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344 pages, Kindle Edition
Published February 23, 2023
"At the crack of another firework, I looked up. It looked like spinning white raindrops, or tiny fish, were falling toward Hilton Head."I was deeply disappointed, however, with 3 descriptions in particular. Prefacing a description with "old phrase" is not sufficient for inclusion of
"When they burst, fiery blue nets spread across the sky, seeming to capture the falling white fish."
"the higher the hair, the closer to God."For an author who can magically describe fireworks, he can describe women without a cliche of the past and stereotyping.
"With her black-rimmed glasses and her gray hair up in its usual bun, she looked like a cheerful older librarian."Books 1 & 2 each received 4 stars, and due to the complexity of the threads of Book 3, I thought I would be giving 5 stars. However, I refuse to give 5 stars to a novel with descriptions of female characters in contemporary fiction that stereotype women.
"She was short, built like a feminine fire hydrant, with a gray braid down her back."