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Deviations #2
Domination
In this sequel to Deviations: Submission, Dom Tobias and Sub Noah are back, learning more about each other and their relationship, testing the boundaries of what they can and cannot handle, both together and apart. Tobias works at becoming more comfortable and finding his balance as a full-time Master again. Meanwhile, his work brings out the true submissive in Noah, who faces some of his greatest fears, and his greatest secrets, confessing to Tobias about a terrible time in his past. He's not the only one who has a rough time. Tobias breaks down and shows Noah he's not all dominance, too, which sends shockwaves through their romance, leaving them to wonder if they can keep it together.
300 pages, Paperback
First published September 6, 2006
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Chris Owen
101 books907 followersI live and write in eastern Canada. I went to a bunch of schools, learned a lot of things, and now make stuff up because not to do so is unthinkable. I'm fond of fountain pens, Levenger's Circa system, and Steampunk fashions.
I'm inspired by the day to day minutia of life, and find beauty in the way words go together. I like texture and richness of experience. I'm not shy. I'm happy, I'm learning, I'm living.
I'm inspired by the day to day minutia of life, and find beauty in the way words go together. I like texture and richness of experience. I'm not shy. I'm happy, I'm learning, I'm living.
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January 3, 2024
Are you a What or a How reader? To my thinking, we tend to review our reading experiences based on one of those. Sometimes it’s a combination of both, but usually one matters more than the other.
What: What happened in the book? What was the plot, what were the characteristics of the people in it, what decisions did they make?
How: How did the book make me feel? How well was the writing executed, how evocative was the story, how compelling were the characters?
I am, without any doubt, a How person. The What matters very little to me — a well-crafted piece of writing can make me interested in just about any content, character, or plot.
But then along comes Deviations, and it’s a glaring exception. If I were rating just the writing quality and character development (usually the most important aspects to me, by a mile), I think it would land at about a 3.5. Good... does no harm... but not what has grabbed me by the feels.
I LOVE this story. I love the details of Tobias and Noah’s relationship, the d/s dynamic they’ve custom crafted to work perfectly for them. Tobias’s struggle with his own need (and simultaneous loathing) to make himself emotionally vulnerable to his sub was one of the parts I adored most. It’s all so intense and more complex than most kink stories.
The sex. For the love of all that is holy moly rollie pollie. Hot to the infinite power. I’m going to remain somewhat silent about one scene in particular, but those of you who’ve read this… you know. Have the person, toy, or digits of your choosing at your disposal, is all I’m saying.
Bear in mind that this series is not for the casual kink reader. If you’re one whose blood rushes at the occasionally wrist grab but doesn’t like a strict d/s dynamic, this isn’t your mark. The MCs have distinct needs that are well beyond intro-to-kink. It’s more of a power exchange than a pain play, but all elements of the BDSM acronym are present.
I would be throwing 5 stars and then some if the character development was stronger. Tobias is decently robust — since the narrative is from his perspective, we get a deeper look at him. But Noah, as likable and hot as he is, is a little saintly for me. Where are his flaws, his nuances? Honestly one of the most three-dimensional characters is Phan (Tobias’s ex who’s still very active in his life), and fortunately he's on page quite a bit.
But clearly that’s not stopping me from loving the stuffing out of this series. I’m gobbling up every word, turkeys. I’ve heard that the first few books are stronger than the last ones, but I’m in for the haul.
What: What happened in the book? What was the plot, what were the characteristics of the people in it, what decisions did they make?
How: How did the book make me feel? How well was the writing executed, how evocative was the story, how compelling were the characters?
I am, without any doubt, a How person. The What matters very little to me — a well-crafted piece of writing can make me interested in just about any content, character, or plot.
But then along comes Deviations, and it’s a glaring exception. If I were rating just the writing quality and character development (usually the most important aspects to me, by a mile), I think it would land at about a 3.5. Good... does no harm... but not what has grabbed me by the feels.
I LOVE this story. I love the details of Tobias and Noah’s relationship, the d/s dynamic they’ve custom crafted to work perfectly for them. Tobias’s struggle with his own need (and simultaneous loathing) to make himself emotionally vulnerable to his sub was one of the parts I adored most. It’s all so intense and more complex than most kink stories.
The sex. For the love of all that is holy moly rollie pollie. Hot to the infinite power. I’m going to remain somewhat silent about one scene in particular, but those of you who’ve read this… you know. Have the person, toy, or digits of your choosing at your disposal, is all I’m saying.
Bear in mind that this series is not for the casual kink reader. If you’re one whose blood rushes at the occasionally wrist grab but doesn’t like a strict d/s dynamic, this isn’t your mark. The MCs have distinct needs that are well beyond intro-to-kink. It’s more of a power exchange than a pain play, but all elements of the BDSM acronym are present.
I would be throwing 5 stars and then some if the character development was stronger. Tobias is decently robust — since the narrative is from his perspective, we get a deeper look at him. But Noah, as likable and hot as he is, is a little saintly for me. Where are his flaws, his nuances? Honestly one of the most three-dimensional characters is Phan (Tobias’s ex who’s still very active in his life), and fortunately he's on page quite a bit.
But clearly that’s not stopping me from loving the stuffing out of this series. I’m gobbling up every word, turkeys. I’ve heard that the first few books are stronger than the last ones, but I’m in for the haul.
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August 22, 2021Everything was going so so sooooooo well,
UNTIL our couple decided to SHARE 😶
I don't know how or I don't know why, I love a good polyamorous relationship and I don't mind sharing or having fun times with another person.
BUT GODDAMNIT, I just did nottttt at allllll like how they shared with another person.
And that stems from the fact that I COULD NOT for the LIFE of me care, acknowledge or even like Phan (the third wheel) and my annoyance for him grew thicker and thicker at how he CONTINUALLY seemed to butt into Tobias and Noah's relationship.
I don't know, maybe these alpha males are getting to me and their possessiveness is rubbing off, but everytime Noah and Phan touched, I wanted to throw my phone at them, at Tobias, at my damn wall because I was like NO NO NO! THIS IS NOT HAPPENING!
