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Daughter of the Sun
“But when all hope seems lost, and the world knows nothing but white, there will come one who will bring green.” Born without a Gift, Solyana must accept being ordinary amidst the extraordinary. But when blizzards devastate her valley and endanger village life, a prophetic sign emerges, proclaiming Solyana the savior. Fulfilling the prophecy means leaving the valley and journeying into greater Mothmar--where every previous expedition has led to death. Unwinding the mysteries of the past and present, Solyana’s choices could spell survival or extinction for those she loves and unknowingly bind her to another… “One who is all light to stand to the one who is all dark, of which there will be two.” Pallah, the object of her father’s disdain and overshadowed by her siblings, is desperate for the home she’s never had. Accepted into a group of elusive zealots under the wrong pretenses, Pallah begins to discover she may be as dangerous to herself as she is portrayed to be to others. On a night that changes her life forever, Pallah discovers her Gift is forbidden. Between her new group of friends and the persistent voice in her head, Pallah is pushed toward a decision that could send her into irreversible darkness. Can Solyana find the truth to the prophecy before she is thrust into the awaiting abyss? Can Pallah discover her true purpose before her world collapses in on itself? A story of friendship, family, and the choices that shape us. Dive into the world of Mothmar and experience magic, animal companionship, and adventure layered through time and dipped in mystery.
268 pages, Paperback
First published January 1, 2022
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Amanda Auler
6 books208 followersAmanda Auler lives in Sanford, North Carolina with her husband and four growing boys. Though Amanda writes for every audience, her roots in Christianity shine through her work as she explores themes of redemption, forgiveness, and grace. When she's not writing you can find her baking cookies, drinking too much coffee, and staying up past her bedtime to watch anime with her husband.
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April 16, 2024
5 stars. Barely. (:
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August 25, 2024Amanda is a great storyteller!
If you enjoy slower-paced, complex world-lore, and dark/gritty fantasy stories set in a mythological-survival-type setting then this story is for you!
Content:
No language, just made up swears
Domestic violence - not graphic, but still sad
Animal death
If you enjoy slower-paced, complex world-lore, and dark/gritty fantasy stories set in a mythological-survival-type setting then this story is for you!
Content:
No language, just made up swears
Domestic violence - not graphic, but still sad
Animal death
September 11, 2022
For the readers who yearn for stories told by crackling firelight, this one is for you.
September 5, 2022
I've been putting off writing a review because I'm still processing this story. No joke I finished reading this book and had a full system shutdown, stared at a wall for no less than five minutes, and then called my mom to try and explain the flurry of emotions I was caught in. The main one being shock.
Because y'all. This book. Was so FREAKING GOOD!!! The plot... twists? It was more than a twist though it was like a plot onion. No hear me out, the layers this story had were EPIC. I mean if you simply look at the chapter titles you'll notice it starts with The Sleeping Boy and ends with The Sleeping Girl. The way it moves between the two POVs and the way those POVs subtly intertwine while remaining completely separate as the story carries on was brilliant.
The moment I realised I could finally start to connecting the dots with the perfectly placed foreshadowing and storytelling that revealed just enough at just the right time to give glimpses of what might happen while still keeping me in the dark was a literal mind explosion. Like I put the book down and proper freak out because I LOVE sneaky authors!!!
Also these characters have stolen my heart I loved them. Especially Solyana, Gamaliel, Vinur, Jonah, and Rhuth. Basically all of them? They're all precious nuggets okay don't judge me! Even the characters in Pallah's part of the story tugged at my heart. I could feel their pain, relate to it in a way that had me deeply unsettled but in a very good way. Like in a these characters are messy and real and I want to wrap them in a blanket and tell them it's going to be okay but they need to walk through their own path themselves and I can see that the path they chose to take isn't going to be a happy one. And again what was so cool was that Solyana and her friends go through very similar struggles but it's so contrasted with Pallah's outcomes that it brings a beautiful yet melancholic layer of hope into all that could have been and all that could be.
Emphasis on the could be because I'm so excited and also highkey terrified for whats to come in book 2. Basically this book was incredible and if you love fantasy with stunning world building, plot twists, and character development you'll love this.
I received an ARC from the author. This review is my own independent and fair evaluation.
Because y'all. This book. Was so FREAKING GOOD!!! The plot... twists? It was more than a twist though it was like a plot onion. No hear me out, the layers this story had were EPIC. I mean if you simply look at the chapter titles you'll notice it starts with The Sleeping Boy and ends with The Sleeping Girl. The way it moves between the two POVs and the way those POVs subtly intertwine while remaining completely separate as the story carries on was brilliant.
The moment I realised I could finally start to connecting the dots with the perfectly placed foreshadowing and storytelling that revealed just enough at just the right time to give glimpses of what might happen while still keeping me in the dark was a literal mind explosion. Like I put the book down and proper freak out because I LOVE sneaky authors!!!
Also these characters have stolen my heart I loved them. Especially Solyana, Gamaliel, Vinur, Jonah, and Rhuth. Basically all of them? They're all precious nuggets okay don't judge me! Even the characters in Pallah's part of the story tugged at my heart. I could feel their pain, relate to it in a way that had me deeply unsettled but in a very good way. Like in a these characters are messy and real and I want to wrap them in a blanket and tell them it's going to be okay but they need to walk through their own path themselves and I can see that the path they chose to take isn't going to be a happy one. And again what was so cool was that Solyana and her friends go through very similar struggles but it's so contrasted with Pallah's outcomes that it brings a beautiful yet melancholic layer of hope into all that could have been and all that could be.
Emphasis on the could be because I'm so excited and also highkey terrified for whats to come in book 2. Basically this book was incredible and if you love fantasy with stunning world building, plot twists, and character development you'll love this.
I received an ARC from the author. This review is my own independent and fair evaluation.
November 11, 2022
Dragon Blood (by Mary Beesley) meets Shadow and Bone (by Leigh Bardugo) in this brilliant fantasy debut.
Amanda Auler is an author I’ve been following for a long time. I know she poured herself into this book. She takes her craft seriously…and it shows.
This is basically a perfect fantasy novel. We have an intriguing world, captivating characters, a fast plot, animal sidekicks, and a shocking ending. It doesn’t really cross into new territory, but I love reading familiar things. This one had twists up its sleeve that took me by surprise.
