I really enjoyed the first book in this series, which is why I decided to keep going. The second one wasn’t as strong, but I still wanted to continue.
The biggest issue in this book is Willow Janna. Even her name feels off — Willow is fine, but together it just doesn’t sound right. Unfortunately, her character is even harder to deal with. She comes across as frustrating, overly stubborn, and exhausting for most of the story. It made it difficult to stay invested.
Travis, on the other hand, is a great character. He falls for her quickly and consistently shows up for both her and her daughter, even though he doesn’t have to. There’s really nothing bad to say about him. What makes it worse is how Willow treats him in return. She spends nearly the entire book fighting the relationship, making excuses, and pushing him away, and it goes on far longer than it should.
*Small spoiler ahead:
*One moment that really stood out was when Travis rescues her daughter from a burning building, and Willow still manages to turn it into a problem. Instead of recognizing that he was trying to protect them, she reacts selfishly and unfairly. That kind of reaction happens more than once, and it gets frustrating quickly.
Another issue is how misleading parts of the summary are. It mentions PTA meetings, but those never actually happen. There’s very little focus on her involvement in her daughter’s life at all. Most of the time, she seems more focused on work, and there isn’t much shown in terms of her actually being present as a parent.
By this point, the series is starting to feel repetitive. The same formula keeps showing up — the guy falls first, the woman resists the relationship the entire time, chaos happens, and the guy steps in to fix everything. Even the romance scenes feel reused, which makes it all start to blur together.
This could have been a much better book if Willow had been written differently, but as it is, her character makes the story frustrating to get through. Willow is probably one of my least favorite characters out of ANY book I've ever read.