Sike, it did.
✨ Which is why I don't feel like rating this book, my rating would have nothing to do with their relationship, their story or anything about the plot of their writing, it has to do with my overwhelming jealousy ✨
And that's the only part of this book that I didn't like, I adore Tobias and Noah's relationship and how their adoration, trust and devotion grew and developed throughout this story.
This book had an interesting conversation about Dominants and them showing weakness and I guess, them in "reverse" and the stigma and (self)judgement behind it.
I feel like it's such a simple idea and concept but yet also so vulnerable and provocative and touchy in a sense.
And the sheer amount of absolute trust in this simple sentence blew away my mind from absolute rationality
Initial Reactions
Good Lord save my soul.
UNTIL our couple decided to SHARE 😶
I don't know how or I don't know why, I love a good polyamorous relationship and I don't mind sharing or having fun times with another person.
BUT GODDAMNIT, I just did nottttt at allllll like how they shared with another person.
And that stems from the fact that I COULD NOT for the LIFE of me care, acknowledge or even like Phan (the third wheel) and my annoyance for him grew thicker and thicker at how he CONTINUALLY seemed to butt into Tobias and Noah's relationship.
I don't know, maybe these alpha males are getting to me and their possessiveness is rubbing off, but everytime Noah and Phan touched, I wanted to throw my phone at them, at Tobias, at my damn wall because I was like NO NO NO! THIS IS NOT HAPPENING!
Sike, it did.
✨ Which is why I don't feel like rating this book, my rating would have nothing to do with their relationship, their story or anything about the plot of their writing, it has to do with my overwhelming jealousy ✨
And that's the only part of this book that I didn't like, I adore Tobias and Noah's relationship and how their adoration, trust and devotion grew and developed throughout this story.
"God," he whispered. "You're beautiful."
Noah looked embarrassed by the compliment. "Thank you, sir. You're pretty damn handsome yourself."
"I'm ... weathered, with perhaps a touch of 'distinguished'. But you..." Tobias set down his coffee cup and touched Noah's cheek with the back of his hand. "You're glowing, pet." He smiled, basking in it.
"That would be entirely your doing." Noah sighed, taking Tobias' hand and kissing it. "I can't remember ever, ever being this ... at ease. This happy."
"I just ... Well. Maybe we're just lucky. We happened at the right time, for the right reasons. You make me happy, both as my sub and as my lover. I'll keep telling you."
"I'll keep listening, sir. We're definitely lucky."
This book had an interesting conversation about Dominants and them showing weakness and I guess, them in "reverse" and the stigma and (self)judgement behind it.
I feel like it's such a simple idea and concept but yet also so vulnerable and provocative and touchy in a sense.
And the sheer amount of absolute trust in this simple sentence blew away my mind from absolute rationality
"I am yours to do with as you please, Master." There was no hint of laughter in that statement.
"Yes," Tobias agreed softly, just as seriously. "I believe you are.
Initial Reactions
Good Lord save my soul.
November 4, 2013
4.25*
Book two of the Deviations series and Tobias and Noah's relationship has evolved into something much more than just Dom and sub although they're still working to get it exactly as they want it to be and as before the sex is scorching sssssss!!
The BDSM scenes and play still offer enough kink to satisfy and the D/s elements are still strong and just as enlightening. There's a touch of conflict, this time with Tobias second guessing his and Noah's connection at one point and we see Phan work through some issues with the help of Bradford and Tobias...although I was hoping to get a bit more info into what was pushing his buttons. I'm still not totally clear about his past so perhaps more will come out as the series goes on?
I really love Phan.. I know some readers aren't over keen but I can't help leaning towards him, and his involvement with Tobias and Noah actually spices it up for me.. OMG! The three of them playing together in this one was HOT! HOT! HOT! I'm quite happy with the direction this book hints its moving towards so now its on to book three for more naughty Deviations! I'm liking this series a lot.
Book two of the Deviations series and Tobias and Noah's relationship has evolved into something much more than just Dom and sub although they're still working to get it exactly as they want it to be and as before the sex is scorching sssssss!!
The BDSM scenes and play still offer enough kink to satisfy and the D/s elements are still strong and just as enlightening. There's a touch of conflict, this time with Tobias second guessing his and Noah's connection at one point and we see Phan work through some issues with the help of Bradford and Tobias...although I was hoping to get a bit more info into what was pushing his buttons. I'm still not totally clear about his past so perhaps more will come out as the series goes on?
I really love Phan.. I know some readers aren't over keen but I can't help leaning towards him, and his involvement with Tobias and Noah actually spices it up for me.. OMG! The three of them playing together in this one was HOT! HOT! HOT! I'm quite happy with the direction this book hints its moving towards so now its on to book three for more naughty Deviations! I'm liking this series a lot.
March 12, 2016
When I first lay eye on this series, I was sure that I would really enjoy the story of Tobias and Noah and while the first book was an okay read with an interesting setting and characters, I didn't get completely invested in their story. I wasn't able to connect with them and I was hoping that Domination, the second part of the series would paint a clearer picture of the two main characters.
Unfortunately, I still feel like a silent observer of their lifes - standing outside in the dark trying to get a look inside of the windows, but somehow the curtains keep me from seeing all I want to see. Noah and Tobias still feel distant, I didn't see much character development. Okay, some aspects of their past having an influence on their behaviour has been revealed, but somehow it didn't make the characters more interesting.
The main problem of this book might be that too much of the interaction between Tobias and Noah is happening "inside of the bedroom" - which nearly never is the bedroom, but you get what I mean. The many scenes they have are kind of repetitive and I saw myself looking forward to moments where other characters were present in order to make their interaction more catching.
Because I devinitly enjoyed the scenes in the club and I love reading about Phan. Compared to the main characters of the story, he is a really intriguing character and I was absobing every information about him I was able to get. I kept looking forward to see him in interaction with the main characters and I really hope that he will get closer to them. Getting to now Phan better might be the strongest reason for me to continue this series.