I am looking forward to book two! I think Auler could have a successful career ahead of her.
Amanda Auler is an author I’ve been following for a long time. I know she poured herself into this book. She takes her craft seriously…and it shows.
This is basically a perfect fantasy novel. We have an intriguing world, captivating characters, a fast plot, animal sidekicks, and a shocking ending. It doesn’t really cross into new territory, but I love reading familiar things. This one had twists up its sleeve that took me by surprise.
I am looking forward to book two! I think Auler could have a successful career ahead of her.
May 31, 2024
Ngl? The twist? I gasped out loud.
HOWEVER. I wish it had come earlier, that my dread had been growing throughout the book. I really liked a lot of this, but the pacing was off, and I was never quite sure what to do with the characterization of Pallah’s family. 3.5 stars probably.
HOWEVER. I wish it had come earlier, that my dread had been growing throughout the book. I really liked a lot of this, but the pacing was off, and I was never quite sure what to do with the characterization of Pallah’s family. 3.5 stars probably.
August 31, 2024
Well… shit…
(that ending kinda gets ya going!)
This is a book of despites;
Despite having started it twice(?) now, once when the author gifted me an audio book (and I tried to graciously say that I just couldn’t handle the narrator) and having started the ebook before but maybe it wasn’t the right time for me to read it at the time.
Despite that this culture (though it’s own thing) the tribal, northern, communal type of stories usually are not my thing.
Despite the fact that I hate when animal companions get thrown in (it’s not your typical animal companions)
Despite the fact that I had heard SO much about this book and thought it was just going to be too hyped up.
Despite the fact that I wasn’t fully invested through the first quarter of the book.
Despite the fact that I typically despise female main characters.
Despite the fact that I wasn’t the biggest fan of the writing style (it’s good, just not a personal favorite)
Despite the fact that this is a debut novel…
Despite the fact that it’s an indie author (don’t get me wrong, I absolutely love an indie author, but I’ve read some bad ones (just as I’ve read some bad trad authors)
Despite… despite… despite…
This story swept me up, even as an ebook (which I despise reading) I read it in five days… something I haven’t done in a hot minute.
On my way to work I found myself wondering what was going to happen next, were my theories right, what was going to throw me for a loop (I’d heard about the cliffhanger and the shock at the end…) it did not disappoint and while I didn’t wholly guess it it was still the perfect amount of “this doesn’t surprise me AND holy shit!” at the same time.
Not really over the fact that this is a debut!
Not really over the fact that the writing style wasn’t really my favorite and YET Auler fully captivated me and swept me into the lives of the characters.
Can we talk about the absolute darkness and authenticity of Pallah’s home life?! (hit home a little bit… just as Solyana’s did)
I’m going to love and root for Gamaliel (even though I’ll absolutely never be able to say his name aloud😂) and Jonas for forever… these two have dug a little hole into my heart and I don’t see them letting go anytime soon! 🫠
(I feel like there is SO much more I want to say… but I’ll end here with, again, this is a book of despites…)
I feel like it deserves the full five stars and I might switch it, it’s just that it isn’t completely and wholly MY type of book…
So on a personal level it’s a 3.5-4 star but like it’s also deserving of the 5… we’ll see…
I immediately bought a physical copy of book two!!
(that ending kinda gets ya going!)
This is a book of despites;
Despite having started it twice(?) now, once when the author gifted me an audio book (and I tried to graciously say that I just couldn’t handle the narrator) and having started the ebook before but maybe it wasn’t the right time for me to read it at the time.
Despite that this culture (though it’s own thing) the tribal, northern, communal type of stories usually are not my thing.
Despite the fact that I hate when animal companions get thrown in (it’s not your typical animal companions)
Despite the fact that I had heard SO much about this book and thought it was just going to be too hyped up.
Despite the fact that I wasn’t fully invested through the first quarter of the book.
Despite the fact that I typically despise female main characters.
Despite the fact that I wasn’t the biggest fan of the writing style (it’s good, just not a personal favorite)
Despite the fact that this is a debut novel…
Despite the fact that it’s an indie author (don’t get me wrong, I absolutely love an indie author, but I’ve read some bad ones (just as I’ve read some bad trad authors)
Despite… despite… despite…
This story swept me up, even as an ebook (which I despise reading) I read it in five days… something I haven’t done in a hot minute.
On my way to work I found myself wondering what was going to happen next, were my theories right, what was going to throw me for a loop (I’d heard about the cliffhanger and the shock at the end…) it did not disappoint and while I didn’t wholly guess it it was still the perfect amount of “this doesn’t surprise me AND holy shit!” at the same time.
Not really over the fact that this is a debut!
Not really over the fact that the writing style wasn’t really my favorite and YET Auler fully captivated me and swept me into the lives of the characters.
Can we talk about the absolute darkness and authenticity of Pallah’s home life?! (hit home a little bit… just as Solyana’s did)
I’m going to love and root for Gamaliel (even though I’ll absolutely never be able to say his name aloud😂) and Jonas for forever… these two have dug a little hole into my heart and I don’t see them letting go anytime soon! 🫠
(I feel like there is SO much more I want to say… but I’ll end here with, again, this is a book of despites…)
I feel like it deserves the full five stars and I might switch it, it’s just that it isn’t completely and wholly MY type of book…
So on a personal level it’s a 3.5-4 star but like it’s also deserving of the 5… we’ll see…
I immediately bought a physical copy of book two!!
June 25, 2023
This book was so much more than I was expecting. I was expecting a good debut from Amanda but what I got was a masterfully written story.
The book follows two girls from two different villages in Mothmar. For the majority of the book, it is unclear how their stories will converge, and the mystery of it had me trying to piece things together. I had a really hard time putting the book down and devoured it in a couple of days (which is quick for me).
The whole world that Auler created felt so real. At first I was worried when I saw the glossary of fictional words she'd be using in the book. I thought maybe it would be too hard to follow or that I'd have to flip back to the glossary constantly so I wouldn't get lost. That was not the case. It was extremely well built, with great pacing and enough information that I didn't get bogged down but also wasn't confused. I think her world building is the best I've read in a long time.
The characters are also well developed. Their motives and weaknesses are so genuine, I felt like I knew them. There was a scene toward the end that made me tear up, imagining how the MC felt. Even though the scene didn't have a lot of emotional language, it was impossible for me not to feel for her. I didn't need to be told what she was feeling. I felt it.
