to train and build up its military. The USA and Britain continue hoping for peace.
October 19, 2025
Excellent and shows talent.
June 4, 2026
Story moves right along. Areas that move away from history gives it an interesting what if feel.
June 10, 2026
Good for alternative history 😃
I wouldn't say it grabbed you and pulls the reader into it but once the action starts it compells the reader to stay in the story.
I wouldn't say it grabbed you and pulls the reader into it but once the action starts it compells the reader to stay in the story.
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May 1, 2024Given that this is a counter-factual book, it's hard to know if the author is deliberately changing things up or is just ignorant of basic military gear and terminology. Though a bolt action rifle, the Lee-Enfield holds ten rounds, not just five. 8.8 cm flack guns weren't used in the anti-tank role in the 1939 German invasion of France and the low countries. Naval ships have compartments, not rooms. The list goes on.
There were also mistakes in grammar. Taken together, it was an ordeal keeping my unbelief suspended.
One other thing that bothered me. With most good alternate history stories, the question being answered is 'what would happen if" things happened differently at a certain inflection point. Like, what would happen if the British and French had moved into Belgium during the 'phony' war and set up good defenses and the German attack was beaten back or, what would happen if the USA declared war on Germany over the invasion of Poland instead of remaining neutral? All the changes that followed would flow from these alternate happenings. This book, on the other hand, simply makes changes to the way individual events happened that don't have any logical follow on effects.
I won't be reading any more in this series.
There were also mistakes in grammar. Taken together, it was an ordeal keeping my unbelief suspended.
One other thing that bothered me. With most good alternate history stories, the question being answered is 'what would happen if" things happened differently at a certain inflection point. Like, what would happen if the British and French had moved into Belgium during the 'phony' war and set up good defenses and the German attack was beaten back or, what would happen if the USA declared war on Germany over the invasion of Poland instead of remaining neutral? All the changes that followed would flow from these alternate happenings. This book, on the other hand, simply makes changes to the way individual events happened that don't have any logical follow on effects.
I won't be reading any more in this series.
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