**Non-Spoiler Review**
First, the Pros:
It would seem, to me, that as the story progresses, I really enjoy the story and the characters even more. Nicole Fanning definitely knows how to tell a story, and her ability to give her characters a nice arc is not only impressive, but it's also admirable. And she definitely knows how to tell a story.
For me, I will be completely honest here, in the beginning, I really did not like Natalie, or even Jaxon. Natalie was boring, whiny, and just a plain Jane character that didn't really leave a mark on me. And Jaxon was immature, pompous, and did very questionable things as the supposed mafia king. However, now, I am really seeing a different, more enjoyable side of these characters. I really feel Natalie has grown so much by this book and really stepped into a roll that was made for her. She is no longer meek, whiny, and vulnerable in an eye-rolling manner. Her emotions seem more believable and rawer, and yet she still reacts in tense situations in a more mature, composed manner. I will say that she still does very careless and reckless things, which annoys me, but she is still learning the lay of the land in this book. And with Jaxon, I feel his role as Don Supreme is more justifiable in this book. His actions seem more calculating and etched out in an 'all sides of the big picture' kind of way.
Nicole's ability to tell a story is remarkable. I do feel her style and talent to bring so much life into her story is beautiful and easy to follow.
And finally, the audiobook for this one, was again, amazing! Maxine Mitchell and Grayson Owens put some much love and care into their performance and these characters.
Now, to the cons:
Despite enjoying this story, there are still aspects that I did not quite like. One being the pacing in this one. I felt a lot of this book was filler. There were a lot of repetitive scenarios, like the constant bombing or Natalie leaving the house and bad $hit happening. It made me roll my eyes and become very bored with certain parts of the story. I ended up skimming part of these redundant moments. Personally, I think this could've been about 50-75 pages shorter and a lot of these scenes could've happened behind the scenes and discussed through dialogue.
Also, I mentioned this in a previous review, but again, Natalie's inner monologue was very annoying. The excessive use of "Oh my..." and "Oh shit..." and "Oh my God..." and "Oh fuck..." and so on was cringey and irritating—along with some other inner thoughts that didn't really need to be delivered as such, since we are technically already in her mind through a first person POV. It seemed pointless and odd to me at times.
And I'm sorry to say this, but I was honestly starting to get bored with the sex scenes. I know this is an aspect many people enjoy and crave, but it was starting to feel like another filler or like the author felt like she had to include more into the story. Don't get me wrong, the sex in the first half was great, but by the time I got to the end, I skipped it all. It really felt out of place to me. It didn't really add to the story or drive the plot. But again, this is only MY opinion, so take it with a grain of salt.
Lastly—and this didn't affect the overall rating, it was just something that pulled me from the story repeated and started to bother me throughout my reading experience—this book really needed a professional editor or multiple alpha/betas to catch all this. In addition to it needing to be cleaned up or shortened to remove some of the repetitive filler, it really needed someone to point out the errors. There are quite a few grammatical, punctuation, and structural errors in this series. And despite the story itself being top notch, the errors make it a clear-cut sign that it is self-published. If it was cleaned up, many readers would never know it was non-traditionally published.