I loved the sibling relationships and familial love, and the friction was also well developed and believable. The themes of belonging and purpose were really powerful and the way both MCs interacted with their family was both resemblant in some ways but with major contrasts overall. Their characters in general reflect that as well.
I loved the dual POV and the hints here and there that only fully came together in the epilogue, at which point my suspicions were confirmed. But not in an "I knew it" or "that was so predictable" way, but in a very satisfying, but also frustrating way- because now I have to wait for the next book to see what happens next and I might die from anticipation.
Please read this book and then message me so we can talk about it. I will be buying a physical copy of this book asap.
I feel so blessed and also cursed to be an ARC reader because the wait for book 2 will feel longer for us ARC readers. I'll be requesting an ARC for book 2.
The book follows two girls from two different villages in Mothmar. For the majority of the book, it is unclear how their stories will converge, and the mystery of it had me trying to piece things together. I had a really hard time putting the book down and devoured it in a couple of days (which is quick for me).
The whole world that Auler created felt so real. At first I was worried when I saw the glossary of fictional words she'd be using in the book. I thought maybe it would be too hard to follow or that I'd have to flip back to the glossary constantly so I wouldn't get lost. That was not the case. It was extremely well built, with great pacing and enough information that I didn't get bogged down but also wasn't confused. I think her world building is the best I've read in a long time.
The characters are also well developed. Their motives and weaknesses are so genuine, I felt like I knew them. There was a scene toward the end that made me tear up, imagining how the MC felt. Even though the scene didn't have a lot of emotional language, it was impossible for me not to feel for her. I didn't need to be told what she was feeling. I felt it.
I loved the sibling relationships and familial love, and the friction was also well developed and believable. The themes of belonging and purpose were really powerful and the way both MCs interacted with their family was both resemblant in some ways but with major contrasts overall. Their characters in general reflect that as well.
I loved the dual POV and the hints here and there that only fully came together in the epilogue, at which point my suspicions were confirmed. But not in an "I knew it" or "that was so predictable" way, but in a very satisfying, but also frustrating way- because now I have to wait for the next book to see what happens next and I might die from anticipation.
Please read this book and then message me so we can talk about it. I will be buying a physical copy of this book asap.
I feel so blessed and also cursed to be an ARC reader because the wait for book 2 will feel longer for us ARC readers. I'll be requesting an ARC for book 2.
September 5, 2022
5 Stars!
Auler's debut sings with sophistication - intricate character development, beautiful prose, a thrilling storyline, imaginative world-building, and reimagined tropes that will surely suck in young readers and adults alike. This book was compelling from chapter one. The two points of view and converging storylines had me guessing until the end. Much like every 12-year-old wonders which Harry Potter house they'd sort into, young adults will eat up the unique magic system and speculate their own gifts in the fantastical world of Mothmar. I loved the complicated character arcs filled with very real and relatable emotions. Even if they don't live in a magical world of curses and prophecies, readers will see their own imperfect lives reflected in the messy backstories, relationships, thrills, and heartache. There are some deep themes in this book that manage to be accessible to younger readers but still gripping for adults, masterfully weaving age-appropriate content with complex concepts that will make readers of all ages think. Choice, loyalty, duty, destiny are all up for grabs in Daughter of the Sun. And I can't wait to see where this series goes.
Auler's debut sings with sophistication - intricate character development, beautiful prose, a thrilling storyline, imaginative world-building, and reimagined tropes that will surely suck in young readers and adults alike. This book was compelling from chapter one. The two points of view and converging storylines had me guessing until the end. Much like every 12-year-old wonders which Harry Potter house they'd sort into, young adults will eat up the unique magic system and speculate their own gifts in the fantastical world of Mothmar. I loved the complicated character arcs filled with very real and relatable emotions. Even if they don't live in a magical world of curses and prophecies, readers will see their own imperfect lives reflected in the messy backstories, relationships, thrills, and heartache. There are some deep themes in this book that manage to be accessible to younger readers but still gripping for adults, masterfully weaving age-appropriate content with complex concepts that will make readers of all ages think. Choice, loyalty, duty, destiny are all up for grabs in Daughter of the Sun. And I can't wait to see where this series goes.
December 3, 2022
This review may turn into an incoherent jumble of excitement because I just finished this book and I'm still reeling.
First of all, Amanda worked on this book for years, and you can tell. The intricacies of the two storylines and how they ultimately wove together was done with the kind of precision and detail that only happens when you devote lots of time and love to a story.
Secondly, the writing style is so beautiful that I was easily drawn in. The world of Mothmar and characters in both storylines were painted in clear and lovely pictures from the words that so easily leapt from the page. Amanda describes things so well and really has an incredible storytelling quality to her writing.
And as for the plot twists... I had a guess that formed about 65-70% of the way in, and my guess was right, but only on a surface level. Apparently there is a lot more going on than I even began to imagine, and I am SO EXCITED to see what happens next!
First of all, Amanda worked on this book for years, and you can tell. The intricacies of the two storylines and how they ultimately wove together was done with the kind of precision and detail that only happens when you devote lots of time and love to a story.
Secondly, the writing style is so beautiful that I was easily drawn in. The world of Mothmar and characters in both storylines were painted in clear and lovely pictures from the words that so easily leapt from the page. Amanda describes things so well and really has an incredible storytelling quality to her writing.
And as for the plot twists... I had a guess that formed about 65-70% of the way in, and my guess was right, but only on a surface level. Apparently there is a lot more going on than I even began to imagine, and I am SO EXCITED to see what happens next!
January 9, 2023
I came across this book randomly on Instagram via a reel the author made and it hooked me in! It’s no secret I’m a huge fan of fantasy and this “chosen one” tale did not disappoint.
Typically with multiple POV stories, I favor one character over another, but both perspectives had me itching to keep reading. Pallah and Solyana are both headstrong young women, with their own unique mark on their community and Mothmar as a whole, who seem different at first but actually share a lot of similarities. Without spoilers given, the ending actually shocked me. SO GOOD.
After being in a bit of a slump, this book kept my attention from page one. As my first book finished of 2023, this set the bar right at the top, and that’s saying a lot since I don’t read many YA books.
Typically with multiple POV stories, I favor one character over another, but both perspectives had me itching to keep reading. Pallah and Solyana are both headstrong young women, with their own unique mark on their community and Mothmar as a whole, who seem different at first but actually share a lot of similarities. Without spoilers given, the ending actually shocked me. SO GOOD.
