I have had this book on my radar since early last year, but you know, we all have to get through that never ending climbing TBR pile.
I’ll start with what I did Like about the read. The bonds of friendship between Bethany and her friends. I always love and appreciate friendship in stories. I also enjoyed that we got them in school interacting in classes and teachers. A lot of YA books don’t give us school life despite the MCs being in school. So that was quite refreshing. I also like the representation of family bonds. Parents were involved in their kids lives and didn’t hate or neglect them. That was - refreshing read. No sob stories about absent or abusive parents.
Now for all the other stuff. The characters all felt like caricatures. It’s as though author felt that there was a diversity quota she had a checklist to meet for every single character we were introduced to in the story. Whatever you can think of, is apart of the friendship group and it felt so forced. Another thing was the number of side characters. It got so confusing to read and keep track of who was who. In the end, I just recalled Saylor and Tatum and the rest all blurred together for me.
The chemistry between the leads felt lacklustre. I get that they liked each other and that they are 16, but it felt so dull and I couldn’t help but just not really care if they reconciled or just remained friends. Theirs is a flame burning low. Speaking of 16, the casual talks of sex and losing virginity in this book was very questionable. 1. This book is geared towards teenagers. One of the best friends (who’s not Saylor or Tatum) lost her virginity I assume at age 14 or 15 because book said it was the year prior. And the MCs are both 16, so do with that what you will. I was a bit turned off by that. The cavalier talk of sex. Even the parents were, dare I say, almost encouraging the kids to have sex under the guise of “as long as you use a condom.” What parent is going to do that? Now I know this book takes place in LA and while I have been told by many that it’s a different ball ground in terms of how these issues are handled, I find it very hard to believe there are parents who are out here comfortable with the idea of their UNDERAGE children having sex so long as they use a condom. There was even this one character who was only mentioned in passing. (She broke up with MMC because he didn’t want to have sex with her. Again, characters are aged around 15/16. That left a horrid taste in my mouth as again, this book is geared TOWARDS TEENAGERS.
The whole mess around basketball and cooking with her mums was solved way too easily. Let me elaborate. The entire story, one of the mums is painted as this fire breathing dragon who will listen to nary a word Bethany has to say and only speaks in basketball, yet she asks ZERO question about her choice or even try to bargain and do things that her character was hinted at? It was a very sharp 180° from what readers were fed and it was not aligned with the character. I went, “well, that was certainly anticlimactic.” Scratched my head and called it a day. To clarify, I understand that the plot of a story does NOT have to be explosive, however, your characters should line up with the personality traits you’ve set them up with. They can learn, grow and change, BUT you have to set up the groundwork for that. NONE of that was done for the mum, and that made it seem like she accepted it without nary a complaint because… plot and that leaves me unsatisfied and filled with questions.
It was an average read that is a lot forgettable. With on the hour, I will have forgotten that I’ve read it. Which is deeply saddening for me because I liked the cover and synopsis and it was a read I was anticipating. I might try to read something else from this author as this was a debut novel and one can only grow from here.