3 stars!
Unfortunately, I still feel like a silent observer of their lifes - standing outside in the dark trying to get a look inside of the windows, but somehow the curtains keep me from seeing all I want to see. Noah and Tobias still feel distant, I didn't see much character development. Okay, some aspects of their past having an influence on their behaviour has been revealed, but somehow it didn't make the characters more interesting.
The main problem of this book might be that too much of the interaction between Tobias and Noah is happening "inside of the bedroom" - which nearly never is the bedroom, but you get what I mean. The many scenes they have are kind of repetitive and I saw myself looking forward to moments where other characters were present in order to make their interaction more catching.
Because I devinitly enjoyed the scenes in the club and I love reading about Phan. Compared to the main characters of the story, he is a really intriguing character and I was absobing every information about him I was able to get. I kept looking forward to see him in interaction with the main characters and I really hope that he will get closer to them. Getting to now Phan better might be the strongest reason for me to continue this series.
3 stars!
February 8, 2023
The book nor the series, nor the subject is for everybody. I absolutely love these 2 main characters, Tobias, a veterinarian and Noah, a police officer. Where the first book of the series was not focused so much on submission but more on two people meeting, getting to know each other and getting accustomed to one another's needs and expectations, This, the second book, dwells deeper on the nature of their relationship. Dominants are not always strictly dominant and submissives are not always only submissive. I was pleasantly surprised at how "ordinarily and delightfully human" these two guys were portrayed to be. The authors depicted feelings and reactions which are very believable in a situation which most readers have never experienced, or wish to experience, yet are still curious. If an author can cause a reader to believe in the characters and their reactions in a situation which is unfamiliar then the author has done a really good job. This is the kind of book which makes most of those unexpected situations believable and realistic. Tobias and Noah are fast becoming one of my favorite romantic couples. Their love for each other is yet on the side of new but seems to be boundless. This will certainly be on the re-read list.
December 28, 2019
Sorry, I just didn’t love this. In fact, it hadn’t been for the ending I might have given it 2 stars. Although Max Power is an incredible narrator. He also helped save the book for me. I think I’m through with this series. It makes m sad because I really liked Tobias and Noah..
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June 22, 2012Domination is the last book I'll be reading in the Deviations series. For a BDSM series it is far too mushy for me. I can't take Tobias seriously as a master. Tobias spoils his sub. He doesn't push or challenge Noah or himself. He gives in to Noah way too often. I've never seen a sub allowed so many orgasms in a BDSM novel. Tobias knows this and he acknowledges it at the beginning of the book. He says he slipped up a little and he wasn't getting what he wanted out of their relationship. The line between dom/sub and lovers became too fuzzy. He said all that in the beginning of the book and yet he fell back to his old ways at the end of it. I don't need Tobias to beat Noah or do anything drastic, but I do need the character to stay consistent. If Tobias says in the beginning of the session he won't allow Noah to come, he shouldn't change his mind in the middle of it. How am I suppose to respect Tobias when he lets his libido and his feelings overrule him so easily? I need the character to be firmer in his decisions in the bedroom.
November 7, 2013
This is book 2 of the Deviations series and a good follow up story to book one
. Here Tobias and Noah’s relationship begins to grow and each is adjusting to their new relationship. And to say the sex scenes and fantasy scenes are hot is putting it mildly! OMG, they almost burned my fingers as I turned the pages on my kindle!! There is a lot of sex in this book as in the last one, and I suspect the entire series will be this way. Such a hardship I know! LOL.
And again, I will say the difference in this series for me so far is the need and reasoning these men choose this lifestyle. while it’s nothing that appeals to me, i can understand more the need it fulfills. This is not a lifestyle I want at all, but this does feel like I have a front row seat to the life, and like i said in my review of book one, titillating!
We do get to hear about Noah’s past and Tobias definitely wants to help him get past his issues. This is what i love about the D/s relationship I have read in these types of books is the caring and need to help healing (physically and emotionally) the Dom in the relationships have. While i understand this is a story not real life, I hope it truly is this way. And I will say while i no longer dislike Phan the way I did in book 1, i am not ready to join his fan club. And again this ending was abrupt for me, it doesn’t make a difference in my rating of this book, but enough for me to mention it here.
I don’t want to get anymore into what happens in the story or give anything away. There is a whole lot of sex in this book, but definitely story as well. I will say the sex definitely takes front and center in this book, but there is enough story to keep me glued to my kindle. And there is enough story to make me emotional invested in Tobias and Noah. And i have to admit I am developing some real emotional attached to Phan. This is not a story i was able to put down.
Overall a good addition to this series and onto the next one….I am so loving it!! YAY!
. Here Tobias and Noah’s relationship begins to grow and each is adjusting to their new relationship. And to say the sex scenes and fantasy scenes are hot is putting it mildly! OMG, they almost burned my fingers as I turned the pages on my kindle!! There is a lot of sex in this book as in the last one, and I suspect the entire series will be this way. Such a hardship I know! LOL. And again, I will say the difference in this series for me so far is the need and reasoning these men choose this lifestyle. while it’s nothing that appeals to me, i can understand more the need it fulfills. This is not a lifestyle I want at all, but this does feel like I have a front row seat to the life, and like i said in my review of book one, titillating!
We do get to hear about Noah’s past and Tobias definitely wants to help him get past his issues. This is what i love about the D/s relationship I have read in these types of books is the caring and need to help healing (physically and emotionally) the Dom in the relationships have. While i understand this is a story not real life, I hope it truly is this way. And I will say while i no longer dislike Phan the way I did in book 1, i am not ready to join his fan club. And again this ending was abrupt for me, it doesn’t make a difference in my rating of this book, but enough for me to mention it here.
I don’t want to get anymore into what happens in the story or give anything away. There is a whole lot of sex in this book, but definitely story as well. I will say the sex definitely takes front and center in this book, but there is enough story to keep me glued to my kindle. And there is enough story to make me emotional invested in Tobias and Noah. And i have to admit I am developing some real emotional attached to Phan. This is not a story i was able to put down.
