This was painful to read.
It’s ironic that several times in the book the author recommends knowing when to hire an expert, but never thought to hire an editor.
It’s written like a juvenile blog post, not by any measure fit for business, let alone a book geared toward financial professionals.
Examples:
In a chapter about “hurdles”, she mistakenly uses “hurtles” multiple times.
She makes liberal use of “lol” (sometimes in uppercase, sometimes lowercase).
Countless grammatical and punctuation errors.
Phrases like “I’ll get to that in a sec” and “sup, Millennials?”.
You get the idea.
I ended up skimming most of it in case I might find some useful nuggets.