After being in a bit of a slump, this book kept my attention from page one. As my first book finished of 2023, this set the bar right at the top, and that’s saying a lot since I don’t read many YA books.
April 12, 2024
This is a solid 3 star for me. Keep in mind that 3 stars is NOT a low score from me! It just means the book was good, but didn't wow me.
I've actually been following this author on Instagram for a little while because I was excited to see someone else writing low/no spice books. It's pretty lonesome out here in these fantasy streets for those of us who aren't writing smut right now haha! Especially as Indies. (Don't come for me, smut authors. I'm glad you're getting that bag! You do you! I am just too ace for that!) So when I saw that there was an audiobook for Daughter of the Sun I snatched it up! I will say of the audiobook that the narrator did make some vocal choices that were a little grating to me, and mispronounced a few words. Nothing to ruin the experience, but more to highlight how important it is for us Indies to thoroughly review the audio before we publish.
This is a charming little fantasy that is obviously the first in a trilogy, and right away we butt up against an issue for me. This book is from the school of first books that is all leadup. It's ALL the slow revving up and getting to the story which...will happen in book 2, stay tuned! Without an ounce of hyperbole, it takes one of the MCs literally the entire book to leave her home town. You know, the thing that happens by chapter 3 of most adventure type stories. For me this was a letdown. I was expecting a little more adventure. Yes things do happen in the home town, and I liked getting to know her family and culture, but my heart sank when it became obvious that the meat of this story wasn't coming in this book. Many readers will not be bothered by this. Many readers do no mind a first book that is all leadup. Alas I am not many readers.
While the main MC is spending her time getting ready to get ready to leave home, we have a second viewpoint character. While I get what the author was doing with her (I think. We don't get the actual connection between the girls until the epilogue which I didn't love) her story was weaker imo. Just on a craft basis. She was interesting, she had arguably more going on than was happening over with the other character, but the writing (for me) was noticeably not as skillful. There was a lot of telling. Rather than being allowed to see the character and her relationships (which we totally could have) we were just told. It made me really sad because I didn't think the other character felt like that. The 2nd character needed more space, and for the author to trust herself more and let is get to know the character and her situation vs just telling us. This might not bother other readers, but it did bug me, mostly because I knew it could be more!
The abuse plotline with the 2nd character was painfully weak as this book fell into the trap of having a cartoonishly evil abuser. Are there probably some dynamics like that in the world? Sure. But realistically most abusers, especially ones who have been successful as long as this character was, are skilled manipulators. They use tactics, love bombing, and gaslighting to get away with their abuse. This man was just... mean all the time. There was a hint that maybe there was something going on with the character's twin sister and their father, (not creepy, but like he favored her for some reason) but it was not explored in this book.
How about the world building and magic? The world building was pretty solid imo, but the magic is very soft. I only have the barest grasp on it, but maybe it will get harder as the books go on. There are 3 flavors of magic. One is the most fleshed out, that is animal control. This book did have some fun animal companions/interactions to tempt me! Book 2 promises even more! But then there's...earth magic? I think? And a type that is most commonly fire, but basically just kinda does...anything? I really couldn't tell you. Haha! I didn't mind too much, but if you're in the mood for a book with a hard magic system and clear rules, this one isn't it!
The romance is this book was...present. It borders on instalove for me. Maybe just insta-crush except at one point after knowing the LI for like a week the MC said she already felt something for him that was "more than friendship" and I was like "oh heck, slow your roll there, ma'am!" The LI was pretty bland for me too, even if he does have a doggo (okay it's a wolf, but I pretended it was a dog so he was less cliche LOL)
My final thought for now is that I have been enjoying watching the author promote this book, but she often comps it with Avatar the Last Airbender...which I found to be highly inaccurate. I get it. Finding comps to tempt people is hard. The struggle is real. But legit the only thing this story has in common with Avatar is that the MC has to master 3 magics to fulfill a prophecy...and we start out somewhere that is snowy. That's it. So that was disappointing. I kept waiting for more connections to appear and they never did. if you're going into this book looking for Avatar, you're going to leave confused and disappointed too. Maybe the 2nd book will have more in common?
Anyway, I know this sounds like mostly critique, but honestly this was a fine little fantasy book. Very much a book 1 that does not stand well in it's own. But I might just snag book 2 at some point because darn it I want to see the actual adventure! Plus, more animals companions! I'm in!
I've actually been following this author on Instagram for a little while because I was excited to see someone else writing low/no spice books. It's pretty lonesome out here in these fantasy streets for those of us who aren't writing smut right now haha! Especially as Indies. (Don't come for me, smut authors. I'm glad you're getting that bag! You do you! I am just too ace for that!) So when I saw that there was an audiobook for Daughter of the Sun I snatched it up! I will say of the audiobook that the narrator did make some vocal choices that were a little grating to me, and mispronounced a few words. Nothing to ruin the experience, but more to highlight how important it is for us Indies to thoroughly review the audio before we publish.
This is a charming little fantasy that is obviously the first in a trilogy, and right away we butt up against an issue for me. This book is from the school of first books that is all leadup. It's ALL the slow revving up and getting to the story which...will happen in book 2, stay tuned! Without an ounce of hyperbole, it takes one of the MCs literally the entire book to leave her home town. You know, the thing that happens by chapter 3 of most adventure type stories. For me this was a letdown. I was expecting a little more adventure. Yes things do happen in the home town, and I liked getting to know her family and culture, but my heart sank when it became obvious that the meat of this story wasn't coming in this book. Many readers will not be bothered by this. Many readers do no mind a first book that is all leadup. Alas I am not many readers.
While the main MC is spending her time getting ready to get ready to leave home, we have a second viewpoint character. While I get what the author was doing with her (I think. We don't get the actual connection between the girls until the epilogue which I didn't love) her story was weaker imo. Just on a craft basis. She was interesting, she had arguably more going on than was happening over with the other character, but the writing (for me) was noticeably not as skillful. There was a lot of telling. Rather than being allowed to see the character and her relationships (which we totally could have) we were just told. It made me really sad because I didn't think the other character felt like that. The 2nd character needed more space, and for the author to trust herself more and let is get to know the character and her situation vs just telling us. This might not bother other readers, but it did bug me, mostly because I knew it could be more!
