- Well organized and carefully designed, but probably too much. - The creativity of the fictional prologue and ending is very interesting, and the meta-drama seems to be a common technique in Taiwanese novels these years (but I think Yang's 台灣漫遊錄 is a step above)
- I like the codes of Taiwanese literature hidden in the novels, such as Lu He-Ruo, Deer Cave, the Taiyuan incident, and Hemingway, all of which are obvious references and interesting interrelationships with the text.
- I like the last two short stories the most. The author's approach to the subject of imitation newspaper literature/ report-type non-fiction is fantastic.