Overall a good addition to this series and onto the next one….I am so loving it!! YAY!
September 16, 2012
Every book in this series has been a one sitting read for me. I can't believe how much I am enjoying these books. In two days I read three of them. No doubt by the end of the week I will have finished the series and be suffering withdrawals.
January 25, 2018
A complimentary copy of the audio was provided via AudioBook Boom in exchange for an honest review.
This will be my second time "reading" this story, and I have to say the audio really enhanced this story. I thoroughly enjoyed the story the first time and now with Maxx Power's narration, I am in love with these characters and their story for the second time!
I loved the relationship between Noah and Tobias. They are so well suited for each other and have grown closer since book 1. Phan of course was simply adorable and I loved seeing him and Noah interact. They are smoking hot together, and that scene at the club was perfection!
What I particularly enjoyed was the ending where Noah gets collared and all the Doms and Subs are there in Tobias' barn. It was an emotional scene for both men and I liked seeing them finally come together after they had such a trying start. They didn't have an easy time to get to this ending, and when you think of all the issues Tobias has with his history and his perceived failure with Phan as his sub, I really think it was special to see them show everybody they made it.
If you enjoy BDSM romance novels, and this is a romance, you will really enjoy this series, and if you like audiobooks, this one is not to miss. At first I wasn't sure about the narration but as the story went on and I became familiar with the characters again, I felt the narration was spot on and especially for Phan. ;)
Narration: 4.5 stars
Story 4 stars
This will be my second time "reading" this story, and I have to say the audio really enhanced this story. I thoroughly enjoyed the story the first time and now with Maxx Power's narration, I am in love with these characters and their story for the second time!
I loved the relationship between Noah and Tobias. They are so well suited for each other and have grown closer since book 1. Phan of course was simply adorable and I loved seeing him and Noah interact. They are smoking hot together, and that scene at the club was perfection!
What I particularly enjoyed was the ending where Noah gets collared and all the Doms and Subs are there in Tobias' barn. It was an emotional scene for both men and I liked seeing them finally come together after they had such a trying start. They didn't have an easy time to get to this ending, and when you think of all the issues Tobias has with his history and his perceived failure with Phan as his sub, I really think it was special to see them show everybody they made it.
If you enjoy BDSM romance novels, and this is a romance, you will really enjoy this series, and if you like audiobooks, this one is not to miss. At first I wasn't sure about the narration but as the story went on and I became familiar with the characters again, I felt the narration was spot on and especially for Phan. ;)
Narration: 4.5 stars
Story 4 stars
November 1, 2012
More romantic and less disturbing than the first book
Warning: This review might contain what some people consider SPOILERS.
Rating: 9/10
PROS:
- The serious, heavy BDSM actions continue in this volume, but I didn’t find them as disturbing/disquieting. (Maybe I’m just used to the ways in which Noah submits to Tobias after reading the first book.) There’s one scene in which Noah goes very deep into his headspace and Tobias has to coax him out of it that I found fascinating.
- The relationship has evolved so that it’s no longer 100% D/s. There are some graphic D/s scenes, but far fewer than in Book 1. Other reviewers have said that they don’t like how the later books in this series have fewer BDSM scenes and more vanilla sex, but I enjoyed the vanilla sex scenes in this book just as much as the kinkier ones. I see them as proof that Tobias and Noah’s relationship is BASED ON domination and submission but isn’t entirely ABOUT those roles. And the idea that occasionally the two can make love while looking into each other’s eyes is romantic and wonderful and…sigh.
- Hot sex scenes involving various kinks. There are some sweet, passionate vanilla scenes, some sweaty, thrilling BDSM scenes (one particularly sexy one involving voyeurism to an extreme degree), and even a ménage scene that gave me a bit of a hot flash.
- I love how honest the characters are with each other and how much focus there is on conversation. Owen and Payne must either have experienced the lifestyle personally or have spoken in-depth with both Doms and subs, because the psychological needs and desires of both characters in these books are examined in detail.
- The character of Phan makes me smile. He’s a wonderful friend to Tobias--and becoming one to Noah as well. (see cons below also)
CONS:
- Phan makes me want to cry too. He’s not just a friend to Tobias; I get the feeling that he’s still very much in love with his old master--and not just in the “we love each other but we aren’t IN love” way. I think he’s IN love with Tobias but is just so messed up that he can’t be right for Tobias anymore nor can he move on and fall in love with anyone else. Maybe Noah and Tobias could let him be a part of their relationship…threeways work sometimes, right?
- There are two momentous, unrelated scenes at the end of the book that have been hinted at all through the story, and both of them feel rushed or a bit smoothed over. I was expecting something really explosive from at least one of them, and each one seemed to be over rather quickly.
Overall comments: I really, really enjoyed this book because of the characters--all of them. Even the small, secondary characters make an impact. It’s got some BDSM elements that will make squeamish people squirm a bit, but if you made it through the first volume in the series, this one’s mostly a piece of cake. And if you’re interested in the characters’ relationships (rather than just the kinky sex scenes), I think you’ll like this one better than the first.
Warning: This review might contain what some people consider SPOILERS.
Rating: 9/10
PROS:
- The serious, heavy BDSM actions continue in this volume, but I didn’t find them as disturbing/disquieting. (Maybe I’m just used to the ways in which Noah submits to Tobias after reading the first book.) There’s one scene in which Noah goes very deep into his headspace and Tobias has to coax him out of it that I found fascinating.
- The relationship has evolved so that it’s no longer 100% D/s. There are some graphic D/s scenes, but far fewer than in Book 1. Other reviewers have said that they don’t like how the later books in this series have fewer BDSM scenes and more vanilla sex, but I enjoyed the vanilla sex scenes in this book just as much as the kinkier ones. I see them as proof that Tobias and Noah’s relationship is BASED ON domination and submission but isn’t entirely ABOUT those roles. And the idea that occasionally the two can make love while looking into each other’s eyes is romantic and wonderful and…sigh.