The abuse plotline with the 2nd character was painfully weak as this book fell into the trap of having a cartoonishly evil abuser. Are there probably some dynamics like that in the world? Sure. But realistically most abusers, especially ones who have been successful as long as this character was, are skilled manipulators. They use tactics, love bombing, and gaslighting to get away with their abuse. This man was just... mean all the time. There was a hint that maybe there was something going on with the character's twin sister and their father, (not creepy, but like he favored her for some reason) but it was not explored in this book.
How about the world building and magic? The world building was pretty solid imo, but the magic is very soft. I only have the barest grasp on it, but maybe it will get harder as the books go on. There are 3 flavors of magic. One is the most fleshed out, that is animal control. This book did have some fun animal companions/interactions to tempt me! Book 2 promises even more! But then there's...earth magic? I think? And a type that is most commonly fire, but basically just kinda does...anything? I really couldn't tell you. Haha! I didn't mind too much, but if you're in the mood for a book with a hard magic system and clear rules, this one isn't it!
The romance is this book was...present. It borders on instalove for me. Maybe just insta-crush except at one point after knowing the LI for like a week the MC said she already felt something for him that was "more than friendship" and I was like "oh heck, slow your roll there, ma'am!" The LI was pretty bland for me too, even if he does have a doggo (okay it's a wolf, but I pretended it was a dog so he was less cliche LOL)
My final thought for now is that I have been enjoying watching the author promote this book, but she often comps it with Avatar the Last Airbender...which I found to be highly inaccurate. I get it. Finding comps to tempt people is hard. The struggle is real. But legit the only thing this story has in common with Avatar is that the MC has to master 3 magics to fulfill a prophecy...and we start out somewhere that is snowy. That's it. So that was disappointing. I kept waiting for more connections to appear and they never did. if you're going into this book looking for Avatar, you're going to leave confused and disappointed too. Maybe the 2nd book will have more in common?
Anyway, I know this sounds like mostly critique, but honestly this was a fine little fantasy book. Very much a book 1 that does not stand well in it's own. But I might just snag book 2 at some point because darn it I want to see the actual adventure! Plus, more animals companions! I'm in!
January 17, 2024
Story: 5/5
Worldview: 2.5/5
I liked the characters and their powers and their struggles. Pallah’s perspective really hit the heart of how some families can be outwardly pious but rotten within, while Solyana’s perspective showed a close-knit family. There was such a nice plot twist that I wasn’t expecting.
As for worldview, I like that there is a clear distinction regarding the satanic magic (the mother of the earth), but I don’t like how the other characters pray to the sun, moon, and sky (the Celestials) for help. My preference is that Christian fantasy should be more allegorical when it comes to including God, like Narnia or even a book I read recently, To Bind Fire. I also don’t one character kind of being given the role of Jesus when it’s an imperfect character (and a girl?)
I’m intrigued to know what happens at the end of the trilogy, but I may just look up a summary. If you like these books, that’s awesome, I was just expecting something else. Overall: 3.5
Note: there was also a curse word in the novel used as a sarcastic remark
Worldview: 2.5/5
I liked the characters and their powers and their struggles. Pallah’s perspective really hit the heart of how some families can be outwardly pious but rotten within, while Solyana’s perspective showed a close-knit family. There was such a nice plot twist that I wasn’t expecting.
As for worldview, I like that there is a clear distinction regarding the satanic magic (the mother of the earth), but I don’t like how the other characters pray to the sun, moon, and sky (the Celestials) for help. My preference is that Christian fantasy should be more allegorical when it comes to including God, like Narnia or even a book I read recently, To Bind Fire. I also don’t one character kind of being given the role of Jesus when it’s an imperfect character (and a girl?)
I’m intrigued to know what happens at the end of the trilogy, but I may just look up a summary. If you like these books, that’s awesome, I was just expecting something else. Overall: 3.5
Note: there was also a curse word in the novel used as a sarcastic remark
September 5, 2022
4.75 stars! This was a great debut! Beautifully written with wonderfully developed characters, a rich world, and a unique plot. It was clear that a lot of time and effort was put into this. Everything you hope for in a fantasy novel! The only reason it wasn't a full 5 stars for me was the beginning was just a little heavy on the world building and it slowed it down a bit. But otherwise a fantastic read. Definitely pick this one up.
I was given an arc in exchange for an honest review.
I was given an arc in exchange for an honest review.
January 16, 2023
If I hadn't known ahead of time that this was Auler's debut novel, I never would have guessed it.
Originally when I started reading, I thought the dual storylines would bother me, but that was not the case at all. Both perspectives are incredibly well written, equally compelling, with characters that are easy to connect with. I eagerly await Book 2 and the continuation of the Mothmar story!
Originally when I started reading, I thought the dual storylines would bother me, but that was not the case at all. Both perspectives are incredibly well written, equally compelling, with characters that are easy to connect with. I eagerly await Book 2 and the continuation of the Mothmar story!
February 28, 2023
Wonderful debut by Auler! I loved both POVs for this book and the mystery surrounding the prophecy and the girls involved. Both had heartbreaking and hopeful moments, and the ending blew my mind a little! The world building was intrinsic and the people flawed and real. I can’t wait for the second!
May 2, 2024
I need a moment to process that ending…
March 11, 2023
Writing a review for a debut novel is complicated. On the one hand, this is a first step into a world of literature where critics can easily discourage a brand-new author. On the other hand, that first step is courageous because it gives the author opportunity to improve and learn from their readers.
I saw this book recommended on social media. I read it and so did my two teens.
The story line was really interesting and has a lot of potential for a series that is still being written. It follows the story of two girls in a fantasy land; separate stories that alternate between chapters. A mysterious prophecy, conflicting relationships, forbidden knowledge, unique powers over creatures and nature, and some teenage romance along the way. The book had just enough information about what was going on to keep me wanting to know more. This was a mystery land with strange customs and boundaries, and I was interested to read what would happen with the sabertooth and various characters.
But I really struggled through this book. It included frequent examples of poor sentence structure and awkward grammar which often required rereading sections to figure out the connections (i. e., "She wiped her brow and unfurled it" -- her brow?). It lacked adequate paragraph transitions so that I was often reading between the lines to figure out what was going on, and even so, the story's direction seemed intentionally vague for most of the book.
