I enjoyed the detail and growth of many characters although some of it was very slow and unbelievable. A lot of padding could be cut out to make the story more cohesive and sharper. And, as others have stated, this desperately needs to be edited. The grammar, misspelling, name changes and character changes made this very difficult to read. One of the potential major players, who was mentioned and feared all the way through, didn't appear until virtually the end. One of the final chapters was obviously just quick notes to be padded out and this wasn't done. The worst bit was the end, because it wasn't. I worked my way through over 23,000 pages just to find that the saga had NOT been finished. I was disappointed and annoyed. I won't be reading any other works by this author, I've wasted enough time on him.