3.2/5 stars. warning: harsh.
I read Maggie moves on, and I have a lot to say about this book. I liked a fair amount of this, but there was just too much that I strongly disliked, to classify this as a book I enjoyed.
starting off with this plot; it had potential. Maggie and Silas had potential as a couple. Except it wasn’t written well enough for me. They got together very early on in the book, which usually isn’t that big of an issue, except for the fact that the only other plot point in this book is that they’re fixing a house. And this book is 400 pages long, so there’s only so much of this that I can take interest in.
these characters are written as if they’re in their mid-20s. But they’re actually almost 40, which throws me off a bit because again, it feels like they’re in their mid-20s. And this isn’t necessarily a problem, I just didn’t like it. Because the fact that they’re almost 40 implies that they’ve been doing things for a long time. (ex. Silas living in his hometown since he was born, and Maggie having to work and live the way she always has) and because of how long they’ve been doing these things, it makes it incredibly hard to break the cycle. I don’t know how many times I’m going to say this wouldn’t normally be a problem, except for the fact that there were so many other points in this book that caused this another issue.
now I’m gonna talk about these characters, because I really liked them at first. I liked how Silas had the whole “love at first sight” thing, and Maggie was persistent on doing her job. But as I got to know these characters, especially when they were together, I disliked them more and more.
Silas is quite selfish, and controlling. The kind of controlling where you don’t realize you’re being controlled, until it’s already over. For example, there were several instances where he got genuinely mad at Maggie, for no reason. He wouldn’t speak to her until she apologized to him, when again, she did nothing wrong. And then she would apologize to him anyway. The amount of times I set my book down wanting to scream that she did nothing wrong, that she doesn’t have to apologize to this man—
Maggie relies heavily on her work. She loves her job, she’s built it from the ground, and it’s just what she enjoys. sometimes she would get stressed out about things surrounding the house she was working on, and when Silas noticed, he would make her do some thing that he thought was a good idea. And if she didn’t want to do it he would say things like “you’re doing it, even if I have to strap it to the chair”. i know it was meant to be playful, but the fact that maggie always did whatever he told her too— it just made it worse.
when she was clearly stressed out, he was telling her things she NEEDED to do. and of course, she did them every time.
like I mentioned earlier, Silas has grown up in this town. He has literally never left. But Maggie‘s job revolves heavily on traveling. throughout the entire book, Silas is pressuring Maggie to stay in this town with him. Even though she needs to travel for her job. He doesn’t once try to think of any sort of resolution or compromise to the fact that Maggie wants to continue working, and he wants to be with her. He never once thought he could go with her. Only that she had to stop working, to stay imprisoned in this town with him— when she said multiple times that she very clearly did not want to do that. Then when she would get a job opportunity, an incredible job opportunity that would of course involve her travelling— he got furious with her, and didn’t try to think of what it’s like for her. Only that she wasn’t staying in the town with him.
Maggie is the kind of person that thinks logically, with facts, and research. whereas silas is the type of person who thinks with emotions; and emotions solely. and so whenever Maggie attempted to make any sort of calculated decision, all he would think about was that she was leaving him. the amount of times he referred to maggie as “mine” when she said a hundred times that she only wanted to have fun, and that she was leaving after the house is fixed— is insane.
silas, you need to hear this: SHES NOT YOUR PROPERTY. she shouldn’t have to give up her entire livelihood just so you two can sit in a dump town and rot.
again, he only thinks with his emotions. And automatically assumes that she isn’t taking his emotions into consideration— probably because HE isn’t actually taking her thought process into consideration. multiple times he would call Maggie‘s decisions: “their decisions”, meaning he had some sort of say in the matter, when he doesn’t. Because Maggie said multiple times she didn’t want to be in a serious relationship, because she was going to be leaving soon. but he still got mad when she made decisions for herself.
it took 366 pages for this 37-year-old man to realize that he’s not the only person on the planet. 366 pages to form any sort of logical, coherent thought about their situation, and it wasn’t even him. It was his mother. HIS. MOTHER.
now to say something about Maggie; she is such a bland character. I didn’t relate to her, I didn’t like her, I didn’t dislike her. It was as if she didn’t even exist, because she added nothing to anything. Which doesn’t really make sense, given the fact that she’s the main character in this novel— but she’s done nothing memorable for the story.
There were so many things added to this story to try and give it more plot, to try and keep you intrigued, I guess, but it really wasn’t working. It was still just a romance book, where the characters got together super quickly, and they fixed up a house for the next 350 pages.
another random thing that I just don’t like is the fact that Silas is still in contact with his ex. They dated on and off for five years, and the reason they kept getting back together was because one of them would text each other and they would bring up old stuff and hang out and get back together. And now he’s with someone else, and is still texting his ex, the same way he used to when they would get back together? They had a healthy break up, so really it’s not a huge issue, but it still irks me.
and finally when you reach the end of the book, after all the fighting Maggie‘s put up in saying she was going to leave, and all the protesting Silas is done saying she needs to stay— she does. she gives up her dream job that she’s been doing for years, and stays in this tiny rodeo clown town forever.
maybe I’m reaching, or maybe this is just another woman giving up her job, her life; to make a man happy.
and then, that same day, they got engaged. They’ve known each other for barely 3 months, and now she’s given up her entire life for him and they’re getting married.
Long story short Silas and Maggie got together after three pages, then there’s 370 pages of them fixing up a house, Silas being controlling, Maggie being persistent on keeping the job she loves, and then it all working out fine by the end. Of course meaning Maggie quit her job, marries a guy she met three months ago, has a few kids, and stays in town for the rest of her life, while Silas gets everything he ever wanted, with no struggle whatsoever.