- Hot sex scenes involving various kinks. There are some sweet, passionate vanilla scenes, some sweaty, thrilling BDSM scenes (one particularly sexy one involving voyeurism to an extreme degree), and even a ménage scene that gave me a bit of a hot flash.
- I love how honest the characters are with each other and how much focus there is on conversation. Owen and Payne must either have experienced the lifestyle personally or have spoken in-depth with both Doms and subs, because the psychological needs and desires of both characters in these books are examined in detail.
- The character of Phan makes me smile. He’s a wonderful friend to Tobias--and becoming one to Noah as well. (see cons below also)
CONS:
- Phan makes me want to cry too. He’s not just a friend to Tobias; I get the feeling that he’s still very much in love with his old master--and not just in the “we love each other but we aren’t IN love” way. I think he’s IN love with Tobias but is just so messed up that he can’t be right for Tobias anymore nor can he move on and fall in love with anyone else. Maybe Noah and Tobias could let him be a part of their relationship…threeways work sometimes, right?
- There are two momentous, unrelated scenes at the end of the book that have been hinted at all through the story, and both of them feel rushed or a bit smoothed over. I was expecting something really explosive from at least one of them, and each one seemed to be over rather quickly.
Overall comments: I really, really enjoyed this book because of the characters--all of them. Even the small, secondary characters make an impact. It’s got some BDSM elements that will make squeamish people squirm a bit, but if you made it through the first volume in the series, this one’s mostly a piece of cake. And if you’re interested in the characters’ relationships (rather than just the kinky sex scenes), I think you’ll like this one better than the first.
January 21, 2018
Book #2 in the Deviations series - 4.5 Again with the abrupt ending
*sigh* So in love with Noah & Tobias
The beginning sees Tobias knowing that he's not challenging Noah enough in his submission. So he has to work on defining the line between lover & D/s to that both their needs can be met in order to keep their relationship from blowing up like the one with Phan.
There's a small speed bump when Tobias's reveals his vulnerability to Noah then tries to push it aside & goes all uber Dom on him during a scene. Noah is insightful enough to realize what's going on & stops the scene so they can talk about & move past it.
A smoking hot scene to fulfill one of Noah's fantasies in the parking garage at a club. And another very smoking hot scene at Bradford's club with Tobias, Noah, & Phan.
Bradford & Tobias stage an intervention for Phan & he finally breaks.
ETA 1/22/14:
January 2108:
A copy of the audiobook was provided by the author and/or narrator in return for an honest review via Audiobook Boom.
Everything I felt in the original review still stands. This series is the first time I've listened to anything performed by this narrator and I thought he did a good job. I did think in this installment there were times the different voices were mixed up however there were quite a few different voices to perform in this particular book.
*sigh* So in love with Noah & Tobias
The beginning sees Tobias knowing that he's not challenging Noah enough in his submission. So he has to work on defining the line between lover & D/s to that both their needs can be met in order to keep their relationship from blowing up like the one with Phan.
There's a small speed bump when Tobias's reveals his vulnerability to Noah then tries to push it aside & goes all uber Dom on him during a scene. Noah is insightful enough to realize what's going on & stops the scene so they can talk about & move past it.
A smoking hot scene to fulfill one of Noah's fantasies in the parking garage at a club. And another very smoking hot scene at Bradford's club with Tobias, Noah, & Phan.
Bradford & Tobias stage an intervention for Phan & he finally breaks.
ETA 1/22/14:
January 2108:
A copy of the audiobook was provided by the author and/or narrator in return for an honest review via Audiobook Boom.
Everything I felt in the original review still stands. This series is the first time I've listened to anything performed by this narrator and I thought he did a good job. I did think in this installment there were times the different voices were mixed up however there were quite a few different voices to perform in this particular book.
January 26, 2018
Let me just tip my hat to Noah's inner slut.
Except from a scene from book three where I almost dropped my tablet, this book might be the hottest one of the 5. If Submission opens the path to the world of BDSM and to Tobias and Noah's relationship, Domination soars like a proud galleon on a stormy sea, raising the stakes.
Man, the Domino scene was just out of this world.
I liked the new characters being introduced like Luca and his boy, even if we got a taste of them only briefly.
Oh, and Bradford rules!
Whenever I finished one of the Deviations books I just had to take a 24 hr break from reading to recover :) I thought I was kinky but these series are in such a far away league that I don't even see the league.
Favorite BDSM series. Period.
Except from a scene from book three where I almost dropped my tablet, this book might be the hottest one of the 5. If Submission opens the path to the world of BDSM and to Tobias and Noah's relationship, Domination soars like a proud galleon on a stormy sea, raising the stakes.
Man, the Domino scene was just out of this world.
I liked the new characters being introduced like Luca and his boy, even if we got a taste of them only briefly.
Oh, and Bradford rules!
Whenever I finished one of the Deviations books I just had to take a 24 hr break from reading to recover :) I thought I was kinky but these series are in such a far away league that I don't even see the league.
Favorite BDSM series. Period.
January 2, 2014
Even though these books end abruptly, I'm really liking them.
I wish we would of gotten just a little bit more right after the ending.
The MC's have a great connection. I like how they are not only pushing Noah's boundaries with his submission but Tobias as a Dom.
I wasn't sure I liked Phantom in the story line, but now there are set expectations and a hot scene between Phantom and Noah, I'm liking it.
I feel like these two are crossing real problems being in a D/s relationship that has crossed over into a lover partner realm.
I will read more into this series.
I wish we would of gotten just a little bit more right after the ending.
The MC's have a great connection. I like how they are not only pushing Noah's boundaries with his submission but Tobias as a Dom.
I wasn't sure I liked Phantom in the story line, but now there are set expectations and a hot scene between Phantom and Noah, I'm liking it.
I feel like these two are crossing real problems being in a D/s relationship that has crossed over into a lover partner realm.
I will read more into this series.