The story is set in a wilderness survival setting, something that requires research and experience to communicate realistically to readers who may have actually trapped furbearers, been in a blizzard, climbed cliffs, and slept in the woods. I don't know the level of research into these things but the depth of these descriptions is lacking or inaccurate.
The characters have interesting profiles but most of the time I was reading the author's explanation of their struggles rather than being shown it. This made the characters seem flat as the story progressed and I never connected with any of them. The boyfriend characters were too ideal to be believable; the attractions went too quickly and predictably (of course, he's blonde; of course, he's tall, dark and handsome). Attire was confusing at times because of author's choice of words, the backdrop of the story was lacking details necessary for helping a reader understand a fantasy world, random drama was confusing when it didn't lead anywhere, and inclusion of noncritical information was distracting from the main story (and withholding critical information was equally confusing).
There are natural tendencies of certain personalities that add depth to the story when their flaws change as people naturally do, but which seemed to be lacking here. Because I struggled to connect to characters, I also had difficulty figuring out who were main and secondary characters throughout.
My daughters' opinions? They also stumbled over the confusing grammar and paragraph transitions at times and had a hard time following the story until about halfway through when they finally got into it. The romance was too predictable and some of the wilderness survival descriptions were unrealistic (they are hunters and outdoorsy themselves, which was part of their attraction to the story). On a positive note, by the end, they were interested and asked for the sequel when it comes out.
The storyline and characters have potential and a unique tale overall, but it didn't match the plethora of 5-star reviews I read beforehand.
I saw this book recommended on social media. I read it and so did my two teens.
The story line was really interesting and has a lot of potential for a series that is still being written. It follows the story of two girls in a fantasy land; separate stories that alternate between chapters. A mysterious prophecy, conflicting relationships, forbidden knowledge, unique powers over creatures and nature, and some teenage romance along the way. The book had just enough information about what was going on to keep me wanting to know more. This was a mystery land with strange customs and boundaries, and I was interested to read what would happen with the sabertooth and various characters.
But I really struggled through this book. It included frequent examples of poor sentence structure and awkward grammar which often required rereading sections to figure out the connections (i. e., "She wiped her brow and unfurled it" -- her brow?). It lacked adequate paragraph transitions so that I was often reading between the lines to figure out what was going on, and even so, the story's direction seemed intentionally vague for most of the book.
The story is set in a wilderness survival setting, something that requires research and experience to communicate realistically to readers who may have actually trapped furbearers, been in a blizzard, climbed cliffs, and slept in the woods. I don't know the level of research into these things but the depth of these descriptions is lacking or inaccurate.
The characters have interesting profiles but most of the time I was reading the author's explanation of their struggles rather than being shown it. This made the characters seem flat as the story progressed and I never connected with any of them. The boyfriend characters were too ideal to be believable; the attractions went too quickly and predictably (of course, he's blonde; of course, he's tall, dark and handsome). Attire was confusing at times because of author's choice of words, the backdrop of the story was lacking details necessary for helping a reader understand a fantasy world, random drama was confusing when it didn't lead anywhere, and inclusion of noncritical information was distracting from the main story (and withholding critical information was equally confusing).
There are natural tendencies of certain personalities that add depth to the story when their flaws change as people naturally do, but which seemed to be lacking here. Because I struggled to connect to characters, I also had difficulty figuring out who were main and secondary characters throughout.
My daughters' opinions? They also stumbled over the confusing grammar and paragraph transitions at times and had a hard time following the story until about halfway through when they finally got into it. The romance was too predictable and some of the wilderness survival descriptions were unrealistic (they are hunters and outdoorsy themselves, which was part of their attraction to the story). On a positive note, by the end, they were interested and asked for the sequel when it comes out.
The storyline and characters have potential and a unique tale overall, but it didn't match the plethora of 5-star reviews I read beforehand.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
October 31, 2022
An indie author’s debut is always a frightening and anticipatory experience. Will their words be heard? Will they find the right readers? Is their story one that will last in the vast and clanging world in which we find ourselves?
The answer for Auler’s book is yes. She will be heard. This book has found its readers, and I know it will last on my own shelf.
I don’t even know where to begin. These characters…they catch you. The time jumps are seamless, and the way they tell the flowing history of this complex fantasy world feels like a dream.
Let me share two quotes from Daughter of the Sun that reminded me of two absolute foundational fantasy writers to emphasize the talent that went into this story:
TOLKEIN:
She, in contrast, felt much like a crumb, the leftovers of something once much more inviting and sustaining.
~
LLOYD ALEXANDER:
“Wolf, actually,” Gamaliel corrected, “though many have tried to tell him otherwise.”
~
Speaking of Gamaliel (because we were), I love him. He and Jonas are the goofball bros we need to survive a high stakes quest, and the way Jonas kept interrupting scenes that could have turned spicy had me grinning like a madman because honestly? Bring on the slow burn. I’m happy to watch them adventure before these goofs run off and ruin it with heartache.
The adventure. Oh, the adventure. The way each epoch of Mothmar leads into the next... We hardly left our villages throughout the novel, but the adventure waiting for both the reader, discovering the world, and the characters, seeing their lives fall apart, is magical.
Magic. Speaking of: go take the gifts quiz on the author’s website to see what gift you have! I loved seeing the deities discussed and morality challenged by both villains and heroes. Auler and I have discussed our religious views previously and line up very similarly there, so it was exciting to see her characters challenging the faith they’d been presented and testing to see if it was true because I know from experience that in the real world, few people take the time to logically assess what they believe. Seeing the fallout of both blind faith and absolute rejection in this novel was breathtaking. I so enjoyed seeing such an important spiritual truth represented in our wintry world of gods and tethers.
The animals. Y’all. The ANIMALS. I can’t say anything else because I’ll ruin everything but I, as an animal person, loved that aspect of the story.
Do I need to even mention the family drama? Or should I say trauma? You know that if I’m reviewing a book, chances are it has some shaky familial relationships because that’s my catnip, and you can’t get shakier than Pallah’s family.
This review is a bit of a hot mess but obviously you should read this book if you like good books, snow, “””””platonic””””” snuggles, and chasing after truth instead of assuming it’s fallen into your lap.
The answer for Auler’s book is yes. She will be heard. This book has found its readers, and I know it will last on my own shelf.
