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Alpha's Perfect Mate: The Alpha's Surrogate
Xavier always assumed that he and his Luna Petra were true love. On one night, his world comes crumbling down and discovers that his Luna Petra is cheating on him with his beta Orion. Xavier vows never to trust any woman again until one bloody night he meets Alpha's the youngest daughter of the Ardara Moon Pack, Kiara.
991 pages, Kindle Edition
Published July 30, 2022
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November 1, 2022
Great read
I enjoyed the book greatly. I just don't understand why some of the words were blocked out. Ex: he cocked(c****d) is lips??? However, I can't wait for the next book. What will happen to the sisters next.
I enjoyed the book greatly. I just don't understand why some of the words were blocked out. Ex: he cocked(c****d) is lips??? However, I can't wait for the next book. What will happen to the sisters next.
February 10, 2023
So this was a 2 star for me. I loved the way the book was going (DNF). The plot seemed pretty good honestly. I loved Xavier’s character and though the slow burn was pretty good. However it was cringy. The language was awful. It sounded like it was trying to come off professional. I can’t really describe it but it sounded like almost robotic conversations. I’m not sure how to explain it but it was pretty hard to read the conversations. It made me sad because the story was interesting. Also didn’t understand why the author felt the need to censor words like sexual or nipples. I honestly think they should just leave the words out if they plan on censoring them.
January 20, 2023
needs editing, and grownup language
Ok storyline, needs a lot of editing. One thing I don’t get what was the author’s intensive use of quotation verbiage for certain words that were not offensive, but just supposed to be a body part, but instead she used “n****e” for nipple. Very prudish and amateurish. If you’re going to write a sexy romance, you need to put in the correct words and use the terminology for it. If you want to write a clean romance, don’t talk about sexual stuff. Author needs reality check.
Ok storyline, needs a lot of editing. One thing I don’t get what was the author’s intensive use of quotation verbiage for certain words that were not offensive, but just supposed to be a body part, but instead she used “n****e” for nipple. Very prudish and amateurish. If you’re going to write a sexy romance, you need to put in the correct words and use the terminology for it. If you want to write a clean romance, don’t talk about sexual stuff. Author needs reality check.
December 17, 2022
Hot Nonsense...
The plot holes never end, the story just goes on and on like there was no plan for this book AT ALL. The characters all read like the same person, the grammar and spelling errors... this book was a colossal waste of time. If I could give zero stars I would. If I could give NEGATIVE stars I would.
The plot holes never end, the story just goes on and on like there was no plan for this book AT ALL. The characters all read like the same person, the grammar and spelling errors... this book was a colossal waste of time. If I could give zero stars I would. If I could give NEGATIVE stars I would.
November 9, 2022
No thank you
This is the story that never ends, yes it goes on my friends it goes on and on.
With that being said the grammatical errors in this and the flow of the story was a complete mess for me.
This is the story that never ends, yes it goes on my friends it goes on and on.
With that being said the grammatical errors in this and the flow of the story was a complete mess for me.
November 12, 2022
Good but very long
The book was good,but I admit that I skipped some chapters. There is an another book in this series, but I don't know if I can devote any more time to the book. Very interesting storyline.
The book was good,but I admit that I skipped some chapters. There is an another book in this series, but I don't know if I can devote any more time to the book. Very interesting storyline.
November 14, 2022
it’s an ok story line
The sex scene were terrible ahh and ohh they made it sound like it was in the 1930’s. I would have like a better confrontation between Petra and kiara .All in All the book was ok, slow read .
The sex scene were terrible ahh and ohh they made it sound like it was in the 1930’s. I would have like a better confrontation between Petra and kiara .All in All the book was ok, slow read .
April 7, 2023
loved it
Loved this story it had just about anything you could ask for spice, broody alphaholes feisty females hot spicy scenes power struggles but damn that cliff hanger!! I couldn’t put this book down!!!
Loved this story it had just about anything you could ask for spice, broody alphaholes feisty females hot spicy scenes power struggles but damn that cliff hanger!! I couldn’t put this book down!!!
May 20, 2023
Amazing
This one had me from the very start and talk about an interesting twist at the end! I’ve read a lot, and I mean a lot of books in this genre and this one tops them all! Could not put it down!
This one had me from the very start and talk about an interesting twist at the end! I’ve read a lot, and I mean a lot of books in this genre and this one tops them all! Could not put it down!
June 23, 2023
great plot
I enjoyed the story plot but was a. It frustrated with the error and censorship. I also felt the author should split the book into a series between the 2 alphas. It was a bit confusing jumping back and forth between the couple
I enjoyed the story plot but was a. It frustrated with the error and censorship. I also felt the author should split the book into a series between the 2 alphas. It was a bit confusing jumping back and forth between the couple
December 6, 2022
needs better editing
Story was good but spell check and name spelling consistency would have helped. To many nuances that get lost with the story.
Story was good but spell check and name spelling consistency would have helped. To many nuances that get lost with the story.
January 7, 2023
Nice story
I really Got into the characters after the 1st Few chapters. Their storyline was full of drama and made it hard to put the book down. The ending had me wanting more.
I really Got into the characters after the 1st Few chapters. Their storyline was full of drama and made it hard to put the book down. The ending had me wanting more.
January 27, 2023
Intriguing Book
From the beginning the story captured me. I did not want to put the book away....wanted to keep reading. very interesting.
From the beginning the story captured me. I did not want to put the book away....wanted to keep reading. very interesting.
February 18, 2023
really enjoyed it
Great storyline, characters interesting and kept you on your toes with twists and turns. Great dynamics with couples and friends
Great storyline, characters interesting and kept you on your toes with twists and turns. Great dynamics with couples and friends
April 27, 2023
Enjoyed reading every minute
A must read when it comes to werewolf books. I couldn’t put it down. Slept at 4am just to finish this 👍🏻
A must read when it comes to werewolf books. I couldn’t put it down. Slept at 4am just to finish this 👍🏻
May 17, 2023
Wow
Brilliant story line and the characters had so much to them. I hope with everything this author produced there is a sequel. Kalyna you were brilliant with this piece of work .
Brilliant story line and the characters had so much to them. I hope with everything this author produced there is a sequel. Kalyna you were brilliant with this piece of work .
June 4, 2023
Very poorly written . Lots of typos. Pacing of the story is very convoluted.
June 12, 2023
pretty good book!
Only thing I didn’t like was some of the pages are the same pages. Also, there are a lot of grammar errors. Otherwise, great book!
Only thing I didn’t like was some of the pages are the same pages. Also, there are a lot of grammar errors. Otherwise, great book!
June 13, 2023
Where is book 2? I love the story but hate cliffhangers!! Lol I sure hope this is not the end of it
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