While I'm no fan of third person present tense narration, this short prequel novella uses it and somehow manages to pull it off to tell not one but two stories linked only by space and time. Futuristic heists and badass grandmothers anyone? Welcome to Artemis City.
One half of the story follows Raj, a down-and-out type whose last flirtation with the criminal underworld nearly lost him everything. He's decided to do an easy, (relatively) safe and legal job: escort an elderly lady around Artemis City, the bustling commercial metropolis burrowed deep inside an asteroid. Sure, there is that underworld element around, but doing a bit of shopping, meeting a relative - what could possibly go wrong? Our other tale finds Lasadi, a fellow sort-of-grifter, our to steal access codes to a gangster's mansion from his second in command(s). Just a few more jobs like this and she'll be free to buy her beloved ship Nanshe from the boss who owns her. She's good at what she does, and the marks have gotten sloppy - what could possibly go wrong?
I loved playing guess the narrative crossover as the two characters circled each other. It's a great ship-passing-in-the-night style that alternates POV each chapter. They're your usual little sci-fi criminal heist/gangster tales, but they have fun with the tropes. Both stories have their steady build and adrenaline-filled climax, scattered with hints at the characters' pasts, hopes and dreams of the future. I always find third person present tense an othering sort of style that makes it harder to connect with the characters, but they're drawn with a wonderful kind of sympathy even if we do stay somewhat arm's length. The side characters too get enough detail to feel real and part of the strongly described futuristic setting.
The end... Oh yes, the end is a hook. While it does wrap up both the smaller stories well enough, the way is well and truly paved for this to lead into a series where the two misfits will undoubtedly tangle again. It does a great job of being it's own open ended short story and making you curious enough to want to find out more. As long as you're in the mood for that third person present tense narration and love a bit of space-crime-drama, I'd keep an eye on the Durga System.
-I received a free copy of this e-book in a giveaway. This does not influence my review-