I don’t even know where to begin. These characters…they catch you. The time jumps are seamless, and the way they tell the flowing history of this complex fantasy world feels like a dream.
Let me share two quotes from Daughter of the Sun that reminded me of two absolute foundational fantasy writers to emphasize the talent that went into this story:
TOLKEIN:
She, in contrast, felt much like a crumb, the leftovers of something once much more inviting and sustaining.
~
LLOYD ALEXANDER:
“Wolf, actually,” Gamaliel corrected, “though many have tried to tell him otherwise.”
~
Speaking of Gamaliel (because we were), I love him. He and Jonas are the goofball bros we need to survive a high stakes quest, and the way Jonas kept interrupting scenes that could have turned spicy had me grinning like a madman because honestly? Bring on the slow burn. I’m happy to watch them adventure before these goofs run off and ruin it with heartache.
The adventure. Oh, the adventure. The way each epoch of Mothmar leads into the next... We hardly left our villages throughout the novel, but the adventure waiting for both the reader, discovering the world, and the characters, seeing their lives fall apart, is magical.
Magic. Speaking of: go take the gifts quiz on the author’s website to see what gift you have! I loved seeing the deities discussed and morality challenged by both villains and heroes. Auler and I have discussed our religious views previously and line up very similarly there, so it was exciting to see her characters challenging the faith they’d been presented and testing to see if it was true because I know from experience that in the real world, few people take the time to logically assess what they believe. Seeing the fallout of both blind faith and absolute rejection in this novel was breathtaking. I so enjoyed seeing such an important spiritual truth represented in our wintry world of gods and tethers.
The animals. Y’all. The ANIMALS. I can’t say anything else because I’ll ruin everything but I, as an animal person, loved that aspect of the story.
Do I need to even mention the family drama? Or should I say trauma? You know that if I’m reviewing a book, chances are it has some shaky familial relationships because that’s my catnip, and you can’t get shakier than Pallah’s family.
This review is a bit of a hot mess but obviously you should read this book if you like good books, snow, “””””platonic””””” snuggles, and chasing after truth instead of assuming it’s fallen into your lap.
July 16, 2023
This was such a captivating read- I loved every second of it! Can’t wait for the second one to be out!
December 1, 2025
PLEASANTLY SURPRISED
I have read a lot of subpar indie-pubs, this was not one of them.
Daughter of the Sun begins a saga with many players. Auler did an excellent job developing unique characters in a fairly large cast. The novel alternates between two time periods in the same valley, leaving the reader grasping at every thread to figure out how they’re connected. The plot was complex, but not hard to follow. Excellently done.
WORLDBUILDING of Mothmar was good, but a little hard to grasp as far as terminology goes. There was a handy-dandy glossary provided, but I had to refer to it a little more than I liked. Maybe between the unique names, lay of the land plus all of the cultural terminology…I know it comes with the territory in fantasy but it slowed me down more than usual. Even so, it was beautiful. As a someone who has lived in the North my whole life (plus lived in similarly broken/tense family situations), I connected with so much of Daughter of the Sun!
THE ENDING…As i watched the % left in the book on the app, I could feel my blood pressure rising. I just knew there wouldn’t be enough book left to tie up enough loose ends for me. As far as endings in a series, small to medium sized cliffs are great. Of all the many strands within the plot, I think only two were tied up. And only a little. It wasn’t satisfying enough for me. Maybe other people love that? I have read cliffhangers so infuriating I refused to read the next book. In this case however, I will be waiting with bated breath for the second Mothmar novel to come out.
I have read a lot of subpar indie-pubs, this was not one of them.
Daughter of the Sun begins a saga with many players. Auler did an excellent job developing unique characters in a fairly large cast. The novel alternates between two time periods in the same valley, leaving the reader grasping at every thread to figure out how they’re connected. The plot was complex, but not hard to follow. Excellently done.
WORLDBUILDING of Mothmar was good, but a little hard to grasp as far as terminology goes. There was a handy-dandy glossary provided, but I had to refer to it a little more than I liked. Maybe between the unique names, lay of the land plus all of the cultural terminology…I know it comes with the territory in fantasy but it slowed me down more than usual. Even so, it was beautiful. As a someone who has lived in the North my whole life (plus lived in similarly broken/tense family situations), I connected with so much of Daughter of the Sun!
THE ENDING…As i watched the % left in the book on the app, I could feel my blood pressure rising. I just knew there wouldn’t be enough book left to tie up enough loose ends for me. As far as endings in a series, small to medium sized cliffs are great. Of all the many strands within the plot, I think only two were tied up. And only a little. It wasn’t satisfying enough for me. Maybe other people love that? I have read cliffhangers so infuriating I refused to read the next book. In this case however, I will be waiting with bated breath for the second Mothmar novel to come out.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
October 13, 2024
This book had me thinking, “How is any of this connect—oh … OHHH?!?!”
Mothmar is frozen; a country cursed by the Celestials. Solyana longs for her world to once again be full of green life, not white death. But what can she do, being Giftless?
Meanwhile, Pallah is a recluse from a broken home. When she finally finds friendship, secrets and forbidden knowledge and power come with. What will become of her and her Gift if she chooses this new and dangerous path?
Narrative Voice: 3rd person (dual)
Cussing/profanity: 1/5*
Drug/alcohol use: 1/5
Kissing: 1/5
Sex/nudity: 0/5
Violence/gore: 3/5
Not only did Amanda Auler captivate me with the dual povs, but with the dual timelines! I’ve never read a book structured this way before, and it had me hooked and searching everything for clues about how they could possibly be connected.
Each character has so much depth and color, and I fell in love with them and their stories … well, except for Bogdur. Häfa him.
This is a book where the more I read, the more immersed I became. There were times it felt like I wasn’t even reading; the imagery just flew off the pages! I did get a little confused with the magic system in the very beginning, but maybe I was reading too fast from excitement.
With prophecies, elemental abilities, chosen one, animal companions, mystery, sibling bonds, and an amazing plot twist, this is a must read for fantasy fans!
5/5 would recommend
*curse words are said in a fantasy language
Mothmar is frozen; a country cursed by the Celestials. Solyana longs for her world to once again be full of green life, not white death. But what can she do, being Giftless?
Meanwhile, Pallah is a recluse from a broken home. When she finally finds friendship, secrets and forbidden knowledge and power come with. What will become of her and her Gift if she chooses this new and dangerous path?
