I've read two Erica Spindler novels, Watch Me Die and Copycat. Both were decent thrillers that sucked you in. Breakneck, the sequel to Copycat, is simply awful. Let me list the ways:
1. Not sure who the protagonist. In the first one, its Kitt Lundgren. In the second on, MC gets a lot of page time to herself and it seems the story is from her perspective, but Kitt is there a lot. The shifting perspectives gets really old.
2. Forced conflict: The first book has plenty of conflict with Kitt and MC, Kitt and her ex, the Sleeping Angel Killer, MC and her boss, etc.
Breakneck has no real conflict of its own, so instead it tries to create it with failed results. First Kitt threatens Sal to let MC on the case, but soon after they are fine. Then Joe and Kitt fight, but then they are okay 5 pages later. MC and Kitt fight, but are okay yet again. Every time the author tries to add dramatic conflict, it solves itself a few pages later and it might as well not have been there at all.
3. Zoe, the most irritating one dimensional character of all time
4. Saw the twist coming a mile away, and it ended exactly like Copycat and Watch Me Die. Protagonist gets captured by killer, miraculously escapes by chance
Not one of her stronger entries, Breakneck is full of cliches and has nothing on Copycat. I will have to wary with future Erica Spindler novels.