January 25, 2014
A 4.5 star read. Unfortunately GR doesn't allow 1/2 stars but it didn't quite make the 5 so had to show it as a 4.
In this book the relationship grows between Tobias and Noah and Phantom is prominent towards the end. I enjoyed the New Year party and wonder if it is a sign of where things are heading now that Phantom has revealed his background and receiving help.
Have read the quick short
and will carry on with this series after a short break.
In this book the relationship grows between Tobias and Noah and Phantom is prominent towards the end. I enjoyed the New Year party and wonder if it is a sign of where things are heading now that Phantom has revealed his background and receiving help.
Have read the quick short
and will carry on with this series after a short break.
June 27, 2019
This is a pretty good sequel to Submission, but like most sequels it didn't quite live up to the first. It was nice to see Tobias and Noah grow together in their relationship. And once again it is really nice to see a book with a more realistic portrayal of the BDSM community.
Maxx Power does a great job with pacing but I still think his characters need more distinction.
**I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.**
Maxx Power does a great job with pacing but I still think his characters need more distinction.
**I received a copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.**
April 27, 2015
This was so much better than the first book. Noah and Tobias really came alive for me. There was deep emotion that I could feel, I even became teary eyed a time or two. And Phantom was an absolute pleasure to read about. I hope the next book is as heartfelt and steamy.
February 12, 2017
One word: unf!!
November 20, 2018
4 stars
I love Noah, he is sweet and honest and I am so glad that he speaks up and thinks things through and there isn't like BS miscommunication or suffering in silence or any of that. He is really good for Tobias as well, and I'm glad that Tobias made some mistakes, and had some time to think and grow. I wasn't super excited about Phantom honestly,
I love Noah, he is sweet and honest and I am so glad that he speaks up and thinks things through and there isn't like BS miscommunication or suffering in silence or any of that. He is really good for Tobias as well, and I'm glad that Tobias made some mistakes, and had some time to think and grow. I wasn't super excited about Phantom honestly,
November 3, 2019
4.75 stars
November 8, 2019
3.5 stars
June 19, 2010
After reading SUBMISSION I decided to read another novel but I couldn’t let go of Tobias and Noah, a sign for me that the first novel definitely left its mark on me. I decided to throw my “genre variation prevents boredom” rule overboard and just go with my need for more about these men. And more I definitely got…
With an established base line of trust Tobias and Noah head for an intensifying of their connection. Phantom, as Tobias former sub, stirs the deeper lying issues for both Tobias as well as for Noah. Tobias has a very intense and complex history with Phantom and has trouble pushing the envelope as a Dom with Noah. Noah on the other hand doesn’t feel a 100% secure in where he stands in his relationship with Tobias. In their D/s they both need to work harder to get what they need and a beginning of a romance relationship is formed throughout the weekends spent together.
I’m used to getting a submissive’s perspective but in DOMINATION I also got a very good taste of what it takes for a Dom to be a Dom. It would’ve been so easy for Tobias to remain indulgent towards Noah, to keep them in a safe and in a comfortable zone. Instead he needs to push boundaries, it is what Noah needs of him as a Dom. The variety in D/s, from flogging, to sensory deprivation, to elaborate scene play worked incredibly well in giving me a comprehensive notion of that side in their relationship. Next to these scenes there is also time for play, for humor and intimate conversations.
The magnetism between Tobias and Noah is tangible, it is vigorous, sensual, deviant and caring. The growing intimacy between me and the characters made me live it all with them. I was getting more and more in sync with not only Tobias and Noah but Phan kept pulling my strings, each time he entered the story my heart skipped a beat just because he was there. Phan also has to go soul deep to work through some of his issues and it becomes more evident that he isn’t just any secondary character. Then there’s the growing friendship between Phan and Noah that gave a humorous note that I cherished. The authors kept their focus on the interconnected relationship development and the eroticism which made it a very character driven and a powerful story.
Tobias and Noah can converse an erotic scene to even greater heights which made is so easy for me to feel how well they fitted together and how they gave each other the kind of release they sought after. Every time their sexual desires were satiated my heart was in my very parched throat, the heat level definitely was a scorcher for me and while Tobias was very good in staging a scene, Noah turned out to be a natural in his passionate reactions and role playing. The emotional pinnacle in DOMINATION was the coloring scene between the two men. This is where Tobias told the whole world – well at least those who were invited to the occasion - that Noah was his, his to protect, his to cherish and his to love.
DOMINATION gave me more romance, more of Noah and Tobias’ road to discovery in each other’s wants, needs and emotions. It gave me more of Phantom, more of the Dom/sub and an ending that made me grab for book three in a heartbeat. Chris Owen and Jodi Payne are an incredible author match who bring a small cast of characters to life whose journey is incredible to follow. Tobias and Noah are well on their way to become an unforgettable pair on my shelves!
With an established base line of trust Tobias and Noah head for an intensifying of their connection. Phantom, as Tobias former sub, stirs the deeper lying issues for both Tobias as well as for Noah. Tobias has a very intense and complex history with Phantom and has trouble pushing the envelope as a Dom with Noah. Noah on the other hand doesn’t feel a 100% secure in where he stands in his relationship with Tobias. In their D/s they both need to work harder to get what they need and a beginning of a romance relationship is formed throughout the weekends spent together.
I’m used to getting a submissive’s perspective but in DOMINATION I also got a very good taste of what it takes for a Dom to be a Dom. It would’ve been so easy for Tobias to remain indulgent towards Noah, to keep them in a safe and in a comfortable zone. Instead he needs to push boundaries, it is what Noah needs of him as a Dom. The variety in D/s, from flogging, to sensory deprivation, to elaborate scene play worked incredibly well in giving me a comprehensive notion of that side in their relationship. Next to these scenes there is also time for play, for humor and intimate conversations.
