Incomplete: description, story arc, character development, and world building.
This floundered all over the place, going from 3⭐️’s to 2⭐️’s, and back, sometimes down to 1⭐️, but never above the 3⭐️.
I really, really liked the premise of this, but the execution was a miss for the most part.
Would I recommend it, NO. But I won’t say don’t read it, there may be enough for others to enjoy 🤷♀️
I did finish it, and within a reasonable amount of time…so there’s that.
It was so weird how good the writing was, and also how bad and lacking.
The dialogue was so perfectly flowing, until you got to the [many, many, many] sex scene’s, then the FMC sounded like a bad male centric porn actress. 😳 😂
We got so many details in one sense, that it took me awhile to realise and become frustrated by the blatant lack in every other aspect.
The author mentions tattoos, how they flow down the arm, wrap around the shoulder, etc.. The bright and eye catching colours, how they subtly flow through…
Notice what’s missing?
We have no idea WHAT the Tatts are, what COLOURS are used, barely understand how big, where exactly on the body, how they fit, and so on.
We get told about a field of flowers, where there is a suggestion of a pattern…you know what critique I have.
This prevented me from ever being subsumed within the story, always trying to figure out the visuals.
I couldn’t tell you what any of the characters truly looked like, beyond the FMC’s [shade?] purple hair.
Added on to this, all their voices merged together, even their endearments. The only difference with the FMC, was her screaming.
But the story intrigued me, the humour had me chuckling at times, and the writing in between the overdone and boring orgies, was weirdly well done [minus visuals].
The sex.
We are warned that there will be A LOT, and there IS.
Sadly there’s very little steam either before, during, or in between. It’s pure male centric pornographic. Combined with the very poorly written visuals, it was boring. Even, or especially, the monster sex.
Pro: it’s not filled with sappy, Insta love. It’s all about the sex and lust. Funnily, I appreciated this! 😂 one of the reasons I could keep reading.
In that sense [only], it was more grounded, more believable [? 🤣 ? 🫣 ? 🥱].
Moreover, you never get to experience anything remotely monsterish about the MMC’s. Even during their sex moments,, it was difficult to think of them as other than spoilt, white, 20 somethings [supposed to be thousands of years old].
Additionally, considering they come from all different cultures and mythologies, why are they all Caucasian? At least I think they are, everything about them read this way.
No world building as to where everything came from, who created it, how different beliefs work together or why. How they interact with our world, why, and so on, and so on.
Aliens are even momentarily mentioned, even [seen?], then nothing. 😮💨 so, so frustrating!
We know nothing about the FMC other than she’s a successful photographer who knows nothing about art [ WTF 🥱😳😵💫 bullshit].
No friends, family, location mentioned.
She’s supremely calm and accepting about almost everything.
Spoiler Alert 🚨🚨🚨🚨🚨
Baddies try to capture FMC and get her on a sacrificial alter, intent obvious. Rescued.
Baddies capture FMC and try to carve something into her [ it’s never described, so don’t know what]. Rescued.
Baddies capture FMC, stab and kill her.
Huh 🤨☝️ what happened to sacrificing? If you just needed to kill her, why not the multitude of other times?
Brought back to life mysteriously, and is now…what? 🤷♀️ doesn’t need food, but does need to breath…
Isn’t fazed when she learns of magic, monsters, other worlds.
Apocalypse happens, ah well, let’s have sex.
Billons dead, destruction everywhere, oh such and such said something funny, so adorable, let’s have sex.
Then, THEN,…nothing. It ends.
We don’t know who, what, why…and it’s a standalone, so no more to come.
Author claims while she didn’t plan it this way, it is intentional.
I call bullshit.
More like she wrote herself into a corner, got stuck, and went whatever, let’s end it.
She even states in her end notes, that she doesn’t know what the answers are, that if she ever figures it out, then she’ll write a sequel.
Yeah, sure it was deliberate. Deliberately ended because she didn’t know how else. 😜🙃😅
Total cop out, and should have been thoroughly edited!
p.s. has sooo many grammatical errors. Some are missing words, others just really badly written sentences. I think sometimes she was trying too hard to sound eloquent and intelligent.
Will I read this author again?
Based on the fact she stated in her end notes that she often ends her works similarly… NOPE.
Maybe one day she will grow as an author and complete a book, flesh out the details, at which time I would be willing to try again….