Narrative Voice: 3rd person (dual)
Cussing/profanity: 1/5*
Drug/alcohol use: 1/5
Kissing: 1/5
Sex/nudity: 0/5
Violence/gore: 3/5
Not only did Amanda Auler captivate me with the dual povs, but with the dual timelines! I’ve never read a book structured this way before, and it had me hooked and searching everything for clues about how they could possibly be connected.
Each character has so much depth and color, and I fell in love with them and their stories … well, except for Bogdur. Häfa him.
This is a book where the more I read, the more immersed I became. There were times it felt like I wasn’t even reading; the imagery just flew off the pages! I did get a little confused with the magic system in the very beginning, but maybe I was reading too fast from excitement.
With prophecies, elemental abilities, chosen one, animal companions, mystery, sibling bonds, and an amazing plot twist, this is a must read for fantasy fans!
5/5 would recommend
*curse words are said in a fantasy language
November 17, 2022
Like reading from c.s lewis this is a masterpiece
Amanda reminds me of an ancient story teller her story Daughter of the Sun weaves you into it's words building the mothmarian world around you like you are sitting around a campfire on a crisp evening so entranced by her story being told to you that reality around you falls away until you are in the story itself. Felt like reading something by C.S Lewis.
Switching between Pallah and Solyana, you become attached to both girls and their journeys. Both overlooked and from vastly different families, both looking for acceptance and purpose. Both faced with decisions that will change their worlds.
This is a story of darkness and light, finding purpose, figuring out the past and the present. This story has mystery that keeps you guessing and leaves you wanting more and more and more never wanting it to end and never knowing what's around the corner is the best part. I loved trying to fit puzzle pieces together through the story I know I have to read it again and again. I loved the time layering and adventure.
I would recommend this book to everyone. We read it as a family read aloud everyone's was entranced and can't wait for book 2.
Amanda reminds me of an ancient story teller her story Daughter of the Sun weaves you into it's words building the mothmarian world around you like you are sitting around a campfire on a crisp evening so entranced by her story being told to you that reality around you falls away until you are in the story itself. Felt like reading something by C.S Lewis.
Switching between Pallah and Solyana, you become attached to both girls and their journeys. Both overlooked and from vastly different families, both looking for acceptance and purpose. Both faced with decisions that will change their worlds.
This is a story of darkness and light, finding purpose, figuring out the past and the present. This story has mystery that keeps you guessing and leaves you wanting more and more and more never wanting it to end and never knowing what's around the corner is the best part. I loved trying to fit puzzle pieces together through the story I know I have to read it again and again. I loved the time layering and adventure.
I would recommend this book to everyone. We read it as a family read aloud everyone's was entranced and can't wait for book 2.
August 11, 2023
8/10/23
I love this book even more with this reread! 🤍
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10/15/22
I loved this book. The characters were so well written. I felt for what they were going through. The beautiful
descriptive language used through out brought my
imagination to life.
There was a bit of everything a little mystery, adventure, powers, gods, a hint of love, and finding home.
You will want to wrap yourself in a warm blanket, because this story is immersive and it's cold in Mothmar.
Read this if you like Clean YA Fantasy or regular fantasy or if you want to go on an adventure.
Thank you to the author for the eARC. All opinions expressed are my own.
I love this book even more with this reread! 🤍
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10/15/22
I loved this book. The characters were so well written. I felt for what they were going through. The beautiful
descriptive language used through out brought my
imagination to life.
There was a bit of everything a little mystery, adventure, powers, gods, a hint of love, and finding home.
You will want to wrap yourself in a warm blanket, because this story is immersive and it's cold in Mothmar.
Read this if you like Clean YA Fantasy or regular fantasy or if you want to go on an adventure.
Thank you to the author for the eARC. All opinions expressed are my own.
November 16, 2022
This was the best YA fantasy book Ive read this year. It has everything that I love! The family and friend relationships are done so well. The magic and world building has nice details with many mysteries. Pallah and Solyanas stories were equally exciting. I only stopped reading when my eyes were tired but each chapter had a cliff hanger that made me itch for more.
When is book 2 coming out because I want to read it now ):
When is book 2 coming out because I want to read it now ):
November 26, 2022
Wow! This was an epic story about 2 young girls in a fantasy world. One is in all winter, one lives in sunshine. There are skills (powers) that some people have. Kind of like xmen. I thought the world building was good and the story was well written. I was very surprised it was her first book because it was very clean and polished. The ending left me a little off because I felt none of the questions were answered and she just left us with more! I MUST know what happens with these characters.
February 9, 2023
I found Amanda on Instagram and when I figured out she was an indie author and had just published her first novel (YA fantasy) I wanted to read it. I had no expectations but was pleasantly surprised.
I really enjoyed the magic system and world building. Plus I’m discovering I’m a sucker for books with prophecies in them. My favorite part was probably the structure of the book and how the story unfolds. I’ll be anxiously waiting for the sequel.
(First buddy read with Dallas)
I really enjoyed the magic system and world building. Plus I’m discovering I’m a sucker for books with prophecies in them. My favorite part was probably the structure of the book and how the story unfolds. I’ll be anxiously waiting for the sequel.
(First buddy read with Dallas)
October 16, 2022
Holy moly. THIS BOOK.
First, how in the world is this a debut novel? Amanda’s prose is exquisite and pulled me in from the get go. I could not get enough.
Daughter of The Sun is uniquely beautiful and I can not wait to find out what happens next! Please write the sequel soon🤞🏻
If you love unique, clean fantasy stories and found family as much as I do, YOU WILL love this story.
First, how in the world is this a debut novel? Amanda’s prose is exquisite and pulled me in from the get go. I could not get enough.
Daughter of The Sun is uniquely beautiful and I can not wait to find out what happens next! Please write the sequel soon🤞🏻
If you love unique, clean fantasy stories and found family as much as I do, YOU WILL love this story.
February 27, 2023
Omg…I don’t even know how to explain how good this book is! I read it in a week, which is pretty fast for me. It’s an easy read but the story was just so good! Kept wanting to pick it up to know what would happen next! I can’t wait for book two to come out! Way to go Amanda Auler!
June 4, 2025
A rich, compelling tale that is sure to keep you guessing! It was a little darker than I expected, but in a way that truly added to the depth of the story. I really enjoyed this read and am looking forward to starting book two!😍
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