The magnetism between Tobias and Noah is tangible, it is vigorous, sensual, deviant and caring. The growing intimacy between me and the characters made me live it all with them. I was getting more and more in sync with not only Tobias and Noah but Phan kept pulling my strings, each time he entered the story my heart skipped a beat just because he was there. Phan also has to go soul deep to work through some of his issues and it becomes more evident that he isn’t just any secondary character. Then there’s the growing friendship between Phan and Noah that gave a humorous note that I cherished. The authors kept their focus on the interconnected relationship development and the eroticism which made it a very character driven and a powerful story.
Tobias and Noah can converse an erotic scene to even greater heights which made is so easy for me to feel how well they fitted together and how they gave each other the kind of release they sought after. Every time their sexual desires were satiated my heart was in my very parched throat, the heat level definitely was a scorcher for me and while Tobias was very good in staging a scene, Noah turned out to be a natural in his passionate reactions and role playing. The emotional pinnacle in DOMINATION was the coloring scene between the two men. This is where Tobias told the whole world – well at least those who were invited to the occasion - that Noah was his, his to protect, his to cherish and his to love.
DOMINATION gave me more romance, more of Noah and Tobias’ road to discovery in each other’s wants, needs and emotions. It gave me more of Phantom, more of the Dom/sub and an ending that made me grab for book three in a heartbeat. Chris Owen and Jodi Payne are an incredible author match who bring a small cast of characters to life whose journey is incredible to follow. Tobias and Noah are well on their way to become an unforgettable pair on my shelves!
March 28, 2014
4.5 STARS
I can't help but love this series. I love to see how Tobias and Noah progress, they're always together every step of the way and support each other at all times.
"You did well today, sweetheart," he said softly. Then he tipped Noah's head up by his chin and kissed him gently, sucking at his lower lip for a brief moment before pulling away. "Goodnight, Noah."
This time we see the couple testing boundaries, both working in what they need together or separated, Tobias on finding his balance as a full-time Master again and Noah finally breaking down and confessing about his past.
"Aww. I love it when you let me off easy." Noah pulled his jeans on and walked over to Tobias. "You are the hottest man alive," he said, and kissed him soundly.
"I know." Tobias grinned and turned Noah around with a firm hand. "Now. Feed me, boy."
We also have more involvement with the secondary characters, Noah isn't the only one who has had a rough time. We see Bradford and Tobias helping Phan too -I love him, I think he's genuine and gorgeous and lovely- so that's interesting too. And Bradford is a great Dom, there couldn't be a better owner for the club.
Tobias considered the mark and nodded to himself. Bradford's yelp, he ignored.
"Jesus fucking ... fuck," Bradford swore, spitting the words out. "Ah, man. Why these boys like this shit, I'll never know.
I loved to see Tobias and Noah grow as a couple and as Dom/sub, it was amazing and so heartbreaking at times, they got where they needed to, and even if they haven't surpassed all of the obstacles, every step of the way they are getting closer and closer.
Tobias shifted his hips, let Noah have room to work. "I know you can," he agreed easily. "But just how good are you going to be?"
"Now? Or when your faithful sub comes back?" Noah answered, still grinning. "Now, I'm going to be very, very naughty. Later, I'll be very, very good."
The Christmas mini-vacation was simply awesome, I loved to see that part of them and the struggle, also, New Years party... HOTTEST THING EVER! I almost fainted from the heat!
"Hardly pitiful. Well fucked. Ridden hard and put away wet would best describe you, I think." Tobias grinned and tried to bite Noah's finger.
"I love it when you talk cowboy," Noah grinned, letting Tobias snare the finger between his front teeth. "Always sounds so dirty."
I've come to adore Tobias, how he thinks, how he reacts, how even if he's this big kickass Dom he still has weaknesses and has his reservations and doubts, he was sweet too and sentimental and I just wanna eat him up!
He crossed to the big window in his living room and looked out at the city lights, counting blocks until he found Noah's.
I can't help but love this series. I love to see how Tobias and Noah progress, they're always together every step of the way and support each other at all times.
"You did well today, sweetheart," he said softly. Then he tipped Noah's head up by his chin and kissed him gently, sucking at his lower lip for a brief moment before pulling away. "Goodnight, Noah."
This time we see the couple testing boundaries, both working in what they need together or separated, Tobias on finding his balance as a full-time Master again and Noah finally breaking down and confessing about his past.
"Aww. I love it when you let me off easy." Noah pulled his jeans on and walked over to Tobias. "You are the hottest man alive," he said, and kissed him soundly.
"I know." Tobias grinned and turned Noah around with a firm hand. "Now. Feed me, boy."
We also have more involvement with the secondary characters, Noah isn't the only one who has had a rough time. We see Bradford and Tobias helping Phan too -I love him, I think he's genuine and gorgeous and lovely- so that's interesting too. And Bradford is a great Dom, there couldn't be a better owner for the club.
Tobias considered the mark and nodded to himself. Bradford's yelp, he ignored.
"Jesus fucking ... fuck," Bradford swore, spitting the words out. "Ah, man. Why these boys like this shit, I'll never know.
I loved to see Tobias and Noah grow as a couple and as Dom/sub, it was amazing and so heartbreaking at times, they got where they needed to, and even if they haven't surpassed all of the obstacles, every step of the way they are getting closer and closer.
Tobias shifted his hips, let Noah have room to work. "I know you can," he agreed easily. "But just how good are you going to be?"
"Now? Or when your faithful sub comes back?" Noah answered, still grinning. "Now, I'm going to be very, very naughty. Later, I'll be very, very good."
The Christmas mini-vacation was simply awesome, I loved to see that part of them and the struggle, also, New Years party... HOTTEST THING EVER! I almost fainted from the heat!
"Hardly pitiful. Well fucked. Ridden hard and put away wet would best describe you, I think." Tobias grinned and tried to bite Noah's finger.
"I love it when you talk cowboy," Noah grinned, letting Tobias snare the finger between his front teeth. "Always sounds so dirty."
I've come to adore Tobias, how he thinks, how he reacts, how even if he's this big kickass Dom he still has weaknesses and has his reservations and doubts, he was sweet too and sentimental and I just wanna eat him up!
He crossed to the big window in his living room and looked out at the city lights, counting blocks until he found Noah's.
January 10, 2013
What I like about these books is the simplicity of them. We all get overwhelmed periodically & get stuck. Problems often seem so daunting that we sometimes forget to break it down into smaller pieces & in so doing the problem becomes infinitely more manageable. It's seemingly such a simple concept that is all too often forgotten. These books take the mundane realities we all face infusing & brightening them up thereby making them both relatable & engaging.
The progression of Tobias & Noah's relationship was quite enjoyable to read. I wish everyone were as open & honest as these two are with one another, an admirable quality indeed. Sure there are some growing pains but all in all they address issues as they arise rather than letting them fester & potentially poison everything. There is a scene involving a bullwhip & a strap that is one of the most organic, heartfelt, & genuine sequences I've ever had the pleasure of reading. Tobias' vulnerability I felt was handled admirably & believably. I have a hard time believing that anyone can maintain a role or persona 24/7-the breaks might be few & far between but there is always a situation/person/event/whatever that exposes a kink in the armor no matter how strong you are & this book conveys such a circumstance expertly. Bradford's character takes a larger, highly erotic & humorous role:
"Jesus fucking... fuck," Bradford swore, spitting the words out. "Ah, man. Why these boys like this shit, I'll never know."*he & Tobias are practicing with a bullwhip* :D
I perused the other reviews of this book & was prepared to be annoyed, minimum, by the Phan secondary storyline & while I certainly don't condone this behavior I was surprisingly less appalled than I had prepared myself to be. I will say that Bradford didn't take very good care of himself & when putting your own psyche at risk I would think a seasoned dominant would've seen the error long before they had progressed to blood & scarring. But… essentially it's an extreme version of an intervention, a dangerous & somewhat reckless intervention, but an intervention nonetheless-that's what you do for someone you care about & both he & Tobias knew professional help was needed.
Main theme of the sex in this one is D/s & public scenes; 1 m/m/m menage that was sizzling!
July 23, 2023
Re-read July 2023-- Still 5 stars. Love these guys
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Excellent. Tobias and Noah's relationship really advances to the next level in this book. They overcome some set-backs and really make some breakthroughs and are a stronger, happier couple by the end. We also learn a lot about some of the secondary characters, especially Phan and Bradford. I can't wait to read more about everyone in the next book.
If I had any complaint about this book, it would be that some of the situations that I would really like to see played-out just fade to black. (***minor spoiler here***)
For example, Tobias asks Noah if he can pierce him. A piercing was one of the few things that Noah didn't allow (without giving permission) when he and Tobias drew up their contract (in book one). So, it was very special that Noah agreed to a nipple piercing and I thought that it would be so hot and sweet and erotic to read about Tobias piercing Noah's nipple. But NO!!!! Fade to black!! Permission was given and then the next thing you know, he has a pierced nipple. Boo hoo! I so wanted to read about that! Anyway, still a great book and not enough of a reason to give anything less than 5 stars!
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Excellent. Tobias and Noah's relationship really advances to the next level in this book. They overcome some set-backs and really make some breakthroughs and are a stronger, happier couple by the end. We also learn a lot about some of the secondary characters, especially Phan and Bradford. I can't wait to read more about everyone in the next book.
If I had any complaint about this book, it would be that some of the situations that I would really like to see played-out just fade to black. (***minor spoiler here***)
For example, Tobias asks Noah if he can pierce him. A piercing was one of the few things that Noah didn't allow (without giving permission) when he and Tobias drew up their contract (in book one). So, it was very special that Noah agreed to a nipple piercing and I thought that it would be so hot and sweet and erotic to read about Tobias piercing Noah's nipple. But NO!!!! Fade to black!! Permission was given and then the next thing you know, he has a pierced nipple. Boo hoo! I so wanted to read about that! Anyway, still a great book and not enough of a reason to give anything less than 5 stars!
April 28, 2021
2.5 stars
I respect the meticulous approach to the BDSM lifestyle, but I felt this book too long and tedious; I ended up getting bored. I'm putting this series aside; maybe I'll pick it up later.
I respect the meticulous approach to the BDSM lifestyle, but I felt this book too long and tedious; I ended up getting bored. I'm putting this series aside; maybe I'll pick it up later.
August 19, 2013
Tobias and Noah are both growing. Noah as a sub and Tobias as a Dom. We finally get to know what happened to Noah in the past and now he has to face his fears to grow. I liked the interaction between them and the scenes were also good. I was surprised with I still didn’t get the Phan past but he did spice up their relationship. Both main characters are good and we see how they are developing. Noah is almost too perfect in his submission but again so sweat. Tobias is going back to the basics to rebuild his Dominance. The line between lovers and Master/slave relationship is erased. There is lots of sex without real scenes. The best part for me was the whole group party that lead to the collaring of Noah.
March 9, 2014
★★★★☆
I waited too long to review this and I just finished Book 4 so I'll have to wing it.
Very sexy public scene outside Bradford's club - that I remember, lol and .
Tobias works on expanding Noah's limits and they both work on the separation between lover and Dom/submissive. And lots of sex.
I waited too long to review this and I just finished Book 4 so I'll have to wing it.
Very sexy public scene outside Bradford's club - that I remember, lol and .
Tobias works on expanding Noah's limits and they both work on the separation between lover and Dom/submissive. And lots of sex.
September 23, 2010
I like this series (and this book) because it shows the human side of the Doms. They are not god like and perfect. They suffer, make mistakes, get scared and need their Subs as much as their Subs need them.
March 16, 2016
Loved it
What can I say, that hasn't already been said. I enjoyed reading it, immensely. This is BDSM that I'm okay with reading. I'd read a couple of other books that made me avoid it for quite a while. I'm glad the reviews made me take a chance.
What can I say, that hasn't already been said. I enjoyed reading it, immensely. This is BDSM that I'm okay with reading. I'd read a couple of other books that made me avoid it for quite a while. I'm glad the reviews made me take a chance.
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